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Grimer3739's Journey
Topic Started: May 20 2009, 04:50 PM (1,129 Views)
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They say that technology both advances and hinders mankind. That we take great steps forward, yet lose the things most essential to us ... and so end up moving backwards instead. But talk is cheap and not nearly as interesting as taking a walk on the beach with your Solrock. So here you were.

Even though you might not have expected to see very many electronic items so close to a body of water, it was an unwritten rule that Millenia citizens were attached at the hip to their latest gadgets. Pretty girls in bikinis spent less time playing beach volleyball and more time texting on their brightly colored cell phones. Surfers ran into the waves with their iPods encased in waterproof coverings so they could rock out while they cruised the water. Even the snooty business-types could be seen with their laptops.

In fact, out of everyone here, it seemed only one person had better things to do than plug in to the interwebs. A redheaded girl who looked to be about your age could be seen standing on the beach with her Mankey, shouting like a drill sergeant. As you passed her, you overheard a bit of her conversation. "... only when the enemy is at half health! Is this understood, greenhorn?!" she yelled.

"Man! KEY!" the little monkey-pig hybrid squeaked back, his arm raised in a kind of salute to his trainer.

And as if this wasn't odd enough, the girl had noticed you and pointed at you boldly. "You there, punk! I challenge you to take part in our pre-Battle Camp warmup!" she declared, "Think you can handle that, kid?!" It seemed she wanted to fight you. Whether you wanted to accept her challenge or not, well, that's up to you and you alone. What'll it be?

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Finally Archie and Adrian made it to the Pokémon Center to heal their Pokémon. Soon enough however, they would wish that they never reached the center at this point because as they gave their Pokémon to the nurse, two goons tried to rob everyone. Archie who didn't feel like looking like a little girl in front of his cute partner, stood his ground and waited for one of the guys to say something to him.

However, seconds later the nurse returned explaining that the police were already on their way. The two grunts however had no problem with this as one of them pointed out that the task was done. But wait, what task? They didn't manage to do anything, or did they? A strange investigator soon showed up, and began to talk to the nurse. The nurse told the investigator that all the Pokémon from the back had been taken. Oh boy, Archie and Adrian's Pokémon were back there.

Archie looked around the building. Something was strange about this nurse joy, but he wasn't sure what. There was no time to waste however, somebody had his Pokémon and he needed to get them back. Quickly Archie grabbed Adrian's hand without thinking twice about it. He really didn't care if she had some comment about it or was disgusted. If anything she should enjoy it, because he is the one about to save her Pokémon.

"Adrian, come on!" Archie shouted trying to pull her toward the door without hurting her. "We've gotta follow him. He has our Pokémon!" Archie said shouting.
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"Hold on just a minute you two!" The private investigator yelled before the two of you had the chance to leave the poke center. "I can't have anybody in here leaving, your considered suspects of the crime."

"Oh, no they were here in the lobby the whole time this happened sir." Nurse Joy protested. The P.I. gave her a slight nod and apologized to the two of you, then turning to speak to the rest of the group without a chance for you to respond back. "Ok, I'm gonna explain the situation, so listen closely if you want to get your pokemons back." The room became silent once he made this last comment.

"So what we know already is that a couple of guys came here asking for some money. Now that was not actual, they were merely a decoy. Meant to grab everyone's attention from noticing the real crime at hand." Murmurs spread across the room. "They had another group, how many is not known, to infiltrate the medical room and steal the pokemon from the back. How they managed to pull this off in such a short amount of time is also unknown to me, but I do know where to find their hideout."

"Well then let's go there and get our pokemon back!" Shouted this one girl, hyped up from having her pokemon stolen.

"No way. What can we do? We have no pokemon. Let the police handle it." Came the proposal of another, less adventurous trainer.

"That would be the best idea, but we have no clue whether they will remain there or not. Plus I don't have a definite answer on where they reside, just an area. Now is the time to go there and look. If we wait for the police to act, you will surely never see your pokemon again."

