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| Topic Started: Jul 13 2008, 04:36 PM (81 Views) | |
| Zenethus | Jul 13 2008, 04:36 PM Post #1 |
Lord of Manipulation and Murders
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Welcome to Part 1! Let me Explain: The Mystery thread is a game for chosen people from the forum (chosen by Chaos), in which they will be written about. I will write a story about it, and someone will be killed each part. Throughout this whole thing ill be taking a poll on who you think the killer is! You may vote at any time, but, it would be best to wait until your sure! You only have one vote. This is the first part. Comments after each part would be appreciated. I am talking on MSN to Chaos2651 as im writing this. He has okayed it, even thouht I don't know half the people, Chaos has given me details in which to make the story more realistic and fun. Just so you know, the killer won't be ME, so I will not add myself to the poll. Warning: If you don't like gruesome, horrible, bloody, text deaths. Don't read. Participants: Zero Chaos2651 Yusuke Manticore Master-Marik Death T-2 Tails Kururugi Chaoswing ChaosDuelistX Commander Wolf Helen Rising_Dragon DarkBlue Amos Xaioyou Andy Yugioh!Girl Part 1: Zero’s eyes shot open as he regained consciousness. Staring up, the sky was obscured by exotic foliage. As he staggered to his feet, he suddenly felt very unsafe in these new surroundings. Quickly picking a direction, he began running, dodging through the thick leaves and eventually bursting out on a beach. As he stumbled across the sand, he suddenly remembered how he arrived on this jungle. There was plane wreckage everywhere, and the other remaining survivors were just as dazed as he was. Hurriedly, he regained his cool. He spotted Amos trapped under some wreckage, in front of one of the engines. He hastily called over Chaos and Death T-2 to help him lift the large piece of metal off the unfortunate Gmod. “Hey, Master-Marik, Help us with this!” Chaos called; Amos was screaming in pain the whole time. MM ran over to assist her fellow admin.“Can someone tell me how we ended up in a freaking ‘Lost’ parody?!” She yelled as he helped the others lift.“What happend to us?!” Andy called over. He was pulling an unconscious Manticore from the plane interior. “WE WERE JUST IN A [Beep] PLANE CRASH!” Amos yelled as he was being pulled out of his predicament. It was a fair point. “Fair point.” said Andy. He obviously reads the narration. The admins finally dragged Amos from under his wreckage wrapper and fell onto the beach, exhausted from his heavy lifting and copyright infringement on 'lost'. Chaos mentally tallied the survivors. The list consisted of: Andy was sitting, patching up Manticore’s knee. DarkBlue, Rising_Dragon and Tails were already foraging for food. Helen was tending to the wounded Amos, his leg was not too dire. Commander Wolf was with Chaoswing by the sea, looking for shallow water fish. MM was rummaging for computer games and Yusuke was rumminging for waffles. Zero was with Death, standing offset, presumably making rescue plans. ChaosDuelistX and Xaioyou were describing how cool the crash looked. Kururugi was...sleeping. And Yugioh!Girl was…was… “IDIOT, DON’T WALK INFRONT OF THE ENGIN--!!” Chaos screamed. But it was too late. The noob was sucked into the spinning metal, her head bursting on impact, with scarlet spray showering the sand on the other side. Her torso clogged the mechanism, and within a split second, it exploded, throwing yet more debris into the air. The rest of the survivors threw themselves to the white sand, covering themselves until the last of the wreckage fell. “Holy GOD!” Zero sputtered. “THAT LOOKED SO AWESOME!” Amos yelled “We must remain calm.” Chaos said, obviously shaken by the preceding event. “We don’t want to lose anyone IMPORTANT!” Night fell. The remaining survivors had built makeshift shelters from the larger panels of remains, and had started a fire from driftwood. People were mostly scattered around, sticking to one or two people per shelter. Chaoswing was leaning against a tree, eating an orange and considering various escape plans. “Maybe some sort of raft?” He asked himself quietly. “No, that wouldn’t work with these waves; it’d have to be more--Hm? Oh, hello.” Chaoswing spoke to the figure that had appeared next to him. “I was just trying to figure out a way off this island. Any ideas?” Chaoswing questioned. The figure held out a knife menacingly. “A knife? Is it a magic knife that can fly us out of here? Or have you complete--*” He was cut short as the knife plunged under his ribs and into his lungs. His mouth was covered so he screamed for help in vain. The figure pulled the knife out, and it gave a satisfying noise as it grated against the bone. The figure moved their hands to Chaoswing’s head and drew the knife to his neck. Chaoswing managed to splutter; “I thought we were frie--” before the knife was pulled across his neck, slicing through his windpipe and severing his vocal chords. The killer dropped him to the ground and quickly cleaned there hands in the sea. Sheathing his knife, the figure checked the coast was clear and made their way back to the makeshift camp. Settling down, the fresh assassin closed their eyes, and began to