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Topic Started: May 1 2010, 06:50 AM (732 Views)
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Lord Abaddon
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May 1 2010, 06:50 AM
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OOC Info: Name/Alias: Dreamer Age: Nobody knows Gender: Male Method of Discovery: RPG-Directory
I've read the rules and the words are: Accepted AP
IC Info:

Name: Altius Scarr
Alias/Nickname: Lord Abaddon
Age: 39
Gender: Male
Species: Human
Faction: Empire
Rank: Royal Guard (Leader)
Homeplanet: Thule
Force Sensitive: Yes
Force Powers:
Force Telekinesis - Master Force Sense - Advanced Force Speed - Advanced Force Crush - Advanced Force Repulse - Advanced Protection Bubble - Advanced Force Jump - Advanced
Combat/Lightsaber Forms:
Form I: Shii-cho - Advanced Form II: Makashi - Master Form III: Soresu - Advanced Form IV: Ataru - Skilled Form V: Djem So - Master Form VI: Niman/Jar'Kai - Skilled Form VII: Juyo/Vaapad - Skilled Echani (martial art) - Advanced
Appearance:
Standing at 6'4", Lord Abaddon is a force to be reckoned with. He possesses a very muscular build, which is required for him to move at such speed with his protective armor. When one looks at him, they would probably be first drawn to his armor, which has a gold trim and is painted blood-red. A fine Imperial-yellow cape flows from his back. The Royal Guardsman takes pride in his appearance, and his daily polishing of his brilliant armor is evident. He usually always wears the armor, showing his dedication to the Imperial cause. In those unlikely times when he is without his armor, Lord Abaddon dons a simple tunic and trousers, which are then covered with a musky brown cloak.
Abaddon possesses raven-blue hair, and emerald green eyes. His face is nearly always cleanly shaved, and many are fooled by his face into thinking he is much younger than he actually is. His face is youthful yet strong and bears a strong jawline. His eyes shows determination and his adamant nature.
Possessions:
Judgement - A large greatsword made from Mandalorian Iron. Silver Lightsaber Imperial Heavy Repeater DC-17 Hand Blaster
Lord Abaddon's Armor A custom-made armor created by the top engineers and craftsmen of the Empire, Lord Abaddon's armor is strong and sturdy. It takes great strength to wear it, and unless the user is of some strong alien race then they nearly always have to be Force-sensitive in order to fight efficiently and swiftly without being weighed down by the armor. Lord Abaddon's is blood-red with a gold trim. The armor itself is a mixture of many metals, with durasteel and obsidian being the main components of the armor. This makes the armor resistant to blaster-fire. The armor also contains hints of phrik, giving it some resistance against lightsabers. The gauntlets of the armor have a different tinge of red than the other pieces of the armor. This is because it is entirely made of phrik, giving it complete resistance to lightsabers so that Abaddon does not always have to rely on a lightsaber or his greatsword to defend himself from a lightsaber. The armor is said to be a trial-test for the craftsmen of the Empire before improving the armor and remodeling it to tackle the next stage in development. Imperial Knight armor.
In terms of starships, Abaddon often relies on the Empire to provide him with whatever he needs.
Personality:
Courageous and loyal, Lord Abaddon is the perfect leader for the Royal Guard and prides himself in his abilities. The leader of the Royal Guard has an undying loyalty for both the Emperor and the Empire, and would carelessly put his life at risk in order to protect his Emperor. Of course, the Emperor is more powerful than he is, but Abaddon is still proud that he has been given the task of protecting him. Lord Abaddon would follow the Emperor whatever path he may take. Even if the Emperor were to become the embodiment of evil, Abaddon would still follow him. But unlike the other Royal Guard, who also have undying loyalty, Lord Abaddon is known to voice his own opinion. If he feels strongly that the Emperor may be making a wrong decision, he is not afraid to give his own thoughts on the matter and his own advice. Thankfully, there has never been a time when he had to resort to this.
