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Tien Shinhan
Topic Started: Oct 12 2009, 05:55 PM (338 Views)
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Character name: Tien Shinhan
Character age: Late twenties - Early thirties
Character race: Human, but with a third eye, I'm just too cool to be normal.
Starting planet: Earth
How did you find us: A friend
Why do you want this character, and why do you think you deserve him/her? Cause Tien is probably my favorite character in the DB/Z/GT universe. I deserve to have him because well damn it, he's my favorite character and I'll roleplay him well, you'll see soon enough.
Role-play Example: ((OOC: This might be going a bit overboard, but I'm also just doing this for fun. It's a remake of the Demon King Piccolo saga, but just twisted around a bit. I hope you enjoy it.))

Tien Shinhan tightly gripped the wheel with bot hands, a cold, serious expression clinging to his face as he flew quickly through the air inside a ship. He was determined to defeat this monster, the demon know as King Piccolo. That monster has taken so many innocent lives, some of his friends being apart of those lives. "Chiaotzu...Krillin...Goku...Master Roshi...I will avenge you all...I will destroy this monster!" He then immediately pulled back on the lever beside him, sending his ship thrusting forward at full speed. "I'm coming for you Piccolo! The Evil Containment wave will have you soon!" He yelled at the top of his lungs, drawing closer and closer to King Furry's Castle, which is where King Piccolo was located at the moment.

Unknown to Tien, Goku was alive and fighting King Piccolo as Tien flew towards the Castle. Goku was faring well, but unfortunately he was eventually be over powered and defeated by the Demon King Piccolo. Tien would arrive in his ship, hovering high above Piccolo, the severly injured Goku, and the dead corpse of Drum. Tien was both surprised, and pissed, he couldn't believe Goku was alive, he couldn't believe he had been defeated. His expression remained fierce, opening up the cock pit and jumping out, he wasn't about to let another one of his friends die! "LEAVE HIM ALONE!!!" Tien yelled at the top of his lungs as he descended down towards Piccolo in a burst of speed.

King Piccolo was getting ready to finish Goku off with one powerful blast, his right arm extended outwards, his palms flat and fingers spread as he gathered energy for his attack. Goku laid on his back, beaten to a bloody pulp, barely being conscious as he looked up to the green monster that was about to destroy him, being able to do nothing but watch and groan in pain. Goku had failed, and thought for sure that this was the end, but those thoughts would disperse the very second he heard Tien-Shinhan's voice. Goku hoped his friend would be strong enough to carry on where he had left off, having confidence in his friend, hope was all they had left. "Tien...Shinhan...hehe..." He struggled to cough out.

King Piccolo's head snapped towards the direction the voice was coming from, looking up to view another pathetic human trying to stop his plans, another lamb to the slaughter in his eyes. "Oh good, Another guest." He said with an evil smile, he was underestimating the strength of his opponent, Tien was no weakling! Tien quickly moved in on the attack, not wasting any time, throwing a heavy kick towards Piccolo's chest as he came down towards him, sending the demon flying back a good distance until he crashed into the ground.

Piccolo let out a heavy groan of agony as he was kicked, he most likely would have dodged or countered that attack if he were more prepared for it, but he didn't expect such speed or strength from this human, he seemed just like another weakling. It was like fighting Goku all over again! Piccolo slowly sat up, getting over the pain as quickly as he could, grunting as he forced himself to stand. "You insolent worm! I'll crush you!" Piccolo brought his hands together, his left hand wrapping around his right wrist, his right fingers curling naturally around the large yellow blast that began to generate in his hand, electricity floating all around it.

Tien looked down to the injured Goku after he sent Piccolo hurling away, a confident smirk upon his face. "It's okay Goku...I've got it from here...Your fights with me now monster!!!" Goku then proceeded to chuckle a little bit more, struggling to do so due to his injured state, a smile spreading across his face. "Tien...You're not strong enough alone..." Goku struggled to lift his stubby arm up, his hand opened as if he were expecting Tien to take it. "Take....take the last of my energy...And crush that monster..." He coughed out.

