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Mirai Gohan; Was applying for Vegeta, accepted as Mirai Gohan
Topic Started: Sep 17 2009, 10:58 AM (254 Views)
Vegeta
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Character name: Vegeta, Prince of All Saiyans

Character age: 35

Starting planet: Earth

Why do you want this character, and why do you think you deserve him/her?
Because vegeta is my favorite DBZ character, I have read the manga and watched the anime of Dragonball Z. I am an experienced Role Player in Dragonball RPGs and I know my fair share about DBZ and Vegeta. But I pretty much already said that.

Role-play Example:
Vegeta starred into the sun. "I am the prince of all Saiyans. My power is far greater than anyone else. I shall prove that by destroying this puny planet." He then walked towards a tall bald Saiyan man. "Nappa are you prepared to take down their guards." said Vegeta to Nappa. "Yes prince Vegeta" Nappa then walked towards the bases guards. He then raised his middle and index finger upwards and a massive thunderbolt came crashing down and destroyed the bases opening Gates. Vegeta then rushed in one of the Planets main bases and quickly ran around viciously killing anyone in his way, and out of his way. He had appeared in front of another guard. This time the guard looked equipped in a fighting uniform. The man looked at Vegeta and spoke. "You shall be stopped." The man then appeared next to Vegeta and attempted to slice his throat with a basic knife. But Vegeta was to fast for this mere Earthling. "You never cease to amaze me. Thinking you can kill a Saiyan, you don't deserve to live!" Vegeta then snapped the fighters neck and ordered Nappa to dispose of the bodies. Vegeta then walked into the next room. In it sat a man starring into Vegetas dark evil eyes. "You will not get away with this." Said the Old Man. Vegeta then walked closer to the man. You shall not live if you dare doubt the Prince Of All Saiyans!" Vegeta then grabbed the man by the neck and charged a Ki Blast. Next he slammed it into the Mans chest. Causing him to explode. But Vegeta was not horrified by this site. He enjoyed using the evil inside him to kill and hunt his prey. Especially to find his most prized trophies. In fact the reason he came to Earth was to search for them. The Dragon-Balls.
WORD COUNT: 311

This shows an alternate darker Vegeta and a darker story to Dragonball hope you like this example.
Edited by Bra, Sep 18 2009, 01:51 PM.
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Alright buddy boy -- we already discussed this in the chat, and I'll be waiting for your re-write before we take this app further.
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Vegeta
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This is the Rewrite :) sorry if it isn't top notch or up-to your highest standards.

Vegeta glared at another Saiyan. He wore an Orange Gi and pants with a blue undershirt. "Are you ready to do this Kakarot?, This determines who is the strongest!"
"hahaha same old Vegeta!" The two then go into their battle positions ready to take on each other even until facing death to prove who was finally the strongest. Vegeta was the first to move by running at Goku hopefully intimidating him. Goku simply laughed at Vegeta and charged a Kamehameha Wave. Just as Vegeta got to strike Goku, Goku launched the powerful blast carrying Vegeta in it's path. Vegeta hit the wall and he was stuck in it. He then powered into Super Saiyan which caused the wall to explode letting Vegeta escape, and getting the upper hand. Vegeta charged two seperate Ki waves in both of his hands then put them together in one big flash. "Final Flash!" the beam arrived at Goku's position in the blink of an eye creating a massive crater once it hit him. "Very good Vegeta but now it's time for me to go Super Saiyan!"

The two Super Saiyans starred at each other breathing very heavily wondering who will win, and who will fall. Vegeta simply got back to his battle position and started laughing. "I can keep this up forever Kakarot!" The Saiyan Prince then put one of his hands out and created a Giant Ki Ball. As vegeta was doing this Goku created a Kamehameha Wave 5x the power it usually was. Both Saiyans then were ready to launch their powerful attacks. Vegeta was of course first. "Big Bang Attack!!!" Vegeta then launched this powerful attack directly at Goku. "Welcome to my Omega Kamehameha!" Goku then launched his powerful Kamehameha at Vegetas Big Bang Attack. The two attacks created a massive beam struggle. This caused Vegeta to go all out. "I shall become, Super Vegeta!!!" Vegeta then bulked up and became much more powerful then ever before. This caused the Big Bang to take the Omega Kamehamehas Position and hit Goku creating a massive Explosion which nearly tore their whole Arena Apart.

