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Shin, Katsuro; ..again
Topic Started: Sep 25 2009, 12:53 AM (287 Views)
Lord Rakuran Oct 23 2009, 04:04 PM Post #16
Hokage

 Low stamina would make it easy to knock it out with stamina damage. Thats why removing a pool completely costs a fair chunk, as your making it immune to a form of damage.

To help with the costs, you might want to split the summoning costs 50/50 between HP and Chakra. That should make it more manageable.
 
Lord Rakuran Oct 23 2009, 08:22 PM Post #17
Hokage

 Howling Scream
The massive force of negative energy born from horrific circumstances during life is released from the ghost’s mouth through the medium of an ear-piercing scream. A powerful force travels at the speed of sound from the spirit’s mouth, wiping out anything in its wake. There are few who can withstand the powerful scream without being thrown miles. Those who can dodge the technique still have difficulty avoiding the painful pitch of the scream, most noticeable from the target’s ears which begin to trickle blood. The force, being entirely ethereal in nature, is capable of forcing back both chakra-based and physical attacks, acting as a minor defence as well as a powerful offence.
| Chakra – 100 | Damage – 250(Blast) 40(Scream) | Scream cancels out all attacks under 80 damage that it comes into contact with | S-rank | 40 points |

Specially hard to dodge techniques are at a ratio lower, so either raise the chakra cost to 200 to account for both the A ranked ratio and the cancellation effect.

Shift
A somewhat unintentional technique, the ‘Shift’ move is more of side-effect of the difficulty for a spirit to maintain a corporeal form. Due the thin line that holds them to this earthly plane, some spirits ‘shift’ out of a physical existence, becoming invulnerable when concerning physical abilities. This technique is not intentional and will occur mostly at random.
| Chakra – 20 | User is invulnerable against physical moves for a single post | Shift will occur once every (HP/100) posts (rounded up)| B-rank | 16 points |

Complete invulnarability through a technique in this manor is prohibited. You'll have to pay a incremental cost. At B rank, the mechanics would be:

|Chakra - 3/4 damage of each physical attack negated| |Each physical attack negated does no damage| |This automatically activates once every (HP/100) posts (rounded up| |B-Rank| |18 points |

B rank techs are 18 points.

Dark Embrace
A highly powerful and entirely horrifying technique. The user enters a trance-like state, the spiritual equivalent of a long line of hand symbols. In this state they cannot move or attack. The summoner can interrupt the technique abruptly but by no means quickly. During this time the area around the user (approximately half a mile in diameter) begins to slowly darken. The changes are subtle and almost unnoticeable, like day gradually turning to night. Of course, the area around the user is already dark, so this is less of light to dark as dark to pitch black. The target’s ability to see quickly deteriorates and eventually they are enveloped in darkness. The darkness then quickly takes form around the target and forms an almost inescapable room. Leaving little time for the target to respond, the user awakens and begins the onslaught. Hands reach out from the darkness and begin to grasp the target, crushing their muscles and bones. The number of hands grows exponentially and the user is unable to move. Anyone who can survive the technique will escape badly injured, horribly bruised and no doubt significantly traumatised. This technique can only be avoided by attacking the user before the darkness takes hold, or escaping the wide area around them.
| Chakra – 200 | Damage – 400 | Preceded by a two post preparation in which the user cannot move, defend or attack |S-rank | 40 points |"

Half mile diameter is beyond unreasonable. a 100m area, tops.
 
TheMessenger Oct 29 2009, 03:07 AM Post #18
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 I shouldn't have tried using a measure of distance I had no grasp of : P. I think everything should be right now. I removed stamina, cos it makes no sense for a ghosty, and lowered her health and chakra. I lowered her stats a little too.

I made the changes to the techniques, though I wasn't too sure what you meant with the shift, see if it's what you wanted:


Summoning Technique: Innocence [Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Muzai]
A very early level of Shin ninja training...........Muzai is a dangerous summon for both the enemy and the summoner.
| Chakra – 600 + 25 per post | HP cost – 400 | Muzai has 350 HP | Accuracy of all those in large area around summon is decreased by 5 | Requires – The Connection [Enko] | S-rank | 40 points.

Muzai Stats
HP: 200
Chakra: 300
No Stamina: (Cost of 250)


Strength: 1
Speed: 10
Reflex: 10
Control: 15
Endurance: 10
Accuracy: 5

Howling Scream
The massive force of negative energy born from horrific circumstances during life is released from the ghost’s mouth through the medium of an ear-piercing scream. A powerful force travels at the speed of sound from the spirit’s mouth, wiping out anything in its wake. There are few who can withstand the powerful scream without being thrown miles. Those who can dodge the technique still have difficulty avoiding the painful pitch of the scream, most noticeable from the target’s ears which begin to trickle blood. The force, being entirely ethereal in nature, is capable of forcing back both chakra-based and physical attacks, acting as a minor defence as well as a powerful offence.
| Chakra – 100 | Damage – 150(Blast) 40(Scream) | Scream cancels out all attacks under 80 damage that it comes into contact with | S-rank | 40 points |

Shift
A somewhat unintentional technique, the ‘Shift’ move is more of side-effect of the difficulty for a spirit to maintain a corporeal form. Due the thin line that holds them to this earthly plane, some spirits ‘shift’ out of a physical existence, becoming invulnerable when concerning physical abilities. This technique is not intentional and will occur mostly at random.
| Chakra – 20 | ¾ damage of any physical attacks directed at user is negated | Shift will occur once every (HP/100) posts (rounded up)| B-rank | 18 points |

Dark Embrace
A highly powerful and entirely horrifying technique. The user enters a trance-like state, the spiritual equivalent of a long line of hand symbols. In this state they cannot move or attack. The summoner can interrupt the technique abruptly but by no means quickly. During this time the area around the user (approximately 100m in diameter) begins to slowly darken. The changes are subtle and almost unnoticeable, like day gradually turning to night. Of course, the area around the user is already dark, so this is less of light to dark as dark to pitch black. The target’s ability to see quickly deteriorates and eventually they are enveloped in darkness. The darkness then quickly takes form around the target and forms an almost inescapable room. Leaving little time for the target to respond, the user awakens and begins the onslaught. Hands reach out from the darkness and begin to grasp the target, crushing their muscles and bones. The number of hands grows exponentially and the user is unable to move. Anyone who can survive the technique will escape badly injured, horribly bruised and no doubt significantly traumatised.
| Chakra – 200 | Damage – 400 | Preceded by a two post preparation in which the user cannot move, defend or attack |S-rank | 40 points |
 
Lord Rakuran Nov 3 2009, 01:49 AM Post #19
Hokage

 bump down to 50m, and the damage to 300.

Also, use the mechanics I gave you for the shift. B rank is 3 cost per 4 effect, or -3 chakra for every 4 damage deflected.


Other than that, a lot better.
 
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