Lord Abaddon is a born leader, and leads the Royal Guard with valor and intelligence. Abaddon has never been known to lose his temper apart from when the first Emperor died, and is able to keep his cool with an aura of finesse. Depending on his mood, he can often be quite witty if not sarcastic, and has a comedic personality if he is in a good mood. If he is in a bad mood, however, he is often dismal and drab, trapped in a world of seriousness and depression. Despite his often comedic personality, Abaddon is not so keen to reveal personal information. In fact, there are only three people in the entire Galaxy that know his real name; Altius Scarr. These three people are the Emperor, his wife Saraia and his old and crippled Sith father, Zahn. Lord Abaddon is a follower of both the Light and Dark Sides, and believes that neither of which are truly good nor evil. He leans more towards the Dark Side in terms of his Force abilities, seeing as his signature power that he had practiced his whole life was Force Crush. Abaddon believes in keeping Order and whatever is good for the Empire as a whole. There must always be a balance between Light and Dark, and Lord Abaddon does not see himself aligned to either.
On the battlefield, Abaddon is a keen strategist and powerful fighter. Enemies often make the mistake of misjudging Abaddon's speed due to his cumbersome-looking armor. They are severely mistaken however as the Royal Guardsman pumps towards them at tremendous speeds with the aid of the Force and cuts them down effortlessly. Abaddon loves the arts of swordplay, and has gone to great lengths to study as many different forms of swordplay and lightsaber combat as possible. Out of all of the techniques he has learned, Lord Abaddon prefers and has mastered the forms of Djem So and Makashi.
Lord Abaddon adores his Royal Guard, and would gladly give up his life to save one of theirs. However, Abaddon also feels strongly that the Empire needs a more 'active' Force group to assist them. The Republic have the Jedi, and the Sith themselves are a strong Force group. Some of the most powerful Force-sensitives in the Empire are in the Royal Guard, but they are restricted to doing guard duty on Bastion or guarding the Emperor. While this is all good and dutiful, Lord Abaddon feels that they need a group that actually plays a vital role on the battlefield, a strong Force-sensitive group that can act in the same way as the Jedi when it comes to fighting and keeping peace on the Empire Worlds. Ideas have formed in Abaddon's head about the 'Imperial Knights' - a group of Force-sensitives dedicated to serving the Empire and its Emperor. They would keep the order, while not being as merciful and pleasant as the Jedi nor being as destructive and malevolent as the Sith.
History:
Altius Scarr was born on the Sith World of Thule. While not officially Sith, the place was drenched with the Dark Side of the Force, and the great Sith Master Zahn lived on the planet. This great Sith had fallen in love, and had decided to settle down on the planet. His previous lust for power had mostly dissolved, and so he had a child. But his anger and hatred soon returned to him when his wife died during childbirth, and the only memory of her was the pathetic baby that had left her womb. He called the child Altius, for it was the name of the Sith Master's father-in-law, and he knew that his wife always had had a great admiration for him.
Altius was brought up in a harsh and desolate lifestyle. He had no contact with anyone else, and he was brought up strictly by his father. From the age of two, Altius had to tackle the task of both learning how to speak and also learning how to use the Force. Sith Master Zahn pushed him hard, and would not hesitate to beat his son if he could not achieve what he wanted. Zahn wanted Altius to become the man he had failed to become. A man who was devoid of emotion, a man who would not fall prey to the great evil that was Love. Zahn taught his son everything that he knew. By the age of five, Altius was already quite skilled in telekinesis, and Zahn gave the boy arduous tasks like killing animals with only the aid of the Force. Altius soon learned to love the Force. He also soon learned to hate his father.
Every day was hard work. Constant training and strenuous exercises. Children were not built for these kinds of things. But Altius somehow managed to survive through it, and learned to simply become stronger because of it. Zahn seemed to blame Altius for his mother's death, and so trained him ruthlessly and for the most part carelessly. Zahn knew exactly what Altius' limits were, and so he delighted in the art of pushing Altius even further. But Altius never lashed out nor did he ever go mad. No, he would never give his father that kind of pleasure.