imagine who was next… Dawn arrived. The survivors awoke to the green foliage, and a warm day for basking in the sun. As Amos was busy trying to signal for help with an orange lifejacket, Chaos and Zero set about creating duties for everyone; collecting water, looking for food (the island had an abundant supply of oranges) and fishing. Yusuke and MM continued exploring the luggage for supplies, waffles, and video games. Manticore was busy munching his way through some cookies he found. Spirits were high, considering the events of yesterday. Chaoswing was missing, presumed swimming. Tails was set the task of hunting out new foodstuffs, and began exploring the cove. He looked around the camp, and finding nothing, followed the white sand around the island where he found the pure beach was tainted by a crimson stain “Chaoswing?!” End of part 1. Part 2 coming ASAP. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- “Is he dead?!” Tails shouted. "Clearly you idiot! His throat is slit, blood is everywhere!" Chaos replied. Tail's bent down listened to Chaoswing's mouth, "He's not breathing, he MUST be dead!" Chaos quickly shouted "Dead people dont usually breath you nitwit!", Amos then walked up "Dude, his throat is slit! AWESOME!". He was underestimating the levity of the situation. The news of Chaoswing’s untimely demise had been broken by Tails, who found his slaughtered corpse just around the beach. Theories and accusations had been flying around about how he’d died. Was there someone else on the island? Were they in purgatory? Was there some sort of monster on the island? Was it some sort of horrible science experiment? The great waffle god perhaps? Wait, no, only Yusuke thought that. No. Those were dumb theories. One of the survivors was a murderer! Tensions were high, but it would be solved, CDX was sure he would solve the problem! Should he tell someone? No. Then he would be next. The killer must be one of his friends. He decided to do some investigation work. "Yay a quest! Just like Runescape!" The next morning, CDX excused himself with an excuse about making a distress signal and moved away from the others. He observed their behavior. Some people had gone on their own around the beach. Not wise, he thought. Then he remembered he was on his own, "Im a hypocrite.." Still, he was going to find out who did this, and make them pay, or kill them back. Yeah, probably kill them back. It's what he'd do in Runescape. “Hey Commander Wolf, want an orange?” Helen asked. “No…I’m fine thank you.” He replied. His tone was laced with distrust. “You think I did this? Me?” “No, it’s just--I thought I knew everyone here. Now someone is going around killing people and I don’t know why--” “Hey! I found a waffle!” Yusuke shouted from the mounds of salvaged luggage. “Bwahahahahahahahah!” “Look again, Yusuke” Replied the Chaos in a mocking tone. Yusuke looked at what he was holding, it was non other than a pancake! “AHHHH MURDERER THE PANCAKE DID IT!” Yusuke yelled as he droped the pancake and pointed at it. "You guys seem pretty calm considering Chaoswing was murdered last night" Death T-2 said. She emerged from the vibrant green bushes, and stepping onto the bright white sand. She had been collecting oranges with Manticore. “Chaoswing was killed?!” Kururugi inquired, shocked. “Uh, yeah? Didn’t you hear?” “Nope; I was sleeping” Kururugi answered. Zero was nearby listening. Slightly amused by Kururugi's awareness, he walked over to DarkBlue, who was sitting cross legged on the beach and drawing. “What’re you up to?” Zero inquired. “Mapping the beach.” Replied the artist. She barely looked up to Zero as she said this. “In case we’re here a long time and I need to hide from Chaos.” Zero replied "You think Chaos is the murderer? “Yes.” Darkblue replied in her distinctive tone. Tails was over on the opposite side of the beach, teaching Yusuke to juggle, rather unsuccessfully. “I can’t multitask!” Yusuke complained, dropping the oranges yet again. “Strange.” Tails replied “I thought you would’ve been the kind for cupping balls!” He paused, presumably waiting for applause. “These are oranges.” Chaos said. “Don’t be so pedantic and clap, damn it!” He snapped back. Just then, MM jogged over to them, she was wearing a chefs hat. “Hey!” she panted, slightly out of breath. “I found some bread! You guys want sammiches?” “Sure.” Said Yusuke. “Beats doing this, I’m going cross eyed.” They walked across the grainy beach to eat sammiches together. CDX had observed all of this. He had deduced who the killer was. Soon, he would confront him. “Is that a smart idea?” CDX thought to himself. “Sure it is. What’s the worst that can happen? Ill die and keep three of my best items?” Clearly he was not sane. CDX waited for the killer to leave the beach, and followed them into the jungle. He crept behind them, until the killer came to a stop. “So.” CDX said, emerging from the tree; “You’ve started killing people then?” Then thought to himself: “What a <I am a potty mouth and administraters/word filters own me> line. I should’ve thought of a better line.” “Heh, so you caught me CDX.” The killer chuckled. “So you discovered my secret. Yes, I’m killing people. I’m going to kill everyone until it’s just me.” “Why?” “Why not?” “Enough. You’ve got to stop. I can’t