Looks of worry blossomed on each face. The trainer girl who spoke earlier stomped the ground with her foot. "Then count me in! I'm going with you! I still happen to have some pokemon with me! I'm not such a loser to have ALL my pokemon weak from battle." This remark struck a nerve in some of the trainers as some glared at her.

The P.I. gave a courteous smile as he bowed her direction. "I appreciate it young young lass."

"Don't count me out. I have a pokemon with me too. It's just one, but we can get the job done." A boy trainer stepped out of the crowd. He had on long green fisher pants and a plain white tank top shirt. "I'm going too."

The P.I. gave the boy a bow as well. "Can I get your names?" he asked, stuffing away his magnifying glass into his left pocket.

"I'm Cassy!" The girl replied, with an unusually loud voice. It seemed to be that way every time she spoke.

"Marco." The boy simply replied.

So what about you? are you gonna join in on this little squad of do-gooders? Or go it alone?
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Archie had stopped and paused right where he was, still holding onto Adrian's hand. Her hand was strangely comfortable to him, and he liked the feeling he got when he held it. However, knowing that this wasn't the time, he let go of her hand for a moment and watched as an army of trainers was about to be put together in front of him.

As the Investigator sounded out his strategy of getting the Pokémon back, Archie watched as one girl who's personality was relative to Adrian's step out and be the first to propose to join the investigator. Next a boy followed the girl, which made two people already for the P.I. The girl's name was Cassy, and the boy was Marco.

Archie began to scratch his chin and run his fingers through his small goatee. He knew he didn't have any Pokémon left, but then it struck him. "Adrian! You still have Greenhorn dont you?" he said suprised. "He wasn't hurt, so surely you kept him?" Archie said hoping that she didn't give him to the nurse along with Zangoose, Electrike, and Skarmory.

Finally Archie grabbed Adrian's hand once more, but this time flashed a smile. "I am going, and so is she. Oh, and dont worry, this girl right here can hold her own," Archie said still looking at Adrian, his smile growing even larger. "I dont have any Pokémon though. I have a pokeball though, so maybe I can go try to catch one real quick?" Archie said now turning to the P.I.
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The P.I. looked over at the two of you as if you just saved his life. "Great! Great!" he bowed like usual. Courtesy was obviously this mans friend, and he was throwing a lot of it your way. He turned to face the rest of the crowd, all conversing among another over the four trainers who were about to embark on this crazy mission. "Are there any more?" He asked.

The room was quiet as the trainers merely looked at one another, not willing to step forward on their own. Mostly everybody in that room had no pokemon left, so it was up to just the four of you and the P.I. It was very unclear as to how you guys planned on getting those pokemon back, but a plan was not necessary when your just gonna go in, kick some Team Maroon butt, and get your pokemon back. Sound proof.

The P.I. looked at his new comrades, judging them on their appearance alone. "I think you guys will have what it takes." He said as he rummaged in his coat for an item. He pulled out a small leaf, disappointing all who expected more. "Now to let you guys in on how we will locate them."

He raised the leaf so that all could see. "This leaf was found on the pokecenter floor along with fresh dirt. This leaf is from a shrub that only grows in a certain area of Route 2. All we must do is scan that area for any clues to the hideout." Feeling satisfied with that explanation, the P.I. placed it back in his coat. Then, motioning for the four of you to follow, he went straight out the pokecenter, heading for Route 2. Cassy and Marco was right behind him, all that's left is for you to go.
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Archie watched carefully as the P.I. pulled out a leaf. "Wow," Archie whispered to himself very quietly. He was expecting him to pull out some kind of cool gadget, but instead a leaf was going to be there key to victory? Listening a little longer, Archie was releived to hear that the leaf was just going to get them to the hideout, not win the battle for them. "Sounds great!" Archie said out loud. Honestly, Archie was starting to miss his Pokémon. And the fact that they were going to a brand new route and he had no Pokémon to train or help him battle new wild ones made him all the more mad.

