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Mar Aeden
Topic Started: Mar 4 2010, 12:53 PM (499 Views)
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OOC Info:
Name/Alias: Jesus (Cuz I be lookin like jesus)
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Method of Discovery: RPG-Directory


I've read the rules and the words are: Accepted


IC Info:
Name: Mar Aeden
Alias/Nickname:
Mar'Eden, Mar, Eden, Darth Deimos
Age: Thirty-Seven Galactic Standard Years
Gender: Male
Species: Humaniod
Faction: Sith Order
Rank: Sith Lord, Shadow Lord.
Homeplanet: Dromund Kaas

Force Sensitive: Yes
Force Powers:
Sith Alchemy-Advanced
Mechu Deru-Skilled
Force Concealment-Mastery
Telekinesis-Advanced
Force Whisper-Moderate
Force Lightning-Skilled
Force Choke-Moderate
Drain Knowledge-Advanced
Force Push/Pull-Skilled
Force Leap-Moderate
Force Farseeing-Beginner
Force Cloak-Moderate


Lightsaber Style Discription:
Aeden is quite skilled with a lightsaber, though he does not use his style as much. He uses combinations with telekinesis and his lightsaber usually. Sometimes coming out of his shroud of the force, keeping his position hidden just before his strike. Taking his opponents off guard, and quickly wrapping them in the force before they even can think. Pulling them to an activated lightsaber, thrusting through their chest. Though when this attack fails he’ll try to back up his attack with force choke, or force lightning. Before he closes in for a final fight. At which point he finds the way of the Mynock the most fitting, seeing his enemies flaws he’ll be able to quickly defeat them. While also forcing them to show their true skill with a lightsaber, for his defensive style is quite supreme. Though when he decides to attack, Juyo has become his favorite form. Though he is not quite skilled just yet, he still tries every once in a while to test the waters. Switching to Djem So when he feels threatened.

Appearance:
Aeden
Wicked would be the one word that has come to sum up his appearance. Crimson, pupil-less eyes stare into nothingness with a malicious gleam. Midnight tresses frame his face, accenting his eyes. His hair falls down past broad muscled shoulders, always well kept. His body is a spectacle. Lean, and powerful muscles ripple beneath a pale exterior. Black veins snake their way beneath the skin, feeding the bulging muscle of his form. His skin is blue and weather beaten, but is broken by the networks of veins that traverse his body. While he retains the almond-shaped eyes of his youth, it is clear that he is no longer bound to the mortal coil.

His body has clearly been twisted by the darkside of the force, his right forearm shows this most dominately. Having the nails pointing outward like steel claws, never to grow and never to break. The skin which makes up his right arm has become a dull tan, and the bones which lay beneath it's surface seem to be protruding outward. His muscles seem to hardly retain it's original shape. His left arm seems less touched by the darkside, although little can truly be known due to his style choice. What can be seen, is only as twisted as the rest of his body. Having the same blue weather beaten appearance, with black veins that slide just under his arm wear.

His chest and shoulders are broad, with stout pectorals set just above a set of washboard abdominal muscles. His back ripples with the same black-veined musculature as his front. The individual vertebrae of his spine can be seen protruding from the taut skin on his back.

He stands on a pair of skinny, yet powerful, legs. The blackened veins tranverse just under his skin down to his ankles. He stands tall and quite lean, obviously capable of being very dexterous at a moments notice.


Possessions:
Orange Lightsaber
The hilt is shorter then most hilts. Being around six eighths the size of a normal sized hilt. The color is, of course, a dark orange. Those being only small modifications compared to the crystals and ancient secrets poured into his hilt. The crystals gave the blade it’s sharp, and long fineness. Hitting around fifty-four inches, and being able to cut through most materials. Depending on upon many different variables. But, what makes his blade truly unique is the time he spent on Dromund Kaas infusing his dark taint within the blades very spirt. Using dark arts to force the blade to know only one master, Darth Deimos. The blade will not, automatically come to him or anything ridiculous. The blade will do nothing more then appear to short out in the hands of any other. No matter how tainted, or skilled they may be.

Personality:
Outer Layer: This layer is made up of deceit, and lies. Constantly acting, constantly manipulating the odds into his favor. If he wants something this layer can usually get him what he wishes. He’ll act generous, friendly, and even understanding. Not usually traits to be found on a sith, especially one who looks as he does. It makes him entrancing, and only those close to him know this nothing more then a facade. Others believe he is just bipolar.