let you go on. I need my quest points.” “Are you going to stop me?” “Maybe I am.” And with that, CDX pulled out a knife he had picked up from MM’ kitchen. “A knife, eh CDX? THIS ISNT RUNESCAPE! *sigh* To think, I left mine at home.” A wry smile crept across the killer’s face. “No more talking.” CDX said, and charged the killer. As he dashed towards them, the ground gave way, and he fell. It was a trap. CDX plunged into the hole, and fell onto sharpened bamboo sticks that adorned the bottom. One went through his arm, one through his hand. Several pierced his torso, pushing out his intestines. One scraped by his ear and it was hanging half off. CDX was quickly bleeding to death. He coughed up a little blood. “Sorry CDX, Game Over.” -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- “Holy S*it.” Muttered Manticore. He and Chaos were stood around the pit which now contained the deceased CDX, both wondering what the hell they were going to tell everyone. “Well,” began Chaos; “If we get everyone together, and tell everyone CDX’s dead, maybe we can work out who did it from their reaction.” “That sounds like a plan.” Manticore agreed, and started off back to the beach. “Shouldn’t we, y’know, bury him or something?” Chaos asked after him. “Nah, screw him, he’s dead.” As they emerged onto the beach, they called the remaining survivors over to break the news. Manticore had decided to tell of the death of the admin. “Guys, the impossible has happened. CDX has…CDX has…” He choked on the words a little before continuing: “CDX has been murdered.” The remaining passengers all fell silent, in shock, in fear, maybe in glee, until the quiet was noisily broken. “Really?! Was it gruesome?! Can I look?! I bet it was AWESOME!” The stunned survivors spiraled around to see Amos, eagerly waiting to be led to see CDX’s mangled corpse. Chaos and Manticore exchanged looks and raised eyebrows at one another. “And on that note, tie him up.” Chaos ordered, and Death and Xaioyou obliged, tying the suspected killer to a tree with waffles colored on it, that was presumably Yusuke’s. “Sacrilege” mumbled Yusuke. Chaos gathered the others to tell them what to do. “Right, we have no proof that this guy did anything, so I’m going to find evidence. Everyone else stay here. Do not go off on your own.” With that, Chaos left, on his own, yeah, the hypocritical shit. “Let’s kill him.” Said Commander Wolf. A few of the survivors were taken aback. “There’s no proof yet Commander Wolf, and still, he’s not going anywhere.” Death replied, motioning towards the tied Amos. “Mm, I’m with Death.” Yusuke said, although no one had asked for his two cents. “No one asked for your two cents.” Andy replied. He does read the narration. “Besides, I’m with Commander Wolf. It was blatantly Amos.” Chaos had trekked far out into the jungle. He was half looking for clues, and half trying to think. Could Amos have possibly killed two able bodied forum goers? Chaos mulled it over. No. There was no way he could kill Chaoswing, dig a pit, sharpen bamboo and trick CDX. Well...he could probably trick CDX...but still. As he walked, Chaos spotted something in the canopy. There was the cockpit of the ill-fated plane. He began climbing the trees. If he could reach the radio, they could get saved before anyone else got hurt. Back at the beach, most people had tried to busy themselves, by going through the recovered luggage, collecting water or looking for food. Commander Wolf and Death had taken the duty of guarding Amos, from escape and from others coming to beat him. There was discontent brewing; murmurs were resonating throughout the beach. Chaos made it to the cockpit. He found the radio, which had been thrown onto the floor of the battered plane. He sat in the pilots chair and tried to boot up the transceiver. He was met by harsh static. Turning the tuner, Chaos finally found a channel to broadcast on. “Hello, hello? This is Chaos. You might have seen my book series that im making? Anyway, that’s not important right now. We were on Oceanic flight 3A-VC1, we crashed, is anyone there?” The radio crackled a response, Chaos saw something on the ground before the branches gave way. Chaos plummeted through the foliage, the branches breaking as he fell. He hit the ground, a bloody pulp, but alive. Manticore was walking across the beach. He was walking like she had somewhere to go. Earlier, he, Commander Wolf and DarkBlue had been looking through the bags. He strolled over to Amos, pulled a gun, and shot him three times, in the shoulder, the chest, and finally through the head. Amos slumped forwards, dead. “What the hell are you doing Manticore?!” Death shouted. “We’re better off without him.” Commander Wolf said. He turned towards the beach, where Chaos emerged, battered, bruised and bleeding. Yusuke ran to meet him, and as he fell, Chaos whispered to Yusuke. “It wasn’t him.” He managed, before he fell unconscious. The survivors stood around. They were mostly sure the killer was dead. Yusuke had said nothing, obviously not hearing Chaos before he passed out. (can't multitask?) The killer managed a wry smile as he stood with the group. He had successfully manipulated Manticore, and now… he had the element of surprise again. