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| 青brenden96 | Apr 19 2011, 07:17 AM Post #1 |
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Vizard Template General Name: Brenden Flarus Nickname: Dragon Age: 28 Gender: Male Division: Group Two - Combat Specialists Rank: Taisa (Vizard Leader) Description Height: 6 feet. Weight: 160 Hair: Red, spikey/bed hair Eyes: Shining blue Appearance: Appears as a calm and young looking gentle person. He's not the biggest out of everyone he sees, but he doesn't mind at all. He sees himself as a young man amongst the Vizards. His hair shines together with the light, as you'd see a bright red colour to it. His eyes seem wierd sometimes, as if he gazes through you. In combat he seems like a different man, mostly because his power shown is different from the gentle person people see him as. In combat some see him as a monster, yet as a human, he's a normal person. He doesn't stand out besides his Zanpakuto that he carries with him everywhere. Sometimes he puts his hand on his Zanpakuto's hilt, or his relaxing pose, as he lets out a sigh. He doesn't really smile alot, only when there's reason. Brenden also appears to be a man of very few words with most persons. Clothing: Mostly walks around with a normal pair of pants, black shoes, a blue headband with wave like patterns on it, and a blue thin jacket. Ofcourse, he does wear T-shirts, too. His Zanpakuto sheath is a normal black one with a golden tip at the bottom. In 'special occasions' he tends to wear a nice suit, although the red colour tends to come out less serious. He's not a guy of brand clothing, so he wears and buys whatever he likes to see or wear. He also wears gloves, with a mid-dark green colour. Sometimes he switches his gloves, that's either if they're torn down or getting old. Picture: Spoiler: click to toggle Personal Personality:Most of the times he doesn't care about his surroundings at all, and looks as if he fades away, as if he's meditating. Although he remains calm, he finds it hard to keep his main life secret from his normal, human friends.. He has few, for that reason. He's a loyal man who sticks to his friends (Vizards in general?) and helps them when needed. Although he is loyal, he wishes to break his limits and take the place of the Vizard King one day. Even though he wishes, he fears that he lacks the power to fullfill that dream, or protect his fellow Vizards... Elseway he seems rather happy when not thinking about those things. As if he's all freshened up and ready to take on the world ahead of him. He despises those who don't respect eachother and would want to kill such persons... Although he knows he'd get into trouble trying to do so. That's why he tends to stick to it and keep his anger within himself. He doesn't really mind the Shinigami and the 13 divisions because he is a shinigami himself. He hates hollows because they eat the innocent and kill nothingless. Although he's never met any Arrancars before, he seems rather interested in them and would love to fight one of them some day. Goals: He wants to find more Vizards to increase the forces, yet he also wants to become a strong man, Which the grand leader of the vizards would respect, and other beings would fear... Although he respects the one and only above him and his fellow Vizards, he wishes to become the Vizard King one day. Fears: To see his friends hurt or die. He wants to protect them no matter what even though he thinks he's to weak for that... He tends to train till he drops for that single reason. Yet, he thinks that the longer he needs to rest, the less time he has to protect those that are dear to him. History: Spoiler: click to toggle Combat Info Kidou: NOTE: All Kidou over Rank 85 are Forbidden and require both a Training Thread from the Captain of the Kidou Corps AND permission from the Soutaichou to learn. The Soutaichou may do the Training Thread in place of the Kidou Corps Captain if necessary. Only Captains may learn these spells and only if they are considered good enough in Kidou. Hadou (6 Techniques) Techniques: Vizard Techniques (5 Techniques) Shunpo (Flash Step): A movement technique that allows the user to move faster than the eye can follow. The focal point that determines the basis of this technique is speed. As speed is the main point of the technique the method is best characterized by how fast one can get from point A to point B in the least amount of steps. Training and skill are what determines how fast a user of Shunpo can move; those of little skill in the technique or those who haven't used it an extended amount of time would obviously be out of practice, causing those individuals to be considerably slower, which requires the use of more steps to move the same distance and become winded far easier in a shorter amount of time. Strengths: Balanced in everything. Most concentrated in strength and Accuracy. He has a strong mind according to Kazu, and once he sets his sight on something he will get it done. Weaknesses: Tends to lose concentration of his surroundings and get hit by his enemy. Combat Style: Mostly he fights for the fun out of it and plays with his opponent till he gets bored with him/her/it. If his opponent is strong, he'll use his bankai, or even his Vizard mask and end it quickly.. If his friends are at stake, he'll give everything he's got to prevent anything near Bad from happening to them all. Zanpakutou Info Zanpakutou Name: Ryuken (Dragon Sword) Sealed Zanpakutou: Basic Katana, around 3 feet long. 1/4th inch thick. Spirit Name: Ryugan Spirit Appearance: A man with long black hair, binded as a ponytail halfway. He looks like a serious person that's looking for a fight. Mostly he tends to be nice to his master, but other times he tempts to beat Brenden up. He wears shoulderpads, with the form of dragon-heads. He has the form of his blade, or Zanpakuto on his Back. He can fight without it due to his amount of power, but against Brenden he rather wouldn't let his guard down. Else he would be beaten up instead. Spirit Personality: Mostly cheerfull when Brenden isn't around to bug him with stuff. If he sees the seriousness of Brenden, he'd gladly lend his strength without complaining. If Brenden comes in while meditating, Ryugan gets angry and asks what he wants, or just trying to make him leave quickly. Ryugan is a calm person who meditates alot. That's why he's angry when Brenden comes in, because of disturbing Ryugan. Shikai Release Phrase: "Devour, Ryugan!" Shikai Appearance: A fiery-coloured blade with 3 curves in it. The first is an upward curve and the second is downward curve, making it hard to slice someone with... The last curve is the tip of the blade, a