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Brian Namiraida
Topic Started: May 8 2009, 07:54 PM (239 Views)
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Name: Brian Namiraida
Age:15
Gender: Male
Profession*: B-Boy (Break Dancer) and Trainer
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He is a handsome guy, who often has his hair spiked. He has black hair, and his eyes are deep pools of amber brown. His clothes are black shirt, with a white long sleeve shirt underneath. He usually wears black shoes, as he thinks they match his outfit rather well, and he thinks that white shoes would just get dirty if he goes places. He also wears a silver chain.

He takes care of his look often, as he wouldn't be able to attract so many people if he didn't. He is in great shape because of his love of dancing, and the fact that he dances so much. His skin makes him look of Asian decent, and he is tanned a bit. His skin is glossy, and it sparkles somewhat in the sun, which would make him the perfect male model, though he would never want to do such a thing.

Thats not the only thing though. He keeps himself fresh! He is a city boy (as stated below) and he loves dressing up to impress the ladies. He keeps his hair combed constantly, even after doing hard labor, and he keeps himself deodorized constantly. He constantly wears a confident smirk.

He dresses good (but doesn't sag) and he likes to smell good for the ladies. He dresses in outfits he feels like they would like. He loves the color green, and he wears it a lot as shown above. He walks in a confident way, with his head held high, and he has strong arms that are muscled, as well as everything else. He is a dancer after all! Why wouldn't he have such fine qualities?

History: He was born in the City of Celadon in Kanto. He grew up with a jacked up life, his parents were both into bad business. His mother was a drunk who had only taken pleasure in her own life, and her own life. She hardly cared for her son, just drank and partied all day. She took it too far one day though. One day, she slept with a man while intoxicated. The guy was rutheless, and he took pleasure from killing as much as any man would in love. He killed Brian's mom, taking her right from him. It didn't effect Brian though, as he was raised in the Celadon City Gym since then because of the trouble that he experienced with the family.

He was raised around many women in the gym, and this is what aroused him to women. He found out that many of the young girls drew an attraction to him, and at first, he was sweet with it, but soon he became evil with it. He used it to his advantage, and this caused him to be kicked out of the Gym by Erika, the gym leader. He wandered the streets, and then one day, he saw a man dancing.

He stopped by, and kept looking at the boy, and there was a whole bunch of music coming from there. It was B-Boys, who were dancing, break dancing. They smiled as Brian came, and oddly enough, they took him in. He decided to stay with them, and he went through their vigorous training to breakdance. After much training (about 3 months of nonstop training) learned the ways of breakdancing from then on, feeling the music flow through his veins, and became a good breakdancer, gaining a reputation across Celadon and nearby places.

One of the main breakdancers who taught him was a guy named Tyrone. Tyrone was an excellent dancer, but he got into some trouble too. Their dancing crew was rivals with another one, and soon the other one felt a little too pressured with Brian having such a good dancing reputation. They sent a bounty hunter to come and kill the boys, including Brian, but Tyrone knew this, and sent Brian to Saffron with the Magnet Pass, and a pokeball containing a Psyduck for protection, with Brian thinking he was coming for a dance competition in Millenia, but instead, he would later find out he was coming to avoid death.

Brian didn't know at the time, and he took the pass, as he went to Goldenrod, and then he went down to Olivine City. On the way, he saw wild pokemon, and fell in love with them, as he used to think as if they were wild animals that weren't worth much, but he gained an affection for them. He wanted to be a good trainer, and so he kept going, going to the ship, as he looked at his pokeball containing Psyduck, and felt like he should bond with it when he got to town during the hours when the competition was over. He went on the ship, and it drove him down to Millenia, and he decided to bond with Psyduck there, as he taught it the ways of breakdancing. He saw it laughed quite a lot at the breakdancing, but he felt like it could pick it up in its own special way, but it would spin on its head, and spin around on the ground, and that was about it. He and Psyduck had fun, and they were happy, but he learned there through the ships news that he was wrong about what he thought. Tyrone died, and when Brian heard, he bursted into tears. He wanted to get that gang of people who killed him back, but he would do it after he became a strong trainer. So, he kept going through Millenia, and landed himself up in Kijutsu (because he felt like there were a lot of women in Kijutsu), where he would officially start his journey with his beloved Psyduck.

Personality*: He is a real cool guy. Throughout his whole life, he has been known for swooning the ladies, and that is what gives him pleasure. He loves to work the women with his wiley charms, and he enjoys how he can do it easily at times, but he would never use a girl, and he has morales. He also is a loving friend, who would never abandon his friends no matter what. If you get past his shell of lust, then he turns out to be a really nice guy! If you don't though, and you are a girl, prepare for him to hit on you.

There is also a serious side he has. When one of his friends are in trouble, he will come to help. When one of his friends are dying or dead, he becomes very vengeful. Although he is a forgiving person, he can get really really angry, and he neve gives up on goals (whether they are short term or long term.)
Starting Pokemon: Psyduck

Nickname*: Psyduck (No nickname)

Differences*: Psyduck is somewhat of a breakdancer himself. He sees Brian's moves as a fun way to spend time, and sometimes he does them himself. He feels the music through his body a bit, but its drowned out by the headache he has constantly (as all Psyducks have headaches!) He knows that one day when he turns into a Golduck though, his headache will be gone, and his full potential as a breakdancer will be unleashed. He also picked up some habits similar to Brian when it comes to women, all though his aren't as severe.

Starting Town: Kijutsu City

Poketech Color: White

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Sexuality: Straight

Goals: Become a strong trainer, continue to dance, and avenge his friends.
Edited by ReturnOfAHero, May 9 2009, 07:06 PM.
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Whoa, wait. The Nickname and Differences in the template? That's for your Pokemon, not your human character. Also, your history doesn't say just exactly how you got your Psyduck, so change those stuff I've said, and you're pretty much ready to go.
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l.e As much as i like you taking up some extra work around here, normal moderators can't do the reg. The differences and nickname in the template IS in the trainer template. But she was right about one thing, we usually like it if you mention how you got your pokemon, and when i comes to differences we like an explaination as to why in your history also. Just add how you got Psyduck and you how you tought him how to breakdance, and you're good.
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Ok, I edited it. I already put before that Tyrone gave it to him, but I should have specified it was a Psyduck. Also, this is Hasekura's second account just so you know ^_^
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OOOH. Okay. then we still got some work to do. I saw that you put 4 paragraphs of appearance up, but some of them are a little short. Make sure you have 4 paragraphs of at least 4 sentences each.
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Ok, I did it. xD
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Questions: Is your Psyduck a break dancer? If not, then that doesn't go in the differences section. Also, is your Psyduck also named Brian?

Basically, the two pieces of info below the Pokemon species is supposed to relate to the Pokemon, not you. So, I really doubt that your Psyduck is both named after your character and is exactly like your character. Am I right?
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Ok. I edited xD Psyduck is only a bit of a dancer, though his potential will be unleashed when he is a Golduck, and his name is just Psyduck xD
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