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Helen awoke. She had been tending to the injured Chaos all night, treating his bruises and cuts. Chaos had been unconscious all night, and the outlook didn’t look good. As Helen wrung out a rag to cool Chaos’s temperature, the admin spluttered awake. Helen dashed over to look after him. Chaos spoke. “The killer…” “It’s ok, Amos’s dead. We’re safe.” Helen answered. “No, it’s not him! It’s not--” And before he could inform Helen of the killer, he fell unconscious again. How annoying. Helen reeled back at the shock. They thought they were safe, but the killer had been among them. This had gone on long enough; Helen was going to have to tell the others. Outside, Helen had gathered the remaining survivors. They consisted of: Death, Kururugi, DarkBlue, Xaioyou, Tails, Yusuke, Zero, Commander Wolf, Master Marik, Rising Dragon, Andy and Manticore. Chaos was lying unconscious inside one of the shelters. Helen addressed the others. “Everyone, I’ve got some bad news; Amos wasn’t the killer. Chaos worked it out. That means the killer is still among us.” Panicked whispering ensued, as did uneasy glances. Suddenly, accusations were made: “You’ve been in the jungle a lot Rising Dragon…” began Death. “I noticed that as well…” continued Xaioyou. Everyone took a step away from Rising Dragon. “Hey, that doesn’t mean that I’m…” But the glaring eyes stopped him mid sentence. “Listen;” Helen interjected into the silenced. “There’s no point throwing around accusations again, last time all that happened was Amos got killed for no reason.” “What, so we should just carry on, with a homicidal maniac just walking among us?” Yusuke shouted. “The pancake is here?!” Answered Kururugi. This was no time for jokes. “This is no time for jokes.” replied Kururugi. Master Marik spoke up "Look, its not Rising Dragon! I know he couldnt have done this!", “No, Marik, dont defend me, itll do nothing, if you guys really think I’m the killer, I’ll just stay over there, in full view, and then if I am the killer, no one else will die. Or you’ll all see me kill people. Either way, your minds will be at rest, yes?” This last part of the otherwise resting speech left an uncomfortable feeling around the others. But it was a fair idea, and would hopefully put a stop to this. “Okay.” Said Commander Wolf. “Shall me and Death watch him, like we did with Amos?” “Oh, ‘cause you did a bang up job then, didn’t you?” Zero sarcastically replied. "I am going to prove Rising Dragon hasn't done anything!" she spoke as she ran off into the forest. So that’s what happened. Rising Dragon stayed on the other side of the beach, and everyone could see him. Although people often glanced at him to check he was still there. Everything was comfortable again, there was an ease in the camp. DarkBlue was continuing her mapping, as Manticore approached her. “Hey. How’s it going?” He asked, sitting next to the artist. “Okay I guess, details of the island.” There was a short silence. “People are avoiding me.” Manticore suddenly said. “Since I…” “Mm.” sounded DarkBlue. “How are you doing?” “Okay. It’s just- I shouldn’t have done it y’know? I don’t know what got into me, and why did I do it with a gun....” “I can’t help but wonder if someone had manipulated me…” “Who had you been speaking to?” “Well, everybody. Zero, Xaio, Rising Dragon, you, everyone.” They glanced at over towards Rising Dragon as she mentioned his name. “You think it was him?” DarkBlue asked. “I don’t know. I thought I knew everyone.” A few hours went by. People came and went into the jungle more freely now. Rising Dragon stuck to his word and remained on the opposite side of the beach. Helen was with Chaos. Chaos awoke a second time, Helen rushed over to question. “Chaos! Chaos: Is RD the killer?” “Her...HER!” Chaos managed before he slumped back into unconsciousness. Helen thought for a second. Chaos hadn’t answered. If RD wasn’t the killer, who was? A girl? Helen pondered, suddenly a high pitched scream came from the forest. Five Minutes Earlier. Master Marik was trekking through the jungle. She took a knife with her and hacked through the undergrowth. Mother earth was being unkind to her as she stumbled her way through the jungle, looking for clues. She finally spotted the crushed remains of the cockpit. This was where Chaos fell. She knelt and foraged inside as she looking for anything. She found nothing, a wasted trip. She was getting up to leave when something caught her eye. A knife? Picking it up, she observed the blood on it. Whose blood was this? Did Chaos drop it? He was here earlier... She was about to turn back to camp, when she heard a noise above. Stones were plummeting towards her. Too late to move, the large rocks smashed on her shoulder and knocked her down, more falling on top. She screamed a high pitched scream. She laid there, her spine twisted and her shoulder broken. A figure moved around in front of her. “You?!” MM gasped. But the killer quickly silenced her with a rock to the skull. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The survivors were sat on the beach. Rising Dragon still hadn’t moved, and now had constructed a coconut friend to keep him company. Zero sat watching him, quietly observing his behavior. Commander Wolf stood near him, talking to Death. “You know, Zero’s been awfully quiet. He just sits there observing people.” “So?” Death replied. “So if we want a heads up on this killer, I think we should quiz Zero.” “Sounds like a plan.” Death answered, and the two went over to question him. “You think RD did it?” CW asked Zero. “Possibly, he’s number six.” Zero replied, not taking his eyes off the lonely man, who gave a quick kiss on the cheek to his coconut compadré. “Excuse me?” said Death. “I’ve listed everyone in order of suspects.” Zero responded. “You and CW are seven and eight consecutively.” “Everyone?” inquired CW. “So where are you?” “Number two.” The quizzers looked shocked. A moment of silence passed before Zero added wryly; “I sleepwalk.” Yusuke walked across the beach. He was out of waffles, so was now forced to socialize. Since the great waffle famine, he approached Kuru. “Do you have any waffles!?” Yusuke asked desperately. “No.” Kuru replied. His mind was elsewhere. “Something troubling you?” Yusuke inquired. “Helen is missing. She hasn’t been here since last night. Also...that scream, it sounded like MM, who we have not seen since yesterday” “Oh no…” “Xaioyou went looking for them, but something tells me she’s not going to have much luck.” “How long ago?” “Hours” - Suddenly, the other survivors were flocking to the top of the beach. Yusuke and Kuru exchanged glances and followed the crowd. Chaos had stumbled from his resting place and was staggering forward. Yusuke came forward to catch him and Chaos, the admin clearly shaky on his feet. “Where’s Helen?!” He asked. Most of the survivors looked around, unaware of his disappearance. “We don’t know.” DarkBlue answered. “She was here last night, but now he’s gone.” “She’s --.” Chaos was cut off by a knife shot into his throat, triggered by a wire he cross outside the tent front door. “HOLY WAFFLES!” Yusuke cried out. “CHAOS NO!” the crowd yelled, clearly shocked and agast by his instant death infront of their eyes. People looked around at each other, accusations were pointed. Chaos’s death, created pure Chaos for about an hour, pure arguing, all the long Yusuke was staring at Chaos’s dead corpse, he spoke nothing. “SHUT THE *$%^ UP!” Yusuke yelled, catching everybody’s attention. “I am sick of this GOD DAMN death!” Death smirked “From now on, NOBODY leaves the group, we stay together, if someone wanders off, you will be killed instantly by ME. No more screwing around, Chaos is dead, this is the END!” Glances were cast at each other, everyone accepted this new idea, RD walked over, “So I guess we don’t think I did it anymore…” The crowd nodded with agreement. “Helen, MM, and Xaioyou are missing…” Before the crowd could comprehend anything else Xaioyou appeared out of the brush covered in lacerations and blood. She fell on the ground, coughed up blood and died. “I’ve got a bad feeling about this.” DarkBlue said “I know what you mean. If he’s here, we could be killed at any moment. Kind of makes you ponder your mortality, that’s a Star Wars reference ^^” Tails said “Shut up.” Yusuke said, clearly pissed and filled with held in rage at this point. “Sorry! But it’s so cool, with Han and Chewie, and Yoda’s terrible grammar--” “Were going into the forest.” Yusuke cut Tails off, in a serious manner. ”Are you insane?” sputtered Manticore “People DIE in the forest!” “Were going in pairs.” Yusuke replied, “Whoever ends up dead next has the killer as his partner, then, we kill the killer.” DarkBlue pointed out. “Exactly” Yusuke replied. “What happened to the good ol happy, moronic, waffle every other word, capitalizing, NICE Yusuke?” Andy shouted from his shelter. “F*CK You, F*CK Your Sarcasm, And…F*CK Waffles” A wave of surprise radiated throughout the crowd “I’m taking charge, so nobody else dies, Don’t Challenge Me” “Death with Manticore, Tails with DarkBlue, Zero with Kururugi, Commander Wolf with Andy, Rising Dragon with me.” There was no questioning. As they headed off into the forest, the killer smiled sadistically at his new accomplishments. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ CW slowly stalked through the jungle. Andy was close behind him. CW seemed sure RD was the killer. He was in the jungle the most; he had access to Chaoswing’s knives, and a knife had ended Chaoswing. It had to be him. Andy and CW began moving quickly through the jungle, searching for this any clue. CW sped up, breaking into a jog, which Andy attempted to match. Suddenly, Andy dropped. “What the…?” CW said, turning around, and looking down the hole where Andy fell. Andy had fallen through some leaves into sort of underground cave. “Is it safe?!” CW said. He swept away the leaves and dirt that concealed it from view. “That’s weird, yeah, its safe” Andy uttered. CW jumped down and saw what Andy was staring at. Death and Manticore were scouring the jungle. Manticore looked over at Death. She seemed a little worried. “Need a hug?” Manticore offered tentatively. Death glared over at him. “I figured you could use some love.” Manticore continued. Death popped her knuckles in a menacing fashion towards the pungent pervert. “Haha, okay don’t hurt me!” Finished Manticore, and collapsed on the ground in a fit of pain. “Hey, I was just kidding around, no need to get a hernia!” Death said as she ran over to him. “I think it’s my knee… The injury from