Archie hung back from the P.I. and the two other kids for a moment, to talk to Adrian. "Adrian, something about this P.I. is strange," Archie said. He wasn't sure how his female companion would react, seeing how noone ever knew what the beautiful red head was thinking. "He's just, i dont know," Archie said with a sigh. "Well, lets go," he finished as he walked out of the doors, debating whether to grab Adrian's hand again.

As Archie stepped out of the doors behind the group, he began to wonder what they were going to do with his Pokémon. He knew that Solrock could put up a good fight against them, but his Rattata was so careless and playful. And electrike was still basically wild, so who knew how it would fend for himself. Hold on just a little longer guys, I'm coming, he thought to himself as he tried to adjust his eyes to the outdoors. Archie was the type that had to always squint when he first walked outside. He remembered his aunt saying something to him about how it was because of all the color in his eyes, but he wasn't sure how true that was. Either way, he was now ready to follow the pack and get back his Pokémon.
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So you've marked the nurse as suspicious and now even the P.I.? Well I guess it doesn't hurt to start doing some investigation on the side. But all things will be made clear by the end. All you can hope to do is know what decisions are best. But, I wouldn't worry too much on that, my plots aren't too evil... or are they ;) ?

So the gang was fully assembled and were now headed out, trailing behind the P.I. seeing as he knew the way. He led your guys on to the trail of Route 2, while constantly keeping an eye out for the plant which has this kind of leaf. The crazy part were the pokemon fluttering around. Starlys singing a tune together as they flew to the sky; Wurmples having a feast of leaves, or surrounding their body with silk as they got ready to evolve into Silcoon since the sun was up. Looking to the right, you guys saw some Vigoroth hanging from tree branches as your group walked by.

But despite all of that, you guys had something important to do and couldn't worry about potential partners. The P.I. took his direction and placed towards the forest. "Ok, we're almost there. Just somewhere in the middle of this forest you guys." he reassured you.

"Are you sure we have nothing to worry about?" Cassy asked, loud as ever but with a hint of worry.

The P.I. tried giving the most comforting/trustworthy face he could. "Would I put myself in the danger like this if i didn't feel so? It wont be easy, nothing important ever is, but with the right effort you guys can definitely pull this off." He continued walking while he said this, turning his head left and right as to try and catch an early glimpse of Team Maroons hideout.

"O, ok." She responded, although she didn't really looked convince. And I don't blame her. You guys are about to take on a whole evil gang right now. I would never be caught dead doing something as crazy as this. But good for you guys for stepping up to plate.

Minutes flew by, and it almost seemed like you guys would never make it. Until... a rustle in the bushes signaled an enemy. "What is that!?" Cassy yelled, grabbing her pokeball. Everybody turned to the source of the noise, awaiting to see some thugs pop out and ambush them. But what really came out were four spinaraks all looking to attack the intruders, namely you guys.

Cassy tossed up her pokeball instantly. "We can handle a few bug pokemon." The pokeball opened to reveal a Shinx. Marco decided to follow her actions and called out his pokemon as well.

"Yeah, your right. Just don't be careless you know."

The P.I. threw his pokeball without a word, revealing the usual Growlithe these officers had. He turned to you and saw you were the only one incapable of battling. "The more the merrier, take this." He tossed another pokeball for you to use in this battle. So, are you gonna help them fight off these Spinaraks? Or run like a chicken?"


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Archie was starting to feel like he ws never going to see his Pokémon ever again. That is until finally an opponent appeared. Four small green spider looking Pokémon appeared in front of the 5 people ready for battle. The problem was that Archie didn't have a Pokémon. How could he lose his Pokémon like this? What was he going to do now?

Cassy tossed out her Shinx and MArco tossed out what appeared to be a Dusktox. Next the P.I. tossed out what looked to be a pretty strong Growlithe. Archie looked around wondering what exactly he should do. Then he turned to Adrian. Was she even here anymore? She didn't even send out a Pokémon, what has gotten in to her?

