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Topic Started: Mar 15 2010, 04:12 AM (429 Views)
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Natalia Flavius
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Mar 15 2010, 04:12 AM
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OOC Info: Name/Alias: Sorcha Age: 17 Gender: Female Method of Discovery: boyfriend referred me
I've read the rules and the words are: accepted gwr
IC Info: Name: Natalia Brandi Flavius Alias/Nickname: Nat Age: 21 Gender: Female Species: Human Faction: Sith Rank: Sith Warrior Homeplanet: Aldeeran
Force Sensitive: Yes Force Powers:
Force Choke: beginner Force Lightening: beginner Dominate Mind: moderate Telekinesis: moderate Telepathy: moderate Force Speed: skilled Force Sense: skilled
Appearance:  Natalia has a small frame and is not a tall young woman, standing only at 5’2, but this isn’t something she finds as a disadvantage – it makes her a smaller target and thus it is easier for her to dodge attacks. She has slightly tanned skin with a splash of freckles across her cheeks and nose. Her eyes are an unnervingly deep blue that have a tendency to stare with no emotion whatsoever, just the coldness of a killer. Until she joined the Sith, her red-highlighted, brown hair was kept long, but it became clear to her the advantages of having short hair such as, no one can pull your hair if there’s nothing to grab onto (like a ponytail) and it is much easier to keep it out of your face. There are quite a few scars on her legs and arms from the numerous times when she’d fallen in the forest and hurt herself on her home planet. Nat wears simplistic, form-fitting black clothing – she doesn’t need glamorous attire, she needs functional attire.
Possessions: two red lightsabers, and an obsidian pendant she stole from her mother

Personality: Natalia has Malevolent Anti-social Personality Disorder (undiagnosed). This is characterized by her inability to conform to social norms with respect to the law (she could – and should – have been arrested on several occasions), deceitfulness for the sake of being deceitful and the joy in causing others suffering because of it, irritability and physical aggressiveness, reckless disregard for the safety of others, and a lack of all remorse. She shows sadistic traits through her amusement and pleasure in the psychological and physical suffering of others – particularly when she’s the one causing it – and her ability to get others to do what she wants by frightening them through intimidation or terror, but she is also, incredibly paranoid and suspicious of everyone.
During combat, she shows no mercy and takes no allies because she lives by the motto “Trust no one, tell your secrets to nobody, and no one will ever betray you.” To the people who tell her to “lighten up a little” she has only one response, “I’ll start letting my guard down when people stop giving me reasons to keep it up.”
It would be safe to say that the only emotion Natalia has ever felt (aside from sadistic pleasure) is anger. Anger is the fuel to her fire. It’s what makes her stronger and determined and is truly what brought her to the dark side.
History: Even at a very young age, the people in Natalia’s community knew she was a little different from the other children her age. Now, all children are different from one another, and people did realize this, but she was different in a very unsettling way. She took a strange pleasure in torturing sea-mice to death; she’d pull their ears and tails violently, submerge them in water and cut their fins, rip out their fur and whiskers… and she’d laugh at them as if they were the greatest toy in the universe.
Upon hitting school age, Nat separated herself from the other children as they drew away from her. She bullied the weaker and lonelier children into doing things with her and being her “friends” but really they were just to protect her from everyone she was suspicious of – particularly people in authority positions over her. There were times when she would violently lash out at anyone she thought to be talking about her (whether positively or negatively – most often it was the latter though). She almost put another classmate into a coma once. It was only due to her natural ability to use Dominate Mind that she was even allowed to stay at the school; though very few children would talk to her after that event. This same skill helped her get out of trouble on the other occasions when she acted violently toward other citizens.
Between the time she was six to nine years old, Natalia tried to run away at least once every month or so. Usually someone would catch her before she even got outside their small town, but sometimes she’d get several miles into the forest and only be found because she’d fallen and hurt herself. There are several scars on her legs and arms because of these injuries she secured.
It was shortly after her tenth birthday she managed to make her grandest escape past the forest and into the grasslands. There she was approached by a man with a glorious proposal for her: go with him to the academy on Korriban to escape the peaceful planet so unsuited for her and train to become a Sith. How could she refuse?
