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Heroes: The Novel lol; ....chapter one up!
Topic Started: Dec 1 2008, 08:21:33 AM (66 Views)
SorceressKyrsty	Dec 1 2008, 08:21:33 AM Post #1
>.> Posts: 359 Group: Upper Classman Member #4 Joined: Aug 24, 2008	Now before you read: it looks best if you set it to reading layout on Microsoft Office 2003. It can be read otherwise but that is how it is written. Basically, this is the written down version of Heroes, Episode One, Season One. It took me ten hours to do because every line is exactly the same except for ones I couldn't hear properly on the video. I've added description and stuff, too. Tell me how I can improve it and suggestions on how I could cut down the time it takes to right a chapter. Even if you haven't seen the show it should be a decent read- in fact, that's what it's designed for. WARNING: It's 23 pages long! So now, I present to you; Heroes Volume One: Genesis Chapter One Genesis (ya, chapter 1 is the same as the subtitle in name) Attached to this post: Heroes2.doc (128 KB)
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Rael	Dec 1 2008, 08:31:03 AM Post #2
<3 Rinoa and Stellar <3 Posts: 862 Group: Senior Staff Member #1 Joined: Aug 23, 2008 Blog The Angel's Asylum	I shall download and read this later, seeing as I haven't seen any of the series
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McTricky	Dec 1 2008, 07:06:42 PM Post #3
The Freelance Musician Posts: 304 Group: Upper Classman Member #2 Joined: Aug 23, 2008	No it isn't. It's 17 pages long. Since I'm composing music, I'll read this later on when my internet is diconnected and i have nothing to do.



SorceressKyrsty	Dec 2 2008, 09:06:38 AM Post #4
>.> Posts: 359 Group: Upper Classman Member #4 Joined: Aug 24, 2008	? I checked, it was 23 pages. :/....
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SorceressKyrsty	Dec 11 2008, 01:30:31 PM Post #5
>.> Posts: 359 Group: Upper Classman Member #4 Joined: Aug 24, 2008	Anybody read any of it yet...? I need feedback, I fear I have not detailed it enough and that's bad since I'm in the process of writing my debut novel, the first book in a trilogy. I need to improve my writing >.>.
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