What happened next was unexpected to Archie. The P.I. turned to him and tossed him a pokeball to use. "Really?" Archie asked ready to send the pokeball out and control the unknown Pokémon. He just hoped it was something that would listen to him. "Enough wasting time!" Archie shouted as he tossed the pokeball out into the battle. We waited in excitement as the pokeball opened into a bright flash of light. "By the way guys, I have a pokeball left so I think I want to catch one of these Spinarak," Archie said with a smirk.
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So your taking your chances with the P.I.'s pokemon? Good choice. And you want to catch one of the enemy pokemon? I'll keep that in mind. The pokeball swirled in the air as it opened to reveal the pokemon inside. It looked up at you, then at the P.I., confused about the given situation.

The P.I. chuckled, then gave a nod. "It's ok, he's your master for now." The Stantler gave a nod at this as it turned to you to give a courteous bow. Obviously, it must have adopted this from its real owner.

"Well aren't you the lucky one. A free strong pokemon?" Adrian remarked as she enlarged one of her pokeballs." Although, I think mine still takes the cake." She said with a wink in your direction and a toss of the pokeball. Skarmory soon entered the battle as well, squawking rather loudly the moment it saw the delectable bug pokemon.

"Great! A bird pokemon on our team!" Marco remarked as he gave a nod towards Adrian.

"Well just make sure it stays out of my Shinxy's way." Cassy commented, jealous that Adrian was starting to steal some attention. Adrian didn't seem bothered by Cassy's comment, and in fact, she was smiling. But, the look she gave Cassy could not be hidden through a fake smile.

"Shall we start?" The P.I. asked. "Growlithe! Growl!" The pup pokemon barked in response and let out a menacing Growl attack which caused the opposing Spinaraks to shudder.

"Now's your chance Dusty! Use String Shot to bind them down!" The dustox gave a slight twirl, then shot out a string of String Shot at the opponent. The Spinaraks were on their toes now though and one of them countered by firing off Poison Sting, which ripped and negated the String Shot and caught Dustox dead in the gut.

The moth pokemon went down as it soon felt its body begin to become intoxicated. "Dusty!" Marco yelled, running to his pokemon.

The spinaraks seemed to have a plan going as they divided themselves. Two stayed in the middle and Shot a dose of String Shot at Shinx and Skarmory. The other two were on either side and ran up two trees which stood on the left and right side of the other two Spinaraks.

Adrian reacted immediately. "Watch out Skarmory! Block that!" The steel bird squawked and grabbed the string in its mouth and yanked the Spinarak towards him. "Great, now use Peck!" The Spinarak was unable to dodge it and was crushed immediately by the attack, and was sent flying.

Shinx had dodged to the left and ran out directly for the Spinarak who made it. "That's right Shinx! Use Tackle attack!" Cassy yelled out, like her pokemon hadn't already began the course. The Spinarak was caught by it and was knocked on its back. But, a Poison Sting fired out at Shinx from one of the two branches. It caught the electric pokemon and caused him to move back a little.

Obviously, the two Spinaraks on the branches attack once you get too close. Were they protecting something? Did somebody send these guys out here, cause they most certainly weren't fighting blindly like normal wild pokemon. They had strategy.



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:stantler lvl 8 :female
:hp 41/41
:eng 100%

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:shinx lvl 10 :female
:hp 42/45
:eng 95%

:dustox lvl 12 :female
:hp 46/49
:eng 97%
(Poisoned: -2hp per turn)

:growlithe lvl 11 :male
:hp 47/47
:eng 97%

:skarmory lvl 9 :male
:hp 43/43
eng: 95%

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:hp 45/45
:eng 92%
(on left branch)
(fired two PS attacks. 1-Dustox, 2-Shinx

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:hp 45/45
:eng 100%
(On right branch)

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:eng 97%
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eng: 97%
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Archie watched as the strange spiders began maneuvering into what seemed to be a strategy. It was strange how four spider Pokémon seemed to be so smart. Either way, this battle was going to be harder than they initially expected. Were these Spinarak set here on purpose? What mysteries are Archie and gang about to unlock?