the first day…could you perhaps, attend to me?” He said with grin on his face. “Oh, get up you wimp!” Death yelled. She was slightly annoyed. “Look, I’ve never told anyone this, but…before the flight…I was disabled.” “No you weren’t.” “Yeah, your right, but, I almost got you to attend to me ^^” Manticore got up and brushed himself off, he all of a sudden heard a noise, he turned around and Death was gone. “F*CK” Helen ran through the undergrowth. She needed to find someone, anyone. As she swiftly made her way through the jungle, she heard some shouting from the east. It sounded aggressive, and it needed checking. She slowly crept to a small clearing where she saw Commander Wolf and Andy. Both lying in a dead and covered in blood and stab wounds. A dark figure stood over the them, it was the murderer! Helen leapt and tackled him, pinning him on the ground. She was on top of him, her hands firmly around his neck. Yelling, she confronted him. “What the hell do you have to say for yourself?!” She snarled at him. “Do…you…do this to...all the guys?” He spluttered in response. Slightly taken aback, she looked to see Manticore sheepishly grinning. “I just found them here! I swear! Look how bloody they are! STAB WOUNDS! I have no KNIFE!” Manticore interjected as best he could being choaked. Helen blushed slightly and clambered off Manticore, releasing him. “Shame, I was starting to enjoy that.” Manticore said as he arose and rubbed his neck. “Sorry. Its just…well, you were standing over their dead bodies...” She said and sank to her knees. “Lets try to find someone” Manticore said starting off into the jungle, Helen behind him. Elsewhere, DarkBlue and Tails, had stumbled upon the body of MM, being eaten by various bugs and small mammals. “Gross” Tails said, utterly disgusted. “Suck it up” replied the artist. “It looks like she’s been dead for a day or so.” said DarkBlue. “How do you know…are you the killer?” Tails queried. “No, the lines on the face indicate post mortem. Death is like art” DarkBlue said with an understanding. “Poor Marik…” began Tails. ”Let’s search the wreckage” DarkBlue said moving on to the plane. Tails reached down and closed Mariks eyes and then followed DarkBlue to the wreckage. Elsewhere in the forest Zero and Kuru were running in circles. “Why am I following YOU?!” Zero said, clearly agitated. “The wreckage is this way! I KNOW it is!” Kuru replied. They stumbled into an opening with two dead bodies of Andy and CW. “Looks like you have two more people to cross off your list.” “You know of my list?” “Yeah, CW told me about it.” “Oh.” Zero reached down and scribbled and erased names off his list, then put it back into his pocket. “The killer is close, Zero said instinctively” They heard a rustle in the bushes. Kuru swing around and was tackled to the ground. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Death and Kuru flew to the ground as Death was holding a knife to Kuru's throat, Kuru looked up, “Death?” Kuru said confusedly. "YOU'RE the killer?!" Death screamed. “Your the one with a knife near the dead bodies.” Kuru replied. Death dropped the knife and got up. “Nope, I just found these guys laying here” she then sat down and started making a fire. “What are you doing?” Zero said as he ran over to him. “It's night, we should make a camp.” Death said and she prepared the wood. Back at the wreckage. “I am going to climb up to the cockpit, if something happens to me, go to my map.” DarkBlue said as she prepared “What for?” Tails replied “There is a secret cave, I found it as I was walking through the forest awhile back.” "What is in it?" “Dunno, I didn't go in” DarkBlue started climbing the tree up to the cockpit, as she climb up the tree she jumped with nimbleness from branch to branch. She was halfway up the tree when Tails saw a small piece of string hanging from the branch she was about to grab. "Watch out!!!" It was too late, she landed on the branch, the string pulled a on a metal piece being used as a lever, which shot a sharpened piece of wood into her throat. She fell and died instantly. Tails looked around worriedly, he hoped that he wasn't near any traps. He ran quickly towards the beach, as DarkBlue had instructed him. Yusuke and Rising_Dragon had been wandering eastward on the island for the whole day. "Where are we going? Why are we going AWAY from the crash?" RD asked "I wanna know this whole island, I wanna know if any other people are here, we are heading to the otherside of this island." As he finished his sentence Yusuke and RD came out of the brush to a 50 foot crevice in the ground, there was a small unstable wooden bridge going accross the chasm. "Suke doesn't like this." "Neither does RD...I mean, neither do I." "Well, here goes nothing." Yusuke walked forward onto the bridge. "Are you mad?! Stupid?! CRAZY?!" yelled RD "Nope. Im Yusuke" "Ugh...this bridge will be the death of me." They continued accross the bridge to the other side. RD sighed in relief "That was easy." Yusuke walked forward into another forest. RD looked around and followed Yusuke into the thick forest. "No I don't wanna play naked Yu-Gi-Oh, Manticore!" Helen said as she walked through the forest with Manticore behind "Oh come on, it will be FUN!" Helen stopped and Manticore was confused, he walked up