For once in my life I do want to feel something you'd call real But I don't think that I've got time for these scars to heal And the days just go by leaving questions in my mind I guess I'll find the answers some day in another life
General Name: Ikari Doki Nickname: Ikari~kun, Ikari~nii or nii~sama. Mr. Lonely, Weeping Devil. Age: 425 He looks 25 Gender: Male Numero: Cuarto Rank: Espada
Description Height: 6'1" Weight: 190 Hair: Long and spiky with a reddish orange color. Eyes: Black Appearance: Ikari is very muscular and his hair is a red Orange color. He has a very depressing look on his face aspect for when he gets happy which is very rare. Also his mask is one the left side of his face, his mask takes the form of a jaw and is placed there as well as forming around his eye but it doesn't cover it but it covers his eyebrow. His eyes are like normal eyes his pupil are black but other then that they look normal. Ikari has broad shoulders and muscular calf muscles and forearms he has a very well toned body and slim and bulky figure. Clothing: Ikari has a brown head band that circles around his whole forehead and keeps his hair pent up a little. He doesn't really like wearing the stander arrancar uniform much but will if he has to. But he dose wear the pants but it is covered up by something which ill explain later on. Also his mask is one the left side of his face, his mask takes the form of a jaw and is placed there as well as forming around his eye but it doesn't cover it but it covers his eye brow. He wears a brown and sleeves shirt with a large collar and open at the chest area his hole is located where his heart is there for he has no heart but is still some how able to live with out because his organs can somehow still work with out it as if it was an imaginary heart still there. He doesn't exactly know how it works. His arrancar hole is covered up by his shirt. He has very muscular looking arms and legs his pants are white and covered with a brown and black sash they have black braces around the pants legs and 2 around his waist that look like belts. He has a brown cape or poncho like blanket he wears as well.
The pants them self are the standard arrancar pants. During battle he takes the cape off if he gets serious. His shoes are brown and black and looks like regular boots the leg part of the boots are hidden underneath his pants. When his soul is split in two 1 is a dog while the other is him, he still looks the same. He named the dog or second half of himself Baito, Baito can also talk. As Well as turn into a dog Baito can be a Arrancar person he has long green hair that comes to his neck and overlaps the right side of his face. And small doggy ears as well as having his right side of his face being covered by mask he has green eyes and a Arrancar robe that is to big for him he hides his sword in his sleeves. Ikari keeps his sword on the left side of his waist. When they fuse back together and Baito becomes a weapon he takes the form of a second katana. And when they go into resurrection Baito docent take the form of a weapon but a second conscience of Ikari. Tattoo: His Tattoo is located on his left arm forearm. Picture:
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Ikari
Baito
Credit for The Human Picture Of Baito Goes To TetsuyaZ
Personal Personality: Ikari is what has a minor bi polar disorder and depression disorder. Sometimes hes a little happy and cheerful and sometimes hes really depressed. He also gets blood thirsty when angry or after having a really good fight. When he is happy he tends to talk to people more and tends to goof around and crack jokes every now and then. In a fight if Ikari's opponent isn't strong he will kid with them or wont take them seriously. When he is depressed he tends to not care what he kills or when he kills as long as he does kill to get something of his mind. And he does this also to stop remembering his past.
Ikari can also remember back to when he was a human (will explain in history) Which gives him deep emotional scars and explains why he has distaste for humans, shignimai, and Quincy. When Ikari is bloodthirsty he is pretty demonic a dark aura surrounds him and his opponent that shows just strong how strong his blood lust is. He will not stop attacking his opponent unless Baito calms him down. Baito's personality is allot like Ikari's but he is more cheerful most of the time when in the side he is just as depressed and lonely as Ikari and only puts up a cheerful act in order to make Ikari happy, since they are from the same soul Ikari knows this and also try's to put up a cheerful act sometimes in order to cheer Baito up.
They both appreciate the thought of how each other feels but deep down it makes them a little more depressed and they know it. Making it seem as if they where not even from the same soul at sometimes making them feel even more lonely. He usually is only happy when talking with someone or playing with or reading to Baito. When Baito and Ikari go into resurrection they are pretty much the same accept it is easier for ikari to get blood thirsty faster. Also Baito doesn't turn into a weapon hes actually just becomes a second personality of Ikari and helps to keep Ikari from becoming blood thirsty but he becomes bloodthirsty as well if Ikari becomes blood thirsty and ikari has been bloodthirsty for to long AKA more then 5 post. Baito also helps Ikari to stay focused and keeps him from clouding his judgment in a fight on weather or not to kill someone. Ikari also hates remembering his real parents and when he dose he becomes Very angry or depressed. But Baito usually calms him down.