Tien was reluctant, he knew that would mean the death of Goku and he did not want to lose another friend, there was no way he would do it. "No Goku, save your strength, I can handle this on my own...Besides, I've got a few tricks in store for Piccolo...I've been training hard for this moment..." He said with a confident smirk, looking over to the green monster who was gathering energy for an attack, not good. Goku looked up to Tien, his smile never fading, his stubby arm falling to the ground as he slowly lost consciousness. "I'm sorry...I failed..." Those were his last words before passing out, leaving the rest to Tien. But would he be enough to stop the Demon King Piccolo?

Tien nodded down at Goku, his expression becoming even more fierce, he would not let any of his friends sacrifices be in vain! He shifted into his fighting stance, jumping away from Goku and forward a bit so that he was out of the line of fire. He watched Piccolo closely, waiting for him to release his attack, having very little options, taking the defensive would be best for now. Piccolo's evil smirk came across his face once again firing off his electrified yellow kit attack towards Tien, it traveled far to fast for him to avoid it. "DIE!!!!!!" He yelled as he fired off his attack.

Tien had no choice but to block, crossing his arms in the shape of an 'X' before him, proceeding to use the kiai technique as well, to help aid in the blocking of this powerful attack. "ERAGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!" He yelled at the top of his lungs as the attack collided into his arms, the attack slowly began to disperse, but it would still damage his arms, leaving some burns and bruises. The blast would eventually cease to exist, leaving Tien in that same stance, huffing out of breath. "I won't go down that easily!" He yelled out to the demon, having no choice but to yell due to the great distance between them.

Piccolo softly chuckled as he assumed his own unique fighting stance, that evil smirk not leaving his face."Pathetic simple minded human...Do you really think you stand a chance just because you landed a lucky hit and managed to deflect one my attacks? That's the problem with the human race. No respect...for the superior species!!!" He took off full speed towards Tien, his right arm cocked back for an attack. Piccolo was still underestimating his opponent, something he did to everyone he fought. Perhaps Tien would be able to exploit this and use it to his advantage.

Tien quickly recovered from the attack, no longer being out of breath, he was ready to fight! He quickly assumed his own unique fighting stance, then immediately took off towards Piccolo, intending to meet him in a clash. Piccolo would throw the first punch from his right hand, hurling it towards Tien's face, which he would skillfully dodge. Tien then threw the second punch from his left hand, throwing it towards the demon's stomach. Piccolo somehow managed to dodge that punch as well, side-stepping it. Piccolo then began throwing flurry's of odd punches towards Tien, punches that only involved the middle and pointer finger, moving with blinding speed, his attacks seemed like nothing more than a blur.

Tien would do the exact same as him, attempting to go punch for punch with the Demon King, and succeeding in doing so far. The two would dash around the area, exchanging punches and kicks, moving so fast that they were practically invisible to the untrained eye. Piccolo would take a heavy punch to the face, immediately following Tien would take a powerful knee to the gut, both of them letting out their grunts of pain as they were struck. The two warriors would stop moving, remaining in one spot, simply going punch for punch with each other, each hit being a heavy one. During one their exchanges, they would both punch each other in the face at the same exact time, sending each other flying backwards, their feet skidding across the ground and picking up dust until they came to a stop.

Both fighters were huffing out of breath, though Tien seemed to be a bit more roughed up, it was very difficult to keep up with such a powerful opponent, the last time he had pushed this far was against Goku, and even Goku wasn't this strong. The fighters never fell out of their stances, staring each other down. Piccolo would let out his mad laughter for a few moments, letting it cease so that he may speak. "Look at you! Exhausted already! No one can match my power, give it up human!"

Tien growled, his brows curving inwards, his nostrils flaring, his expression fierce. "I'll show you! HAA!" He yelled as he would thrust his right arm forward, unleashing a decent sized ki blast towards him, though this was only a diversion for something bigger. Instead of the blast hitting Piccolo, it hit the ground beneath him, causing smoke and debris to rise up, both obstructing his vision and surprising him, opening him up for a quick attack. Tien would have used the solar flare instead, but he wasn't in range, and was trying his best to conserve his energy.

