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| Nohan | Nov 2 2009, 03:37 AM Post #1 |
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Contact Information: [Character Information] Name: Hyabuta, Kyori Age: 11 Gender: Male Height: 4'7 Weight: 85 lb Eyes: Deep Green Hair: Dark Brown Appearance: Kyori has long, straight hair that goes down to his shoulders. Flawless and without curls. His bangs however, tend to stick out, arcing forward rather than laying flat and straight, giving him a somewhat unique look. His complexion is medium, not pale or dark. He is white and has average skin, almost pinkish as is normal. His build is average. He is not skinny or fat or muscular. His body fat is almost completely proportionate to his muscle. His usual attire is a heavy black shirt, made with an ultra thick cotton fibre alloy. He wears a black vest shoulderless vest over it and the left inside pocket is a large, heavy pocket that he carries his ninja accesories in, instead of having a pouch strapped to his leg. This pocket is about the same size as an average ninja tool pouch. He wears heavy black pants made of the same cotton alloy as his shirt, and chooses to wear full form shoes that cover his entire feet instead of the normal ninja shoes, although these do not impede his ability whatsoever. Personality: Kyori has different world views than most people. Tending to be rather chaotic in his actions and lacking a plan. He rushes in straight forward but despite his impulsiveness, one of his specialties is spontaneously coming up with strategies on the battlefield.. These aspects make him a unique person on the battlefield and off the battlefield. And although these aspects remain.. He also has an intelligent and cunning side, preferring to plan and gauge people's reactions rather than reveal himself outright when the situation calls for it. Although most of the time his actions are chaotic, he is pretty laid back and reserved, tending to be chilled out rather than high energy and annoying. History: Kyori is just an average kid, raised by his parents in Konoha. He has dreams of becoming an accomplished shinobi and being defined by his own trademark style, wielding two katana. He has gone through the academy and just recently graduated as a genin, scoring average marks in the academy in genjutsu and ninjutsu, but excelling in taijutsu with kunai and throwing weapons, being surprisingly accurate and deadly. Now that he has become a genin, only time will tell what the future has stored with him, and if he will accomplish his dreams of being a renowned ninja in his own right. [Battle Information] Class: Genin Village: Konoha Elemental Affinity:Fire (Dominant), Wind (Secondary) Main Fighting Type: His preferred style is fighting with melee weapons. He dreams of one day wielding two katana in battle. He will also employ the use of long range weapons. These two main features define his fighting style. Main weapon(s): Kunai, Shuriken, Needles. Traits: Elemental Affinity: Fire, Fast As Lightning Strength: Physical) He wears the heavy shirt and vest mainly because he is extremely sensitive to the cold. Weathers considered hot to others would be cool to him. This can work to his advantage though because of his high resistance to heat. Mental) Not easily phased by any one. Easy to shake things off like criticism, insults. Sometimes he is able to trick and deceive people and hide his true motives. Hard to predict. Despite his chaotic nature he is pretty reserved and laid back most of the time, not being constantly high energy and annoying so he isn't bad with people. Weaknesses: Physical) Extremely weak to cold and cold water jutsu. Mental) Situations tend to blow up in his face a lot because of his predominantly chaotic and impulsive nature. Techniques: (E-Rank) Kawarimi no Jutsu, Bunshin no Jutsu, Henge no Jutsu, Kakuremino no Jutsu. (D-Rank) Kai, Kage Shuriken no Jutsu, Shunshin no Jutsu, Bakuyaku Sagefuda no Jutsu. Advanced Bloodline: Advance Bloodline Techniques: Stats: HP: 130 Chakra: 100 Stamina: 130 Strength: 3 Endurance: 3 Speed: 3 Reflex: 4 Control: 1 Accuracy: 4 Sample RP:Kyori had woken up today, more excited than usual. For this was the day that he would graduate into becoming a Genin. His last day of the academy. He slid out of bed, throwing the covers off onto the floor as he quickly got dressed, went to the bathroom and jumped down the stairs to run out the door. "Kyori! Don't forget to eat.", his mom softly calls as she orders him to eat breakfast. "Thanks mom. I almost forgot..", he says as he sits down to eat a quick breakfast of eggs and toast. "Have a good day, Kyori.", his mom says as he jumps from the table and runs out the door, not even bothering to say goodbye. "Oh that Kyori.", his mom thinks to herself as she watches him leave the house. "He forgot to close the door..", she says as she walks towards the door and closes it, and then continues on with her daily activities. After running a short distance, Kyori decides it would be best to conserve his energy and walk the rest of the way. He indulges in the soft breeze, talking long breaths and generally taking it easy, conserving energy before his long awaited genin test. Many kids he knows pass him, and he sees them but doesn't bother to wave or say hello, moreso concentrated on the task before him. Finally, after taking many steps forward, he reaches the academy door. Pushing forward was his next step into life, and his next step of becoming a renowned ninja in his own right, the test to become a genin. |
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| Lord Rakuran | Nov 3 2009, 01:57 AM Post #2 |
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Raise age to 14. Use proper paragraphing. Lengthen history by about 4-5 paragraphs. Need more detail on childhood and academy days. You get 12 points worth of stats to spread. Stats cost 2 points per stat at the 2-5 level, so essentially you get 6 stats to spread around. Actually -post- your techniques and traits on the application in their proper places. Check other ninja profiles if your not sure how it should look. Put some more work into your personality. Strengths and weaknesses: Good ideas. Keep in mind that this will be RP only, it won't actually affect damage you take. |
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