Also Ikari also likes it when Baito uses his nicknames for him which are Ikari~Nii meaning Big brother or Nii~Sama meaning Master big brother. Baito also has a very childish voice. (think of Fuuta's from Katekyo Hitman Reborn.) And he tends to play around with girls calling them perverted names. He also can be very serious at times. But when not serious or depressed which he usually isn't he tends to be very childish and sometimes disregards what people say. His worst fears are being alone Again because it reminds him off his past and what happened, such as his abusing parents and his adoptive mother and dog dieing. Letting Baito die because of Baito dies he will be alone and a part of him will begone.
Ikari's Aspect of Death is Loneliness.
A few more facts
Habits:
Sighing~He tends to sigh allot. But usually when he is bored or he doesn't feel like doing something.
Playing With Baito~He tends to play with his dog (split part of his soul) which he named Baito.
Likes:
Favorite Color |Green~ because green is the color of his adoptive moms eyes and the color reminds hm off her. It also the color of Baito's eyes and hair.
Reading Books~ He Enjoys reading it takes his mind of things, he also reads to Baito.
He also enjoy training with Baito~ Because it takes his mind of things and it allows them to spend some quality time together.
Arrancar Dog/ Baito~ his dog which is the other part of his soul when he splits in two. His relation ship to his dog/half soul is explained in his personality.
His leader~Ikari always looks up to a strong leader. And his leader is the one that took him in when he had no where else to go or no one.
Goals: To Full fell his rulers wishes,~because his rules is the one that took him and Baito on so that they could be part of the group and wont be as lonely. And because of this he wants to make his ruler proud. To become stronger~ so he can force people to like him if they don't do it out of free will.
Fears: Being alone Again. ~ because it reminds him off his past and what happened, such as his abusing parents and his adoptive mother and dog dieing.
Letting Baito die. ~ Because of Baito dies he will be alone and a part of him will latterly begone.
His master dieing. ~ because he is the one that took him in. And gave him a home and a place to stay.
History:
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Birth/ Human life:
When Ikari was born he had a very strong and demonic spiritual pressure that caused all around him to get slowly ill. When doctors who just so happened to be Quincy first discovered that he was making everyone ill they wanted to kill him but his parents wouldn't allow it. They asked why but the Quincy only said this "He will kill you if you don't kill him" His parents weren't spiritually aware so they didn't know what was going on and why they would want to kill him. They noticed 5 years and 3 months later after he was born that he was making them sick when they started having heart problems and they where getting breathing problems as well as aging faster and suffering minor brain damage. Also because of this they began to Ikari and called him a monster, a bad omen and a curse from hell, a freak of nature. However they didn't give him to the Quincy or tried to kill him. They treated him badly and took care of him very poorly and hardly at all as well as hardly fed him. They constantly both physically and verbally abused him when they felt like they where getting more ill him a monster and told them it was all his fault. Ikari's personality began to snap, he began to get more and more depressed. It was as though he never experienced happiness once. His parents never told him that they loved hm not once. They never hugged him or held his hand they never tucked him at night or even tucked him in good night. His dad being the worst out of both the parents hit him and whipped him every day for the slightest of mistakes or slightest trouble he got in. His dad spit on him, literally and would tell Ikari that he hated and despised him. Ikari hated his parents with much rage, then one day his dad said he should have just let the doctors kill him, Ikari was heart broken but as much as he thought he should he was a little happy a little happy that his parents didn't let them kill him.
Even though he didn't like his life he figured it was better then nothing. Two years later Ikari's mom died of an extremely bad heart problem and weak bones even thought she was only 32 years old, the Quincy doctors most likely assumed it was because of his reistu. His dad then asked the doctors what was going on and demanded to know why his son was killing them and why they wanted to kill him, so the doctors told him. His dad blamed Ikari and whipped him and abused him more and more, he would hit him with anything he could fine pieces of wood, pots, pans, his shoes, anything and if he couldn't find anything he would punch him in the stomach repeatedly or smack him. Ikari would cry and hold his stomach in pain, his heart began to grow with sadness and anger. During this time Ikari would mostly stay in dark corners he would sit there and mumble to himself how he wished his dad would die but he didn't really mean it he was just mad and sad but the truth was he didn't mind being beaten or abused as much because even though he was slowly killing them they still took care of him even if it was only a little bit. Deep down he knew his parents loved him but where just scared and maybe mad at him. Ikari was a little happy at this time but then everything would soon change.
