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| rarehunter_555 | Apr 14 2010, 11:45 AM Post #1 |
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Chapter 17: Death ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 37 Camu: I killed Naoto. Camu: Just now... Euro: You lie. [Chapter 17: Death] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 38 Camu: It is true. Euro: Lies! Euro: But... If we...! Euro[in mind]: Are friends...!! Camu: NGH... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 39 Euro: WAH! Camu: Ah... Euro: Camu... Why? [Camu's heartbeat]: TU-TUM [Camu's heartbeat]: TU-TUM [Camu's heartbeat]: TU-TUM Levinas: Camu... Levinas: Is using illusions. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 40 Levinas: Are you hurt? Levinas: No matter how hard you try to hide it, you can't hide the smell of blood. Levinas[in mind]: The smell of Camu's blood... and Naoto's too... [Camu's boot]: SLIZ [Sweat]: PLIC PLIC Camu: Heavens... Camu: Haa... Camu: Don't say anything more, Levi... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 41 Epsilon: In that case... Epsilon: Let's search for Lucia. Levinas: Quickly, Camu. Camu: What? Levinas: You are in no condition to stand. Levinas: I will take you, and after that you can mount {Or maybe raise up, summon} the dragon. Camu: I... Camu: I... Camu: I don't want to see...! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 42 Camu: I've realized... I have only been following the image of Lotus... Camu: Always have been... Camu[in mind remembering Lucia and Lotus]: Camu! Epsilon: Me too. Camu: Eh...? Epsilon: It is the promise I made to Lotus. Epsilon: I decided to protect Lucia. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 43 False words, false smiles... In the end, the only true thing he said was... The words... Of truth {Or something else}... "Promise me you will protect Coral..." Epsilon: Because of that I want to protect her. Epsilon: Maybe I just want to think it's true... Levinas: Lotus is in my heart as well... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 44 Levinas[in mind]: If Lotus had not appeared that night and instead on some other night... Levinas[in mind]: To rescue Lucia, surely I would have been murdered. Levinas[in mind remembering Lotus]: "You are..." Levinas[in mind]: The words of that moment... Was the first time someone told me that... Levinas[in mind]: And yet I... Levinas[in mind]: I killed him... Levinas[in mind]: I killed him? The sword was raised up, but I don't remember anything more... Levinas[in mind]: If I want to remember, the feeling of inconsistency will help me. Levinas[in mind remembering Epsilon]: I think that Lotus... Levinas[in mind remembering Epsilon]: Could still be alive... Levinas[in mind]: Alive? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 45 Levinas[in mind]: It can't be... Levinas[in mind]: Many years have passed... If he wasn't killed by me, now he would still be dead. Camu: huhu Camu: Entering people's hearts was his specialty. Camu: Even if dead, he still lives in the hearts of others. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 46 Camu: Maybe... Lotus' soul has not returned to the sand... Camu: And is still wandering in this world... When the life of a Sand Dust ends... The body, mind, and soul changes to dust and disappears... But... ...What happend to Naoto's soul? I have to erase all my memory of him... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 47 Levinas: Hey Camu, try not to use more spells. Camu: AH! Camu: KYA! Levinas: Hey don't move. Levinas: Leave Naoto for later, right now let's search lucia! Levinas: Since she's the one who summoned! Levinas: Stop suffering alone! We are your friends. Camu: T-- That's... Camu[in mind]: The same as Lotus... CAmu[in mind]: I can't forget it... Camu: I don't need to say it... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 48 Unknown: The new magic stone isn't working too. Unknown: How can it be...? Unknown: Do something... Unknown: The main body has no more power. Unknown: I don't know what to do. Unknown: I give up. Unknown: Mr. Sladiiis! Sladis: Me too. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 49 Unknown: Do something with your power! Sladis: Hahaha Sladis: You're pretty Unknown: Don't say that! I'll die if we don't do something! Unknown: That's it, Sladis! Unknown: Find the dragon of time and do something! Unknown: How long do you think this strange existence of upper Orgos will last? Unknown: And we Elphis are supposed to be immortal, so why are there only three of us?! Unknown: Also we are becoming stone. Unknown: If we don't do something, we will die. Understand? Sladis: And what's so bad about death? Sladis: Isn't it weirder to have immortal life? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 50 Unknown: Well, I don't want to die! Unknown: SO! Unknown: I don't want to die either!! Unknown: HAAAY! [Unknown's boot]: PLAM Unknown: Ah... [Sound effect]: CRACK Sladis: Looks like the impact affected the main body too. Unknown: That... Sladis: I want to change to stone. Sladis: Soon, there will only be the lower Orgos. Sladis: The transformation will only affect the upper. Sladis: There are people living well below. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 51 Unknown: Lower?! Unknown: You're saying at the bottom of Orgos?! No joke!! Unknown: If I had to live with those scum, Unknown: I'd rather die!! Sladis: Well, it's a thing of this level. Sladis: The knowledge of our life... Unknown: What are you saying, Sladis? Sladis: Dyura, we are Elphis... Sladis: We can't die, but we also can't live. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 52 Sladis: Sadis and you hate the Sand Dust, Sladis: But I don't see it the same as that. Sladis: They "live" despite their short lives... Dyura: Then... Dyura: Why don't you go below... Dyura: Yourself? Sladis: ... Our life will end soon. Sladis: The Sand Dust have some words they say once in their lives... [Somebody in mind]: If I could... [Somebody in mind]: I would like to know the fate of your Sand Dust daughter, Rukavifeit... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 53 Sladis: "I love you," Dyura... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 54 and 55 Naoto: Nh... Naoto[in mind]: What happend to me? And Lucia? Where am I? Dragon: Hi! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 56 Naoto: You again, Mih. Naoto: Tell me something first, this is a real world or fantasy? Dragon: Neither. Dragon: We are in a space between two times. Naoto[in mind]: I don't understand... Naoto: What do you want? Naoto: And stop using Chisato's figure! Dragon: Nothing. Dragon: I'm just a bit concerned. Dragon: Nobody else but you can go against God's prediction. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 57 Dragon: What fortune the limit of your imagination is an "intensive hemorrhage." Dragon: Very good... Dragon: That you can see Lucia, although if only her conciousness. Naoto: What... Naoto: What are you saying? I... Naoto[in mind]: My arms... Legs... Naoto[in mind]: The wounds have disappeared... Naoto[in mind]: What happend? Naoto: I... Naoto: And I'm wearing other clothes as well. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 58 Dragon: It's simple, you haven't noticed your death. Naoto[in mind]: Death? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 59 Naoto: No... It can't be... Naoto: Death...? Naoto[in mind]: I died...?! Dragon: Having that power... Dragon: You were killed by Camu. Naoto: ... Then... Naoto: Then! Naoto: If I'm really dead! Naoto: Take me back to the real world!! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 60 Naoto: You said if I died in Orgos, I could go back, didn't you?! Naoto: I'm still not awake! I'm still dreaming... [Push sound]: FRUSH Dragon: Actually... Dragon: You can go back to your world without any problem. Dragon: But your soul is strongly tied to Orgos. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 61 Naoto: Then...?! Naoto: That means I can go back to Orgos another time...?! Dragon: What are you gonna do? Dragon: Your body doesn't exists. Dragon: Your hands, feet, and guts are destroyed. Dragon: Unconciously, you created all of this to continue fighting, but... Dragon: To leave the mind, this body will disappear without a trace... Dragon: You don't have a body to go to, and you will only wander with your soul like before. Dragon: Note that going back to Orgos, you will feel much loneliness. Dragon: No one will notice your presence, everything will be forgotten. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 62 Dragon: Or is it necessary for you to see the death of Lucia until you're satisfied? Naoto: That's it... Naoto: I only have to materialize. Naoto: If I could materialize my arms and my feet... Naoto: Then I can make my entire body... Naoto[in mind]: That's it! I should still be able to see Lucia...! Naoto[in mind]: I can feel it very well... The link between her and I... If it is this world... If it is this world where anything can be, Then I only have to imagine it...!! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 63 Dragon: It is impossible. Naoto: Why? Dragon: It can be done... Dragon: But by yourself it is impossible. Dragon: Do you understand? Naoto: Can I ask you something... one more time? Naoto: Always I had that doubt... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 64 and 65 Naoto: This place... including you, the world of Orgos... Naoto: Is it real? Naoto: Is it my dream? Naoto: Which of the two? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 66 Dragon: I don't know. Naoto: What can I do? Naoto: I... Dragon: Come on... Dragon: Let's search for the answer... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 67 Dragon: In your incomplete past. Dragon: Lend me a bit of your back. Naoto: Ah? Naoto: UWAH! [Falling] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 68 and 69 Naoto[in mind]: Light! Naoto[in mind]: The same as in that moment... The same light when Lucia summoned me...! NAoto[in mind]: I'm falling...!!! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 70 Lotus: You are the incarnation of the dragon of time... Lotus: The god that rules over the time of this world... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [End Chapter 17] Edited by rarehunter_555, Apr 14 2010, 02:15 PM.