As the battle continued, close to the end of the first round, something inside Archie's brain began to ring. Why did two of the spinarak split up and guard the tree? "That's got to be it," Archie said to himself. Quickly Archie tried to think up a plan to get a better look around the tree. He looked to the left and then the right. However, not only did he need to find a way to get the Pokémon over to the tree, he also needed to have the other trainers help. And the only one he could 100% count on was Adrian.

"Hey Adrian, I think the spiders are guarding the tree, or something inside of it," Archie said half expecting Adrian to reply saying she was thinking the same. "So I am going to get a closer look, but I have a plan," Archie grinned. "Guys quick listen!" Archie shouted hoping everyone would give him a moment and follow his plan.

"We have to check that tree. Adrian and Marco, use your flying types to get into the air and check for something within or around the tree. We all will cover you," Archie said looking up at the top of the tree. "Cassey, me and you work on the Spinarak on the ground. You," Archie said looking at the P.I. "Have Growlithe shoot Embers or something at the Spinarak in the branches for a diversion for the Dustox and Skarmory," Archie finished before turning to the Stantler he was going to control.

"Stantler, I am going to be your trainer for this battle ok?" Archie said happily to the Pokémon trying to give a good first impression. "Now, use a Tackle on that Spinarak right there!" Archie said pointing to the Spinarak that was on the ground, not on its back.
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Well, well, well. Look who decided to take control of the situation. Though the real surprise is that everybody actually looked like they would comply with you. The P.I. gave you a nod, and a smile, impressed by your show of control over the situation. "If you have a plan, then it better be worth it kid!" Cassy proclaimed. She threw a finger at her Shinx. "Ok listen Shinxy! We are gonna completely own those two bugs there on the ground. Focus on them only!" Shinx gave a nod to his owners orders.

"I think we can trust his judgment, because I was feeling the same thing about those trees there." He looked at Growlithe and nod. The pup pokemon gave a smile and immediately shot his Ember attack at the left Spinarak, seeing as it was the one causing the most trouble. The flames were met with the Spinaraks poison sting and canceled each other out.

"Skarmory, take flight, now!" The steel bird pokemon rose into the air by Adrians orders and stood mid-flight for a while.

"Dustox, you too! Try and get over to that tree and see what's in it!" Marco ordered. The moth pokemon rose, but then cringed slightly from the pain caused by the poison swimming in his veins.

"No, not what's in the tree. What's past the trees." the P.I. remarked. "I think these guys are trying to cover the hideout and were put here as security." The group looked at him with shock and amazement. He figured something so specific out in just a short amount of time. "Growlithe, keep the Embers coming!"

"Well whatever, Skarmory, make your way past those Spinaraks and see if you find a base." Adrians Skarmory squawked, dodging an oncoming Poison Sting from the right Spinarak on a branch. "That pest!" But it was caught by an Ember attack sent over by Growlithe, knocking it down from the tree and singeing its right foot.

Stantler was lost in a trance by all that was going on, then snapped out of it by that last event. It leaned back for some momentum, then raced forward towards the Spinarak you targeted. Shinx ran alongside it, and the two swerved past a Poison Sting, merely grazing your Stantler but not enough to poison it. It lowered its head before slamming straight into the bug pokemon, sending it crashing into the spinarak on its back. Poor thing. And it was just about to successfully get up to.

Shinx slammed straight into that Spinarak staring into the sky, knocking it back onto its feet. It didn't waste no time and fired a Poison Sting point blank into Shinxs face, causing a critical hit and a slight poison effect.