Years went by, and Altius reached the age of 15. His father's hatred for his son had subsided somewhat after seeing how much Altius resembled his mother's personality and Zahn's own. Zahn believed that it was time for Altius to have some 'first-hand' experience. Zahn decided to escort Altius to Korriban, hoping to induct him into the new and hidden Sith Order and hopefully establish a name for Altius. At Korriban, there were those who still recognised and respected Zahn, and so it was not difficult to secure a place for Altius with the Sith. The Sith pushed Altius hard, but Altius was almost relieved with the work he was given compared to what his father used to give him. Altius immersed himself in the Dark Side, and loved the feeling of war, combat and aggression.
Zahn stayed with Altius at the Sith Temple, and at the age of twenty Altius was given the task of carrying out a small-time raid on the filthy sub-human world of Felacat. Altius was greeted by a race of shape-shifting animal people named the Felacatians, but Altius was determined to carry out his job. Picking out a small village, he sneaked into the village using all the stealth he possessed. He was a Sith Warrior now, and he would stop at nothing to please his masters. Sadly, he had picked the wrong village to raid. A Felacatian Jedi Knight by the name of Saraia Adel had decided to visit her roots, and was staying in the same village that the Sith Warrior was proceeding to raid. He was shocked to see a Jedi Knight before him, and he was also quite annoyed when she ignited a brilliant emerald lightsaber blade and Altius only had a ruddy old vibrosword. And so after the usual exchange of pleasantries, the two battled. It was a hard fight indeed, and the first proper duel of Altius' life if he were to exclude those duels he had in the Sith Temple. Altius somehow managed to come out on top, after exerting a potent Force crush on the woman and slicing open her thigh with his vibrosword. Altius had thought that his troubles were over, but he was far from correct seeing as the other villagers had been alerted. Calling upon their racial attributes, the villagers transformed into their tiger-like counterparts and attacked the Sith warrior viciously. There was nothing he could do to defend himself. Even the Force struggled to aid him in this particular situation. Before he knew it, three huge claws ripped a gash on his chest and he was soon out cold.
He woke up the next day, only to see the angered face of the cat-girl Jedi Saraia staring back at him. The Jedi cursed her stupid Jedi morals, knowing that she should have let the others kill Altius when they had the chance. But no, she had taken him in to her own house and healed him with her Force abilities. Altius did not know what to do. This Jedi had saved his life. But why? His mind was clouded with so many thoughts, and he felt frustrated with himself for not knowing the answers to all the questions that were now buzzing through his head. The Jedi were supposed to be the enemy. Why would they help him? He was about to kill this Jedi Knight, and she knew it, yet she still decided to spare him, let alone heal him. For the next few days, Altius recovered swiftly and began to explore this new planet he was on. Felacat was a beautiful world, and the Felacatians were no 'sub-humans'. No, they were pleasant, intelligent and extraordinary people. Altius cursed his father for feeding him so many lies. The Jedi Knight Saraia decided to extend her stay on Felacat in order to keep an eye on Altius, but she was impressed with his honorable demeanour underneath all of that darkness that clouded the Sith warrior's mind. It did not take long for the inevitable to happen, and for Sith Master Zahn's worst nightmare to occur. Altius and Saraia fell in love, and after six months they decided to marry.
Meanwhile, the Sith grew impatient. Zahn wondered why his son was taking so long. He was infuriated when he received a holomessage from his son, telling him that he had fallen in love with one of the natives of Felacat and they were already married. His father was filled to the brim with hatred, and ordered a group of five Sith Warriors to kill the Felacatian girl and bring back Altius alive. However, Altius knew his father would try something like this, and so was prepared. The Sith Warriors came, and both Altius and his new wife fought them. It was a tough battle, but with the aid of the locals they were easily subdued. But then came an enemy that Altius was not expecting. His own father, Zahn, had arrived to observe the efficiency of the Sith Warriors he had sent.
