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Miyunaji Reinja; The Archer Kazekage
Topic Started: Sep 6 2009, 09:06 PM (680 Views)
Saska
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Contact Information: [email/IM] daiomoru-yukimi@live.ca ; PM

[Character Information]

Name: Miyunaji Reinja
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Height: 5'7"
Weight:145 lbs
Eyes: Olive Green
Hair: Light brown / blonde

Appearance:

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Personality:

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History:

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[Battle Information]

Class: SSS-Rank [Kazekage]
Village: Sunagakure no Sato [Kaze no Kuni]
Elemental Affinity: Fuuton - Wind Release, Katon - Fire Release

Main Fighting Type: Ninjutsu / Weapons. Reinja commonly uses a bow to fight as well as a few other items, such as a kouchiwa fan and a tessen.

Main weapon(s):

Kazekiri - Wind Cutter
Kazekiri is Reinja's most prized weapon. A bow crafted out of the finest wood and spun flax strings, Kazekiri is also engraved with various seals; these seals represent the five elements. However, there are duplicates of the three elements that Reinja is unable to utilize; Suiton, Raiton, and Doton. This serves as an ability that none other have been able to get down to a T; Reinja appears to be able to use all five of the elements, while in reality, she is simply sealing them into the bow itself. | Required 6 Reflex | Damage - 9 + 1/4 [Strength + Accuracy]

Puncture Shot Arrows
These are special arrows designed by the Kazekage herself. Made with a much stronger, pointed tip, these arrows are meant to pierce harder and cause more damage.| Required 2 Reflex | Damage - 3 + [Regular Bow Damage]

Scatter Shot Arrows
Another special type of arrow designed by the Kazekage herself, these arrows are designed with special heads that explode with shrapnel on contact in a 360-degree direction in a three-dimensional area [i.e. a sphere]. This makes the arrow that much more deadly in a larger number of areas. | Arrow Damage - Regular Bow Damage | Shrapnel Damage - 3 + 1/8 [Regular Bow Damage]

Tessen
The tessen is a small iron folding fan with sharp outer spokes which are designed to look like regular, harmless folding fans. The tessen is useful for melee combat (mostly for parrying and quick slices), fending off arrows and darts, as a throwing weapon, and as an aid in swimming, like hand-flippers. | Requirement - 4 Speed | Damage - 6 + (1/2 Reflex)

Kouchiwa
A large rice paper fan designed for a mixture ninjutsu and taijutsu. The user can close the fan and use it as a club. Otherwise they can open the fan up in to use certain wind ninjutsu such as the Fuusajin and Kamaitachi no Jutsu. | Requires 4 Speed | Damage - 6+(½ Strength)

Strengths:

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Weaknesses:

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Techniques:

TRAITS

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NINJUTSU

General Jutsu

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Elemental Sealing / Fuuinjutsu

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Edited by Saska, Sep 12 2009, 02:40 PM.
 
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Katon - Fire Release

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Fuuton - Wind Release [All techniques -10% points cost]

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Advanced Bloodline: Miyunaji Clan - Torigan [Eye of the Eagle]

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Advanced Bloodline Techniques:

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Stats:

HP: 1760
Chakra: 2235
Stamina: 2585 [2235 + (50*7)]

Strength: 20
Endurance: 20
Speed: 23
Reflex: 24
Control: 20
Accuracy: 28


Stored Exp:
- 8 points -- jutsu only -- character creation
Edited by Saska, Sep 12 2009, 07:35 PM.
 
Saska
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Kazekage

All right, she's finished now, or should be. Rip away?
 
Undine
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Appearance, personality, and history are fine. Though I wasn't too sure about the whole first person perspective. Still pretty good. About the Uchiwa fan and tessen. Need to devise up some damage for them. Unless she uses them in non vs player combat. In which case it's no big deal. You also mixed in some exp with points. Need to edit that to say points.

Scatter Shot Arrows- Damage is fine to me. Just need a blast radius for the shrapnel.

Strengths- Fine in my book.

Weaknesses- Eh, hits and misses, but there's enough to balance it out.

Fuuinjutsu- Does it seal on the fly jutsu? If so, would it be an all around 70? Does she lose the ability to use that element of jutsu once she expends the sealed amount?

Torigan- The costs and bonuses seem fair enough. However, you need to add the negative effects per stage activated as suggested in the main portion of the doujutsu description.