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:stantler lvl 8 :female
:hp 39/41
:eng 96%

ALLIES

:shinx lvl 10 :female
:hp 34/45
:eng 90%
(Poisoned: - 2hp per turn)

:dustox lvl 12 :female
:hp 44/49
:eng 97%
(Poisoned: -2hp per turn)

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:hp 47/47
:eng 88%

:skarmory lvl 9 :male
:hp 43/43
eng: 95%


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:hp 45/45
:eng 88%
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:spinarak lvl 10 :male
:hp 35/45
:eng 96%
(Burned, -2 hp per turn)

:spinarak lvl 11 :female
:hp 36/47
:eng 97%
(fired the poison sting at Shinx)

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eng: 93%
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Archie’s eyes began to grow even bigger than they already were. He couldn't believe how large this battle was and he was beginning to get lost with all of the Pokémon just running around. It was like a zoo to tell the truth. The plan was slightly successful, but it still needed some adjustments. If all of these Pokémon were just randomly running around attacking, than it would be hard to tell just how everything was going.

"Guys, we need to split up and battle each individual Spinarak!" Archie shouted, hoping that everyone would agree and listen to him like last round. If they could attack each spinarak, it could make the battle go faster, and also cut down any hope of double-team strategies that the spider Pokémon were planning. "Ill take the female!" Archie shouted before shifting his eyes to the Spinarak and than over to his Stantler he was now controlling.

Stantler seemed to be a pretty strong Pokémon. Maybe if he commanded it good, he could talk the P.I. into giving it to him. That sure would add a little more muscle to his team. Archie began to smile as he tried to remember what attacks Stantler's were capable of at this level. "Ok Stantler, use Leer and than attack that Spinarak with a Tackle!" Archie shouted pointing at the female Spinarak.
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Ok, now give a minute to fully absorb the whole battle and to remember who is where.... ok, im ready. Man, this battle is getting too hectic and kinda hard to follow honestly, so why don't we move things along and get this done a little faster, shall we? Your plan of ganging several of them together was honestly a great idea. you had a couple of party members with super effective attacks that could crush these pokemon with just two more strikes each.

Stantler, on your orders, used leer to stun the female pokemon for a while, causing a wave of fear to run through her spine. She shrieked and bent her cowered under her front legs like a puppy covering its eyes with its paws. She was a female pokemon after all, fear was mighty hard to overcome for such a fragile little thing (no offense to the female members on this site :D )

Then, using that as an opportunity, Cassy ordered her Shinx to use Tackle on the same female Spinarak. The lightening pokemon scurried through, aiming to catch the bug pokemon off guard. Stantler saw this and rushed over as well, not wanting to be outdone by this girls pokemon. He was the one ordered to attack this pokemon and wanted to be the one to hit first.

Of course, it wasn't much of a race cause Stantlers legs pulled her in front in a matter of seconds, then she rammed into the female pokemon with full force, causing a critical hit. Shinx didn't falter and Tackled into her right after Stantler. Poor thing. its blood was obviously taking a beating and it wont be long now before she flew the coop, if you know the phrase.

Meanwhile.... Dustox had regained momentum and unleashed its gust attack upon the Spinarak which fell off the left branch, hitting it dead, and catching the other one alongside it (the other one on the ground which wasn't the female one) but he didn't take the full hit. Skarmory flew through the side of the attack and flew straight for the spinarak on the right branch. Who pulled its head up to unleash a poison sting attack to retaliate, but was caught by Growlithes ember. Ouch!

The bug began falling to the ground and was caught mid-flight and full force by Skarmorys Peck attack. "Good job Sergeant!" Adrian praised. the bird pokemon squawked and flew up to give them a second dose of the beak of furry.







