Uh, yeah it's a story thinger. Read it! Cha'

Uh, yeah it's a story thinger. Read it! Cha'; Based off a 1on1 RP I had running.
Topic Started: Nov 4 2008, 07:24 PM (43 Views)
The Poodle	Nov 4 2008, 07:24 PM Post #1
Posts: 21 Group: Officers Member #5 Joined: Oct 20, 2008	Yeah, this was based on an RP I had running with someone. It’s about Kuroi, since I like playing him so much, and in this SL he’s been promoted up to Taichou of the 5th, its all OC’s so you won’t see any familiar faces here. ---------------------------Captain Class--------------------------- "This is the research group sent by 12th Division" a young girl screamed into the receiver "We've been ambushed by a group of large hollows." She was in the center of a ring of Shinigami, each beaten and bloody, around them stood a small army of hollow. The largest one, wearing an ape like mask, was drooling all over itself. "The little ones mine!" it roared to its fellow hollow. It lunged out at the girl, its massive arm outstretched. Then several things happened at once: She let out a piercing scream, high above a Senkaimon opened revealing the dark figure of a man, and then the man appeared just inches from the hollows hand. He was handsome to say the least, green eyes barely visible behind a curtain of dark hair, a white haori on his back, it bore the kanji ‘5’ in the center in bold black. His left hand hung lazily over the hilt of his yellow and black plaited Zanpakuto. In an instant the yellow obi around his waist shook and his hand was on the hilt. "Kikisaku Inazuma" he whispered, unsheathing his blade. The massive beast was thrown back by a beam of yellow light, sparks flew in all directions, the hollow roared in pain as it faded away from the middle. The newcomer held up a glowing blade the length of his body, it crackled like fire. This seemed to urge the other hollows to attack. "Stay here Kawaii-chan" he said with a wink. The little girl wore a look on mingled relief and hatred as he swung his blade in a long elegant move. The sky was flooded with a dazzling light, illuminating it so much that it seemed like dawn and broken. The air shook with reiatsu and one by one the hollows were dieing. In a flicker the man appeared behind a large hollow, slicing it clean up the middle, another made to attack from above but was blocked and cut in half by the sizzling golden blade. He stood, with a small frown on his face, with hollows slowly dieing all around him. He looked back and gave the group a thumbs up. His green eyes were the size of milk saucers as a beam of red light soared through the air and the defenseless shinigami. "BanKai..." rang out through the still air Reiatsu swirled around the group and there was an explosion that shook the air itself. As the smoke cleared, the injured shinigami stood clutching each other, the newcomer facing them with six golden wings growing from his back. Around them a feathery golden wall had formed. "Kuroi-kun" the young girl said with tears in her eyes. The shield seemed to be badly cracked "You sacrificed yourself." "No Kawaii-chan" he said with a smirk "This is my BanKai... Kawaii Raihime!" The wall flickered and vanished, two more wings joined those on his back. He moved to turn and stood at least twenty yards away, face to face with a thin humanoid hollow. "Arrankar huh?" he said with a raised lip. A blade pierced Kuroi's chest, but it was only his empty haori. He appeared behind the hollow, holding two glowing cross shaped blades. blood sprayed from the hollows chest as deep cuts appeared "Skins a bit thin aye?" "Snap! Zorro!" the hollow shouted, grabbing its blade. Reiatsu exploded and Kuroi was sent backwards. The hollow had retained its size but had a dog like face, mouth lined with razor sharp teeth and massive claws. It made its move, striking like lightning. The shield appeared again, but was shattered with one swipe. "Kawaii-chan" Kuroi shouted "Request a spatial freeze around me now!" He was falling to the city streets below. The girl nodded and got on the radio. Seconds later a cool voice rang through "Request granted." Kuroi smiled. "Now I can go all out" he muttered "Tamashii Yubure..." four of the wings flickered away. The air exploded and Kuroi was gone. The night sky was filled with a blinding light. The hollow remained standing, a large hole in its chest, blood pouring down. Kuroi was standing on the opposite side, his entire body smoking, and his Zanpakuto sheathed. He cast a look to the hollow, which had dropped to its knees, slowly it began to disintegrate. "If you hadn't tried to kill my Kawaii-chan then you wouldn't have died like that." he said lightly with a smile. His eyes went blank as he was hit over the head with the hilt of a Zanpakuto, it was the young girl. "Damn it, stop calling me Kawaii-chan!" she shouted as the other shinigami tried to hold her back "My names Chi!" Kuroi sat there, rubbing the back of his head, holding his Zanpakuto. He looked at her yelling and shouting and couldn't help but laugh. "Sorry Chi-chan" he paused for a moment "So what's my payment for saving your butt this time?" She blushed and leaned up, kissing him lightly on the lips, he looked flatly at her "That's it?!" he began to flail his arms "I save your life and all you give me's a little kiss!" He ran after her, his hands fondling the air "I want some goodies!" She screamed and ran in circles; the other shinigami stood watching, dumbstruck, at seeing this ruthless killer running around like an old pervert. It seemed he'd finally caught her, his arms around her waist his chin resting atop her head, they were out of earshot "The way you acted back there Kuroi-kun." she whispered. "Nya?" he said with his head to the side. "Killing that hollow in such a cool way" she paused for a second making sure no one else would hear "It made me so hot for you..." there was a long silence, but he broke it. "Well you’d better just cool yourself on down Chi-chan” he said with a laugh “Because I’ve gotta get back to the Soul Society for file a report on this little incident.” Before she could turn around he was fifty yards away, and a Senkaimon was opening before him. He was gone before she blinked, but there was a soft smile on her face.
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Roland Fukutaichou	Nov 6 2008, 02:10 PM Post #2
Fukutaichou Posts: 142 Group: Admins Member #1 Joined: Oct 15, 2008	I like how you detail the actions, very smooth transitions from one to the next. Few typos though. xD



The Poodle	Nov 6 2008, 02:44 PM Post #3
Posts: 21 Group: Officers Member #5 Joined: Oct 20, 2008	x.x Yeah, I was I think doing something else at the same time, I didn't catch um until I posted it here, and well I was to lazy to go back and edit. Thanks, I think it's why I like fighting in RPs so much. And that whole thing, was just a reason for me to show off Kuroi punching a giant hole in something.
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