beside her and saw what stopped her. Kuru was laying down by the fire, talking to Death. Zero was roasting some snakes he found over a fire, Manticore looked over a little and saw the corpses of CW and Andy. "Have I ever told you how perfect I am?" Kuru said to Zero "Nope." "Well, I am perfect, im hotter, smarter, sexier, better, smoothe--" "Dumber." Zero and Death laughed at the cut off Kuru. All of a sudden they all heard a snap of twigs in the bushes. Death and Kuru pulled out knives. "Whose there?" Zero said into the darkness. Manticore and Helen revealed themselves. "Please don't kill us!" Helen cried. "We won't, were just camping, we found these bodies here, murderer got them were guessin." Kuru said and he and Death put away their knives. Helen and Manticore sat down beside everyone. "I found the bodies here aswell after Death left me, Helen jumped out on my thinking I was the murderer." Manticore chimed in Death looked over and said, "I heard a noise so I went to check it out and you were gone, so I came here and found Kuru and Zero." "I see" Manticore said distrustingly at Death. Later that night, Death got up from her slumber and walked into the forest. "Hey" Death said to a dark figure "You may have ruined my plan you bi*ch!" "I'm sorry...I heard the trap in the cave go off, and so I ran over and found the bodies...so I moved them up and covered the hole" Death cried, obviously scared "Death, you can help me no more." "Please! NO!" She cried as the knife has stabbed into her chest three times shooting out blood, the murderer bent his head down and kissed her softly, then stabbed the knife into her throat and dropped her to the ground. "Everything is back to normal now. The plan goes on." -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The sun rose. Manticore being the first to rise woke up, yawned and walked into the forest to take a pee. When he stumbled upon the dead body of Death. "Nooooo! Not Death! She is HOTT!" He quickly awoke the others and brought them over to the body. "So...the killer killed her than took her shirt off?" Zero questioned "Half right." replied Manticore "Well, it isn't surprising, but, this means one of us is the murderer." Manticore, Helen, and Kuru all looked at each other and fell silent at Zero's statement. Tails burst out of the brush onto the beach. "Map, map, map, map, must find the ma-" He was cut off as he tripped over a locked boxed outside of Zero's tent, and fell face first into the sand. "CHRIST!" He got up and ran up to the map that DarkBlue had previously etched into the sand. he looked down, there was a cave with a star over it. "This must be it!" Tails ran off into the ocean and around the beach until he came to a cove, he walked in, only to hear a *snap*. He looked down, he had just broken one of the murderer's infamous ropes. In a mere second and large rock covered in sharpend wood spikes swung down and bashed into his head. Tails fell to the ground and before he died, he realized that DarkBlue said the cave was in the forest. He turned his head and found a stick with the end covered in sand. The murderer had manipulated Tails death by changing the map. He cursed the murderer with his last breath. Yusuke and Rising_Dragon came up upon the bridge they had crossed yesterday. "I TOLD you there was nothing on that side of the island!" RD yelled Yesterday they had searched the whole half of the island for anything really, only to find nothing, they decided to come back and make their way to the crash site. "It wasn't Suke's intention to search for anyone." Yusuke replied calmly "Why did you drag me all over this damn island then?!." Yusuke walked forward onto the bridge. "Everyone suspected you as the murderer, so did I, so I took you away where you could kill me easily, hopefully to stunt your plan, and take you far away from everyone else. You are obviously not the murderer, I trust you again." RD walked onto the bridge behind Yusuke "Oh. Brave, but foolish, and a god damn waste of time!" They laughed to each other as they made their way accross the bridge. "Have I ever told you im afraid of heig--" *snap* The bridge broke off behind them and swung againt the wall, Yusuke grabbed the edge, and RD grabbed Yusuke's leg. "REALLY AFRAID OF HEIGHTS!" Yusuke yelled. Yusuke tried to pull up but he couldn't because RD was to heavy. "I can't get up onto the ledge!" "Goodbye Yusuke." "What? DON'T let go! RD! No!" "Better me than both of us! Yusuke, go to the crash, figure out this mess, kill the killer. It's been nice knowing ya" "NO!" RD let go and fell into the chasm "GOD DAMN! NO ... RD...why'd you have to let go..." Yusuke pulled himself up and onto the other side. "Damn it! Damn it ALL!" Yusuke got up and brushed himself off. He slowly walked into the forest, he had to get revenge, for all his friends. "I think we should go to the crash and figure out this mess." Zero said to everyone, "We should find Yusuke!" Helen replied, obviously scared that the murderer was one of the people she was standing with. "He's probably at the crash already, lets go" The group trekked off into the forest towards the crash site. Little did they know what was about to take place. Also: People alive - Manticore, Kuru, Zero, Yusuke, and Helen ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- The