YOU
:stantler lvl 8 :female
:hp 39/41
:eng 88%

ALLIES

:shinx lvl 10 :female
:hp 32/45
:eng 86%
(Poisoned: - 2hp per turn)

:dustox lvl 12 :female
:hp 42/49
:eng 92%
(Poisoned: -2hp per turn)

:growlithe lvl 11 :male
:hp 47/47
:eng 83%

:skarmory lvl 9 :male
:hp 43/43
eng: 90%


OPPONENT

:spinarak lvl 10 :male
:hp 23/45
:eng 88%
(fell from right branch)

:spinarak lvl 10 :male
:hp 23/45
:eng 96%
(Burned, -2 hp per turn)

:spinarak lvl 11 :female
:hp 26/47
:eng 97%

:spinarak lvl 12 :male
:hp 33/49
eng: 93%

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Archie zoned out of the battle as the craziness was starting to get to him. As if getting his Pokémon stolen wasn't enough, now he was in this huge fight against four Spinaraks. Even though Spinarak was one of his favorites and he had a chance to catch one, it was still hard to focus knowing he had none of his own Pokémon with him.

"They have to be in or behind the tree," Archie said to himself referring to the thieves. In fact, he was starting to wonder if it was really a tree and not just a building or something meant to look like a tree. Wow, now he was making them sound like Team Rocket or something.

Archie snapped back and looked out at the Stantler that was in his control. Although it wasn't his own, he was really starting to like the bruit strength of the Pokémon. I sure hope the P.I. will consider letting me have this Stantler... Archie thought to himself as a grin spread across his face. At least the thought of that could make him feel a little better, despite have all of his Pokémon taken from him. And Archie thought that he was the one whom wanted to become a member of Team Rocket. And now he was having his Pokémon stole? Oh the life of an Alternian Trainer.

Archie turned from Stantler, to Cassey, to Marco, to the P.I. and then to his beautiful partner, Adrian. All of them had great Pokémon and seemed to be good trainers, but Adrian had to be the best. Her beautiful technique mixed with her looks created a killer combo, and even with everything happening Archie couldn't help but smile.

"Lets end this Adrian," Archie said with a smile to his journey partner. "Our Pokémon have to either be inside this tree or behind it," Archie called out to all of his allied before turning back to Stantler. "Stantler you are doing amazing, I can't thank you enough. Lets start off this round with an Intimidate attack," Archie said running his commands through his mind. "Next use a Belly Flop on the closest Spinarak. Once you get back to your feet, if you have time use a Tackle. If you can’t manage to get the Tackle in that’s fine," Archie said before looking down at his Poketech.

Archie began to press multiple buttons on his Poketech before he came to the page titled Zaroff Lottery. Archie typed in 5 sets of 5 numbers each and closed the page, before looking back up at the battle. If there was anything to help calm his nerves, perhaps it was gambling?
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Okay, so, Citron left no plot notes I can find, so either you leave this Open for successive mods to wing it (like me) or you ask that someone specific continues the plot? This battle is also quite confusing, so give me a chance as I try to get my head around it for the ref =P

Now that all of the Spinarak were on the ground, the two having fallen off of their high branches, they made for a fairly easy target. As if aware that this battle was turning badly against them, they tried to regroup and form a solid defensive unit against you all. Skarmory, and hence Adrian, seemed to have forgotten that the point of the flying bird was to get over the Spinaraks to see whether the enemy base was on the other side, as the PI had hypothesised. "Use Peck on, uh, that Spinarak there!" Since they were all together, all the same species, and all pretty much identical, it was hard to distinguish between them. Adrian pointed, but Skarmory had no reason chance of knowing which one to hit in particular. And thus, he simply chose the nearest one. Diving at the Spinarak, he struck him before the spider could really react, breaking the tentative formation the enemy team had made. Before swooping away to avoid incoming attacks, he also Pecked at another accessible Spinarak, successfully causing mayhem and pain before finally flying away and out of harm's way. One or two Poison Stings were shot at him, but they did not damage considering that he was a Steel type.