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| kiran | Apr 23 2010, 10:40 PM Post #2 |
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Chapter 17: Death ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 01 1st panel Camu's though: I was gonna... erase all memories related to Naoto, then disappear... [you could ignore the translation for panel one if you want] Levinas: Camu... Levinas: Naoto... Levinas: How's Naoto? Camu: I have already... Camu: kill Naoto! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 02 Camu: I killed Naoto. Camu: Just now... Euro: You lie. [Chapter 17: Death] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 03 Camu: It's true. [would sound more fluent in spoken terms] Euro: Lies! Euro: But... If we...! Euro[in mind]: are friends...!! Camu: NGH... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 04 Euro: WAH! Camu: Ah... Euro: Camu... Why? [Camu's heartbeat]: TU-TUM [Camu's heartbeat]: TU-TUM [Camu's heartbeat]: TU-TUM Levinas: Camu... Levinas: is using illusions. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 05 Levinas: Are you hurt? Levinas: No matter how hard you try to hide it, you can't hide the smell of blood. Levinas[in mind]: The smell of Camu's blood... and Naoto's too... [Camu's boot]: SLIZ [Sweat]: PLIC PLIC Camu: Heavens... Camu: Haa... Camu: Don't say anything more, Levi... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 06 Epsilon: In that case... Epsilon: Let's search for Lucia. Levinas: Quickly, Camu. Camu: What? Levinas: You are in no condition to stand. Levinas's face narrative on the 3rd panel: how troublesome... Levinas: I will carry you, until we get to the dragon mounts. Camu: I... Camu: I... Camu: I don't want to see...! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 07 Camu: I've realized... I see Lotus in her... Camu: Always have been... Camu[in mind remembering Lucia and Lotus]: Camu! Epsilon: Me too. Camu: Eh...? Epsilon: I will protect Lucia... Epsilon: Because I've made a promise with Lotus. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 08 False words, false smiles... [you could use fake smiles if you want] In the end, at least he said one thing... That is... true... "Promise me......" Lotus: you will protect Coral. Epsilon's thought: Maybe I just want to think it's true... Levinas: Lotus is in my heart as well... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 09 Levinas[in mind]: If It was someone other than Lotus that appeared that night... Levinas[in mind]: To rescue Lucia, could I have murdered someone unrelated. Levinas[in mind remembering Lotus]: "You..." Levinas[in mind]: The words of that moment... Was the first time someone spoken to me like that... Levinas[in mind]: And yet I... Levinas[in mind]: killed him... Levinas[in mind]: I killed him? I raised the knife, but I can't remember anything after that... Levinas[in mind]: If I try to remember, the feeling of uneasiness overwhelms me. Levinas[in mind remembering Epsilon]: I think that Lotus... Levinas[in mind remembering Epsilon]: Could still be alive... Levinas[in mind]: Still alive? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 10 Levinas[in mind]: That can't be... Levinas[in mind]: It's been long... even if he wasn't killed by me, being a Lucavifate he couldn't have lived long. Camu: hehe Camu: Leaving an impression on people's hearts was his specialty. Camu: Even if hes's dead, he still lives in the hearts of others. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 11 Camu: Maybe Lotus' soul has not returned to the sand... Camu: And is still wandering in this world... When the life of a Sand Dust ends... The body, mind, and soul turns to dust and disappears... But... ...What would happened to Naoto's soul? I have to erase all everyone's memory of him... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 12 Levinas: Hey Camu, try not to use stange spells. Second panel Camu: AH! Camu: KYA! Levinas: Hey don't move. Levinas: Leave Naoto for later, right now let's search lucia! Levinas: Since she's the one who summoned Naoto! Levinas: Stop shouldering all the burden alone! We are your friends. Camu: T-- That's... Camu[in mind]: Like the time with Lotus... CAmu[in mind]: I can't seem to forget it... Camu: I know even if you don't to say it... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 13 Sardis: The new magic stone isn't working too. Sardis: How can it be...? Sardis: Do something... Sardis: The main body is running out of power. Sardis: There's nothing more I can do. Dura: I give up. Sladyis: Me too. Sardis: Master Slaydiiis! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 14 Sardis: Slaydis, please do something with your power! Slaydis: Hahaha! Slaydis: You're pretty cute like that! Sardis: Don't say that! I'll die if this goes on! Dura: That's it, Slaydis! Dura: We have to find the trans-dimensional dragon, to counteract this! Slaydis: How long do you think this dimensional problem of upper Orgos will last? Slaydis: And we, Elphis, are supposed to be immortal, so why are there only three of us left?! Dura: Also we are turning to stone faster. Dura: If this goes on, we will die, Understand? Slaydis: And what's so bad about death? Slaydis: Isn't it weirder to have immortal life? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 15 Sardis: I don't want to die! Dura: Right! Dura: How can we die like this! Sardis: Ughh! [Dura's boot]: PLAM Dura: Ah... [Sound effect]: CRACK Sladyis: Looks like that stomp... did him in... Dura: Noo... Dura: I don't want to turn to stone. Slaydis: You should go to the lower levl. Slaydis: At the moment, the curse only affect the upper level. Slaydis: There are people living well below. