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City Girls | Series One
Topic Started: Oct 14 2008, 10:37 AM (228 Views)
Hannah
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I've already started posting on Walford Web, so I thought I'd try here

City Girls is a new young adult based online soap. The series delves into the lives of three friends who just so happen to share a flat together.
The girls have known each other since their school days and despite their ups and downs they always come together.
We explore the laughs and the struggles of shop assistant Izzie Roberts, Psychology student Holly Newman and wannabe model Ashley Woods.

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The Characters

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Izzie tends to keep people at a distance, her innocent exterior hides a complex and heartbreaking history.
After watching her father battle cancer for the majority of her childhood, Izzie has faced a constant battle to keep her life from falling apart.
Reformed self harmer Izzie faces the toughest challenge of her life as her innocence and vulnerablity is exploited in City Girls' dramatic first episode

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Holly's bright and bubbly personality hides the scars left from her dysfunctional childhood. In the middle of a painful battle between her divorcing parents, Holly faced every child's nightmare as her parents couldn't bare to be around each other leading to her father walking out of her life for good.
Fractured by her upbringing, Holly longs for the family life she has missed out on, but the twists and turns in Holly's life threatens to destroy her.

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Ashley has had a more structured and sheltered childhood than either of her friends and this had led to Ashley's selfish attitude towards her life. There are lots of words to describe Ashley including vain, self loving. But underneath layers and layers of self admiration lies a heart of gold.
Series One sees Ashley's overwelming desire to become a model take several dramatic twists and she will need her friends more than ever

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Jack is every girl's best friend and that's exactly what he is to Izzie, Holly and Ashley. Jack doesn't have a bad bone in his body, but when it comes to Ashley, who he is hopelessly in love with, Jack would fight to the death for her

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Shane is Holly's creepy older boyfriend. He appears a few episodes into the series and he has a whole cupboard full of skeletons which will destroy his relationship with Holly

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Mike is a minor character who appears during the first half of the series. He works at a garden centre with Izzie

Future Characters

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Darin Brooks will play a love interest called Max Warren, he is introduced in episode 11 Chemicals React, along with Izzie, Holly, Ashley and Jack, Max will become a main character

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In episode Too Little Too Late we meet another new main character Sammy Davis played by Molly Burnett, she will be Jack's new (and first) girlfriend, she will also cause a lot of problems between Jack and Ashley
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Episodes

Episode One: Secrets, Lies & Destruction
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"You're into photography Izzie, I could get you some contacts"
"Ash...you've had one freebie photo shoot, that doesn't make you Britain's next top model


Episode 2: The First Cut Is The Deepest
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"Good morning sunshine...maybe not"


Episode 3: Drowning On Dry Land

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["Is it normal to feel as though it's my fault?"


Episode 4: A Losing Battle
Episode 5: The Self Destruct Button
Episode 6: Thanks For The Memory
Episode 7: Fall From Grace
Episode 8: What Did I Do To Deserve This?
Episode 9: Shattered Dreams
Episode 10: The Blame Game
Episode 11: The Truth Will Always Hurt
Episode 12: Chemicals React
Episode 13: Missing Pieces
Episode 14: Is There Any Lust In Danger
Episode 15: Too Little Too Late
Episode 16: Just One Kiss
Episode 17: Bad To The Bone
Episode 18: Feeling The Heat
Episode 19: Too Tough To Die
Episode 20: Happily Never After
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I'll read this on Walford Web soon and start to post/comment. :)

Sorry, it's just that I've been busy etc.
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Hannah
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that's cool

is it ok if I post it here as well?
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Chris C!
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Sure, of course it's no problem!
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Hannah
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thanks Chris

Episode One: Secrets, Lies and Destruction

Music: Ne-Yo: Miss Independent

There are so many ways to interpret the meaning of friendship, there are so many different types of friends, ones that can come in and out of your life without a thought, or those who leave an imprint on your heart, those who come into your life for a reason, even though you may never know what that reason may be.