On Korriban, once she had lightsabers, Natalia immediately started fighting other initiates to make herself stronger, faster, smarter. Her mindset was that she would become a Sith, and she would be the best; she would settle for no less.
Among the first lessons she learned was one that confirmed her belief that no one could be trusted to play fair. During a battle she’d been put into with another initiate by two Sith Masters – who were looking for entertainment for the evening – her opponent, who was at least twice her size, moved too quickly and yanked on her ponytail. Seeing how this threw her off the first time, her repeated the action twice more before upon grabbing her hair the third time, he threw her down to the ground and knocked her out cold. Luckily for her, the boy was much more merciful than she would have been, and had left her alive. Upon regaining consciousness and coherence, Nat cut most of her hair off, never wanting to feel such defeat again. Later, after she’d recovered a bit, she went out, found that boy and challenged him to a second duel, ending with her removing his left arm and leaving him to squirm.
Nothing bothered Natalia more than being treated like a servant. Being told to serve her superiors food and drink, take care of anything they so asked for, to wait on them hand and food, t made her feel a deep bubbling anger like that within a volcano, and it drove her harder to become better. Unfortunately for her, Nat wouldn’t try to prove her worth to just anyone. She refused to go for less than the best, because she was determined to be the best. Natalia would only attempt to prove her worth to the Dark Lord of the Sith.
For years Nat brought herself forward to be judged by him, and every time, was refused, but it only made her more determined to try. Natalia trained herself harder every time she failed. She became more skilled in controlling people and objects alike, whether it was movements or motives, and she learned more and more to listen to the thoughts of others, because you can lie on the outside much easier than on the inside. Nat formed the latter of her skills because of her paranoia and thinking people were conspiring against her, and by confirmation about some of these fears, she ended up killing several other initiates, both those who were thinking the thoughts and those who stood by them alike.
Natalia took up dual wielding when she turned 15 and excelled in it swiftly. She was put into more and more battles by superiors as her skill increased, as she more often than not annihilated her opponent(s). Apparently it was amusing and entertaining to watch her fight against initiates who were much bigger than her and sometimes stacked the odds way against her.
At last, two months prior to present day, eleven years after training and trying, the Dark Lord was impressed enough to take her as an apprentice. She approached him stating that she would fight two of the strongest initiates she knew, and she would kill them both. Lord Kreeos seemed annoyed by yet another attempt by her, and, mostly to get her to leave him alone, he summoned the two initiates and basically told her to have at it. She fought them simultaneously using both her blades and though she did take some damage, in the battle (burns and bruises on her limbs), she did end up stabbing the first one through the chest only to spin around and take off the other one’s head. The Dark Lord was surprised by her success, and finally made her a warrior and his personal apprentice.
Song: Something About Me by Pale Divine
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Amanda Tresky
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Mar 19 2010, 08:36 PM
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Ok, the first thing that really strikes me is the fact that your history goes up until she was 10 years of age and then poof! Nothing. Since she's 21 and has the skills she does I would prefer some explanation and history of how she learned to be a Sith and what her focuses and goals seem to have been, things that can help apply to the character in the roleplay.
So basically, for now I would like it if you increased your history to getting up to where she is now at 21. Not simply saying at ten she decided to go to Korriban and become a Sith, the end, how did her experiences there change her? What were they?
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Natalia Flavius
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Mar 22 2010, 10:29 AM
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Yeah, I knew that was coming... I'll get it fixed as soon as I can.
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Natalia Flavius
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Mar 22 2010, 12:36 PM
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Okay, fixed it up. (And I have talked with Kreeos about being his apprentice).
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Amanda Tresky
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Mar 22 2010, 02:40 PM
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Alright so given how late in her life she started her training I'd say change all but two of the "skilled" levels to "moderate" - the two skilled you may have would be of the Core abilities. Then it should be all right.
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Natalia Flavius
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Mar 22 2010, 03:01 PM
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I've made the changes.
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Mar 22 2010, 03:06 PM
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