His dad wanted to use Ikari as a weapon, the Quincy offered Ikari's dad a lot of money to kill Ikari and to do surgery on his body to try to see what was making his reistu so deadly, then they where going to take it and mix it with there own power to make them stronger. Ikari's dad with a heartfelt of greed and took the money, Ikari was taken by the Quincy and constant test was run on him day and night but it did nothing it just made Ikari angry and that made him stronger. But he didn't care as long as it made his dad happy, he figured it was the least he could do for killing his own mother. However the testing grew dangerous and it began to kill the Quincy, so they decided to kill him. Then one day when they where about to kill him they discussed it in front of the room he was in thinking he was sleep; he heard what they said and he went berserk he grabbed one of there knifes and with out knowing it focused his reistu through it. He stabbed one of them and unknowingly released a large amount of his reistu while doing so. It created a large blast which destroyed everything around him including the Quincy. As he went back home weakened, tired and hungry he found that his dad no longer lived there. He then went to the neighbors and asked where his dad was, then after months of searching and living on his own he found his dad. His dad was shocked that he was still alive, but his dad didn't care as long as he had his money, his dad wouldn't even let him in so Ikari would sit outside of his house and would eat the scraps of the food his dad threw away. He figured it was better then nothing.
Then one day as some of his fathers rich new gambling/criminal friends came over they asked why he was sitting out said his dad simply replied it wasn't important and not to get close to him.Then his dad and his gambling friends had an argument over some money that his dad owed them. They where about to kill him but Ikari heard the argument they where having and heard them saying "get read to die!" Ikari rushed in he saw them about to swing and cut his dads head of with a katana. Ikari screamed, his screams echoed of the wall and his reistu went crazy. Then as the man with the katana swung everything began to get around the people began to get heavier. His resitu got bigger and started to expand to the people trying to kill his dad. All he wished for was for those people to die and not to hurt his dad. His resitu become visible to him only, it was frightening to him, it was red and took the form of a demon like face with horns and black eyes bleeding dark red lines of reistu that resemble a person crying. Then the reistu rapped around the people trying to kill his dad and they began to rot and turn to dust. After which Ikari's dad was amazed and thank full and took him back in, but he was still afraid and his feeling of hate mixed with his feelings of fright and confused him and it just made him hate Ikari more so he still abused an treated Ikari badly but Ikari didn't care as long as his dad took him back in because to Ikari that meant he loved him. Then after awhile Ikari's dad had started to get ideas into manipulating Ikari, he would take Ikari with him and use Ikari to kill people that he owed money to. Ikari started to become bloodthirsty as well as crazy, sure he was sad for killing all those people but he didn't care as long as his dad was smiling even if it was when he was laughing like a homicidal maniac. Ikari's power was getting stronger and stronger by the day so his dad usually stayed far back away from him. Soon Ikari and his dad began to come the richest people in town and everyone feared Ikari and had started rumors about him being a demon, but he didn't care he had been called names all his life this was nothing to him.
A few years and some months later once Ikari was coming home for getting food for his dad he had found out his dad had fallen ill just like his mother. Ikari was also sad but happy because his dad wouldn't abuse him anymore but sad because his only family left was dieing. Ikari cursed himself he hated himself he wanted to die. He ran outside then he found a puppy. He took the dog into his house in attempt to cheer his dad up. His dad looked at Ikari with rage and grabbed the puppy by its neck squeezing it and squeezing it until it almost died. Ikari screamed for him to stop and grabbed him arm and tried to stop him. But his dad wouldn't loosen his grip. Ikari snapped he went crazy and grabbed a knife. His dad looked at him with a look of hatred.
Ikari then took the knife and stabbed him repeatedly. As the puppy fail and his dads grip faded along with his life. Ikari screamed he was sorry to his dad. And his dad said in a very hateful but soft tone that he was the worst son ever and that he should have let the Quincy's kill him when they had the chance. With that being said from his dad Ikari snapped. He then burst into tears hugging his dog. His dog licked his cheek and was great full for Ikari saving him. Soon the people of the village came and saw what he did they called him a monster and kicked him along with his dog out of the village. He wandered for years to come not having a place or home stealing to survive to live he had no one and no family he was depressed he attempted to kill himself multiple times but couldn't go threw with it he was to scared. Even thought he didn't like his life he figured it wasn't worth killing himself over it. When he left home he took his dog and his dads cloth favorite brown.
human death:
2 years later Ikari was now 10 he was wandering and stilling to survive. He killed any type of animal he could to eat, he stool any thing that could help him live anything. This included water, food and the brown cloak he had taken from his house when he killed his dad. He traveled for a whole years threw the desert with his dog they where caught in constant sand storms and had many mirages and then one day they saw a village they thought it was a mirages it was very far away so all he could see is the tip of the village statue. And finally after a whole year of walking threw the desert they had finally come along another village. Ikari then felt re leaved that he found another village. After going into the village people called him scum and said he wasn't worth helping so they treated him just like his old village. Then one day while trying to still food from a lady's house he was stooped and hit in the head by a kendo stick, he was knocked out. When he awoke he saw a beautiful lady holding a knife he wasn't scared at this point in his life he was ready to die he didn't care about anything or anyone at least not anymore accept his dog.