nice and round tip. It's thick compared to the sealed zanpakuto's form and it's almost 3/4th an inch thick. Shikai Abilities: Falling Dragon Burst: A fire-elemental energy wave slash coming from his zanpakuto. In terms of power, around the strength of a Fushibi (Ambush Flare). Dragon's Bursting Breath: Brenden releases a surging burst of reiatsu from the tip of his blade in the form of a spear, mostly used to stab someone and push them back. Compareable to a Ōkasen (Yellow Fire Flash). Dragon's Aura Burst Brenden focuses and gathers a great deal of his reiatsu and forms an orange aura around his blade. This makes his sword longer, a little wider and stronger. Lasts for Four turns, requires one charge-post and has a cooldown of 3 posts. May only be used Twice per thread. This aura may be cancelled at free will to use one's bankai or simply to stop the technique, the cooldown will stay the same. (The wideness grows till around 5 inches and the length increases by another 2 feet.) Bankai Release Phrase: "Tear the heavens, Kusari Tsubasa no Ryugan (Chained Winged Ryugan)!" Bankai Appearance: The blade takes on the form of the Shikai's blade but then as a vast amount of flames themselves. The blade can thus that way lengthen and thicken depending on the amount of Reiatsu concentrated in it. He gains fire-chains around his arms going till inbetween his fingers, on his right arm the chains go till the blade's hilt itsself, attached to it in simple. Dragon-like wings of flames surge out of his back, allowing him to gain swift aerial movements and glide through the sky, like a true dragon. Bankai Abilities: Ultimate Slash of the Dragon: Coats zanpakuto in a strong reiatsu aura, taking the appearance of fire, and used to deal a fierce swordslash. Only to the person he'd hit. Comparable to a kidou around lvl 40. Dragon's Rampaging Mouth Burst: The blade's tip forms the mouth of a dragon, as he gathers a massive amount of reiatsu in the shape of the tip. Then he releases it in the form of an orb, that explodes after a certain amount of time. Or with the chant "Burst and Obliterate!" Takes about 2 posts to charge up and has a limited useage of 2 per thread. Mostly used when Vizard Mask is active, that's why it's limited to 2 uses. Has a cooldown of 3 posts. Compareable to a power between the Cero and Gran Rey Cero Dragon's Stretching Surge Brenden concentrates alot of his reiatsu into his weapon, as it makes a sudden boost in it's length and rushes forward, then shrinking back to it's original size. This technique has a cooldown of 3 posts and may not be used more than thrice a thread. (Fairly long range, can lengthen up to 100 meters.) Inner Hollow Info Inner Hollow Appearance: The counterpart of Ryugan... It has the same hair, yet the colour is snowy white. He looks like a lunatic and laughs all the time without reason. The dragon shoulderpads are Blue and seem to breath fire. Unlike the normal Ryugan, he wears the zanpakuto on the left side of his body for swift unsheathing. He always charges straight at Brenden as if he's a complete idiot. Inner Hollow Personality: A crazy man that tried to kill Brenden when they fought so that he could take over his body. He planned several things before to awaken his own powers inside of Brenden and make Brenden berserk, causing him to transform into a hollow and destroy everything on his path. When he was defeated, he became rather calm and easy-going, having a slight fear towards Brenden, knowing that Brenden could simply kill him... Hollow Mask Appearance: A strong built mask that has Two red-stripe crosses branching from the middle till the side of his mask. One in the form of an X and the second in the form of a Plus. His mask covers his chin, too, as it's shape takes the form of teeth. His mask branches till the top of his head as Horns come from it. The horns point sidewards for 2 inches and then point forward. This would be usefull for firing the large Hoshi. Hollow Mask Boost: Gives an incredible boost to his Speed, Power and Reiatsu. Considering his bankai's based on reiatsu, it grows immensily depending on how much reiatsu he uses for it. Edited by brenden96, Jul 5 2011, 12:22 AM.
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| 頭 Seraph | Apr 19 2011, 09:03 AM Post #2 |
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Needs to be made longer in pretty much every section. |
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| 青brenden96 | Apr 19 2011, 08:37 PM Post #3 |
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Okay, edited. Tried to add as much as came to my mind, hope it's a lil' better now. |
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| 船 Numa | Apr 20 2011, 05:25 AM Post #4 |
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Amun in a Mirror
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You need cooldowns and limits on your techs. Main one is
This one should probably take either a post to charge up, and should have a limit to how many you can use in a thread, along with a cooldown. Also equivalent power levels? (Like it's Cero level, #90 Kidou level, etc? What its equivalent power level will help on defining the limits.) |
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| 青brenden96 | Apr 20 2011, 05:31 AM Post #5 |
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Edited |
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| 船 Numa | Apr 20 2011, 05:43 AM Post #6 |
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You can have 6 shikai techniques, you know. Also need a equivalent power level for the bankai tech mentioned earlier. By the way it seems, I'm assuming it's like Gran Rey Cero level? |
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| 青brenden96 | Apr 20 2011, 06:18 AM Post #7 |
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Anything else? |
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| 頭 Tenken | Apr 20 2011, 11:25 AM Post #8 |
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Harbinger
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How powerful is this slash?
Once again, how powerful?
Fatal? To everyone? How powerful is the aura? |
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| 青brenden96 | Apr 20 2011, 08:50 PM Post #9 |
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Updated. |
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| 頭 Tenken | Apr 20 2011, 10:50 PM Post #10 |
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Harbinger
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OK no it was the word fatal I didn't like, being able to OHKO anyone you hit with one blow is a no. |
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