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| 青Koshiro Hirono | Apr 9 2011, 05:24 PM Post #1 |
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Shinigami Template General Name:Hirono, Koshiro Nickname: None unless other person knew him in Life In such a case Miburo Koshiro. Age:Born in the mid 1500's, Killed at the age of 28 never aged visibly afterwards. Gender:Male Division: 11th Rank: Fukutaicho Description Height: 5ft 13 inches Weight: 106lbs note additional gear 146lbs while wearing makeshift armor. Hair: Black, Usually extremely shaggy when not held up by anything, Has a overly gritty look to it and clearly hasn't been washed or taken care of beyond cutting shorter occasionally. Eyes: Hazel and In-set into his skull with wide edges giving him a rather evil looking face. Once one can get past the way they look they have a constant lost expression burn into them. Though on occasion they take on a clear reflection of his state of mind which can vary depending on what happens to him. Appearance:Young and Evil looking at birth, due to having been lost in Hueco Mundo by Seireitei during their retreat he has no proper grooming or cleanliness. While like any other Shinigami he wears the typical uniform. His however is in tattered pieces to the point that he has visibly attempted repairs to it. The man in the clothing however is often hunched over his Zanpakutou swinging raggedly on his left side looking as if about to fall apart as well. The lack of sun and the sand of Hueco Mundo leaves his skin pale and dingy from the dirt clinging to it. Even so his face manages to keep a blank look about it when clearly not doing anything, but usually it ends up scowling due to how his eyes look even when being friendly.Even with the tired and uncouth looks about him his body is covered in many places with battle scars both from his life, and Shinigami existence each deep and at times painful causing him problems. Clothing: Pretty much a beyond repair Shinigami uniform repaired with Arrancar outfits and anything else he could find in a haphazardly way. Due to the constant trudging across Hueco Mundo the color of the uniform and the patches is faded and a brown black and a light brown like color with visible threads all over it. Picture:None Personal Personality: Despite his original position as a Shinigami he doesn't really care about fighting for the sake of fighting. A down to earth person who has a dry sense of humor usually and a affluence to not care about his image. Even with his rather dull mannerisms that are archaic at best he's friendly most of the time and can get along with anything. When pushed to his limits by others though he has been documented to snap and go on a uncontrolled rampage to simply shut up the person, except in a few cases to kill him for being to annoying. While such a mental defect is rarely shown unless forced out he can be annoying himself as he sleeps late and get easily lost, and usually falls for pranks unknowingly. In combat he remains calm and focuses on the task at hand, making him all the more deadlier though he usually has a laid back approach to those weaker than him. Fighting him without using his Techniques is very much like fighting a written training manual though the yelling and anger of women tend to make him act irrationally. Leading to interesting and possibly comedic attempts to escape no one is sure why though. Goals:None really he has no idea what happened to him or any motivation to really care to right the situation. He will work with anything as long as it doesn't mean he becomes their dinner or training dummy. Fears:Women who attacks and yells at him, for the simple fact it was those two things that got him killed as a human.Other fears are mostly insecurities about himself and getting more lost than he may already be though they don't really hinder him. History:Born during the Sengoku era a time of much bloodshed and death.Like many humans in the era he was raised for both practicallity and combat. Having been born of a Samurai lineage though he was also taught how to read and write though neither interested him much when forced to do.For his entire early life he was trained in everything from ceremony to the way of combat and even life. Beginning with being the final successor of the Tenchi sword style. At least until he himself had a child of his own. As the fires of the Sengoku spread to Kyoto his home he started to fight back against the uprising bandits. The fame he gained spread through his home town and by the age of 13 he had enlisted in Tokugawa Leyasu's army as a foot-soldier. However by the end of the Sengoku he had risen to moderate fame in Leyasu's service being recognized officially as a honorable Samurai despite previous lineage. As the fires of the Sengoku died down and many including Koshiro went back home the short peace would only reign for a awhile as black ships begin appearing on the horizon. Samurai loyal to Tokugawa where rounded up and began preparing for another war. Koshiro having been on was stationed with many of the now famous Shinsengumi officially and fought along side the Miburo. The Hitokiri rallied together by the changing factions and the