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| Kaez Arakin; Human / vampire | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: February 15, 2011, 11:07 pm (275 Views) | |
| Kaez | February 15, 2011, 11:07 pm Post #1 |
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Victory Lies in Preparation
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Given Name: Kaez Full Charcter Name: Kaez Aundin Alias/Nickname: Kaez Arakin (Arakin is a title given to him) Physical Sex: Male Sexual Orientation/Gender Identity: Straight. Race/Ethnicity: Kaez was born an Arakin(Human) but bitten by a Nefaru, a vampuric race on his home planet, causing him to turn into one himself. Skin Tone: Pale gray. Height: 5'6 (1.65 m ish) Weight: 65kg Physical Body Type: Slender but masculine. Clothing Style: He rarely travels into populated area's and therefore, seeing no need for a shirt, never wares one. He always has a pair of long, torn jeans on. Eye shape/Colour: His eyes are purely black. Hair Style: Long black hair that is usually left untied. Tattoo's/Scars, or other Piercings: Left ear pierced and along his body is four huge scars, seemingly of a large beast that had attacked him. Philosophies Philosophy of Life: Cherish it because it can be taken from you in an instant. Philosophy of Death: Everything has it's time. Abilities/ Skill and Weapons Abilities: Kaez is a powerful magician, he has a powerful control over electrical currents, allowing him to produce lightning at will and has basic control over other elements, though not very powerful. He also has increased speed and strength from his Nefaru side. Skills: Drinking blood... Thats a skill right? :P. Weapons: Kaez possesses a long, slender, completely black blade, named Etamon after his twin brother, that was given to him as a gift by a high Chati Shaman. Other Informations Interests: He loves finding new information, studying things he doesn't understand is his passion. Hobbies: Messing around with his magic, drinking blood and swordplay. Other Information: Sorry this may be incredibly long... But I should put race info here xD Home world: Description: Nijenta is a small world full of lush green tropical forests and large mountains, small semi-modern cities poping up here and there. Races: Nijenta is a planet largly dominated by a human like species called Arakins. The Arakins, although are by far the most common species, are not the only sentient beings to walk Nijenta's surface. There are three other species, the Nefaru, a vampuric form of the Arakins, the Memorini, a race of human like creatures that have blue skin, no noses and breathe through slits on their necks and lastly the Chati, a race of nomadic demonic like figures that stand on two legs. Arakin: The Arakin species are a species of humans who were taken from their home world by the Chati to be used as slaves. Among the slaves taken from earth, there was a very powerful magician named Elroi Arakin. Elroi, after a few years of planing and teaching a small group of men magic in secret, led his magicians into an allout battle for freedom against the Chati. The Chati, although hugely powerful with their magic, were unprepared for the might and swiftness of Elroi's mages and were overthrown. During one of the last battles, Elroi's second in command slew Elroi while he was fighting off a rather powerful Chati. After the battle and Elroi's body had been found, the humans, not being able to return to their homeworld, pronounced Elroi's second in command their leader and named themselves the Arankin in his honor. This was the begining of a long tradition of sucession to the Arakin throne, each leader slain through some form of trickery or guile. This lifestyle quickly caused the the Arakin's magical abilities to deminish as all the powerful mages were picked off first. The Arakin race, to this day, are only a shadow of what they once were and are still under the rule of corrupt magicians who care little for their non-magical kinsmen and spend their days plotting for power. Chati: The Chati are a race of demonic people who have dark red skin, are very muscley and are exreamly powerful in magic.live and are native to the planet of Nijenta. They were once the most powerful race on the planet but at the height of their power they started taking slaves from various planets after having developed abilities to allow them to travel between planets easily. They started with a planet named Elnari, home to the blue skined people named Memorini. The Memorini were a peaceful and very advanced race who, taken by supprise had no defences to hold the Chati off. The Chati quickly overwhelmed the Memorini, destroying most of their culture and civilisation, enslaving most of their race and killing off the rest. After the battle the planet of Elnari, devoid of sentient creatures, the vast cities crumbled into dust and the planet turned back into its prehistoric jungle state. Nefaru: The Nefaru are a sub species of Arakin created by a Chati during the war. The Chati's goal was to turn the Arakin's on eachother, making the Nefaru's only