There before him stood his father. Altius was only twenty, but here he was about to face his own father in combat. His father was a Sith Master, and Altius was a former Warrior. After much arguing, Altius managed to persuade Saraia to flee, for now she would always be an enemy of the Sith, and would always be hunted by them now that Zahn was involved. Altius bought time for her by facing his father in combat. Zahn was impressed by his son's prowess, and he even found it a challenge to defeat his inferior son. But of course, he did defeat his son, cutting a deep wound in his son's thigh with his lightsaber, similar to how Altius had done to his wife when they first met. And just like that previous incident, Zahn had truly misjudged the power of the natives. They surprised him, and pounced upon him. Zahn managed to subdue most of them, but eventually it was too much for even a Sith Master to handle, and the sheer number of tiger-like animals overpowered him and crippled him permanently.
It took a few days for Altius to recover, but it would take a lifetime for his father to. His father's legs had been crushed by the power of the Felacatians, but Altius took pity on his old man and cared for him. Saraia had fled to the Unknown Regions, and Altius had a strange foreboding that he would never see her again. A year passed by, and Zahn's temper had been quietened. His father's disability had made him into a different man, and he saw the world much more differently now that he couldn't walk. His father instructed Altius in the last of his teachings, and whatever else he knew about the Force. Zahn then decided to stay on Felacat, and Altius decided to move on.
On the night before he was about to set off however, he was visited by the Village Elder, Nur'kata, who was Saraia's father. The elder said that he had seen a vision, one in which Altius must return to Korriban, for there was a challenge there to be undertaken before Altius could truly prove himself and become ready. What this meant, even Nur'kata didn't know. Altius did not take his father-in-law seriously, because returning to the Sith world would be suicide, and who would believe a madman's vision? But Altius also remembered something Saraia had told him. She had told him that her father seemed to have some Force sensitivity, and at times had the ability of Precognition. Altius could only grumble before taking his father-in-law's word and heading out to the Sith Capital.
He had to use his father Zahn's ship, which had advanced stealth capabilities. He managed to sneak his way onto the planet, and from there he felt a strong pull of the Force towards the Valley of the Dark Lords. The place stank of Dark Side energy, and after fighting his way through strange dark creatures he was led by the Force to a large tomb. Inside lay a large grave, inscribed above it were the words,
"MASSASS'ARI'ABADDON"
Altius could identify that the writing was inscribed in Ancient Sith, but had no idea what the words meant. The grave shimmered with a strange ethereal light, and Altius could only watch in astonishment as a strange being rose from the grave. A Sith Spirit. The Sith Spirit spoke to Altius, and told him that he had been calling out to the Galaxy for hundreds of years, depending on the Force to find him the right person that would take his place as the Massass'ari. Altius still did not know what this all meant, and when questioned the spirit simply stated that Altius must pass the 'tests'. To prove himself as a potential Massass'ari, Altius had to fight the 'forces of this land' and prove himself. As if a beast had been awoken from a thousand-year sleep, a terentatek entered the huge tomb from seemingly nowhere. Altius was determined to do this, whatever it may achieve. It didn't seem so difficult... until the Sith Spirit told him that he could use no weapons. Relying on the Force, Altius managed to outsmart the beast and nearly brought the whole tomb crashing down after their climatic battle. The terentatek was finally subdued after displacing a large stone-brick from the tomb and smashing it down with the Force upon the creature's head. But that was not it. In order to become the Massass'ari, one must defeat the previous one. And so this Sith Spirit possessed its own corpse and stepped out of its grave. The Sith Spirit drew out an ancient Sith Sword, while Altius had to make do with his vibrosword. The battle was fierce indeed, and Altius managed to defeat the spirit after a brush of sheer luck. He managed to dodge one of the spirit's incoming attacks, which then fixed its Sith Sword into the wall. Altius took the opportunity to cut off the possessed corpse's head. After these challenges, he had finally proven himself, yet he still didn't know what for. The Sith Spirit finally bestowed the name 'Lord Abaddon' upon Altius, and told him that his old name of Altius Scarr no longer existed. It was then revealed that Massass'ari meant 'Warrior Lord', and Altius had become the new one. The old Sith Spirit then shooed the warrior lord away so that he could finally rest in peace. He left him with one final piece of advice. "Perhaps you should head off to Sartinaynian. Dark Secrets lie there."
