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Akiatsu!; Updated again
Topic Started: Apr 14 2009, 10:38 PM (455 Views)
Overlord Starr
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Pokemon Species: :zangoose Zangoose!
Nickname: Akiatsu (Aki)
Age: 1 year
Gender: :female She-male >:D

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History: Her mom was a Sneasel, while her dad was a Zangoose, simple as that. They didn't seem madly in love, they fought at least once a day. It's completely simple and ordinary. Her claws were small, so her four siblings, 2 female Sneasels and 2 male Zangooses, laughed at her. She was proud of her claws though, they were sharper then anyones'! Still, no one cared, called her a runt too, though she was only a few centimeters smaller then her siblings. Her mom was forced to pay more attention to her siblings, who hogged her to no end, so she ended up independent, trying not to take it to heart that her parents 'loved her siblings more.'

However, that was until her father, who was a master at all the punches and a true warrior at both skill and soul, began to hang out with her. At 4 months, she was independent, but it wasn't long until she was a complete daddy's girl, and would literally attack her siblings if they purposely tried to take him away from her. Despite her protective, violent nature, her dad decided her wanted HER to learn the punch techniques. That was the only thing that made her smile since she began to talk.

However, tragedy struck even before she learned the fire punch at a year old. Her father was killed by strange humans in black clothing. Her mother was captured after hiding Aki in a tree, and, of course, her dad had to save her. He did, but at the cost of his life. He heroically, bravely opened the cage that incased his beloved, even if they regularly fought, then instantly shot. Her mom ran, disappearing from sight though she had more then 3 times the amount of time to bit the man who held the gun. Aki now calls her a coward, though she never saw her again, and she says, "Good riddance!"

She abandoned her lousy siblings, who were older, but much too cared for to know what to do. They're probably dead already, if her mother hasn't came back yet. Now, she decides she's going to find those people who caused her dad's death, learn the elemental punches, and become a warrior at heart! Still, she's open minded, and knows that her plans could change.

Personality: Aki is a very tough cookie! She's mostly quiet, not talking to many people, but when she does talk, its either rude wisdom or a smart remark. She seems to love to insult, and any kinds words from her is almost unheard of. Still, even with her quiet nature, she will blow a huge temper when provoked. Though, that's pretty rare for her to go off.

She hates water, always avoiding, and will either be knocked out cold or driven to a mega temper depending on whether she knew it was coming. She's also cold, even in the most tragic situations. But, she's calm and quick-witted, even if she isn't a peoples' person. She's also open-minded at plan changing, knowing which of her many strategies that her dad taught her to use. She also has a hatred for humans, not really liking being close to them, especially when they have black clothing.

Egg Move: Metal Claw (Or Double kick, if this ain't good enough)
Known Attacks: Scratch, Leer, Quick Attack

Starting Area: Route 5
Edited by Starr, Apr 24 2009, 02:26 PM.
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Zangoose (Zangeese?) can't learn Fire Punch other than through move tutoring. Unless you got an admin to approve this, then this needs to be changed.
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Oh. I thought that's what it meant. ^^; I'll ask an admin to look at it, see if its alright before I go and change it.
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Pretty sure it means the moves learned naturally by that pokemon by level 5.
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Like, what kind of moves? Just moves that seem would match the pokemon, or what?
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The moves it learns by level 5 in the games. For you it's Leer, Scratch, and Quick Attack I'm pretty sure.
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Also Zangoose has already been taken.
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OH. THAT type of naturally. *completely misread that* >.<; I'll go ahead and change it then...
*stares at lady in tattoo ad* She's....kinda creepy.....*random to you, but not to me!*

Wow. I so didn't see that a few minutes ago....O.o I'll....just have to wait again....for another starter, I mean.
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Hmm, why not a Combee or a Carvanah? Both would be interesting...though the Carvanah would be difficult to do what with it being a fish.
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That's the reason i didn't pick Carvanha. It can't walk on land, and I'll my favorite things are on land, but the torditional 'fear of water-' PFFFFTT!! A FISH SCARED OF WATER!!!! XDDDDD *sighs* That cracked a funny bone!<3 Anyway, yeah. I wouldn't want to travel by water all the time, because....well...its just blueness!

As for Combee....Not really my kind of taste. I want a tough kind of pokemon, you know? Combee is more of....of a Kathy-kind-of-pokemon. Cute though.
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*sorry for double post* Since a zangoose is up again, can I try this out again?
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Going need Shad to approve that color change, pretty close to being a shiny Zangoose.
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*looks* O.o Oh wow.....Just found that out....>.>; If its unapproved, I'll just keep her short claws and move on with life. Didn't think Pokemon would ever think about stealing MY ideas! Posted Image

And I ask him, right? If not, Shad will get two very special pms. ^o^

Asked him, he said no, so I changed it. ^^ This ok?
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Nope. Your history says that you learned Fire Punch. You can't learn that unless you get a tutor. Fix that part to say that you either learned Metal Claw or Double Kick and pick only one of those two.
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Alrighto. I think I got that straightened out. ^^;
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