Your world, repainted

Your world, repainted; Yet another favorite of my readers...
Topic Started: Jan 26 2010, 06:33 PM (144 Views)
xPhat_Princex	Jan 26 2010, 06:33 PM Post #1
Posts: 3 Group: Members Member #5 Joined: Jan 24, 2010	your world; painted so bright, so colorful, will soon clash with Mine your reds and greens will twist and hide among My shadows your yellows, your blues will be demoted to the blacks and greys of My world oranges will not escape the contortions purple will be purples, nevermore and when you look at your fruitless, colorless new world you will do so through My eyes and finally, you will understand
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BloodPheasant741	Jan 26 2010, 09:09 PM Post #2
Posts: 11 Group: Admins Member #2 Joined: Nov 30, 2009	Ooh. Damn. Is this about depression? I believe it is, and in that case, it's fantastically done. I've been seriously depressed before. It's a scary thing, and one that this poem pays homage to beautifully. Amazing job.
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