Now that they were all together, the PI saw a golden opportunity to do as much wide-spread damage as possible. "Growlithe!" he called sharply. "Do one or two Embers, but send them flying wide, so you hit as many of them as possible!" Yipping to show that he understood, the Growlithe inhaled deeply, readying his fire power, and let a great display of Embers be shot at the group of spiders. A few balls were shot down by Poison Stings, but most found their mark, and two more Spinaraks were caught by the flames and began to burn. Beginning to get desperate, the enemy team all turned about, lined up whilst they had a chance, and fired Poison Stings madly at anyone in their sight. Growlithe was hit, as were Shinx and your Stantler, as the last two prepared for their own attacks. This ensured that every one of your own team, bar the steel Skarmory, was now poisoned. Skarmory was safe from the Poison Sting volley, and the Dustox was now nowhere to be seen; perhaps he had actually done its job and gone to find out what these Spinarak were protecting? Either way, he was now out of the fight as he performed the demanded reconnaissance.

Hurt by the poison, but not down, not by any means, Stantler and Shinx stood side by side as they readied their assault. "Go, Shinx!" Cassy cried, pointing at the Spinarak, just as you finished your commands, and both of them charged forwards.

Stantler reached the spiders first, though the swift-footed Shinx wasn't far behind. Stantler reared up right in the face of the enemies, successfully Intimidating three of the four. At that point, Shinx ploughed into the next Spinarak, sending it flying, as the other two shot yet more Poison Stings at the Shinx. The Shinx cried out in pain and anger, and turned on them, desperately Tackling one of the offending spiders. Stantler fell heavily onto the nearest Spinarak, finally knocking one out, and then got to her feet as quickly as she could, bringing her horns down to charge and Tackle the next Spinarak she saw. It was madness with these things everywhere, all much closer to fainting, only one actually down.


YOU
:stantler lvl 8 :female
:hp 26/41
:eng 75%
(Poisoned: -2hp per turn)
(Three move turn used)

ALLIES

:shinx lvl 10 :female
:hp 14/45
:eng 75%
(Poisoned: - 2hp per turn)

:dustox lvl 12 :female
:hp 40/49
:eng 92%
(Poisoned: -2hp per turn)
(Away, investigating)

:growlithe lvl 11 :male
:hp 39/47
:eng 72%
(Poisoned: -2hp per turn)

:skarmory lvl 9 :male
:hp 43/43
eng: 80%


OPPONENT

:spinarak lvl 10 :male
:hp 0/45
:eng 0%

:spinarak lvl 10 :male
:hp 7/45
:eng 86%
(Burned, -2 hp per turn)
(Attack -1 for two more turns)
(Three move turn used)

:spinarak lvl 11 :female
:hp 16/47
:eng 90%
(Attack -1 for two more turns)

:spinarak lvl 12 :male
:hp 19/49
eng: 84%
(Burned, -2 hp per turn)
(Three move turn used)



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The battle continued and the craziness still flowed. Archie's head was spinning, but at least they now had one of the spiders down and another very close to it. However, there were still two others with a decent amount of HP left. That wasn't the worst part though, seeing as now most of the Pokemon on Archie's side were poisoned. Hopefully for Archie and company, they could end this battle this round or the next.

"Great job Stantler!" Archie called out as Stantler returned back to his side after knocking the first of four Spinarak out. Archie began to play with the strap on his bookbag trying to come to a conclusion whether to throw a pokeball at the fainted Spinarak or just wait until they were all defeated. Then there was the thought of catching one at all, considering he only had one pokeball.

After a moment of re-thinking it over, Archie decided to wait. Knowing his luck, the minute he threw the ball, one of the other three pokemon would deflect it. Therefore, Archie decided to just focus on taking another out. With one already looking close to defeat, he decided to go after it. "Hey guys, me and Stantler will take the one that looks weakest," Archie said pointing at the one with the least amount of HP left. "You guys take out the rest," he finished knowing that if he could get a clean hit, the spider would be done for.

Archie turned to his partner Adrian as he always did before he attacked and smiled. "You thinking about catching one of these little buggers?" Archie said wondering if Adrian was one of the few girls in all of Alternia not afraid of spiders. After giving her another smile, Archie turned to face his opponent. "Stantler, lets take this one out buddy!" he shouted. "Let's use a Focus to raise your Attack, and then finish the spider off with a Tackle!" Archie commanded crossing his fingers. He knew he had to land this attack.
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