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Brenden Flarus; Vizard Taisa
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Topic Started: Apr 19 2011, 07:17 AM (784 Views)
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青brenden96
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Apr 21 2011, 05:35 AM
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I never said I'm "OHKO"ing people. It's just an attack that can cause a heavy wound, due to the bleeding it'd be fatal depending on the speed of treatment.
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頭 Tenken
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Apr 22 2011, 03:02 AM
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Yeah but it's that word fatal that's iffy, since being able to almost-instakill anyone with one hit is a no-go.
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青brenden96
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Apr 22 2011, 07:26 AM
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Yet you again mis-understand this, sigh. The WOUND that is dealt can be Fatal depending on how deep it hit the opponent, depending also on if the opponent tries to dodge, Depending on the Wound, there'll be blood loss. I still edited it though, else this discussion might take a year and that's no fun either =/
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頭 Tenken
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May 3 2011, 12:54 PM
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青brenden96
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Jul 1 2011, 04:05 AM
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Edit : Done adding new crap. Added a couple of Kido. Added one Bankai technique and one Shikai technique. You may re-apply him if you don't have any problems with my addings.
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頭 Seraph
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Jul 1 2011, 04:27 AM
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List the additions in your edit post >.>
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青brenden96
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Jul 1 2011, 08:02 PM
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Added Hadou Name: Ōkasen (Yellow Fire Flash) Number: 32 Type: Hadou Element: Fire What is it?: Fires a wide arc of yellow energy at a target after the user concentrates all their energy into their two hands. This arc is much like a wave of pure energy flame, and can easily overwhelm an unprepared opponent. Activation Command/Chant: “Ye Heaven! Unleash the wave of purest energy upon a foe without hesitation. Allow the foe to misunderstand and smoulder!"
Name: Haien (Abolishing Flames) Number: 54 Type: Hadou Element: Fire What is it?: A purple sphere is created in the user’s palm, thrown directly after executing the kidou and calling out it’s name. The sphere keeps its composure for up to fifteen meters with dynamics similar to a baseball, matching it’s size, speed, and ability to slide sink and curve accordingly. Upon contact, the sphere bursts over the targeted area, consuming it in purple flames that will incinerate a target completely unless it has the capacity to channel spiritual energy. As such, spiritual weapons, barriers, and beings are subject to a very different kind of damage, with their defensive properties halved and their capacity to channel spiritual energy along the area inhibited for a post. The flames can spread along an area of three square feet, and die out shortly after they carry out their purpose Activation Command/Chant: "Blazing grey flames upon the wilderness, the flames show the future of the world."
New Shikai Technique Dragon's Aura Burst Brenden focuses and gathers a great deal of his reiatsu and forms an orange aura around his blade. This makes his sword longer, a little wider and stronger. Lasts for Four turns, requires one charge-post and has a cooldown of 3 posts. May only be used Twice per thread. This aura may be cancelled at free will to use one's bankai or simply to stop the technique, the cooldown will stay the same. (The wideness grows till around 5 inches and the length increases by another 2 feet.)
New Bankai Tech Dragon's Stretching Surge Brenden concentrates alot of his reiatsu into his weapon, as it makes a sudden boost in it's length and rushes forward, then shrinking back to it's original size. This technique has a cooldown of 3 posts and may not be used more than thrice a thread.(Fairly long range, can lengthen up to 100 meters.)
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頭 Tenken
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Jul 4 2011, 08:30 PM
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How much longer/wider does the new Shikai tech make your blade?
How much longer does your Bankai tech make it?
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青brenden96
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Jul 5 2011, 12:23 AM
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Added Hadou Name: Ōkasen (Yellow Fire Flash) Number: 32 Type: Hadou Element: Fire What is it?: Fires a wide arc of yellow energy at a target after the user concentrates all their energy into their two hands. This arc is much like a wave of pure energy flame, and can easily overwhelm an unprepared opponent. Activation Command/Chant: “Ye Heaven! Unleash the wave of purest energy upon a foe without hesitation. Allow the foe to misunderstand and smoulder!"
Name: Haien (Abolishing Flames) Number: 54 Type: Hadou Element: Fire What is it?: A purple sphere is created in the user’s palm, thrown directly after executing the kidou and calling out it’s name. The sphere keeps its composure for up to fifteen meters with dynamics similar to a baseball, matching it’s size, speed, and ability to slide sink and curve accordingly. Upon contact, the sphere bursts over the targeted area, consuming it in purple flames that will incinerate a target completely unless it has the capacity to channel spiritual energy. As such, spiritual weapons, barriers, and beings are subject to a very different kind of damage, with their defensive properties halved and their capacity to channel spiritual energy along the area inhibited for a post. The flames can spread along an area of three square feet, and die out shortly after they carry out their purpose Activation Command/Chant: "Blazing grey flames upon the wilderness, the flames show the future of the world."
New Shikai Technique Dragon's Aura Burst Brenden focuses and gathers a great deal of his reiatsu and forms an orange aura around his blade. This makes his sword longer, a little wider and stronger. Lasts for Four turns, requires one charge-post and has a cooldown of 3 posts. May only be used Twice per thread. This aura may be cancelled at free will to use one's bankai or simply to stop the technique, the cooldown will stay the same. (The wideness grows till around 5 inches and the length increases by another 2 feet.)
New Bankai Tech Dragon's Stretching Surge Brenden concentrates alot of his reiatsu into his weapon, as it makes a sudden boost in it's length and rushes forward, then shrinking back to it's original size. This technique has a cooldown of 3 posts and may not be used more than thrice a thread.(Fairly long range, can lengthen up to 100 meters.)
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