The young lady smiled and asked why he was stealing from her and why he did it, after a while he told her the lady was touched by his story and wanted to do all she could to help, so she took him in and then months later she decided that she would adopt him. She was very kind and nice. After talking to Ikari she looked at him with a big smile and said, "since both of you parents are gone why don't you become my son." Ikari's eyes widened with hope and joy as he simply nodded in agreement he was so happy that some one was nice enough to take him in even thought he had told her that he even killed his own family. She didn't care and she wasn't scared of him. She looked very lovely, and treated Ikari with all the love in the world, she taught him everything even how to fight. It just so happened that she was a kendo instructor and the best one in the village. Then one day Ikari's powers started to become stronger and he began to see spirits he began to get along with them and even made a new friend then person was a shiginami sure he was slowly killing everyone that he was around but he had learned to control it to some extent where it wouldn't kill them as fast it normally would. But as for the shiginami It was against the rules for him to be friends with Ikari since he wasn't a spirit, but after sometime they became friends anyway after a while Ikari told his mom that he could see spirit. She simply nodded and said "i know i can see them to, Ive always known that uve had a deadly reistu and that you would eventually see spirits but i loved you and took you in anyway. From the 1st time i saw you, because i can see them to as well as your dog". She put a smile on her face and rubbed his head softly. To him Ikari was the most important thing in the world and for Ikari she was, he loved her with all of his heart. He always wanted to be with her forever and ever.
Ikari was re leaved he wondered why his mom wasn't being affected by his powers. She then taught him about shiginami and soul society. And how she knew about it even though she was only human. It was because she also knew that shiginami and it was because she was his wife. He had died years before Ikari even came to the village he was killed in a house fire protecting Ikari's adoptive mom, when he was sent to soul society he some how still kept all of his memories, and asked to be put in the human world in that village. And because of his strong spiritual pressure and being around his wife also known as Kaley Doki, Ikari soon adopted her last name and disregarded his name he was no longer a member of the Kurnai family. Ikari was happy very happy for the 1st time in his life. But soon that all changed 15 years later when a hollow attacked him and his mom one night on a way from the store. His mom fought back bravely and was extremely injured she couldn't move Ikari tried to help and his dog rushed and bit the hollow on his mask. Ikari was scared he didn't know what to do. Then the hollow smacked Baito away and killed him Ikari was sad he grew angry. Then the his shiginami friend arrived an tried to fight the hollow but the hollow was to strong, so he ran and left Ikari and his mom to die. Ikari hated him for that and got angrier and his power began to manifest.
He shot a blast of reistu at the hollow nearly killing it. Then he shot another blast as the hollow used a cero it created a big blast killing his mom and the hollow as well as the shingnami and him. Soon Ikari became a spirit and wander the world looking for a new home he was then attacked by another hollow and met another shignami, at the same time The hollow him and the shiginami fought he killed the hollow but the Shignami feared him and thought that he was some type of evil spirit, so the shiginami attempted to kill, Ikari became depressed and sad he wanted to kill the shiginami, so with a quick move he yanked out his chain. His reistu fluctuated and then he turned into a hollow turned into a hollow.
hollow life:
After becoming a hollow Ikari fought and killed the shignami after a long and tiresome battle they where matched almost blow for blow. Ikari broke the shignami's arm and disarmed him of his sword then as he tossed the shignami in the air he gazed at him with his pure black eyes of bleed red and his devil like body was frighting it resembled that of a crying red devil, the shignami stared back with fright as his life raced before his eyes, Ikari shot a cero that obliterated the shiginami in one hit and destroyed the landscape and almost the whole village, saddened confused and heart broken he opened a garganta out of pure instinct and went to Hueco Mundo. Then he began to eat hollow after hollows and human after eventually becoming a menous.
Thanks to his spiritual pressure he was a very strong hollow and was very hard to even put a scratch on him during a fight. After becoming a menous he could remember his past as a human and as a hollow because of his strong spiritual pressure. He got more and more depressed. But he steal had a little love left in his heart that reminded him of his mother. Then one day he went to the human world to eat he was tired of eating other menos and when he went to the human world to get something to eat he was tired of eating other menous.
When he went some other menous followed. Once he got there along with some of the other menous they started attacking humans. After which a shignami appeared this shignami was his adoptive mom. Ikari stared at her with eyes of hope and joy but when he lent in to try to hug her she attacked him. He didn't know why but if he ddint fight back she would have killed him so he fought back and used a cero he nearly killed her he was about to go back to Hecodo Mundo but then the other Menous came and tried to eat his adoptive mom he fought them and ate them but when he looked to see if she was OK she was dead she had gotten hit in the cross fire with the battle with the other menous.