Inner Layer: A calculated coldness. A malicious persona that would consume any man from inside to out, if he did not possess a herculean strength to control it. Deimos has cruel, sedate personality. He weighs the importance of every word that he speaks. He calculates every crevasse in his own words, as well as in the words of others. He is not quick to anger, but should one do so, they would find themselves in a very sore spot indeed. He knows his power, but he does not flaunt it overtly, rather it is brought to the table in a confident, serious manner. Not one for cheap tricks, Deimos knows his worth, which makes his temper all the more to be feared. Any weakness that he has is carefully concealed behind a stoic mask, which seems eternally stamped on his face. He does not act surprised, as though everything that happens has been expected. A cold, calm demeanor secretes the wickedness brewing beneath the surface.

History:

Darth Deimos's past is shrouded in deceit and deception. He has covered most of it up, and so it is hard for many to know anything about him. It has been said, and not confirmed, that he was born on a remote planet to a young, and brash sith. This sith treated him like nothing more then a pet, and used him for his science. The young child from birth was nothing more then a test subject, he gave him enough food to survive. Creating the lean, and almost skeleton appearance in which he has developed.

This sith went by the name of Eldon, it was to his belief this name was his true name. Although he was hardly skilled enough to have alreadly found his true name, with this belief he had left the sith in search of a planet remote enough to build a very secretive lab. Eldon was not alone with him was another sith, one who shared his dreams, she helped bring Aeden into this galaxy. Although her name was never said in these stories, Aeden is the only one who retains the knowledge.

The test began when Aeden was old enough to walk, they used the dark side of the force to mettle with his midichlorians. At first they took bits of his skin, and tested his count making sure the being was suffice for the testing. Aeden was of course raw in the force, and these two sith manipulated the power he had and strung it out until it beyond that of their own. Although the fools did not know what they were doing, only through pure instinct the beings figured their way through the different test. Aeden never knew different, and found these test to be nothing more then a way of life. They never spoke to him, excluding the manner of orders.

When the boy turned seven or eight, his body was already in the course of self destruction. His body's ability to naturally heal wounds was dwindling, coming to a point of a very slow process. The skin basicly regrew, and never scabed over in any form. Scars were not prominate in the process, instead it will heal as smooth as burned skin. Although it was an extremely slow process. And in return the two sith were forced to slow down the different test. Although they had got most of what knowledge they wished to learn already, they still had things they wished to do with him.

Aeden felt a sense of safeness with these two only due to him never knowing anything better. In his mind they were his parents, and on many occasions during his early teens he tried to call them as such. Over the years the two sith never cared for him, but during his teens a small bond grew between them and the boy. This is when they finally called him by a name. Calling him by Mar'Eden, sometimes using a surnames such as Mar or Eden.

The two finally obliterated their test on him, feeling they had gotten all they could out of the boy. The two moved Aeden to a new room, and adorned the room in sith relics they had collected over the years. The child was still young, only at the age of fifteen. So they decided to train him in the ways of the sith, they were strong, and yet foolish in their teachings. They didn't properly teach them as they should, and as his power became uncontrollable they knew they were failing. The two broke what was the last fragment of their heart, and took the boy to the academy to be trained. Secretly dropping him off there, and took little notice to their appearance.

Within the academy Aeden excelled in lightsaber combat, although he had very little control over the force that the two sith had manipulated. Although the young sith was strong, he was considered an outcast for his looks. Many at first tried to pick on him, Aeden at first did not pick up on their intentions. He allowed them to talk down to him, although they never tried to harm him for they feared him to greatly. Many knew his strength, and also picked up on his dark innocence. This only made Aeden seem that much stronger, for he did not have the emotional restraints that most sith possessed. He did not fear anything for he merely didn't understand fear.

When the boy turned nineteen, he had been within the walls of the academy for only two years. A sith lord who was well known at the time picked him up and trained him. Through the guidance of his lord the young sith learned better social skills, manipulation, and how to better control the force. He became a great tool for the lord, completing various missions in his name. Although his greatest achievement was his strategic prowess, which he would have never found without his lord.

He spent a number of years in the service of the lord, learning his every teaching by heart. Although over time the young man came to wonder what happened to his twisted family, he talked to his lord on this matter. But the sith lord could give no light on the situation, Aeden finally let go of his old family. Allowing himself no more family attachments, even with all his time under the sith lord. He never allowed himself to become attached to him for fear of losing him. Which in a sense made him even more attached then he believed, it was a strange relationship him and his lord had.