Goku then laughed at Vegeta "Hehehe, you have become powerful. But we all know there is an even greater power beyond a Super Super Saiyan. I shall become a Super Saiyan Two!" Goku then charged all his power and became an even stronger Super Saiyan. This prompted Vegeta to follow and transform into Super Saiyan 2 and they both yet again looked into each others Eyes. Goku knew vegetas Super Saiyan Two form was much stronger than his so he only had one thing to do. "Kaioken!" a strong red aura then powered over Gokus super Saiyan. "This is the Super Kaioken!" Vegeta ignored Goku's words and rushed at him charging Ki into his fists. Goku saw what vegeta was doing and charged his Kaioken into both of his fists. The two then clashed and were laying into each other. Punches were flyign everywhere and they both did their toll of damage on each other. Although Vegeta was the victor because he had managed to slam his Power Fist into Gokus Stomach. "Hehehe, very good Vegeta. But I have another trick up my sleeve."
"And what would that..." before Vegeta could finish he witnessed Goku's power grow 5x the size it was. He then saw Goku struggling as hair was rapidly growing out of his hair. Vegeta was in complete shock, Goku had just became a Super Saiyan 3.

Goku had then gotten up and starred at Vegetas shocked face. "What's the matter? Are you done already?"
"No Kakarot, I was just thinking. How long can you obtain that form without completely struggling?"
"Enough to show you who's the strongest!"
"That's what I thought." Vegeta then rushed at Goku and started rapidly punching him in the stomach. This of course didn't work against Goku. Goku then slapped Vegeta causing him to be sent pummeling into the wall again. This time his head was stuck and he was trying to pull it out. But he always had back-up. Vegeta used his Kiai ability to shatter this part of the wall causing him to come out. and power up to his highest Power Level. How am I supposed to beat a Super Saiyan 3? Wait I've got it, the Super Saiyan 3 must put a toll on your body. This could mean if I were to wear him out he would then go to his base form. Then I could truly defeat him.

Vegeta then walked towards Goku. Goku dashes at vegeta but Vegeta dodged him and appeared behind him. He then shot a few Ki blasts to mock Goku. Goku used most of his power to dash at Vegeta and launch his fist into his stomach. "Arrgh!" Vegeta then dropped to the ground clutching his stomach. But Vegeta didn't want to give up, not yet, not after all this time training to beat Goku. He then got up and flew up high in the sky. "Final Flash!!!" a massive beam then shot down straight at Goku. "This Kamehameha is going to have 10x my power in it!" Goku then launched his powerful beam down at vegetas Final Flash. yet again creating another final beam struggle which would determine who is the strongest.

The beam struggle was huge. Vegeta could see Gokus Super Saiyan levels were dropping but the beam was getting closer to Vegeta. Vegeta decided to use all his power and he returned to his base form. Goku was still in Super Saiyan One. vegeta knew that Goku would use his power to win the beam struggle, but Vegeta didn't hold back. "Hyahhh!!" is what they both called using all their power to defeat one another. But it didn't work, instead it created a huge explosion which hit the both of them on the ground, both unconscious.

Vegeta starred at the knocked out Goku. Goku was resting while Vegeta was still partially conscious. "I win Kakarot" But what Vegeta didn't know is that even though he won Goku would always be stronger than he was. Until the death of them both.

There done, this is my best as said before sorry if it isn't your highest standards.
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Keep in mind that these spots will be highly competitive.
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Vegeta
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I understand that :)
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Accepting as Mirai Gohan
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