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Panic, Akhara "Kenpachi"; Eleventh Division; Captain
Topic Started: Apr 12 2011, 04:34 PM (256 Views)
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General
Name: Panic, Akhara
Nickname: Blade Cutter
Age: 250 Years
Gender: Male
Division: Eleventh
Rank: Captain

Description
Height: 6'7"
Weight: 179lbs
Hair: White, spiked and styled backwards
Eyes: Deep blue
Appearance: Appearance? Let us begin with basic body structure. Akhara possesses a body structure that denotes very little of his physical power, his arms are barely toned, his thighs are only slightly muscled, his abs possess no rigidness, his pectorals are level with the rest of his torso. His skin? A pale white, his eyes a deep blue, his hair also white, yet so much more prominent than that of his pasty white epidermis. His facial structure exists, yet it is all angles, his nose nearly coming to a point, and his chin obviously coming to a point, yet at the same time it is a soft point whilst still holding the strong angles that denote him.

His eyes, they are blue and yet at the same time convey a look of pain, not pain from sadness or pain from an outside source, but rather pain from within. What kind of pain do his eyes convey though? It is the pain of trying not to kill everyone on sight, for he has held within himself the urge of death for over a century. As such, when looking into his eyes one finds themselves not feeling sorrow or pity, but rather fear that this monster might break free of it's self imprisonment.

For blemishes upon his body Akhara possesses two scars, one which is actually three combined and is positioned under his left eye, and a second which is along the right corner of his mouth where someone cut down towards his chin.


Clothing: Dress, well, Akhara wears a not so peculiar, yet at the same time unique style of dress. He sports black leather boots with thick black cloth pants and jacket, a belt with a silver buckle that spreads across his entire front, and a grey shirt which possesses sleeves long enough to cover even the wrist. Another thing that Akhara wears often is his white cloak, a cloak with fur along the collar, peculiar angular designs along the back, and gloves of snow white.

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Personality: A primeval desire for battle, an ancient instinct for combat, a bloody blade wielding creature of death, a whirlwind of massacre, all of these words and more could be used to describe Akhara, but what is he like beyond this? Well, he sort of does his own thing in general, allowing his subordinates to do much the same within the limits that he set forth long ago. He is sort of lazy as well, always delegating paperwork that doesn't need him to directly do anything about, to his Lieutenant.

What more? Well, he has a thing for his 3rd seat, always taking her wherever he goes and letting her do pretty much anything she wants, he has actually been waiting for a chance to promote her to Vice-Captaincy, but has yet to find a reason to get rid of his current Lieutenant.

Aside from that he enjoys various types of food and drink, as well as having a tendency to want everyone to be training or beating up criminals and such. It isn't uncommon to hear people fighting from the 11th division's barracks at 2 in the morning because the captain decided to yank people out of bed by their big toes.

Goals: Akhara possesses but a single goal, the elimination of Hollow kind.

Fears: Fears? Akhara knows no fear, well, actually, he does have an irrational fear of iced tea, he is so scared of it that he runs from the room if he even so much hears the words. Sometimes, however, he does attack the liquid if he sees it, slashing and smashing with his sword whatever container it happens to be in.

History: Life as a human was fairly uneventful for Akhara, his mother was attacked by a hollow before he was born, saved by a Shinigami, nothing really out of the ordinary in these times.

He lived an uneventful life, got hit by a car at the age of 23 and ended up in Soul Society shortly after the Shinigami had been reclaimed by the royal guard. It was odd however, for as soon as he arrived in the Rukongai he found that there were openings within the Shino academy and had actually arrived just in time to apply. Why did he apply? Because he had no clue what to do and thought it would be fun.

So he joined the Academy as Soul Society was being rebuilt, learning the new ways of the Shinigami and being bred with a deep sense of justice and responsibility. Of course, having just arrived he was not one of those who were a part of the invasion force against Hueco Mundo, but he heard of it's exploits and decided he wanted to become as strong as them. That was, until he was discarded from the academy due to not having the necessary requirements. See, he had no power from what they could tell, could not even learn any of the simplest Kidou, and all in all was nothing special.

Ten years later, after having lived within the poorest depths of the Rukongai, amongst the most violent of it's peoples, his power awakened. It was in the defense of a young girl, a girl who had done nothing but wander into the depths she had not. At first he had simply attacked with his fists, yet was no match for the men who beat him back with ease and went on tormenting her.

It was as they were about to begin doing unspeakable things to the young girl that his power rushed forth, so much power that he crushed the skull of the man before him with a single blow, a sword materializing in his other hand which he then proceeded to use to dismember the rest of the men. Yet, this was not enough for him, so swiftly he ended the lives of the men only to collapse from such an exertion.