And so Altius returned to Felacat to tell his father about the happenings. Zahn was shocked at the news. The Massass'ari was seen as nothing more than a Sith fable, yet Altius had managed to find the old Abaddon himself. After scouring the Felacat Archives, he found the co-ordinates to this 'Sartinaynian' and set out immediately. Upon exiting hyperspace, the communications channel on his starship buzzed loudly. A sophisticated voice hummed through the channel, "You are an unauthorized visitor to Bastion. How did you find the co-ordinates to this place? Please state at once, before your ship is shot down." Altius was astonished. What was Bastion? He had never heard of it before, but the planet seemed to hold such authority. Something was brewing here... something new. Something then compelled Altius to introduce himself as Lord Abaddon, and that he was here on 'official business.' Sadly, they didn't buy the whole 'official business' thing, and so arrested him.
Four grimy months of imprisonment and interrogation followed. Simply from the interrogation sessions and various conversations he heard from guards, the newly-named Lord Abaddon managed to glean the information that the planet was controlled by an entity simply known as the Empire. Abaddon spoke truthfully while being interrogated, telling them that he was a former Sith. This startled the interrogators, for at that time the Empire was allied with the Sith, and could even be classed as subservient to the Sith. The interrogators simply decided to not tell the main government body, instead planning to quietly hush this up with a quick execution. Altius, however, was not so keen on this idea. On execution day, Abaddon managed to use the Force to crush the executioner and managed to free himself from the prison. Instead of trying to detain the man, they instead decided that perhaps going to the main authorities would be a good idea after all.
Upon assessing the former Sith, the main Imperial government decided that this kind of power could not be simply left to rot. Instead, they decided that Abaddon would be given a probational period to prove himself in the army, otherwise he would indeed face execution, this time by 'professionals'. And so Altius joined the Imperials, and fought in their various take-overs of Outer Rim Territories, right under the Republic's nose. The Imperials immediately took notice of the young man's battle prowess. It was raw power, which had yet to be still completely molded and refined. Lord Abaddon was impressed with the militaristic yet cunning ways of the Empire. They were not as aggressive or destructive as the Sith, but had the intelligence and the cunning to potentially take over the Galaxy.
And so after merely a year of fighting for the Empire, Lord Abaddon impressed the government and was promoted to a recruit in the Royal Guard training program. He then learned the arts of Echani, and learned many different lightsaber forms, combat techniques and strategies. After three years of training, Lord Abaddon was promoted to the elite ranks of the Royal Guard and met the brilliant man behind it all. The Emperor himself. He held an aura of sheer power, and Lord Abaddon was taken aback by the Emperor's raw power. After pledging his life to the protection of the Emperor, he was put into the ranks of the Royal Guard; the elite of the forces of the Empire.
Lord Abaddon protected the Emperor as best he could. He admired him greatly, and the Emperor soon admired Abaddon's virtue. The Emperor was someone who Abaddon felt he could trust. And so the Emperor learned of Abaddon's real name and his background. And then Abaddon formed a powerful friendship with the elderly leader of the Royal Guard, Alfric Saine. The Royal Guard leader was a former Jedi Master, and took Abaddon under his wing and began to teach him everything he knew. Abaddon came to learn of Alfric's own background, and how he disliked the Jedi Order's slow-moving policies and how the Republic was far too meek and afraid of fighting. The ex-Jedi Master explained to him how the militaristic attitude of the Empire would help the Galaxy as a whole, which simply confirmed Abaddon's earlier beliefs in the faction.