He then got even more depressed and went back to Heco Mundo and began to eat other menous to become stronger. He blamed himself for his moms deaths both times. He took his mind of the pain by eating other Menous After which he eventually became a Adjuchas then soon became a Vasto Lordes after which he traveled with other Vasto Lordes who where eventually killed because of his reistu a after which he ate there body's and became even stronger. After a while he eventually ripped of his mask and became a arrancar.
Arrancar:
After becoming Ikari wandered Hueco Mundo the soft and bloodthirsty sand of Huceo Mundo alone and said. After which 200 sad and lonely years later his soul was split in 2, he doesn't know how he just fainted and when he woke up it was a dog licking his cheek that boy then turned into a boy and started to tell him that he was apart and a manifestation of his soul his power had grown so large that it was actually apple to create a second person out of him and then the boy said that they would always be together forever. He became friends with the other half of his soul and they lived peacefully Ikari then came up with a name for him he named him Baito.
But then one they when they went to the human world they where attacked by human and Shiginami Baito was injured Ikari got mad and grabbed Baito and held him tight as his instinct kicked and he said "Sigh Of Relive, Lloron Diablo!". Then his power exploded, he had took on a new appearance and had new skills he instantly knew how to use them and was ready to fight and he fought to kill. He had released for the first time. He nearly killed all the shignami and humanbut as he was fighting them he kept getting more depressed because ever time he went some where someone wanted to kill him. He then entitled his powers Horseman's Crucible.
He then killed of all the human but there where still a few shiginami, after one tried to bind him with a kido spell he got angry and killed them all. When he was done he had killed at least 40 3rd and lower seat ranked Shiginami and a few humans that coulden't control there powers that well, All together all of them where nothing more then rookies and 1 vice captain. After which he returned Huceo Mundo with the shignami's bodes where he laid all the body's down in a big pile. He came out of resurrection and him and Baito began to eat the shiginami's lifeless cold body's and Baito became better. Then he was slowly approached by another arrancar the arrancar saw how many body's he had and was impressed, this arrancar was nothing more then the 4th arrancar.
The arrancar took Ikari became his sensei he then learned how to control his spiritual pressure as well as make it so that his reistu wouldn't affect anyone into he goes into his resurrection. As well as control his resurrection better including his resurrection powers and blood-lust. He even told Ikari what his resurrection resembled. Then one day almost 100-200 years later on a trip to the human world with his arrancar teacher they where attacked by many and Ikari and Baito had no choice but to fight. They won but there teacher was killed. Ikari and them where lonely again. He was then taken in by the 0 Espada and given his teachers rank and now works for the arrancar and arrancar leader and wants to help his master achieve his goals and so that he can be stronger so that he will no longer be alone, however during the time with the 0 Epsada he considered him almost that of his dad, and the one that keeps him from being completely alone again. He fights for him and considers him of great importance in his life including the toddler side that is with him which he considers his little sister. Till this day he fights for the 0 Espada, and his goals. The ones he considers his family and for the place he considers home.
Combat Info Special Ability:
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Name: Cero Bomb Bullet Description: Ikari will start to form a black COLORED cero using his index finger or mouth after which he will compress it and start to spin it. After which it will take the shape of a 1 inch spinning black looking orb. Then he will aim at the opponent after which he will release the cero, the cero however shots out in the shape of that orb. Also leaving a black line stream behind it. When the cero makes contact with the opponent it will instantly expand into a huge 15 meter orb made out of black colored cero and explode.
Techniques: Normal Techniques:
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Cero (Zero): Cero is the most widely known hollow ability due to the fact that it is incredibly easy to perform. Once a Hollow simply learns how to gather its energy, it can fire the blast with varying degrees of power, ranging from trivial to extremely lethal. Cero is the most common hollow ability; but while it is slow, it can also be the most powerful.
Gargantua (Throat): Arrancar and Hollow demonstrate the innate ability to open a portal between their home realm of Hueco Mundo and wherever they desire to travel. Gargantua is a very useful ability in any circumstance where the user may find themselves outmatched, and the ease of use of this ability for those races allows it to be used at will.
Cero Oscuras (Black Zero): The Black Cero is legendary in Hueco Mundo, somewhat of a myth as the ability requires such a great amount of power to wield that it is incredibly rare, often found only in the hands of the most powerful Espada and in the few Vasto Lorde that remain in Hueco Mundo. Given the sheer power of the Black Cero and its potential destructive influence, use of the ability has been forbidden in the palace of Las Noches. This can only be used whilst in Release Form.