C.S Lewis described friendship as unnecessary and compared it to those controversial subjects such as art and philosophy. He said “It has no survival value, rather it is one of those things that give value to survival”

It was pouring with rain again, this wasn’t an unusual occurrence in London, nor was it unusual to see three bored looking faces in three very different places.

Music Fades

Izzie, who works in a garden centre had run out of things to do...again. She had already swept the floors and she had even tidied up the display of Heaven chocolate bars that she was told to sell before they went out of date in three days time, she didn’t understand how her boss, Luke, could expect her to sell over a hundred chocolate bars, especially since it was September, the centre’s least busy period.
Izzie was looking forward to November, Luke would be transforming the centre from a garden centre to a Winter Wonderland and that’s when trade would pick up. She loved the Christmas rush, she got a buzz from being so busy.

“Izzie”

Izzie was brought out of her daydream, which today had consisted of loud music and lots of vodka.

“Somewhere nice?” asked Mike

Izzie noticed his blonde hair falling in his eyes, for some reason, Izzie found Mike’s eyes interesting, they always looked like they were somewhere else. Like there was something going on behind them, but she couldn’t quite put her finger on. All the same, she found herself intrigued by him. She knew she shouldn’t, they worked together, plus he was a lot older than her. Mike must be in his early thirties at least. Plus she knew he had a son, she saw them together once when she was shopping in the town with Holly.

“Huh?” Izzie replied looking confused, which to be honest, was a regular look for Izzie

“You looked like you were miles away”

“Not that far actually. I was thinking about the Hollybush tonight. A friend of a friend’s band is playing there tonight. I haven’t had a good night out in ages”

“Sounds interesting”

*

Ashley stretched out her arms, she hated her job. She hated spending her days stuck at a desk, typing on a computer and answering the phone to people that she had no interest in speaking to. She started digging around in her handbag for her mobile phone, which she seemed to several times throughout the day. Three missed calls, Ashley sighed, the number was withheld

“Why bother to call three times? They might as well just leave a message, at least I’ll know what they want that way” Ashley complained to her colleague who was sat at the desk opposite. Maria, a fifty something year old woman who lives alone with her cat, just shrugged her shoulders and carried on working. Ashley rolled her eyes and carried on working again.

*

Holly should have been concentrating, she usually did during her lectures, but today was different. She couldn’t concentrate on anything.
She missed Shane, she hadn’t seen him for over a week, their relationship was so difficult, she hated keeping it a secret from Izzie and Ashley, but she knew they’d never approve...well Ashley wouldn’t anyway. She remembered when she’d first met Shane and she told Ashley about him.

Flashback

“Holz, he’s freaking 32 years old, have you asked yourself what a man that age wants with a girl your age?”

“Everything’s so black and white with you ain’t it Ash, no wonder you can’t find a guy, you have these set rules of what a guy should be. The right age, the right look, the right personality, well I’ve got news for you, you ain’t gonna find this perfect guy you’ve got in your head”

“So I should settle for the first guy that’s taken interest”

“You think I’m settling? You haven’t even met Shane, you are so shallow, you just make this impression without even meeting the guy”

“I don’t need too, he’s too old for you Holly, I’m warning you now he’s no good for you”

Flashback Ends

Holly and Ashley’s friendship suffered for that, Izzie was stuck in the middle and she hated it. Holly knew there was only one way out, she had told them that Shane had dumped her. Holly had endured weeks of Ashley’s pathetic ‘I told you so’ looks. Holly felt bad that she hadn’t confided in Izzie, she knew Izzie wasn’t judgmental like Ashley, but it just seemed easier not to say anything. She was regretting it now though, she needed someone and Shane wasn’t around at the moment. He had some sort of business to take care of.
Holly felt so messed up and confused. She’d already snapped at Ashley that morning. Didn’t they realise that she had bigger things to worry about than what to wear to a crappy pub. Of course they didn’t...because Holly didn’t feel that she could tell them.