Chosu paired off with the Tokugawa supporters as the fires begin to spread again across Japan. During the period Koshiro famed for his service under Tokugawa fought off many attempts to set fire to the imperial palace and protect the town of Mibu. His skill turning many opponents quickly into bleeding wretches and lifeless dolls even then however he still managed to find companionship and eventually was married. The woman he married however turned out to be a Chosu spy and with a loud scream and a vicious attack in the night ended Koshiro's life during the mid point of the Bakumatsu wars. While finding himself dead and oddly enough rather confused as to why it wouldn't be until 10 years later that a Shinigami found him and sent him to Rukongai Red Zone district 80. However the chaotic and constant fighting and murder in district 80 starts to get on his nerves. With a quick chance of fate he moves out of the district and settles down in one closer to Seireitei. While pretty much going about his life afterwards despite continuing to practice his art it isn't until he collapses in front of one of the gates into the court of pure souls. From a unprecedented and unexpected need for food which he had ignored causing him to be discovered solely by accident. Instead of being left where he was he was quickly taken to a local Rukongai clinic to rest and given food before being left alone. The confusion of being hungry while dead wracks Koshiro's nerves and after he eats he snaps and destroys a large portion of the building in a blind rage of being annoyed. This is the first documented case of his temper and it along with him where quickly shipped off to the Shinigami academy. Where he becomes a Shinigami and passes everything but Kidou having given up on bothering since the most basic always backfired. Though his combat ability with sword and hands allowed him to become a member of squad 11. After serving for awhile as a 3rd seat he is promoted to Fukutaicho and it is during the first Soul Society and Hueco Mundo war that despite fighting with all his might ends up left behind after everyone else retreats leaving him alone in the desert of Hueco Mundo.After awhile though he is retrieved from the barren wasteland after wandering about for three or four days. Returning to his usual duties as a Fukutaicho after getting back to Seireitei. Combat Info Kidou:None Techniques:Shunpo: high speed movement Koshiro can only use it for 2 posts before having to rest. Can reuse after 1 post passes. Tenchi: Flying Black Crow; A Techniques that utilizes ones inner power to allow them to move in a manner much like Shunpo though but for less versatility can only go in a straight line. As before its only able to go in one direction and is somewhat slower about 10% slower. Tenchi:Ogre Hushing; A Technique of using 100% of the body's force and strength to attack in a quick link the shoulder and then the midsection in a follow up secondary slash. Tenchi:Man-eating Tempest; A Technique unique in that the blade depending on length will have to be gripped by the blade itself. The first swing is towards the eyes to use ones own blood to blind them in the case of having to grip the actual blade. While the next two attacks are made towards the groin and heart. Tenchi: Shadow Blade; A offshoot of the Tenchi style's first Ougi the blade is moved quickly from the sheath with a heavy yet quick step in to make the blade vanish as it moves towards its target seemingly before the user makes his way quickly behind a opponent and stabs them through the spine. For clarification the first part is merely a distraction for him to get behind the enemy. Tenchi: First Ougi Heaven's Cry; Instead of just drawing the blade and stepping in wards the blade is drawn while moving forwards Sending the user towards the enemy the blade aimed for the right lung. If the first strike is successful the next is a heavy slash outwards before being brought back around to re-enter the gaping wound and cut through the body. Tenchi: Second Ougi Earth's Roar; Essentially the same as Ogre Hushing but highly dangerous as the use of Earth's Roar forces the body to go beyond is limits temporarily causing severe damage to the user with a high chance at being maimed by the technique forever. Tenchi: Final Ougi Heaven and Earth; The Use of Heaven's Cry and Earth's Roar melded the technique once used cannot be used again for 2 threads due to the heavy strain the body of the user would incur from using. A further increase chance of permanent damage to the body. Strengths:Pretty much trained from birth till now in the way of the sword, Enhanced strength, Speed and capability in hand to hand fighting. Weaknesses:The inability or care to learn Kidou, means those who do use it can possibly corner him. Poor sensing ability cannot properly detect ranged attacks from a distance. Occasional debilitating pain from old wounds makes it hard from him to move about or fight back usually on set by fighting for longer than 7 posts, intense heat or intense cold.His Endurance while moderately high degrades when pushed for to long in combat resulting in a sharp drop after his limit of fighting full strength is passed leaving him