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Evan Thompson; ALL DONE!
Topic Started: May 12 2009, 04:30 PM (116 Views)
Skippy

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Name: Evan Thompson

Age: 16

Gender: Male :male

Profession: Trainer

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History: Evan Thompson was born and raised in Nogou Village. He was born as the second kid of the house into the Thompson family. He had a 3 year old brother named John who loved to take care of Evan. Later on when Evan got older, he became very smart. He was sometimes the "Nerd" of the third grade because he always got straight A's. He loved to read and write. He loved to read to discover more and more about the world. He also loved to write to express his thoughts on paper and share them with his classmates. His classmates didn't care so he decided to hang out only with his close friends. His best friend was Nick. They have been best friends since kindergarten because they were both "Nerds" that loved reading and writing. Well let's fly about 7 years into Evan's future! *Puts on goggles* *Whoosh!* This where his journey begins...

He lives with his mom and dad still obviously because he is only 16. Evan's dad is usually always at work so he doesn't see Evan that much. By the way, Evan's dad is professor Mike. Evan is the kind of kid that just sits in his room, listens to his iPhone, plays video-games, texts his friends and sometimes rides his bike around the little town of Nogou. He loves gazing at all of the different pokemon and dreams of one day obtaining a Pokemon of his own and training it so that it will become powerful enough to beat his big brother's Pokemon. His big brother is 19 and is in his first year of college. Evan doesn't see his brother John that much but they still keep in touch with their cell phones. Evan has an iPhone! Also, Evan's brother John has a level 67 Swampert. His dad gave it to him as his starter pokemon.

One day Evan's mom gets a cold. It doesn't get any better and continues to get worse even with all of the medicine that she is taking. Then one night she goes to sleep. The next morning, she does not wake up! She is dead! Evan's family is devastated and nobody is happy anymore. Evan takes this seriously and starts wearing all black because he mourning over his mother. He stays locked up in his room all day and starts to skip school. He eventually drops out of the 11th grade. His dad feels really bad for Evan because now people are calling Evan "Emo". To try to cheer Evan up, his dad gives him a Pokemon! A Surskit! *Corny music plays* "Awww....It's so cute!!!" Evan states. His dad is satisfied that Evan is happy with his gift and decides to give himself a pat on the back.

Now that Evan's mom isn't home anymore to keep an eye on Evan, (Even though he is 16 years old) his dad says that he will call John to come down and hang out with him until Evan is 18 and can take care of himself. He thought of this because he always comes home late. "NO!!!" Evan cries out. "I can take care of myself, I promise! Now that I have a cute little Surskit, we can hang out together. I'll just focus on taking care of it and we will be best friends and watch out for eachother." "Well with great Pokemon, come great responsibility." his dad restates from the Spider-Mon movie. "Dad! No need for corny phrases" They both start cracking up. "Ok well I'll see you later kiddo and be careful. You know it takes me a while for me to come back home so you know that all of the emergency numbers are on the fridge right? And that-" "Yeah yeah I know now get out of here!" Evan says while chuckling. Evan's dad leaves and then Evan puts on the dining room table cloth on and wears it like a cape.

"Nobody can defeat Me! The greatest Pokemon master of all time!" Evan yells. He gives Surskit a little napkin to wear as a cape. They look so funny until Evan's friend Nick shows up and starts laughing like crazy. Evan, embarassed, takes off his cape and explains that he just got his very first Pokemon, a Surskit! Nick examines Surskit then exclaims "Cool! I want a Pokemon too!" "Ok" Evan replies. He says that maybe they can go ask their dad if he has another Pokemon. They both hop on their bikes and ride on over to the Pokemon lab where Evan's dad works. Upon arriving, Evan's dad is outside observing a Pokemon eat a berry. Not expecting Evan and Nick, Evan's dad walks over and asks "So what I do you for?" Evan replys "Well Nick here says that he wants a Pokemon. You got anything in stock?" "Well yes I have a Wurmple available!" he answers. "Ill take it!" Nick screams. Evan's dad goes over the whole "Well make sure you take care of him and feed him and love-" "Okay okay, I get it!" Then Nick rides back to his house and leaves Evan at the Pokemon lab.

Evan goes back to his house expecting a call from Nick but he doesn't get one. So he just took the Pomemon selfishly and left Evan alone. "Wow that was rude!" Evan thinks and so he just forgets about it and sets out on an adventure to try to become a Pokemon master with only a Surskit at his side...


Personality: Evan is usually open to new friends but likes to stick with his old ones. Some people refer to Evan as an "Emo" person after his mother died but deep down inside he is a loving and caring person. He sometimes likes to act like he is a ten year old though because he believes that children have more fun.

Starting Pokemon: Surskit :surskit

Starting Town: Nogou Village

Poketech Color: Black
Edited by Skippy, May 13 2009, 10:24 PM.
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Roku Hannya
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Nyancat Awaaaay!
What's with the random smiley face and sprite in your history? Regarding the start of the history, why don't you talk about his childhood before sixteen? Was he in a coma until the age of sixteen or something?

As for your near adult character acting like a complete idiot... I'll just guess that you're not of that age yet or you just decided to make your character a retard.
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Fixed. I'm laughing because I ran it through word count and grammar error thingy and it said 918 words! Yeah and it still had errors! :(
Edited by Skippy, May 13 2009, 10:25 PM.
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Nyancat Awaaaay!
Denied!

Nice try, Majistics.
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