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| Topic Started: Apr 22 2009, 11:13 PM (79 Views) | |
| Deleted User | Apr 22 2009, 11:13 PM Post #1 |
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Character Template Name: Raven Blackthorne Age: 18 Gender: male Profession*: Pokemon Trainer Appearance: ![]() History: Personality*: Raven is a boy of varying tastes and moods. All of his clothes are what others call the styles of the goths' or emos', but he enjoys wearing them. They are, after all, in his two favorite colors, black and pink. Black is said to be very slimming, not to mention a color that will never go out of style. Pink, on the other hand, represents to Raven his vulnerability, femininity, and the fact that while he seems recluse, he still has a heart. Growing up and attending school in Pallet Town, Raven had always been the odd child because he preferred to watch people when they were playing or going around living their daily lives. This has given him a reputation for being creepy, but for also being weird. He likes to study people, learning what makes them tick and how to push their buttons. Raven loves to manipulate people just so he can get what he wants. Far from being as innocent as he says he is, Raven likes to use his looks and boyish charm to his advantage. He looks for the weaknesses in people, and when he finds that weakness he uses it to break the person and defeat them. No matter what the weather may be, Raven can never sleep without being covered in at least three blankets. Feeling the tightness of such things around him is comforting to Raven. He draws warmth from them. In elementary school, Raven always got picked on because he would correct the teacher if the teacher told them something and it wasn't correct. He would also question a teacher's authority. Yes, Raven hated being in school even if he did love to read. When in school Raven would always be forced to do his homework which he only did to get it out of the way. He never really cared if he passed or failed, the only reason he ever went to school was to see his male classmates. By now you should know that Raven hit puberty early in his life. The first time he began to notice how adorably innocent his classmates' were, Raven was only twelve. Of course, Raven did have a reputation for walking out of class and going to either the library or to the art room. Raven loved art, unless it involved using Paper Mache'. He detested the feel of the cold and lumpy paste-like substance that people adored when making puppets or pinatas. The thing Angel loved about art was the drawing, he loved to draw portraits of people. People he'd seen in his life, people in the classroom, and those people he'd seen in his dreams. He liked to play with light and shadow, portraying the truth about others even though they neglected to see it themselves'. Raven is a very vain person, often seeking out perfection when it comes to physical attraction. He likes boys' who have no hair growing between their noses and manhood areas. Even when it comes to the pubic hair that every boy gets, Raven has his own waxed off because he can't bear the thought of feeling like an animal. Besides, wearing his skinny jeans and tight leather pants wouldn't be possible if he neglected to wax. Raven is a tease in every sense of the word, he likes to make boys' and older males' horny just to watch them squirm. Even if he isn't physically attracted to them, Raven will lead them on for the sport of it. Just until he finds or thinks of something better to do with his time. If Raven wants something, he has a tendancy to just take it. Yes, he will steal money, clothes, anything he needs or wants. It's a habbit. His therapists' have said he is bipolar, depressed, and a kleptomaniac. Therapists, what do they know? The books Raven loved to read most, even if they were just fictional, were books about vampires. Books such as The Vampire Chronicles written by Anne Rice', and a few rather risque books he'd bought from a place known as Barnes and Nobles that cominbed vampires and homosexuality in a rather sensuous way even if it did shed light of skepticism and mockery onto the Christian beliefs. There are a lot of pokemon that Raven' doesn't like and he isn't afraid to voice his opinions about them. The pokemon he detests the mosts are Magikarp' and Voltorb'. Of course he also hates other pokemon, but we'll get to that later. Ravens' favorite pokemon are the rats, serpents, and dragons of the pokemon world. The more lethal the pokemon's venom or bite, the more he loves it. Raven likes a challenge and loves to keep his mind sharp. In short, he loves to be mentally challenged and totally hates being bored or having nothing to do or nobody to play with. So far, Raven has never met his soulmate, his match, shall we say. And he doubts very highly that there is anyone out there who could turn this hunter into one of the hunted. Starting Pokemon: Nickname*: Differences*: Starting Town: Millenia Town Poketech Color: Pink Other: n/a |
| Roses are Red | Apr 23 2009, 01:24 PM Post #2 |
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Is this a second account? If so, it needs 4 paragraphs for appearance (even with a picture!), 5 for hisorty, and your personality is okay in length. However, you have several parts where you don't use an apostrophe to signal possessiveness (mother's, teacher's, Angel's, etc.). Also, I'm pretty sure you aren't allowed to have powers, however small and unreliable they might be, on the board. |
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