source of neutriance the Arakin's blood. The Nefaru, like vampires have extra speed and strength and heightened senses but, as designed by the Chati, not wanting the Nefaru to be an even bigger problem than the Arakin's, are unable to reproduce and will die after ten to twenty years. Memorini: The Memorini are a race of super intelligent beings who were taken by the Chati before the Arakins. The Memorini are blue humanoids who have 'gills' on each side of their neck just below their jaws as apposed to noses. The Memorini, when the Chati came for them on their home planet, were taken completely by surprise, although they had many advanced technologies, they never had any need for weapons or defensive structures, being the peaceful race that they were. They were quickly overrun by the Chati and taken back to the Chati's home planet, leaving their magnificent cities and beautiful structures to be reclaimed by the wild forests of their planet. The Chati realised what a magnificent being they had caught and quickly set them to work, researching and building for the Chati. Although the Chati's advancement was great after enslaving the Memorini, the Memorini always held back, never giving them the extent of their knowledge, stalling their building and research as much as possible. Story Background Story: Kaez was born to a family off a Arakins 534 years after the time of Elroi. By the age of 5 Kaez had very powerful magical abilities and a well developed mind. The magicians quickly found him and took him from his home by force, subjected him to a 7 year apprentiship which was aimed to hone his magical abilities and make him forget about his family. The apprentiship only succeeded partially. Kaez became a very powerful Magican but never forgot about his family. On the day of his graduation ceremony, he slew his master and several other powerful mages in one on one combat, afterwards he moved all the bodies into one room and lit a fire in the middle of the room before leaving by the back door. The authorities assumed that the fire was started as a resault of the men fighting and Kaez was assumed dead, bruied somewhere beneath the rubble. Kaez then began spreading rumors and sparking up rebellions against the magicians all over the world as he searched for his family. The magicians after lots of frustrating attempts to figure out who was behind the rebellions caught up with Kaez. They sent many squads of magicians after him, finally managing to capture him after many attempts. The magicians interrogated and tourchered him for information on the rebellion but he never said a word. After two months of imprisionment the magicians brang his family before his eyes, exicuting them one by one before him, trying to get him to talk. They killed one of his family members each day he said nothing. On the third day, after having watched his mother and farther die, they brang out both his brother and sister, telling him it was his last chance to talk. Kaez finally lost it, after bottling up as much energy as he could for the past two months he let it all out in one giant explosion, destroying the building and killing all occupants, including his brother and sister. Kaez, wearily stumbled out of the town and wandered the forest for several years in a grief stricken stupor. He remembers little from this time. After many long years of this wandering the resistance had been destroyed and the magicians now ruled with an iron fist, any hint of defiance was destroyed instantly along with any and everyone who had associated with the one accused of plotting against them. Life as a non magician became almost unbearable but the people wished to live and therefore followed the magicians orders unquestioningly. Kaez, after crossing paths with a lone Nefaru was bitten. The young Nefaru woman, named Sharan, had just fed two days perviously (that is very recent for the current way the Nefaru live as they take a huge risk every time they enter a Arakin city to look for food), luckily for Kaez and was able stop herself from draining Kaez completely. Instead she pounced on him, pinning Kaez to the floor and bit his beck hard, the virus instantly transferring to him, the transformation began almost instantly. Sharan held him down, smiling to herself as Kaez thrashed on the ground in pain, screaming out loud. This is where his new life began and his old one ended, it was the first moment that he could later remember since he had killed his family. Once the transformation was complete, a long and tediously painful process, Sharan was sill sitting ontop of him, holding him to the ground, a small smile on her lips and in her soft almost feline voice said "Welcome to your new life.". From then on, Kaez and Sharan were inseparable, they lived together, hunted together and shared the same bed. One one particular hunting trip, things went wrong, incredibly wrong. The man they were stalking turned out to be a high level magician. When the two Nefaru pounced him, he turned, having been sensing their presance for a while and spoke a few words in his soft voice. A huge