Sonido (Sound): Sonido is in essence a replica of the Shunpo used by the strongest Shinigami, and it functions in a very similar manner. By focusing reiatsu along the legs, a sharp burst of motion will occur, propelling the user forth at great speed. While very efficient for moving quickly, Sonido is not ideal for engaging in a large amount of complex maneuvers, as it does not negate the force on the body from moving so quickly.
Gemeros Sonido (Multiple Sound): Nearly as legendary as Utsusemi to the Shinigami, Gemeros Sonido is incredibly rare and while unconfirmed, is rumored to be even superior to Utsusemi in the sheer speed that can be achieved. Operating on the same principle of Sonido, but at a much greater rate, this ability allows the user to make essential visual duplicates of himself, but these duplicates are capable of no significant action aside from distraction. Sujeción (Subjugation): By momentarily increasing their reiatsu output by massive amounts the user is able to boost their next three attacks by 50% as well as doubling the energy output of each of these attacks. This technique also has a secondary aspect to it, in that a large boost of energy will rise up behind the user in a unique form to each user.
Strengths: Speed ~ As an arrancar Ikari has great speed almost that of 1.2x of a captain. However it is not just his legs that are fast, his thinking speed (The rate at which he comes up with battle strategies and analyzing people). The speed at which his moves are produced are also fast. For Ikari one of the most important factors to look out for while facing him in battle is his speed.
Weaknesses: Clumsy/ Forgiving ~ He can be very lazy at time and some slips up or makes a mistake in battle and sometimes allows his opponents to live if he feels pity for them or wants to fight them again in the future.
Bloodlust ~ If he gets blood thirsty he can sometimes slip up or be reckless in battle also he wont take pity on his opponent he can become blood thirsty if his opponent is a good enough fighter. Or if he taste or sees to much blood.
Strength And Defense~ Ikari's physical strength and Defense is that of 4/5's of a normal captains.
Combat Style: Ikari's combat style is mostly close range however he can adjust his fighting style to combat that as far range or mid range if needed. When in Resurreccion his skills are mostly relied on switching between his weapons and moves to weaken the opponent and then finish them off. When fighting he will sometimes rely on kicks, or aerial like moves or spins then delivering a blow to the opponent.
Zanpakutou Info Zanpakutou Name: llorón Diablo (Weeping Devil) Sealed Zanpakutou:
Katana
The top one is Ikari's, the blade is black, and the rest of the sword including the sheath is a dark red. Baito has the same sword but his is the short one at the bottom.
Release Phrase: "Sigh Of Relieve" Resurreccion Appearance: During His Resurrection, he gains a red kanji on the left side of his forehead that means loneliness it is blood red and looks like a tattoo. His hair gets dark red 5 inches shorter and allot more spiky and his mask turns red and surrounds his whole mouth below his noes. The mask looks like that of the bottom part of a knights helmet but red, it has small opening in it that look like lines that allow him to breath. It also filters stuff out like smoke for instance. His whole body turns red as well and looks like it is covered with a slim body of red Armor. He gains long red Talons and a long red Devil tail which he can use to attack with. He can remove the mask over his face at will just by thinking.
When this happens it looks like it is being dissolved and he can also reconstruct it at will. When he goes into Resurrections he also gains two 8 inch devil horns on the top of his hair that are slightly covered by his hair and his hair is shorter as well. the devil horns are located on the left and right side on the to of his hair and are about 2 inches back and away from his head. The horns do not curl like a rams or do they come out the same way a bulls does it looks like a horn that is curved slightly like a crescent moon just not as much. His whole eyes turn pure black and his pupils become red with squiggly lines going threw the black parts of his eyes that look like vein's. Ikari also cry's blood when he uses his ability's but it doesn't effect how much blood he has. (Think of a black and red version of the bakuyugan from naruto.)
His armor also has an imprint of his abs and the bottom of his pants look like he has a cloak around it which just so happens to be a very strong bone type metal that is as lose and free as a piece of plastic, meaning he can move around free in it as if its not even there, his pants are a dark red and are kind of lose. They do down to where his ankles is and a little bit past them. His shoes are red and they look pointy. Also his shoulders look very board because they have a special type of shoulder pad and they have black lines threw it. His neck area has a small pointy piece of armor covering it up that resemble that of a pointy bib. And his belt area has an Design that makes it look like he is wearing a sash it also looks like he has a ruby place on it.
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Resurreccion Abilities: Name of ability: Crisol Jinete (Horseman's Crucible) When Ikari enters his Resurreccion, he gains the ability to grow from his very body any of four special objects to be "wielded". The item that is generated is picked by Ikari, and can be a pair of black and red gauntlets or a sword almost larger than Ikari himself. It could also take the form of two massive black wings on his back, or even a full suit of armor. Despite this being an already fairly odd ability, each of these items allows for access of a unique technique that makes it more formidable by far. Each of the items corresponds with one of the "Horsemen of the Apocalypse" and allows for unique abilities which are as follows.