Ten years passed, with Lord Abaddon at the forefront of the Royal Guard. Many things had happened in those years. The most shocking of those things was the siege of Thule. The event shocked Lord Abaddon, and shook his very core when he learned of the thousands of people that had died. He cursed himself for the selfish and arrogant thought that entered his mind; At least all the people who knew my real name would be gone.
Alfric Saine retired from his post, and Lord Abaddon was promoted by the Emperor himself to the position of leader of the Royal Guard. Lord Abaddon was proud, and knew that he would not let his Emperor down. It was then that the Shock War broke out, and the Empire and Sith were flung into the war. It was then, for the first time ever, the Emperor decided to send Lord Abaddon away from his side, for there was an army to lead at Taris. And so Lord Abaddon led the Imperial Army with valor and determination. They all admired the aura that surrounded him, and they followed him. The army won under Abaddon's command, and Taris was defended successfully and the Republic was repulsed. But it was that same day that devastation arrived at Abaddon's heart. The assassination of the Emperor. Overwhelming anger and frustration consumed Lord Abaddon, and he cursed himself for not staying by the Emperor's side.
He immediately returned to Bastion. He rounded up the Royal Guard, and with sheer discipline he trained them harshly so that something like this would never happen again. Lord Abaddon wondered how the Empire would recover from this. At the time, he had never thought that anyone would have been able to take his place and match it with the same intelligence, cunning and power. But someone did. Hope spread across the horizon as a new leader stepped up to the throne.
Emperor Gannon Wade Raife. Lord Abaddon had often seen the Echani by the Emperor's side, but had never really heard him speak or do much at all. But the self-appointed Emperor stepped up to the position and delivered an electrifying speech after the death of the previous Emperor. It gripped the Royal Guardsman's insides and twisted them around. The man was like a magnet, and the citizens of the Empire flocked towards him. Dare he say it, but Abaddon felt that Gannon held more influence over the people in his first week of rule than the previous Emperor had had in his whole reign. Lord Abaddon vowed that such a mistake as before would never happen again, and the Royal Guard were sure to protect Emperor Gannon from all harm. Lord Abaddon went on to form an even closer friendship with Gannon than he had with his predecessor, and the two often discussed many important issues. To this very day, Lord Abaddon serves as the leader of the Royal Guard, but thoughts are mixing in his mind of a new organisation. The Imperial Knights.
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Gannon Wade Raife
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May 2 2010, 01:22 PM
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I approve all use of the Empire and position in this profile
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 Twas brillig, and the slithy toves did gyre and gimble in the wabe; All mimsy were the borogoves, And the mome raths outgrabe
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May 2 2010, 07:10 PM
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- Ok the first issue here is the current power/form set up you have. He is 39, a human, and a Master Force User and a Blade Master? Let alone this is a beginning character. One should keep in mind or logically reference any skill or trade they themselves tried to learn in their lives. Now we know we aren't people able to use the power of our mind and an invisible energy/force around us, but lets say skills like writing and carpentry. These are things that you can learn but take a time to master. You can argue you can learn them and use them, but here is the trick ever seen a child after they first learned to write? Hard to understand they know how to get it across but it takes years to fine tune that skill and most of us never master it as it is always changing. Lets go on to the more tangible Carpentry for a beginner means many stubbed fingers and mistakes and this skill is a profession that takes years alone to perform with precision. Well here is the thing Combat and Martial arts are the same. Force powers here would be the same as well (considering each power is a completely different form of training).
What you have here is a vast imbalance in the character for what he is and has at his disposal. Now please i hope you can understand that what you are saying is your character is a jack of all trades... but jack of all trades rarely Master at least not within a normal lifespan when they go down the middle. It takes the rarely occurring Force Prodigy like Revan or Anakin Skywalker to be easy to reference to even pull something like this off.
This is where I give you an option, with one of them you will have to nix 4 Powers or Forms and leave 1 of them at mastered, and the other skill tree you do not cut away from have only 2 mastered powers. Look at what has actual use in a practical sense and what is just there to show off or to flaunt. This should help in the decision.