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 16 Dura: Lower level?! Dura: You're telling me to go to the lowermost region of Orgos?! Stop joking around!! Dura: If I had to live with those ants of Sand Dust, Dura: I'd rather die!! Slaydis: hahaha... Slaydis: The knowledge of life for us, the Elphis... Slaydis: are only at this level... Dura: What are you trying to say, Slaydis? Slaydis: Dura, we, Elphis... Slaydis: do not die, but we also do not live. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 17 Slaydis: Even though, both Sardis and you hate the Sand Dust, Slaydis: But I see them differently! Slaydis: They "live" despite their short lives... Dura: Then... Dura: Why don't you go to there... Dura: Yourself? Slaydis: ... Our life will end soon. Slaydis: The Sand Dust have a saying... Dura's Thought: If I could... Dura's Thought: I would like you see how the Sand Dust, the girl with Lucavifate blood, Lucia, dies... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 18 Slaydis: "I love you," Dura... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 19 and 20 Naoto: uhh... Naoto[in mind]: What happened to me? And Lucia? Where is this place? Dragon[Mee]: Yo [music symbol] ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 21 Naoto: You again! Mee! Naoto: Tell me something first, is this a real world or a fantasy? Mee: Neither. Mee: We are in a space between two dimensions. Naoto[in mind]: I don't understand... Naoto: What do you want? Naoto: And stop using Chisato's face! Mee: Nothing. Mee: I'm just a bit interested in you. Mee: Onl you would go against Trans-dimenional dragon's prediction. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 22 Dragon: What fortune the limit of your imagination is an "intensive hemorrhage." Dragon: Very good... Dragon: That you can see Lucia, although only your conciousness. Naoto: What... Naoto: What are you saying? I... Naoto[in mind]: My arms... Legs... Naoto[in mind]: The wounds have disappeared... Naoto[in mind]: What happend? Naoto: I... Naoto: even my clothes have changed. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 23 Mee: It's simple, haven't you noticed you've died. Naoto[in mind]: .........................Died? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 24 Naoto: No... It can't be... Naoto: I... died? Naoto[in mind]: I have died...?! Mee: Even thought you have that power, Mee: You were killed by Camu. Naoto: Then... Naoto: Then! Naoto: If I'm really dead! Naoto: Take me back to the real world!! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 25 Naoto: You said if I died in Orgos, I could go back, didn't you?! Naoto: Why haven't woken up yet! I'm still dreaming... [Push sound]: FRUSH Mee: Actually... Mee: You can go back to your world without any problem. Mee: But your soul is strongly tied to Orgos. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 26 Naoto: Then...?! Naoto: That means I can go back to Orgos?! Mee: So what? Mee: Your body doesn't exists. Mee: Your hands, feet, and organs are destroyed. Mee: Even thought you have unconciously replaced those to continue to fight... Mee: When your conciousness disappear, so will your body. Mee: It isn't possible for you to return to your body, it's only your conciousness that is left. Mee: If you go back to Orgos like this, you will only feel alone. Mee: No one will notice your presence, and you will be forgotten. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 27 Mee: Or... you won't be satisfied until you see Lucia die? Naoto: That's it... Naoto: I only have to materialize. Naoto: If I could materialize my arms and my feet... Naoto: Then I can make my entire body... Naoto[in mind]: That's it! I still want to see Lucia! Naoto[in mind]: I have to feel it... the link between Lucia and I... If it is this world... If it is this world where anything can happen, Then I only have to imagine it...!! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 28 Mee: It is impossible. Naoto: Why? Mee: It isn't that it can be done... Mee: But by yourself it is impossible. Mee: Do you understand? Naoto: Can I ask you something... one more time? Naoto: Always I had that doubt... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 29 and 30 Naoto: This place... including you, the world of Orgos... Naoto: Is it just my dream... or Is it real? Naoto: what is the truth? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 31 Mee: Even I don't know! [music symbol] Naoto: What can I... Naoto: do? Mee: Come on... Mee: Let's search for the answer... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 32 Mee: In your incomplete past. Mee: Lend me your back! [music symbol] Naoto: Ah? Naoto: UWAH! [Falling] -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 33 and 34 Naoto[in mind]: Light! Naoto[in mind]: this light... just like when Lucia summoned me...! NAoto[in mind]: I'm falling...!!! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- page 35 Lotus: So, you are the incarnation of the trans-dimensional dragon... Lotus: The god that rules over the time of this world... -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [End Chapter 17] I did a complete revision of the text with the adv name of the characters and terms, they use time and dimension interchangably Mee is the trans-dimensional dragon Dura is the Elphis female Slaydis is the the Elphis male Sardis is the Elphis nobody Lucavifate is the race of Lucia's ppl i also change the wording to make it more fluent. |
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