Resurrecion Techniques:
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Lazy Boy Cero: Being the lazy person that Ikari is; he will try to trap his opponent and or kill him fast. Ikari will use one of his hand to make a black colored cero with red marking on it and fire it at the opponent, the cero's strength is 1.2x a Normal Cero's power. If it hits the cero will instantly expand into a giant 15 meter orb and surround and in trap the opponent inside. After which it will shrink and encase the opponent much like how a person looks if he or she was trapped in 'Bakudo #9 Geki .' But covered in black instead of red. In order for the opponent to get out they will have to destroy it with one 3 of there attacks or a large release of their reistu. This also has a 4 post cool-down.
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Horseman's Crucible- Famine: The horseman Famine weapon has the power to shoot a special cero at the opponent however the cero does not do the same damage a normal cero dose just only the effects of Famine's skill listed below, the weapon form it takes is the form of black wings, and increases his speed by x1.2 added to that of his current speed as well as shot the special cero from its wings but it takes take the form of a large cero ball about 15 meters wide, then it creates multiple black feathers and they rain down from where ever Ikari shoots the special cero. The feathers fall and descend around a length of 15 meters. Each feather is about 2 inches and about 50 feathers rain down per post. When under the effects of Famine's cero the opponents stamina and strength start to weaken and they become 10% weaker in strength and stamina. When the cero is depleted after 3 turns the person is no longer effected. This weapon only last for 3 turns and has a 4 post cool down. Ikari can only use one of these weapons at a time.
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Horseman's Crucible- Pestilence: The Housman weapon Pestilence can weaken anything it touches and cause the opponent great physical pain where her or his heart is just by touching the opponents chest area, pestilence turns into a pair of metal black and red gloves or "gauntlets" as some call it. Will be covered and a black and red light.This move is done because Ikari sends a cero through the gauntlet in the form similar to that of a Shinigami's Kidou, Bakudo skills. The cero's effects last for 2 turns even when Ikari lets go. This move is used for mostly restraint and immobilizing the opponent. It takes the a significant rise in the target’s spiritual pressure or a significant enough physical effort for the opponent to brake free. This being said it would still take the opponent 1 whole post to brake free. However when using this weapon Ikari's physical strength is 20% lower then what it currently is at the time this move is being used. In ordered to do this move Ikari has to touch his opponent and getting this close to his opponent could be dangerous. In short this move is similar to that of a Shinigami's Bakudo Geki #9 but stronger. This weapon only last for 3 turns and has a 2 post cool down. Ikari can only use one of these weapons at a time.
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Horseman's Crucible- War: The most simplest of all Ikari's techniques. The Horseman war weapon gives Ikari super strength and turns into pair of swords. The swords are very large and gives Ikari almost 1.2x his current strength. This weapon only last for 4 turns and has a 3 post cool down. Ikari can only use one of these weapons at a time.
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Accept the top part isn't broken and curves like how Ichigo's sword was when he 1st got it
Horseman's Crucible- Death: The horseman Death the most strongest of them all it has the power to create a strong cero that of a level to that of a Gran Rey Cero. By shooting a cero from or surrounding the cero in a thin layer around his armor. The cero has very extreme and powerful vibrations running through out it and makes a loud screeching or screaming sound when used as well as an amplified muffle like sound which is emitted from a normal cero. However the sound doesn't effect the user hit with it in anyway aside from hearing a loud sound. While hitting the opponent with vibrating cero during physical contact or from range it will without a doubt hurt the opponent. The Cero can be surround Ikari's armor similar to that of shiginami's Shunko. When the vibrating cero is shot from the mouth, chest or the palm of Ikari's hand (can only be shot from those places) it is 1.5x as large as a normal cero in circumference. Ikari can also touch an opponent with a thin layer of the cero by surrounding his armor with it, however it doesn't do as much damage and only dose the damage of getting side swiped with a normal cero at half its strength. Death takes the form of a suit of armor. It gives Ikari a small 20% increase in defense. As well as the effect listed above, however it decreases his speed by 25%. This weapon only last for 3 turns and has a 6 post cool down, Ikari can only shoot this Cero 3 times during a topic. Ikari usually uses this move last as it is his most powerful. Ikari can only use one of these weapons at a time.
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Name: Horseman's Crucible- Trial Switch Description: Ikari can only use one of these weapons at a time but can switch which weapons when he wants to use just by thinking. When he switches the weapon the weapon currently on him comes of him and turns into a red ball of reistu and then forms into the other weapon. Every time he switches a weapon/ability it takes him 1 posts to complete the change. But during those 1 post he still gets to use the weapon. Also since the horseman weapons are made out of his Reistu when they are broken Ikari is weakened also Ikari can only use one of these weapons at a time.
