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| Vanity&Ecstasy | June 19, 2011, 3:50 am Post #201 |
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Okay I'm sure Luna just used Scan. At least that's what I got from her post. |
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| Star | June 19, 2011, 4:06 am Post #202 |
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Username: Sputnik Character Name: Star Age: 25 Gender: Female Race: Gaiain Bio: Star grew up a fighter. Her whole life had been a struggle for food and survival. Each day had been a day of struggle and strife. From an early age she learned to protect her self with what ever. she could. When the two worlds collided she began to roam the new world. Her goal was to right the wrongs that Chaos had commited. Her goal was to gain fame within the Gaians by defeating Chaos. She hoped that she would gain acceptance from them. Personality: Star is a very shy person. She wishes to be more outgoing but is afraid to be hurt. She sees herself as being weak and unable to help. She hopes that one day she will be able to interact with others without the fear of being hated. Weapon: Star makes use of a long Ash wood staff. At the top it is split five ways and resembles a Shaman staff. It has trinkets that she utilizes to amplify her power. Wolves teeth glass orbs and a dragon bone with an air symbol carved on it hang from the staff. Appearance: ![]() Stats: Level - 5 Attack - 0 Defence - 4 Magical Attack - 10 Magical Defence - 10 HP - 60 Slots: Slot One Scan Slot Two Chance Slot Three Cure Slot Four-Five Fireball Edited by Star, June 19, 2011, 5:48 am.
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| Star | June 19, 2011, 4:07 am Post #203 |
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Is that fine? |
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| Lock Wolf | June 19, 2011, 4:56 am Post #204 |
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Lets see, well, for starters I'd like a longer bio and personality if you can. Preferably a paragraph or two for each. Also, could you go into more detail on the staff? Like what kind of trinkets? That and you have 5 more stat points to use at your will. And, I'm just clarifying this, but you have Fire Ball in two slots so you have that stacked for the extra 20% boost right? [I list it a bit differently, so no problem, just double checking] |
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| Star | June 19, 2011, 4:59 am Post #205 |
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I will try and work on it but I'm not to great with this. Yeah that's what I was going for with the fire ball. |
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| Lock Wolf | June 19, 2011, 5:08 am Post #206 |
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Hm, Alrighty. And take your time, no rush. |
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| Star | June 19, 2011, 5:48 am Post #207 |
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I really did the best I could. |
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| Vanity&Ecstasy | June 19, 2011, 5:52 am Post #208 |
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Well if Lock's okay with it I'll help you fluff it up a bit and hammer out some details. |
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| Star | June 19, 2011, 5:56 am Post #209 |
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I did edit it but that was the best I could come up with. |
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| Vanity&Ecstasy | June 19, 2011, 6:08 am Post #210 |
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Ha, that's fine. That's why we see if Lock will let me help you. All I'd be doing is something like, 'She grew up like this. The reason she wants to defeat Chaos. How she found her staff. Why she chose to follow Elafane(though that's pretty much the same reason she wants to defeat Chaos).' Little details like that really help fluff up things like history. Personality wise. 'Why is she shy? Is it something in her past? Why is she afraid to be hurt? Are these events linked somehow? Does she only want to be more outgoing so she can not be hated or does she want something else? Is her only goal to not be hated or does she have another much larger life goal in mind?' If you can answer those that should help too. I know it's a lot to think about when you're just starting but the sooner you're introduced to this sort of thing the better off you'll be in the long run and I'm sure you'll notice the difference in quality. |
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| Star | June 19, 2011, 6:12 am Post #211 |
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That's a little intimidating to answer
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| Kraveing_volkf | June 19, 2011, 6:22 am Post #212 |
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Dont worry Sputnik We all have to start somewhere. Personally your bio seems like it should be good. Then again I generally go for the shortest path to a finished bio ![]() In any case if your new then do what I did, look at other peoples skeletons (all of which are on this post and go from there ![]() Do the same for your regular posts to find a good style you like. As you RP you will become more and more adept, and ultimately better. If someone points out something listen to them, you dont have to change your style but generally these little nitpicks will help you in the long run (though sometimes they really dont XD) |
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| Vanity&Ecstasy | June 19, 2011, 6:31 am Post #213 |
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Ha, don't worry. You don't have to answer all of those. Answer about half of them for both the History and Personality and you should find that your character will have a bit more depth. Then again I'm use to this so coming up with things like that is easier for me. Anyways, I'm a little tired so my advice is kind of blunt. |
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| Lock Wolf | June 19, 2011, 7:14 am Post #214 |
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-points up- Listen to the wise words written above, they contain much knowledge. -strokes sagely beard slowly- Honestly though, its not hard, just let your mind kinda go with it. Vanity's check list, even halve filled out, if, will vastly improve the depth. And as Krave said, we all start some were. I don't expect shining pure brilliance, just a spark of it with a hint of a good imagination. The more put in now, the more you can put in and get out later. Sounds odd, I know. But its true. That said, your accepted and I'll add you to the list of characters tomorrow. Feel free to post and jump into the RP. Although, I would still like you to fluff up, as Vanity put it, your bio and personality a bit. Think of it a inventive exorcise, and don't be worried about going over bored. Also, take a look at this, OCZ Slayer's Guide, it was a collabe project between me, and a few others that you'll probably get to know in time on the site. It'll help give you a few pointers on character creation. Browse through it when you have the time or just feel curious, just might give ya a bit of insight. All in all though, nice to have join us. |
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| Star | June 19, 2011, 7:51 pm Post #215 |
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Was that good *hopeful look in eyes* |
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| Everlasting Nirvana | June 19, 2011, 8:00 pm Post #216 |
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New chick hits a natural twenty on her first roll... lucky now where's my luck like that lol. Ashlee the post looks good to me ![]() WTH I hit a 2 and then a 20? What's up with the 20's this round lol. Edited by Everlasting Nirvana, June 19, 2011, 8:14 pm.
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| Star | June 19, 2011, 8:36 pm Post #217 |
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A 20 is a good thing right? |
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| Vanity&Ecstasy | June 19, 2011, 9:30 pm Post #218 |
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It's very good ~-~ It gets you a <3 from me since you got it while healing me. |
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| Star | June 19, 2011, 9:45 pm Post #219 |
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Yay
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| Vanity&Ecstasy | June 19, 2011, 9:52 pm Post #220 |
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If you keep doing it you'll get a super special surprise! |
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| Star | June 19, 2011, 10:14 pm Post #221 |
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What's that
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| Vanity&Ecstasy | June 19, 2011, 10:20 pm Post #222 |
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It wouldn't be a super special surprise if I told you now would it? |
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| Star | June 19, 2011, 10:41 pm Post #223 |
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Well no... |
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| Lock Wolf | June 19, 2011, 10:44 pm Post #224 |
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Vanity, down boy. -squirts in teh face with a bottle of water- Sputnik: That'll do perfectly fine. |
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| Vanity&Ecstasy | June 19, 2011, 10:47 pm Post #225 |
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Ah water! My only other weakness besides bullets and swords and heavy machinery! |
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We all have to start somewhere. Personally your bio seems like it should be good. Then again I generally go for the shortest path to a finished bio 










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