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Dragon Force: Quest for the Clutch (OOC)
Topic Started: July 14, 2011, 1:01 am (11,029 Views)
Vanity&Ecstasy
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Been awhile since I've actually been able to roleplay...
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Posted. If anything is shitty or not what you wanted sir GM, lemme know and I'll fix it.
 
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'You were a happy dream in a life that's been nothing but a hellish nightmare'

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workin on a reply.
I'll whisper in your ear,
You are mine, and you will never have to be alone.
And when I pull you near,
You'll know I love you like I never loved anyone.
So let me be the one to lift you up,
I'll carry you home.
'Cause now I'm here to keep you safe,
And to catch you when you fall.
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I will work up a reply after class.
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I have a reply waiting for you Dream, if Juiceir's post doesn't effect our characters directly. I was bored so I wrote it out in advance. it's 1016 words xD If it sucks lemme know please, I appreciate feedback. Kinda want to be good for whoever I'm replying to at the time.


Also, Juicesir, what is the posting order format thingy for this? Like, everyone posts once, then the cycle starts again, or is back and forth posting allowed?
 
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Back and forth posting is allowed. That being said, I will not allow people to miss large amounts of time without posting a reason. If you have a reason for not being able to post (lack of internet, restriction, vacation) please notify me and we'll work out how your character should be cared for. I don't expect daily posts, but this will not die.

If I see that it's just two characters left playing and posting back and forth and no one else posted or tried to post in any way, then we'll cut it down to those who are obviously interested and I'll do an elaborate story post about why your character is dead. Not trying to be a dick, but I don't think it's right to discourage posting or force an order. Reply when you can, tell me if you have a few days where you can't, and we'll just have fun with it. :)
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I love you sir, truly do. *giddy* Imma post ma reply then!
 
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Let me finish recruiting Grunt and I'll get a post out ~-~
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Dream is going to work on a post now. XP
I'll whisper in your ear,
You are mine, and you will never have to be alone.
And when I pull you near,
You'll know I love you like I never loved anyone.
So let me be the one to lift you up,
I'll carry you home.
'Cause now I'm here to keep you safe,
And to catch you when you fall.
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Character Name: Saleos Uvall
Race: Human
Class: warmaster
Age: 32
Gender: male
Physical Description:
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Saleos stands 6ft and 3inches and is very well built. Underneath Saleos’s metal helmet is his hair, the front half of his hair is done in dreads that go down to his neck. The rest of his hair was left alone leaving it un kept but spiky looking. He has a clean cut face and looks young also. Even though he is thirty-two, it doesn’t show on his face or body at all. He doesn’t normally take off his helmet, but when he does you can see his lively eye’s that don’t show the many years of blood shed or sadness.

Personality: Saleos is a care free and kind leader. He’s always smiling and never has anything negative to say, that is unless he’s hungry. He takes pride in his accomplishments and of who he is. He knows that he’s don’t a lot of bad things, but he’s come to terms with his sins and isn’t bothered by what he’s seen or done. Saleos is also known for his big heart. He loves to be around children and even loves to play with them. When it comes to women he is respectful of them and loves a women that would stand by him and fight. He isn’t the most quit person when he talks and that’s not because he loves to drink, but just because he loves to talk. He puts off as being an idiot, but when you get him in a fight or war or just make him upset, you’ll see his intelligence for yourself.

Bio: Saleos is born into a barbarian tribe, but a well known one. Mainly known for their power and influence on others and tribes. They have no mercy or pity when it comes to what they want. Saleos picked up on their traditions fast and even got into fighting at a young age. Years went by and he just went on fighting. Luckily his mother was around and was amazingly enough a normal women that just wanted him to grow up and live a good life.

She taught Saleos how to read and even taught him many other things that would help him in life, while on the other hand his father taught him the ways of war and how to be the best leader a man can be. Of course Saleos took everything his father taught him and set off into the world on his own, but before he could his mother gave him the Ax of her father. This Ax was the one Saleos’s father wanted, but his mother wouldn’t give it to him. Saleos traveled mainly by foot, but the Ax was heavy but his body soon got over it.

Years went by and he became a warmaster. By now he was nineteen years old and already leading a large army. Through out the time he became as strong as an Ox and even became a great Ax fighter with his grandfathers dragon slayer. People grew to fear him as a fighter, but respect him as a leader. Saleos grew as a man and a very kind one at that and saying that means a lot coming from his tribe of brutes.

As his time as the leader, Saleos ran into a fierce demon in a forest. This demon knew of Saleos and of his endeavors and he always wanted to fight him. The demon spoke with a loud booming voice that seemed to of echoed all around them. Saleos didn’t bother listening as he lunged forward swinging his ask. The demon quickly vanished making Saleos to cut down a tree. The tree started falling forward at Saleos, Saleos quickly jumped out of the way. As he came out of the summersault he looked around, but it was only follwed by the voice of the monster “come now young one. I’ve followed you for years, I know of how you fight and I know of your weaknesses”.