flame in the shape of a surpent rose from his hand, crashing dead on into Sharan. She was burned to death almost instantly. Kaez barely escaped with his life, the image of the magic killing Sharan bringing back the repressed memories from before he was a Nefaru. Kaez began his wandering again, this time plotting, not brooding. He wanted revenge, wanted to destroy the magician and everything about him and at the same time the whole magician order for what they had done to his family, to him, to all the Arakins. After a few weeks of his wandering, he found a Chati tribe. The Chati had changed. They were still the demonic figures from legends but their whole outlook on life had been dramatically altered by the war over 500 years ago. They now avoided all Arakin society like the plague and roamed the earth, trying to set right what they had done to the Nefaru. Kaez stalked them, knowing that they had blood even though it wasn't the blood he desired. Once the Chati noticed Kaez they took action quickly, one of the high shamans locking him in place with his magic, much much more powerful than anything the Arakin magicians could do. Kaez couldn't move, he was stuck, arms and legs pinned to his side as he floated slightly off the ground. Another shaman walked over to him, pressing his hand to Kaez's brow and muttering a soft incantation. Kaez felt as if a tonne of bricks had been lifted off his shoulders, he was able to think straight, no longer was his judgement clouded by his undeniable thirst. The thirst was still there, but much weaker, much more manageable and the instinct to rip, shred and kill was gone. He was lowered back to the ground and the pressure holding him was released. He bowed deeply to the Chati, telling them how he was forever in their debt. There began Kaez's long journey with the Chati, he told them of all that was going on in the Arakin society, all the monstrosities they were committing. The Chati, knowing that they could help were almost isntantly swayed onto Kaez's side, vowing that they would help however possible. Kaez stayed with them for a few weeks, recuperating his strength and adjusting to this new way of life, food being able to sustain him as it never could since the transformation, as more and more Chati seemed to swarm into the camp each day, soon there were a thousand of them or more, ready and willing to fight. Kaez left, the Chati promising that they would be ready to fight when the time came. As Kaez set about, rallying support in the Arakin cities again he slowly began altering his appearance, little things at first, his skin becoming more pale, gaining an ashen quality, his eyes darkening untill they were eventually completely black, two small nobs of bone growing ontop of his head and two nobs of bone on his back growing slowly, until he had the image he wanted, one of a demon, a winged, pale, horned demon, an image to spark fear into the magicians. A few days after the changes were fully completed, they were ready. The Arakin resistance gathered and the Chati swarmed in, swelling their ranks and the marched, destroying all traces of magicians as they went. From that day forward the resistance and the Chati all reffered to him as Kaez Arakin in remembrance of the war against the Chati. The war was bloody, millions died and millions more were put out of home. With the war finally over and the bloodshed coming to a close, the resistance appointed people to rule, installing a democratic governing system. Once everything was done and the magicians were over throne, Kaez left, exiling himself from society, he had his revenge, the people were free, there was nothing left for him to do. He wandered, now aged 32, he visited the Memorini, the Chati but never went back to the Arakin settlements. Eventually after many more years of roaming with a Chati tribe and learning their magic he left one day, using the Chati process of rift control created one, setting out into a new world, a smile crept over his lips as he thought of that, the first smile since the death of Sharan. |
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| shadow | February 15, 2011, 11:24 pm Post #2 |
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Approved! (\Shadow/) |
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| Ice | February 16, 2011, 1:42 pm Post #3 |
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Just wanted to say, I'm very impressed by how detailed your character's background story is. I haven't seen one that good well...on this site, it's rare. ^^ ~Darkwater~ |
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| Kaez | February 17, 2011, 11:40 pm Post #4 |
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lol thank you. I got bored one night and wrote half of it... I've had it lieing around half complete for a while now and only decided to finish it to join this
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| Ice | February 18, 2011, 9:27 am Post #5 |
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Haha awesomeness xD |
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