group walked through the forest calmly not knowing which one of them was the killer. Glances were shot between each other as they came into the clearing with the broken plane. "Here we are." Helen said, being the first to come through the bushes. "Careful, watch out for traps!" Kuru said to everyone as he was the last to enter the area. Nobody moved. "Now what?" Manticore questioned. Running through the forest quickly and swiftly, dodging branches and such, Yusuke was deep in thought. Who could it, be he pondered, images of dead bodies of his friends ran through his mind. "Chaos" Yusuke muttered out loud. "What did you see?" Yusuke thought about what had happend. Chaos came from the crash site where he saw something, the murderer was found out by Chaos, but, then he was fated to fall, probably a trap, probably failed, considering Chaos was alive. Then he went into the care of Helen. Who was the last to hear from him...his last words..."her"... As he thought that he came to the area with the bodies of Andy and CW. "Damn" He gave a moment of silence then ran onward, quickening his pace. Who could it be...WHO...wait. Yusuke. Think. After she gave the last words of Chaos, Helen ran off into the woods, she was the last one to leave the tent. A trap was set that killed Chaos. Could it...be... "Her...Helen." He said as he burst into the clearing with the wreckage. "Holy F*ucksh*itp*ssgodmotherinheaven H*LL!" Manticore screamed "Yusuke!" Helen cried in relief "Helen is the murderer!" Yusuke yelled "WHAT?!" Manticore yelled as he jumped back and away from Helen. "AHH" he screamed and disappeared. Everyone ran over to where he disappeared, they found his bloody run through body in a pit of spikes, that was covered by leaves. The Murderer smiled. "Helen is the killer!" Yusuke yelled Helen stepped away and cried out "No! Im not! I swear! Yusuke! You got to believe me! You KNOW me!" Zero about to say something when Yusuke ordered "Kuru! Grab her so she doesn't run off! I'll go get the evidence to prove it was her!" Zero's eyes widened. "No, Yusuke, let me do it. I must do it...I am...better at climbing." "Well, Yusuke IS afraid of heights...alright." Zero walked up to the tree. Looked back. Dropped a piece of paper on the ground. Looked at Yusuke and then started climbing. The murderer was about to be revealed. Also: People alive - Kuru, Zero, Yusuke, and Helen. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Zero went slowly and made sure there were no traps as he went up the tree. As he touched the last branch leading to the cockpit it snapped a rope and a wooden sharpend stick flew through the air. Zero dodged it. "Whew" Zero sighed. As he jumped to the cockpit he looked down at what Chaos had seen. He turned around. "Yusuke! Save He--" *slit* Yusuke turned around to see Helen dropped to the ground with her throat slit and Kuru standing over her dead body smiling. Kuru threw the knife at the cockpit with deadly accuracy aiming right at Zero's throat. Zero dodged to the left, but, not fast enough as the knife plunged deep into his chest. Kuru, unarmed took off into the forest toward the beach while laughing maniacly. "Damn" Zero said as he fell to the ground covered in lashes and bloody cuts from the fall. "Yusuke...com...come over here." Yusuke ran over to Zero and kneeled down to him. "Are you alright! Zero...are you gonna live?!" "Your on your own now. Take this." Zero handed Yusuke a key "It goes to my locked box outside my tent." "Whats in it?" "My family sword, it is strong." Yusuke understood. "Yusuke, promise me. Promise you will kill that bast*rd." Yusuke nodded his head, with tears pouring down his eyes "Look" Zero handed Yusuke a paper with all the survivors names on it, number 1 was Kururugi. "I knew the whole time...but...he grabbed her...I couldn't....save her...I tried..I trie--" Zero slumped down into eternal sleep. Yusuke leaned down and closed Zero's eyes, then stood up. A moment of silence passed as he looked around at the bodies. Yusuke looked down, tears flooding from his eyes. He then looked up, dried his face, put the key in his pocket, and ran off into the forest. Slowly gliding down to the ground, the evidence proving the murderer landed on Zero's body. It was Kuru's plan, it had the whole story of what happend on the paper. It had names crossed off, and blood marks all over the paper. The first name crossed off was the pilot of the plane. Kuru had crashed the plane. Kuru had planned all this. Kuru was the murderer. Yusuke was the last to stop him. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Mainly, just using this as reference. |
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| Death T-2 | Jul 13 2008, 11:18 PM Post #2 |
Somewhat Androgynous Lurker
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Ah yes, it makes me so sentimental to remember how the couple unimportant members died... Still not thrilled at what a certain someone did to my dead body though. |
 
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| Kururugi | Jul 14 2008, 07:29 AM Post #3 |
I am the very disease you pretend to be
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Ack, I kissed Death! *freaks out* *melts* ._.; |
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