Way of the Hunter- I'm not sure what purpose this jutsu[?] serves. Seems more like a description of a style if anything. Probably.. [.-.]

Eviscerate- So disembowelment and severe piecing is up to the RPer [with in reason of course], correct?

Volley- Fine in my book.

Stats- I -think- you may be entitled to more since we've cleared up the correct method of distributing stats. As people were a bit confused. Just want you to look at the example up in the rules and re-look at your stats to see if everything pans out.
 
Saska
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Bah, I'd meant to include those two weapons. They're included now... [it's called kouchiwa in the weapons list, but I do believe it's actually an uchiwa... lol... >>]

Fuuinjutsu - Not quite on the fly, actually. For one, if it's not her elemental usage [Katon or Fuuton] she'd have to have someone of that element with fairly good chakra control aiding her in that. It would take a few posts, but the payment would end up mechanics-wise just being a flat 70 after all's said and done.

If she uses up the sealed amount, yes, she'd have to re-seal it. Unless it's with a jutsu that it's possibly re-usable and she could re-use the element again [possibly like with a Suiton jutsu or something... Those of which she doesn't have.]

Torigan - Well, there's really no way to gauge all of that, so would it be possible to leave it up to roleplaying discretion? I mean, obviously the higher the stage, the more you lose while it's activated, i.e. the SSS-Rank stage you wouldn't be able to hear, feel, smell, or taste anything at all.

Way of the Hunter - Deu, that's exactly what it is. It's a style.

Eviscerate - Correct. Obviously, it'd be tough to disembowel someone with an arrow, so... It's basically just flavour. IC, it'd do a little more piercing than usual, but mechanically it's just more damage. xD

Stats - Actually, after reading... I'd receive LESS stats. The stats are way more expensive now... like... to get to 5 in a single area would cost me... 14 exp. At the moment, it costs me 10. It doesn't seem like much of a difference, but... It's really costly now. Actually wait, it would cost me 12, if we're still going for the first-stat-is-free sort of thing. This is confusing... But I re-did her stats. Now stats're costing... way more. Way WAY more. Genin only get what, 14 points to spend? Well... all they can really do is make every stat 2 if they want even stats. It's limiting people a lot more... aka weakening them... definitely not a good thing...

Look at the comparison, though. Here's my old stats:

Stats:

HP: 1760
Chakra: 2235
Stamina: 2585 [2235 + (50*7)]

Strength: 20
Endurance: 20
Speed: 23
Reflex: 24
Control: 20
Accuracy: 28

Now compare 'um to the new stats. She doesn't look like a Kage to me... Hell... I could swear my Special Jounin had stats that were about the same as that... AND not to mention I now have 13 extra exp that I can't spend just sitting there doing... basically nothing. I was spot-on before... Etc etc. I think it's making things way too expensive to upgrade, which is going to slow down rankups and progression. Before it used to simply be the tier + 1 for ANY stat in that category, not increasing for every single stat. I liked it increasing by each tier before...




Oh, and I realized, I still have a bit more jutsu exp to use... Heh... all E-Ranked general jutsu are free. Missed that.
 
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Okie. Weapons added, nice-nice.

Fuuinjutsu- Would probably need to slap on a 'posts to seal' on the jutsu. For mechanics sake [in battle obviously].

Torigan- [I figured you'd go that route, lol. Well, I suppose it'll be fine, you are pretty fair in RPing. But if you do decide to branch out the Torigan, will need to add the effects mechanically. That's my take on it, I'm not sure what the others would say.

Way of the Hunter- I.. figured.. -facepalm-

Eviscerate- I knooow. I'm on a roll here. :P

Stats- After re-reading it myself and re-going over the figures.. -slaps face- Okay. Fixed again, damnit.
 
Saska
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Fuuin - I thought 5 posts would be a feasable enough time. 'cause technically, it'd be pointless for her to seal Fire or Wind because she can use them, and the other three she needs someone who can use that element. xD But it's there anyway.

Dou - For now it's not going to branch out because the rest of the Miyunaji expired in the wars. If it does end up branched, it'll be hard to get, and I'll be watching like a hawk. xD
 
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Well.. I'm content with these changes. STAMP!
 
Zeig
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Only problem I had is that you could just make a generic version of the sealings, but hey, not my jutsu. So, Stamp.
 
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