-Your history mentions "1000 sad and lonely years" but your character is 425. I assume you mean 100, because your character is not being over 1000. Fix that.
-Yeah... your special ability can be Cero level, not Cero Oscuras level - you're the Cuatro you're not supposed to be the biggest bad ever, so lower that power from Black Cero to just Cero level.
-Arrancar can't use Loki, that's a Hollow-only technique. And in order to have Cero Oscuras you need a basic Cero. So swap those two around.
-Your Resureccion techniques are supposed to be under the "Resurreccion Abilities" header, not under your techniques header. So remove the big long explanation for your 'ability' and put your Res techniques there instead. Or just put them under it. Either way, they go down there.
-Oh and you're totally not as fast as 2 Captains combined. If you are then you suck at absolutely everything else. As in, your defenses and offenses should be woeful.
-As with your Special Ability, Lazy Boy Cero is not at Oscuras level but at 1.5x Cero power. Fix that.
-As for Famine: "and increases his speed by 6" <--- What? 6x? HELL NO. Also every single feather is part of the effect? Also a no. The whole 'reduce strength and stamina' thing is iffy as well, since we don't use stats that doesn't really equate perfectly and 1/3 is too much anyway. 1/5 at most and it'd better fix if they move away.
-"If Ikari touches his opponents even if they have armor on, the opponents chest area will start to feel the worst pain of there lives especially where there heart is." <-- The armour thing is a no already, since armour is there to protect you. And the 'sending tiny ceros the size of the opponents nerves' thing is no as well. Basically, this technique is a huge no.
-Double strength for War? Make it 1.5x and the swords better have a post-limit and a cooldown.
-Death is... "destroys the opponents cells and reistu particles a little with each hit because the cero is slowly going threw there molecules allowing the cero to pass right through there body and injure them, if hit" <--- No. "When the vibrating cero is shot from the mouth or the palm of Ikari's hand (can only be shot from those places) it appears to just phase through the opponent when in fact its going through them destroying there reistu particles and cells in there body" <--- Even more no.
-Trial Switch is ok I suppose...
-Question though; how do you 'break' these weapons? Zanpakutou are extremely hard to break after all, or are these ones weaker than normal?
Ok, I'm just commenting on one thing, since that's the biggest issue atm.
The horseman Death the most strongest of them all it has the power to create a strong cero that of a level 1.5x stronger to that of a Black Cero. <--
Whoa, what? 50% stronger than a Ceros Oscuras? That is a black cero, and it's ridiculously powerful. That's a no, and even if you did an attack like that, that should completely drain your reiatsu and make you go out of Ress form.
Nerf that please. Ceros Oscuras level is acceptable, but even then, it'd drain a huge chunk of your reiatsu and possibly make you go out of your ress form.
The cero is moving at 3/4's Ikari's speed. Also leaving a black line stream behind it. When the cero makes contact with the opponent it will sink at least 1-5 inch into them or straight through them. It will then expand into a huge orb made out of black cero and explode. This cero is 1/5 weaker then the normal cero but 3/5 faster then a normal cero.
80% power but 160% speed? Yeah no, and the 'sinking into them' thing is also a no, just make it blow up like normal.
Strength/Weakness: 1.5x speed but only 80% strength? No, 1.2x speed to make up for it at most. Also your defense should be 80% as well.
Lazy Boy Cero: How does it drain stamina? I'm gonna say remove this bit unless it's only a very minor drain since you're also damaging them a lot AND trapping them. Give this a four-post cooldown too.
Famine: 1.5x speed is too much of a boost, make it 1.2x. I'm also confused about how this works, so basically a ball of energy is summoned and then feathers shoot out from the ball up and down but only half of them do something? And this lasts for three posts and over that time the person is 60% weaker in both strength and stamina? Can you please rewrite this so it's clearer and easier to understand? And sapping that much of someone's powers is way too much, so lower that too, make it 10% reduction each not 20%. Also, I assume this doesn't effect someone if they move out of the range of the feathers?
Pestilence: The auto-pain thing still makes me cringe, especially since it's "Cero Rays" through a foe's body instantly on touch, so that's still not acceptable. AND it damages them, so that's even worse - especially since Cero's aren't weak.
War: 1.5x strength is too much, make it 1.2x instead.
Death: So it basically shoots a Gran Rey Cero that functions like a Shunko and is three times larger than normal? AND it increases his defense by 20% but decreases his speed to 25%... OK the latter part is ok but make it only 1.5x the size of a normal one (since they are normally huge) and make it last two posts and have a seven post cooldown. Yes, seven.
Trial Switch: As long as this activates the beginning of the cooldown for the weapon he swapped in, it's ok.