Upon awakening however, he was in the most peculiar of places, the fourth divisions barracks. Apparently the sudden release of his spiritual power had set off a warning light and caused shinigami to come and investigate, upon realizing it was but a mere young man and not something to be alarmed of, the fourth division was called in and he was transported back to their barracks to make sure he was unharmed.

Eventually he was released and inducted into the academy, relearning much of what he had learned previously yet still finding no skill in Kidou. However, the 11th division took note of his strength and singled him out in his final year to become one of their members.

The years passed, he rose through the ranks, and eventually he ascended to the rank of fifth seat. It was upon this ascension that things began to happen. He began going on hunts for Hollow, slaughtering them by the hundreds and sometimes by the thousand if he was teamed up with others. Soon he was going on more and more dangerous missions, hollow hunts mostly, but in greater difficulty as the strengths began to increase and eventually he was being pitted against Menos of the Gillian type.

Gillian type menos? For a fifth seat Shinigami? Yes, an oddity, and yet someone who's physical power was so great that he could take on a Gillian was quite useful, so useful in fact that he was chosen to be in the group lead by the Vice-Captain (Of the time) to attack a group of Gillian who were causing massive amounts of destruction in a part of the world where large amounts of spiritually aware people existed.

The thing is, why was he capable of doing this? Because of the manner in which his Zanpakutou took form. It was constantly released, released because of his great spiritual pressure, and as such it was so much easier to perform the techniques of which he used to increase his power, so even in the face of a loss he was able to continue fighting simply by using a single technique.

So the advancement went on, his skill and power increased and eventually he reached the rank of third, for the previous third had been killed in a battle with a group of Menos who had caught them off guard.

As the third seat he became renowned for his sheer physical power, quite capable of overpowering most anyone else in the division by sheer brute force, barring the captain and the Lieutenant, although it wouldn't be long in the future that he would be able to easily overpower the latter.

As the third seat he did this and that, taking on various hollows and other enemies of the Shinigami until it came time for the Royal Guard to return. And so, two hundred and thirty years after the reign began, the reign ended, and new captains were to be chosen. Akhara was one of them.

Why was he chosen over the Lieutenant? Because the Lieutenant was not as powerful, nor was he physically capable of staying in combat for long periods of time. He had the power to be a Lieutenant, and knew what he was doing...sort of, and that was why he had kept his position. So Akhara was promoted in favor, the overwhelming strength enough to give him credit, and his strong sense of justice a good promotion of his ideals.

As Captain he has elected to take upon various tasks, specifically the elimination of hollows and the training of the finest combat experts. He has also become quite fond of his third seat, a young girl by the name of Alice who appears no more than seven years at best, even taking to walking around with her on his back and essentially allowing her to boss around even his lieutenant whom he doesn't much like but keeps around so he can shove all the paperwork and such upon him.

Combat Info

Kidou: N/A

Techniques:

  • Atlas: A technique that is not a technique, but rather Akhara's state of being. Akhara's physical strength and stamina are greater than that of what could be considered the average captain, much greater in fact for his stamina is 140% that of the average captain, and his strength an even greater 150%. This however comes at a cost, he possesses no ability with Kidou and his speed is little more than half of the average captain.

  • Assaku (Pressure):
    The simplest use of a Shinigami's reiatsu when they have enough to throw around, this technique allows a Shinigami to temporarily boost the power of their next technique by roughly 25% by sacrificing 10% of their overall energy by focusing all their reiatsu into a large boost around their body.

  • Ikaku (Intimidation):
    The first thing most Shinigami try to do once their reiatsu is powerful enough, this allows the user to focus their reiatsu around themselves and summon forth a giant image around themselves that takes a personalised form for each person who uses it. This also boosts the next attack the Shinigami makes by 50% but also uses up 25% of their current reiatsu. This cannot be used in succession with Pressure.

  • Kikou (Armour):
    By employing a temporary barrier of reiatsu around the user's entire body for a short time the one who does so is able to stop weak attacks similar to an Arrancar's Hierro. However this technique is not necessarily as useful as Hierro as a character cannot cast kidou whilst this is active and it must be activated.

  • Shouheki (Barrier):
    A powerful barrier that can be employed by a Captain-Class character by focusing and projecting their reiatsu into a solid wall up to five metres from their body in order to stop or weaken powerful attacks. Kidou (or equivalent techniques) of rank 50 or below are stopped dead by this technique, but it can only be employed no more than five times per thread.

  • Assaimoku (Crushing Glance):
    Only usable by Captain-Rank or higher Shinigami, this technique allows the user to temporarily stun any character of a lower rank (or equivalent) for one post and then lessen their power for a further two posts by turning the full brunt of their reiatsu onto them. The character who uses this cannot make an attack for one post either as all of their focus is in crushing the other with their reiatsu.