Tien Shinhan took this opportunity, moving behind Piccolo with blinding speed and dropping a vicious elbow onto the back of his neck, sending him crashing into the ground below. Piccolo's jaw would drop, letting out a heavy groan of agony as the attack connected, despite the vast amount of pain he was in, he managed to catch himself on one knee. He then immediately threw a vicious elbow backwards into Tien's gut, giving him no time to react.

Tien's reaction to the attack was the same as Piccolo's, except he wouldn't fall to the ground, merely clench his gut in agony. Piccolo's tolerance for pain was a bit higher than Tien's, allowing him to spin around, rise up from the ground and throw a powerful uppercut into Tien's chin, sending him hurling into the sky. Piccolo would then immediately follow up the attack by lifting his right arm up, pointing his index finger at Tien, then firing off a powerful beam of energy.

Tien recovered from the attacks midair, but was hurting rather badly, King Piccolo hit very hard and recovering from an attack like that was not an easy task. His eyes widened as the beam of energy came hurling towards him, but he would not let it stop him, bringing his right arm outwards as well, his pointer finger extending as he fired off one of his signature techniques; The Dodon Ray. Tien yelled at the top of his lungs as he fired off this attack, "DODONPA!!!"

The two beams clashed into one another, the two powerful energies battling for dominance, but who would win? Did Tien really have the strength to conquer Piccolo in a battle of energy? They seemed to be dead even, neither gaining the lead for very long, but in the long run, Piccolo would most likely prevail. Tien had a trick up his sleeve though, but it would take a lot out of him, which was a big risk, a risk he had no choice but to take. He would cock his free hand back, his hand assuming the one-handed Tri Beam form. "Get ready to die Piccolo! TRI BEAM!" He yelled at the top of his lungs as he quickly gathered the energy into his hand, not really taking his time with the technique so that it may be fired off quickly, but of course due to this it was not as powerful as it should be. "HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!" He yelled as he fired off the massive yellow blast towards Piccolo.

Piccolo's eyes would widen, not expecting such a powerful attack to be so quickly made and thrown by the human, so he would return his own powerful blast, opening his mouth up and firing a thick beam of energy into his. A large and bright explosion went off causing violent gusts of wind to fill the area, taking a few moments to calm down. All the blasts that they had fired had exploded together in one big bang. Tien was huffing out of breath up in the sky, he was using too much energy and needed to save more, otherwise he would not be able to pull off the evil containment wave. 'I know he's not dead...Damn it, I need to find a way to get close enough to him to use the evil containment wave...But every time I get in range he attacks me or blasts me away...I have to seriously injure him somehow...Look's like I have only a few options, I was hoping I wouldn't have to use this technique, it uses too much energy...Guess I don't really have a choice.' Tien thought to himself as he assumed a charging stance, his fists falling to his sides, his legs spreading apart as he began to yell at the top of his lungs, his massive white aura glowing brightly.

As the blast cleared, the green warrior was seen standing in his same fighting stance, not moving an inch from where he had been before the attack. "Simple tricks...I grow tired of you, it's time to end this..." The demon said confidently, charging upwards towards Tien, readying a heavy kick from his right leg. Tien's technique had now been put to use, two more arms grew out of him, he now had four arms! He would lift one of them up, blocking the kick with his fore-arm, then immediately following in with a flurry of punches from all arms, yelling at the top of his lungs as he did so, going on the assault and holding nothing back.

Piccolo did his best to keep up, having to constantly move backwards to help dodge and block Tien's attacks, but he wasn't exactly used to fighting opponents with four arms and was eventually hit directly in the nose by one of Tien's punches. This gave Tien the perfect chance to beat down on Piccolo, unleashing hundreds of furious and fast attacks towards the namekian, each and every single one hitting, finishing off the massive combo with a quadruple axe handle smash, sending the demon king hurling towards the ground with a booming crash. The fight was not over, Tien knew that, but as of now he had the upper hand, he was confident he could win this fight...


((To Be Continued/Edited...))
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