at about 40% the original. Combat Style:Strong and fast attacks to make up for his inability to fight for overly extended periods of time.The attacks are aimed at the common weak points in creatures to bring them down quicker. Zanpakutou Info Zanpakutou Name:Hanazuki Sealed Zanpakutou: None Spirit Name: Ceri Hanazuki Spirit Appearance:The Zanpakutou inner world takes on the form of a field of flowers with feathers floating through it usually that stretches on endlessly. The spirit itself takes the form of a Crow a Massive black crow with shining red grey eyes and wind like Reiatsu covering its body that causes the entire inner world to have a heavy breeze. Spirit Personality:A ever changing creature it has full intelligence of a human and its thoughts and purposes are always in a state of shifting. Dwelling on many philosophies and questions towards its creator and then changing to a cruel vicious harbinger towards the entire spirit world it lives in.No real set personality aside from the fact it like its creator has many of the same problems mentally when annoyed or angered. Shikai Release Phrase:None Shikai Appearance:A normal looking Katana that is normal size shape and weight. It was never sealed and stays as is constantly. Shikai Abilities: Has a Invisible blade covering the actual blade that's a foot longer than the actual weapon, doesn't cut anything unless the blade is being swung or thrust-ed at a opponent. When used from afar the blade emits a blade of wind like Reiatsu signified by floating leaves and feathers. Bankai Release Phrase:Storming Winds Bankai Appearance: The Katana becomes shorter and becomes two Wakizashi the second hidden on the base of the sheath. Bankai Abilities: Despite the apparent size of the blades they retain the original length of the Katana due to the invisible blade covering the blade as before it doesn't do anything except when being swung or thrust-ed. Like the original it also emits the same wind blade though it moves at a faster speed. Additional Information: The Invisible Blade can be seen when the blade is moved and when striking, And the blade of wind that is released is at initial stage 60mph with half the actual sword swing damage wise. At Bankai stage the Invisible Blade is less coherent even if seen via the same manners as before. With the blade of wind moving at speeds of 130mph with a force equal to the swing of the sword. Edited by Koshiro Hirono, Apr 11 2011, 04:38 PM.
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| 頭 Seraph | Apr 10 2011, 08:11 AM Post #2 |
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Hmmm I'll let Ten rule on this one. |
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| 青Koshiro Hirono | Apr 10 2011, 12:05 PM Post #3 |
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Sounds fine by me whats your opinion anyways? |
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| 頭 Tenken | Apr 10 2011, 02:37 PM Post #4 |
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Before I start, so he was a Fukutaichou but now he's a Rogue? Because Rogues are staff-appointed only :/ |
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| 青Koshiro Hirono | Apr 10 2011, 04:04 PM Post #5 |
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Not really rouge just stuck there more or less. But final say is yours I suppose. |
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| 頭 Tenken | Apr 10 2011, 04:31 PM Post #6 |
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Huh? Well the war happened years ago, like a few decades or so so he would have returned to Soul Society by then I would imagine. So do you want him as the 11th VC or not? |
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| 青Koshiro Hirono | Apr 10 2011, 04:41 PM Post #7 |
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Sure I guess can't hurt I'll fix it right quick for a more flexible history. |
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| 頭 Tenken | Apr 11 2011, 12:51 PM Post #8 |
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OK now: -So you definitely can't fight for longer than 7 posts? As long as you don't abuse that then ok. -Also you need to suck in at least one level since you're only a VC: you have good at H2H, swordsmanship, speed and physical defense, so you need to be bad at at least one of them. -Is Flying Black Crow limited like your Shunpo is? -So Shadow Blade is basically Senka? -Your invisible blade... I think it needs some way of being detectable... Also how powerful is the blade of wind? |
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| 青Koshiro Hirono | Apr 11 2011, 04:39 PM Post #9 |
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Should be fixed and such |
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| 頭 Tenken | Apr 13 2011, 08:28 AM Post #10 |
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Congratulations! Your character has been accepted and is being spirited away by a Hell Butterfly. Your Shinigami application is now accepted and will be placed in the archived forum. This topic has now been resolved, so therefore its closed. This is an automatic message. |
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