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| Topic Started: Jun 7 2010, 11:57 AM (249 Views) | |
| +Raiden | Jun 7 2010, 11:57 AM Post #1 |
 
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The inevitable truth. The end of our existence is not only inevitable and unpredictable, but also largely inconsequential. A Lonely Grave A lonely grave rests on a green hill A shadow peering down at the meadow below It spoke of his accomplishments on earth Though its voice was laden with sarcasm Truthfully it was quite easy to tell That the man beneath was a failure The world he clung to was no worse Without his presence there No flower was left at his lonely grave No flower did nature spare No tear was shed on his dying day He failed to live, and now failed to die Edited by Raiden, Jun 8 2010, 05:29 PM.
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| +H.I.V.E shade | Jun 7 2010, 11:07 PM Post #2 |
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That's...amazing poetry. Well done bro. |
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| +Raiden | Jun 8 2010, 05:31 PM Post #3 |
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Bullets and Gunsmoke Smoke tears apart the afternoon sky A remnant of that draconian humanity Through the tense air the bullets fly A remnant of man's inherent insanity Another one dies in the hot desert sun A statistic brought through bullet and smoke Another comes along and raises his gun His friends all gone, his spirit broke Back home you can hear his mother cry Another casualty of this draconian insanity As smoke tears apart the afternoon sky Its hard not to gape at the inanity With every conflict we've won What have we really gained? Nothing makes the deaths undone The ground is always stained The bloody path of bullet and smoke A path leading to death and shame As soldiers watch their own friends choke When will we end this game? Edited by Raiden, Jun 8 2010, 05:34 PM.
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| +H.I.V.E shade | Jun 8 2010, 05:51 PM Post #4 |
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Another Amazing Poetry Entry bro. Well done. |
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| +Raiden | Jun 10 2010, 11:57 AM Post #5 |
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I'm trying to get in the habit of writing one a day. Here's the one from yesterday. Human Nature An acid tongue covered in knives A lack of understanding A knife turned upon itself And we all think we're outstanding We see the blood on other's hands Truth is, our own are dripping We see the faults in other's minds But all the same, we're slipping We say "That's wrong" We act it too But still we do it Like we do That's just human nature To point out men as fools Without considering that maybe We're as dumb as mules |
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| Getsu | Jun 11 2010, 01:00 PM Post #6 |
 
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Rai, you rock. Well done, it's written very descriptively and vividly. I love it! |
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