- I am not a fan of allowing Phrik as it is highly rare, but I can forgive on the account he is likely gifted uniform by the Emperor. However Ultra-chrome would be a more viable and provide a similar effect.
- My last real issue is the use of Christian Lore/Theology/Mythology however you look at it and implementing it in a world where it wouldn't have context. The idea of Angels in SW exist in a term as the ethereal bright benevolent spirit, but have no real connotation that we know to the Afterlife. Anakin calls Padme an Angel from stories heard of the Diathim who were called such by the galaxy. SO angels can indeed exist in the SW universe but no in the Judaic-Christian sense. There are no Archangels.
You can argue that in the sense that the Felacats don't have much explained about them and their culture or canon you should be free to take Creative Liberty. Here is a thing since there is not alot in canon about it, it is best not to take creative liberty on something that is not necessary. The Name Abaddon I am fine with as it is a universally translatable name that is not in itself rooted to Christianity, however you are giving Felacats a Mythology/Religion that mirrors almost exactly something from the real world and shamefully so. I would ask to take a more creative spin on how he obtained the name other than a pointless mention into something that is not even in canon.
Also I would like to make it clear I have nothing against Christianity just the Lore/Theology fits awkwardly into Star Wars.
These are some of my issues and concerns, and I hope you don't take that I am being too harsh. But they are points preventing a good bio from being workable.
Since your guard is a native of Thule like my Imperial I would like to let you know that in my bio it states that the Republic annexed Thule (which at the time was independent) and siege it apprehending and killing many harboring or thought to be harboring Sith. Among the kill count is Liander's Mother, Father, and Brother who were representatives of the Thules Baron. This may if you wish could be applied to your bio to give some inter-site continuity and may give your character a bit of a shock.
Have any questions ask, and I hope this has been helpful.
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May 2 2010, 11:46 PM
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Very helpful feedback, thank you. I'm happy that you've given my profile so much attention.
And yeah, I thought that the Abaddon thing would be a bit iffy.
I've edited my profile accordingly and I think everything you said has been covered. I'm not changing the phrik gauntlets though, because it was the Emperor's gift and it isn't that much of a stretch to think that the Emperor has access to those resources. And I didn't mean for him to be a Jack of all Trades. He was meant to be a Blademaster, but I think I got a bit carried away in the Force Powers section. >.>
So, is everything all good now?
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May 3 2010, 12:43 AM
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knock 3 of the blade forms to skilled (I remember seeing a few Skilled in there before the edits), so you have something to work for in Rp. You can still be strong at skilled, just gives you goals. With that done we should be good.
And please be well minded that Massass'ari won't get much respect amongst the Sith especially since the Massassi which that title would get its link from were not respected. They were slaves mostly. Massassi'ari would likely denote a Lord among the Massassi that commanded them or an old Dark Jedi/Sith during those times that was tasked over teaching and leading the Warriors/Massassi. Almost like a high general. It is not a canon name but it draws on some Canon material. Massassi'ari may just be a title for a Sith General at one point that earned a Lord's honors.
So while it is interesting I am trusting you won't wave it around. As especially the Sith are what they are now I doubt they would know or care nor know about the Massass'ari when they hardly have an idea about the Sith'ari. Though however it gives some historical fluff that works for the bio.
But overall that is it, good job.
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May 3 2010, 01:03 AM
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Alright, done.
And also, the word 'Massassi' directly translates as "Warrior Caste", so my take on it was that if you take away the end "i", then it would simply mean warrior. It does make some sense, seeing as the Priest Caste is called the "Kissai". RP-wise, anyone skilled in the Sith Language would recognise that it is not related to the actual Massassi race, but instead means "Warrior Lord".
And no, I won't be waving the title around or anything. I highly doubt that any of the Sith would really bother about titles anyway.
So, that should be it. I hope everything is okay now.
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May 3 2010, 07:54 AM
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