*

Izzie was finishing the final touches to her make up at the kitchen table as Ashley was pouring shots of vodka, well...drinking the shots would be a more accurate term. They were playing their music loud as the excitement for their night out begun to take over. They hardly went out any more, they never seemed to have the money. But tonight they were planning on enjoying themselves.
A knock on the door interrupted the music. A young guy with dark haired entered the kitchen, he looked impressive. He had definitely dressed to impress.

“Jack!” yelled Ashley “Yay! Jack’s here!” Ashley ran up to him and took him by surprise as she jumped into his arms

“Wow...7:30 and pissed as hell...I think that’s a new record for you Ash”

Ashley laughs “This isn’t drunk...this is called being happy”

“I want what she’s on” Jack whispered to Izzie, who just smiled as Jack’s eyes were unable to move away from Ashley

“Ok Ash, tell me why you’re so happy”

“She walked out of her job” Izzie sighed “You know Ashley, acts first, thinks later”

“I’m taking control of my life Iz, which is something you should be doing”. Ashley passed Izzie a shot “You’re into photography Izzie, I could get you some contacts”

“Ash...you’ve had one freebie photo shoot, that doesn’t make you Britain’s Next Top Model”

*

Holly was lying down on her bed. She was supposed to have been getting ready to go out, but she had told Ashley that she wasn’t up for it tonight. To say that Ashley was disappointed would be an understatement, pissed off would be more accurate. Well Holly couldn’t live her life by Ashley’s rules.
The tears just kept on coming and Holly wished more than anything they would stop, how did her life get to this?

*

“I can’t believe Holly bailed out on us again” complained Ashley as she ordered her vodka and blackcurrant drink from the bar. The pub was quite a small place, and it was quite busy because of the band playing that night, still it was better than another night in with a DVD and a pizza

“Would you just leave it Ash” Izzie rolled her eyes, Ashley was never happy “I’ve had a really crappy day and I just want to forget everything and get totally smashed”

*

Holly was pacing around her room, she felt too restless to just stay still. She stopped in front of the mirror, she watched the tear stained face staring back her. She felt repulsed as she looked down at the pregnancy test she was holding in her hand

“Shit...shit...shit” Holly started to cry again “It shouldn’t be like this”

*

“Excuse me” A guy in his thirties stopped Ashley as she made her way to the bar “It’s Ashley Woods isn’t it, we have your modeling portfolio on our records”

Ashley just stared at him, he had a nice smile, but she wasn’t about to let him know that she was interested in anything he had to say, play hard to get, that was the number one rule when talking to a guy.

“My agency is one of the most successful companies in...”

Ashley cut him off before he had the chance to finish his sentence.

“Look...Mr...?”

“Carver, but you can call me Sean”

“Mr Carver. Everyone like to big up their business, what makes you think that you’re any different?”

“You’re a tough cookies...I like that. Miss Woods, how do you fancy going somewhere more quieter?”

She knew she shouldn’t, but without hesitation, Ashley agreed.

*

Music: David Guetta: Love Don't Let Me Go

Izzie was dancing, she loved the feeling she got when she was drunk. She can just let herself go and not have to worry about anyone else. She felt the confidence that she had always craved, the alcohol was like magic, the kind of magic which made her into the person that she wanted to be.

“Iz”

Music Fades

Izzie stopped in her tracks, she could hear her name being called. She turned around and Jack was rushing towards her with a concerned look on his face.

“Iz...Ashley’s gone off with some guy and I’m really worried about her”

“God...could you be any more jealous?”

“I’m not jealous, I’m genuinely concerned”

“If you’re that concerned go find her, be her hero. Maybe then she’ll fall into your arms...and your bed”

“You know what Izzie...you can be such a bitch when you’ve been drinking”

*

Everything was spinning, she couldn’t even tell where she was. There wasn’t any music anymore, come to think of it, there hadn’t been for a while.
She could hear a man’s voice echoing, he wanted something from her, something that she wasn’t willing to give.

Next Time On City Girls

"You looked more drunk than me and that's saying something. You sure had a queue of guys lining up"
"That's me the regular drunken slut"

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