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The Call of Night; Editted version of Caden's and Trevour's romance story
Topic Started: Feb 18 2008, 01:20 AM (510 Views)
Lissa
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Starting on Monday, February 18th, 2008: I will be sending y'all a copy of my romance vampire novel. I got goosebumps just telling y'all about it. Feel free to read it, and dont be afraid to tell me your oppinions! =)

Lissa
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YAY i cant wait... hey this is Caden right?
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Lissa
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yeap...this is caden! brittany for campbell rite? used to live down the street from me?
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Lissa
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Here goes my story so far...
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Lissa
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Vexing...

Thats definitely my word to describe my feelings for my last year of junior high. I have been waiting to get this far for too long, but now I can wait to get it over with.

Its a week from our graduation and, we get to go for a field trip to the high school of our choice. I have choosen Godrick High. Its just up the street from my apartment ( yes, i have my own apartment).

I am 14, and in my town, I am the hotest, smartest, and the best driver of all the people my age. From 18 to 12, I am the best. I drive a blood red convertible Porsche ( okay, my parents are like billionaires, thats why i have the best shit out of everyones).

"Arden, hello! Can you come back to Earth's atmosphere."

" God, Kerrie. Do you have to ruin my dreams. You know I have to dream about a better place than this one." I said raising my voice. Kerrie has a thing for interrupting me, in the happiest of day dreams about myself and how totally awesome I am.

"Well, if you were paying attention you would know that we're at Godrick, and everyone has been trying to get your attention so we can get off the bus." She said totally buggin' because she hates when I zone her out when she talks so much.
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Lissa
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Geez, Kerrie does talk to much. Any way back to talking about me! I am not a shallow person, i just like myself. So basically you could call me narcassistic, but yeah, i am totally in love with myself. Anywhoser, I am not a preppy girl, i eat them for breakfast; i am a emo/gothic girl who just thinks well of herself.

As we walked into Godrick High, I had definitely expected to see guys hitting on me and vice versa, but I did not expect to see him.

There, standing in the office was this boy i ahd never seen before. He was beyond gorgeous, like a model made of porcelin. I had never seen him before, but boy had i seen him now. I was definitely inhumanely beautiful. It was physically impossible to be so beautiful.

He was standing looking as if nothing was going on. I had expected him to be in class, but he was there. instead. When i walked into the room, he looked up as if in response to his name being called. I dont know what his deal was but suddenly his body tensed and his looked extremely angry. While he stared at me all tense I noticed something strange about his eyes, they were an awful burgundy red with a mix of black and gray. It scared the crap out of me, but not literally.

He licked his lips, but i turned to see if anyone else had noticed him, and when i turned back around he was gone. Is it possible to disappear so quickly?
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Lissa
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I tried to pay attention the rest of the time we were at Godrick. But it seemed like the only thing that was important to me was him. I had never seen him before and I didnt know his name. Completely discouraged, I was sad because no one even seemed to notice him as well as i did. And most of all...

Why did he lick his lips when I entered the room?
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Lissa
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The rest of the week went by like it usually does. And the unknown guy never entered my mind. Then the next thing i know, its graduation day. I picked a black strapless, backless cocktail dress. It looked really good on me, and when i say good, i mean i looked sexy!

I went up to the principle and took my diploma thing,(actually it was just our end of the year report cards, but they made them look like diplomas). And it was over. My parents were to busy with work so they didnt come as usual. So i went to this after party and danced and flirted with some of the hottest guys at the middle school. I dont smoke, and I dont drink so i had soda the entire time. I kissed a few guys...ok honestly i kissed all the guys that were my age there, and i would call it more like making out. I had to see my options if i didnt get so lucky as to go out with a high school guy.And they werent that bad.

The next three months went by like days. And when summer ended, I hadnt thought about that mysterious guy.

I started high school not expecting anything big. But then it hit me, this sudden urge to find out who this guy was. No one i met even knew who i was talking about. So i found some hot guys that me and my friends could hang out with, and for the time being thats what we did.
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Lissa
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So years went by, and the next thing you know I am a junior in high school. Okay thats not that many years but still. I started taking advanced classes for seniors, so I was at like a college level in school. Which was pretty hard, but i needed the challenge.

I was heading to my advanced science class. That was probably my easiest class, even though it was college level. I was walking to my lab table, when I saw him.

He was sitting at my table. Knowing how stupid I looked i had started hyperventilate, and hurried to sit down even though it only made it harder to breathe slowly.

I was sitting there minding my own business, when he started rubbing my arm. I thought it was just my imagination acting up( and let me tell ya'- it does that alot).

I looked over and and there he was totally trying to flirt with me. I didnt know what to do, so like a moron I just looked at him. And you would never know what happened next!
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Lissa
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He grabbed my wrist and held his fingers to it. God his fingers were cold. Like ice! Okay so its not the most romantic of all my life but it seemed very sexy. In a weird way. Then he brought my hand and placed it on his face. I sat there afriad and not willing to move a muscle. Then he opened his eyes and looked into mine. I dont know if he was looking for something, but if he was he found it. Because he started laughing. He dropped my hand and introduced himself.

" I'm Trevour. And you are?" he said with a smile on his face and in his voice.
" I'm-uh-Arden. Its nice to meet you toby." I said like a moron almost not remembering what my own name was. He was truely beautiful. Like Johnny Depp and Orlando Bloom put together. It was amazing.

"Are you okay?" he asked suddenly, breaking my comparison of him to movie stars. There was definitely worry on his face.

"Yeah, just thinking." i said trying not to portray that i was totally thinking about him.

To late, he had already noticed before i tried to deny it. He started laughing.
" Who'd you compare me to?" Trevour asked in the middle of his chuckling, which may i add was adorable.

"What are you talking about?" i tried to sound serious, but he caught my quilt.

"Oh never mind," he said like he just lost some big battle, and he is very depressed.

Even sad his face was beautiful, like it was carved from ice. So like an idiot i said, "Johnny Depp mixed with Orlando Bloom." But this time he didnt laugh. He appeared as if he was in deep thought, so i interrupted him this time. " what are you thinking about. Was it bad to compare you to them."

" Oh no," he said surprised. "I was just thinking about how your comparison of me is different then everyone elses."

" Is that bad?"

"Nope, everyone else cant come up with people to compare me to. So i was surprised when you came up with someone."

"Oh. but how did you know I was comparing you to someone else?"

Then just my luck class started, and our conversation was no more.
Edited by Lissa, Mar 1 2008, 03:31 PM.
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