During the lords final days, he forced his student to fight him in a duel. The duel was short, but long. The two were evenly matched, although Aeden had youth on his side. When the duel was finally over between the two his lord asked him to kill him. And in killing him, he would bestow the title of sith lord upon him. Aeden at first hesitated, and the battle ensued once again. His lord was angry with his hesitation, and began a slew of attacks until his apprentice was near defeated. Aeden instead of defeat found the opportunity to released a ball of force destruction. It slammed into his lord, and wounded him greatly. His last words to his student were, “Your true name.. Darth Deimos”

In the years that preceded his masters death, Aeden joined in few of attacks against the enemies of the sith. Although not all were victories, in each battle the sith lord made it very difficult for the opposing forces to have a easy victory. Although this did not last for him, after only two years, the Aeden disappeared taking with him the Malignant. Apparently he had found a small source to where his old parents had birthed him. Although in his mind he believed that he had forgotten them, on the moment he found even the most tiny detail of their existence. The sith lord flew off into the boils of the galaxy, out far in the outer rim. To the planet of Dromund Kaas, it took some time and many different expeditions until he found the remains of a small lab.

His memory served him well in his attempt to find the lab, although upon finding it. He only found death, and an very ruined lab. Within the bodies of his father and mother were found, along with a large body count of different unknown creatures. Aeden could not leave the place, he felt a sense of belong. He used what supplies he had to keep the crew’s moral high, and landed the ship down on the planet. He told them that this was a new kind of mission, they were going to be helping him in his construction of a new temple on Dromund Kaas, a world that had seemly little interaction with the outside world.

Over a period of six or seven years, the sith lord used his parents knowledge, and what he knew of the force to continue their studies. At first he tested on the creatures of the planet, then once he found the planet had small human cities. He sent his soldiers in, and declared dictatorship. Using his skilled with the force to push the humans around, until they were force to be under him. He called upon many things from these cities, such as a few newly born children. At first they were hesitant, and didn’t want to do as such. Then he took things into his own hands feeling they would not relinquish their children easy. He armed his crew, and what troops he had, and causing a few small battles to ensue. Wiping out a few of the cities off the planet. Remaining with only one, which surrendered in the end. He then instead went around the entire city, along with an armed guard, pulling what force sensitive children he could from their homes. They were young around the age of four through seven.

By the time he was finally able to begin studying his test on humans, or more force sensitive beings. The young sith’s temple was nearing completion. It was a sturdy building, mostly due to what resources he gathered from the inhabitants. Most of the children died in his test, and many more were never going to be social able again. But a remaining few like himself grew more possible to be human once again.

After two years of continuing his study he found one such child which was rare, he had skill beyond most. And became his student, he taught him much during the two years. And did little testing on him to bear him from death. The little testing he had done became nothing compared to the other children. Some of the other students, strong as they were in the force, were incapable of being nothing more then slaves to the force. Drones, they had no idea how to complete any simple task. But, the experiments he did on his student had only benefitted him. Perhaps because of his strong connection of the force.

During another year, he began to send out what scouts he could muster to korriban. He hoped to find a new academy built in the name of the sith. It was lucky, but he did find what he wanted. He strapped the Malignant and headed off into the sith territories... He left behind soldiers to keep his control on the planet, and his student. Who needed to stay, he was around the age fifteen. One of the older children he took away, one of the very few older children. His connection to the force was to great,. But, he needed someone to act in his place while he was gone. He would return..
Edited by Mar Aeden, Apr 1 2010, 10:21 AM.
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Hi there, welcome to Echoes.

Just finished reading over your profile here and had some concerns.

Namely was the high abilities in so many things that you say he has, given he's 37 and only started training at the age of 15, so basically 22 years of learning the basics and mastering, and then all these other abilities in Master/Advanced levels. Perhaps on this front you might consider aging him higher or lowering the levels on some of the more specialized Dark Side abilities. Consider it takes usually over 20 years for someone to be Knighted.

I would like a full list of what abilities he has, all ranging from beginner to master. What "core" abilities and the like should be listed too as the basic ones can often differ according to the person's perspective.

Now onto my only Sith ability that I have a problem with "Midichlorian Manipulation-Moderate" This I feel is an ability that really hasn't been proven it exists. I know Palpatine said his Master was able to do it and that he'd teach Anakin it, but I've always considered it just a lure. There was never any proof of the ability to my knowledge other than Palpatine saying so to Anakin and luring him to the dark side. Maybe we can discuss this a bit more and if you insist on the ability I would thinking mention finding a holocron on it in your history and a max ability of Beginner on it for now.
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I went through and weakened abilities. Added a few core abilities that seemed seemly useful to him. The rest i'm leaving, computers to slow to get the full details on all.
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