Strengths: Fighting like a titan, a creature of myth, Akhara relies on sheer brute force and massive reserves of stamina. Both his physical strength and stamina are at some of the highest levels throughout the entire Gotei 13.

Weaknesses: One word; Kidou. Akhara has no skill for Kidou whatsoever, not even that of the lowest levels is he able to perform. Why? Nobody knows, but that's just how it is. Other than that, speed, plain awful, for a captain level Shinigami his speed is only half that what would be considered acceptable.

A third weakness portrays itself in Akhara's Bankai, if it is released for extended amounts of time, due to the fact his strength is traded out for speed, his being can be damaged, causing possibly broken bones, even further damage and making him incapable of using techniques if used beyond a period of ten posts.

Combat Style: Akhara fights using his great strength and stamina, dealing crippling blows whilst allowing his ability to last in a fight and take great hits to wear down an opponent.

Zanpakutou Info

Zanpakutou Name: Bloodied Blade
Sealed Zanpakutou: N/A
Spirit Name: Kyōdo

Spirit Appearance:


Spirit Personality: There isn't much of a personality for the spirit of Akhara's Zanpakutou, honestly there isn't much more to it than a primordial lust for battle and a never ending want for combat. The name is about all that Akhara has other than their shared feelings for combat and as such there isn't much in the way these two have for conversation words wise.

Shikai Release Phrase: N/A
Shikai Appearance: Akhara possesses a constant release Zanpakutou, as such he is often seen constantly carrying around a large sword about two feet wide and five feet long, curving to a point for the last foot.
Shikai Abilities:

  • Steel Skin: An ability that, in essence, hardens Akhara's skin to an equivalent of steel. This can be used to increase offensive ability or used as a defensive maneuver. Either way it lasts for five posts and requires a two post cooldown before the next usage.

  • Bloody Blade: A technique that when used allows the user to ignore all physical defense, leaving said defense unharmed, to attack at the very essence of a being. This means that anyone who relies on armour, or highly strong skin will have their soul cut as if the defense were not there. Of course, reiatsu based defenses and others that are similar can be used to block this with ease, in which case it becomes a battle of strength like any normal battle.

  • Shōjun Kyōdo: A technique designed to increase Akhara's strength even further. This converts 10% of the users total reiatsu to sheer physical strength, increasing Akhara's strength which is already 150% of the average captain to further heights. This technique is only usable five times within a single topic, and has a cool down of two posts between usages. It does not stack.


Bankai Release Phrase: Eternal blood lust, bare my blade, death be upon thee, fools of kinkade.
Bankai Appearance: Akhara's Bankai is peculiar, in the fact that what was once a sword now transforms into a pair of gauntlets with large blade like claws. The claws are actually as long as his sword had been before, and as such he now possesses ten sword sized items to slice and dice with.

Bankai Abilities:

  • Titanic Death God: A Bankai ability that converts twenty-five percent of the users total reiatsu into physical power. This increases said physical power by twenty-five percent that of the average Shinigami captain, making those who are already superiorly strong, even stronger and replacing the loss of strength from the release of the Bankai. This lasts for four posts and must have a space of four posts without use before another usage can happen.

  • Hyperion's Way: This is not so much an ability, but rather a transfer in ones state of being. Upon activation of his Bankai, Akhara's standard high strength and high stamina with the ability to take hits changes. How? Well, in essence his strength is traded out for speed of equal amount, essentially switching the two.

  • Khaos' Enfolded: A peculiar ability, one that is designed specifically for leveling, an oddity within Akhara's repetoir of techniques. In essence this ability simply takes Akhara's strength and speed, combines the two, then separates them into two equal parts. This lasts until Akhara decides to release it, or his Bankai returns to Shikai.
Edited by Panic, Apr 13 2011, 08:47 AM.
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Not sure if you are finished, but you need another viable weakness than just Kidou.

It appears your speed is bad, so I would say that your speed just plain is AWFUL, (or maybe pratically non-existent.) for a Captain level to counter the extreme defense and strength.

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Yeah, woops, forgot to add that, but yeah, I am of course done
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Hmmm, not sure I like Hyperion Way since going from 1.5x strength to 1.5x speed would be weird since his body wouldn't be used to it so unless you add in some kind of Ichigo-bones-creaking-after-extended-use thing :/

Khaos' Enfolded just levels out those two? Effectively meaning his only weakness is a lack of reiatsu attacks as his speed and strength both only become 1x? Meh, I suppose.
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I added in the weakness of his Bankai under weaknesses
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OK yeah I can write off on this, though if Seraph sees issues he can de-approve... like normal xD

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