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| Shannon Deltarve; The Scientist Prodigy | |
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| Topic Started: May 11 2009, 06:19 PM (228 Views) | |
| Yoshi The Glorious | May 11 2009, 06:19 PM Post #1 |
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Name: Shannon Deltarve Age: 19 Gender: Male Profession*: Trainer Appearance: ![]() History: Shannon is a man who knows a lot about Science. His dad was the one who introduced him to this, and because they live in Kijutsu City, it just makes it more of a profession then a natural hobby. Ever since Shannon was 4, he was intrigued with Pokemon and how they worked. He was more intrigued on the structure of pokemon, and spent most of his childhood studying them. Most of his early childhood growing up, he spent inside. He wasn't a very likeable kid due to the fact his dad was a Scientist. Everyone he knew would pick on him and call him all sorts of mean names. He never really thought much of it, and ignored them. This went on for most of his childhood, at least until he got old enough for high school. His freshman year in High School he somehow became more popular, and began to become more of a hot shot then he had from his recent years. He picked a lot of other hobbies, such as the Guitar & Piano, but still kept a steady pace on his Scientist persona. When he turned 16, he made a strange breakthrough in his experimentation as a Scientist. For the longest time he had been trying to come up with some kind of drink that enhances brain capacity, he came up with a small elixir that made him more knowledgeable of many things. However, the drink had a very serious setback, it started to eat away at his brain cells, and a month after taking the drink, he collapsed in the middle of one of his classes and his mind went completely blank. He was rushed to the closest hospital facility and slowly treated for it. His dad helped in the procedure, and helped recover his memory. He recovered everything except for the recipe Shannon had come up with for the drink. He didn't want to risk another take at it, and after awhile, everyone forgot about the incident. Shannon remembered his dad saying that he would give Shannon his first pokemon after he finished school, not more then a week after graduation, Shannon's dad showed up to their home with a Poke Ball in hand. He handed the pokeball to Shannon, and he let it out. Inside it was a Bunaway, he thanked his dad greatly, and ran off with the Bunaway. He found the most isolated place in town he could, and began interacting with the Bunaway. After that day he kept nuturing and getting to know the Bunaway he named Poseidon. After a year of constant nurturing, Shannon decided it was time to start going out as a trainer, and after much talk with his parents, got it cleared to leave home with Poseidon and start his career as a trainer. This is where his journey starts, and the rest of his history gets written... Personality*: Shannon is a very held back kid who doesn't get scared often. He grew up in a crime ridden town, what do you expect. He's quick to trust but also quick to learn. If he sees a problem with somebody or something, he can usually always solve it... Starting Pokemon: Bunaway [Female] [Normal]Nickname*: Poseidon Differences*: Starting Town: Kijutsu City Poketech Color: Brown Other: Shannon is very prominent with Science, and has a pretty high I.Q., but even as a Scientist, he has a big Interest in Music and can play the Guitar and Piano pretty well. Edited by Yoshi The Glorious, May 12 2009, 03:24 PM.
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| Roku Hannya | May 11 2009, 06:33 PM Post #2 |
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"Shannon is a small from a scientist in the fact he knows a lot about Science." .... What? I don't understand that sentence at all. Besides that, your history doesn't flow together as it could. It doesn't even talk much about Shannon at all. What about the childhood? Did he ever get into a fight? Have a traumatizing event that left him emotionally scarred? You time skipped from age four to eighteen. He's a little kid who's extremely intelligent for his age and is suddenly eighteen where he's given his first pokemon. That's not strange or anything. Edited by Roku Hannya, May 11 2009, 06:34 PM.
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| Yoshi The Glorious | May 11 2009, 06:40 PM Post #3 |
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Hmm i see where you come from with that, even after I posted it it looked like I missed something, i'll edit it and fix it so it makes more sence lol |
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| Yoshi The Glorious | May 11 2009, 07:23 PM Post #4 |
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Edited, I think |
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| Roku Hannya | May 11 2009, 07:57 PM Post #5 |
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The first paragraph still makes no sense to me, but maybe I'm just so burnt out that I'm over looking it. |
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| Yoshi The Glorious | May 11 2009, 08:03 PM Post #6 |
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Well it pretty much explains how he got into Science, and Pokemon... |
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| Roku Hannya | May 11 2009, 08:04 PM Post #7 |
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Doesn't change the fact that it seems like English is not your primary language. |
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| Yoshi The Glorious | May 11 2009, 08:05 PM Post #8 |
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I use an odd form of English, I can admit that lol |
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| Zygon | May 11 2009, 08:57 PM Post #9 |
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Roku is right. The first sentence makes no sense, but it's only one sentence. I think it's fine, but i would fix it anyways. The first sentence leaves impressions X=X |
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| Yoshi The Glorious | May 12 2009, 03:24 PM Post #10 |
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Edited lol |
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| Zygon | May 12 2009, 03:38 PM Post #11 |
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Alright. Looks good enough. We've approved alot worse. APPROVED Edited by Zygon, May 12 2009, 03:38 PM.
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| Solomon | May 12 2009, 07:26 PM Post #12 |
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I think I'll take a break from reffing and set this up... seeing as how there doesn't seem to be any profilers on right now. |
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