Saleos wasn’t sure what the demon wanted, but he didn’t really care. Standing and looking around Saleos wasn’t sure what he could do against something so fast, but he couldn’t give up. “Now where would you be?” Saleos thought out loud as the demon scratched him down his back forcing blood to shoot out. Saleos didn’t flinch at the strike as he quickly dropped his Ax and grabbed the demon by the arm. The demon he could tell was weak and couldn’t fight face to face. He started punching the monster relentlessly as he screamed at the top of his lungs. Blood shot out onto the ground and all over, the demons body was beat to a pulp.

Saleos cared not for what the monster had to say as he ripped it’s head off with his bare hands. After that day he went on commanding troops and getting stronger. That was until he was done being a warmaster. After so many years he wanted to fight for himself from now on. At the age thirty-two Saleos now traveled in search of a dragon to test his Ax out on.

Languages: Lowric - goblin, human, halfling, and ork racial language

Weapons: The dragon slayer: This is an ax that stands 5ft 10inchs and is known to be able to cut through dragons. The power of the ax only awakens when there is a dragon near by. It normally starts to shake and gets heaver in the hands of the one holding it. Luckily for him the Ax can’t be damaged or broken, he tends to fight a little crazy that would break most weapons.
Armor:

Demons skull: Saleos’s helmet is from a demon that he fought. When he killed the monster he cut off it’s head and brought the head to a very skilled blacksmith. This black smith cut the skin off the head and took everything out of it making it hollow inside. Once he did that he slowly incased it in a blessed metal that would protect the wearers head from almost anything. So far it’s only been tested on human and ork weapons. So far it’s only known to keep the wearers head from getting any type of brain damage or head trauma. It was also fit with a brace that goes around the collarbone, It has joints within it that makes it so he can turn his head left and right and also look up and down. This is the only good thing about his armor. The rest of it is just plain armor that is only good for looks.


Other Possessions: 100 pieces of gold.

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Okay, so please bear with me and know that I'm not trying to be mean about this.

If you're intending to play him as an adversary and antagonist for the group I could understand the power level and the backstory. He'd make a great mini-boss halfway through the story, having terrorized the party for a majority of the time leading up to it. He'd need a bit toning back in that case, but not much, as they'd probably be on par by the time they were ready to face him.

But I don't think you're intending for him to be an antagonist, and if that is the case then he's too overpowered to be a main character. I was intending more for people to start of (using a DnD equivalent) at around level 5 or 7. A little established, with a suitable backstory and some world knowledge, but not the pinnacle of all that is. Saleos, as he currently stands, is more around level 18-21 and is, in no uncertain terms, the pinnacle of all he is. He already has had his sort of epic quest. He killed a demon, took his place at the head of his tribe, and now is the fiercest warrior in the land. He doesn't really fit in as a protagonist due to the fact that, as a character, he's basically at the end of his journey and wants to kill dragons.

So again, if you intended him as an antagonist, good on you. He's pretty spot on and with a few adjustments he would work well. But if you're intending on playing as a protagonist with the rest of the party, I just don't really see that happening in his current form. Maybe if it was earlier in his career, before all the demon-killing and army leading.

So, I'm not really sure what you want to do with him or not. Let me know and we can see where we can go with it.
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well I see what you mean, but I was kind of shooting for the older guy of the group and I understand what you were saying. SOO I was thinking I wasn't really trying to make him over powered, but if he is too powerful to be with the party then I can take antagonist with a few ideas of what I should do from you. But I never go crazy with the powers as I just wanted my guy in the story. Of course I could always make him get beat up cause even though he seems at the end of his journy, it doesn't mean he can't get beat up.

Every group has one guy that is strong, but it doesn't mean by the end he would be the strongest in the group, ANYWHO I'll take antagonist.
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I'm strong...
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Well, you can take the tank position along with Vane if you want. I can understand the older guy of the group now. Perhaps if we scale him back to a lieutenant or the like in the circumstance, detached from his people to learn the ways of others. In the course of his travels he could come across weapons similar to the ones you have currently, and you could still be the old guy al la Louis Armstrong from FMA: Brotherhood.
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Ah... But getting hit hurts. You be the tank...
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well I would like to keep his look. Maybe I could keep the Ax, but just make it something like he still has yet to unlock it's power that makes it the dragon slayer and for the helmet... I could make it as if he traveled with another man that was far greater then him, but that man killed the demon along with the help from Saleos and he gave him the skull so he could remember his first real fight and with that Saleos made it into a helmet. something like that work?
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Yes. I like that approach. Therefore your character progression will be much more focused around unlocking your weapons than training and abilities.

I haven't added in all the human races, but allow me to add in the wild one. What would you like them to be called? Once they're up and once you change your class and character to the scaled down version and once I send you your additional backstory via PM, then we'll be ready to roll.
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MAN!!! I'm bad at coming up with names. I'm sure whatever name you come up with is good. Oh and i'll get started on my guy now.
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Heh, alright then. :)
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sooo the name of that class.... I'll have to know that so I can change my history XD, but worry not. When you get the time just let me know.
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Creulon.
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Fuck with a capital c and that rhymes with p and that stands for bitch.
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