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Ichiru Thomas
Topic Started: Mar 19 2009, 06:30 PM (295 Views)
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Name: Ichiru "Ichi" Thomas
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Profesion*: Breeder
Appearance: Posted Image
History:
Ever since I could remember I was always with pokemon. No matter where I went pokemon would be right there beside me. This was due to the fact that I was raised in a Pokemon Daycare Center. Each and every morning I would have to do my chores and help care for the pokemon. These things that i did made me wonder what should i be when i get older.

At the age of 8 I hatched my first pokemon egg, I'm so fond of that memory back then. It was a shock at first since I had no idea what I was doing but thanks to my Papa, the pokemon was perfectly hatched. I remember when the small Slowpoke laid its eyes on me and we became best friends since then. After a while hatching pokemon became a simple chore for me and I enjoyed every bit of it.

Unlike most families I grew up with just a Papa. Mama died 2 years after I was born, when a the Tauros in the fence got out and started a rampage throught the place. Papa tried his best to stop them and it wasnt enough, when I went oustide the Tauros saw me and got a angry look on their face and charged straight at me. I was too scared to move or get out of the way, and suddenly I felt two small hands push me out of the way; I then became unconsious for a few hours. When I awoke we were at the hospital and Mama wasnt doing too good. The doctor said that she is suffering from pain in heart due to the tauros stomping on her, and that she only has a few hours to live.

That day I stood up all night telling myself that it was all my fault that Mama was in this condition and that maybe if I didnt go outside none of this would have happened. Suddenly my Mama's eyes opened and she began to tell me some words of advice. "Ichi I want you to know that its not your fault, It's my duty as a mother to protect her kin and thats just what i did. So dont blame yourself and always believe that you can tackle any obstacle, climb over the tallest mountain as long as you dont doubt who you are. My son when you reach the age to start thinking about a career I want you to start your journey as a breeder and soon enough you will take over the family business.... Goodbye Ichi."

The next day I took my moms last words of advice and made that my dream that I will become the best breeder out there and when I'm old enough I'll take over the family business. After that, Papa began teaching me more and more things about breeding pokemon and how to fix the best food for each type. Soon enough I became almost as good as him and then Papa told me that he could not teach me anything else and that from now I must learn on my own as I start my journey to become a Pokemon Breeder.

Before my journey began, Papa asked me too choose one pokemon from the daycare center to take on my journey. As soon as I saw Zee i began to wonder if a Slowpoke would be the right choice. I told Papa that Zee might be my choice and he agreed hence we both have the same type of personality and since we have been best friends for a long time. After I grabbed all my items for my journey I told Papa that the next time he see's me I will have become a better Breeder.

Personality*:
To begin speaking about my personality, I think about the word optmism. Optimism means to always think about the brighter sides of things and to always know that this is the best possible world. Optimism describes me fully the only negative side to my Personality is that I can be extremely Lazy!

I've always shown signs of laziness and soon enough I made it a habit. Every now and then I take a little snooze or sometimes I just dont feel like doing my job. My optimismic personality usually blocks off my laziness but occasionally it shows up. Finally I tend to forget things, my parents say that i have a short term memory but I know that its just a bad habit that will soon enough go away.

Starting Pokemon: :slowpoke
Nickname*: Zee
Differences*:
Starting Town: Millenia Town
Poketech Color: Orange
Other: Nothing I can think of.
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I am sorry but I cannot accept this profile due to this issue:

- Spelling/grammar errors

There are several grammar and spelling errors in your profile. There are a few instances where I is not capitalized. Also, 'wasnt' should be wasn't with an apostrophe. Apostrophes should also be used to declare possession (as in mom's). There are a few instances where a word or two is missing from a sentence that makes it sound odd. The best idea would be to run it through Word or something that has a spell and grammar checker. Please edit to correct the errors and post back here (as a new post) when you have. Thanks!
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Name: Ichiru "Ichi" Thomas
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Profesion*: Breeder
Appearance:
Posted Image
History:
Ever since I could remember I was always with Pokemon. No matter where I went Pokemon would be right there beside me. This was due to the fact that I was raised in a Pokemon Daycare Center. Each and every morning I would have to do my chores and help care for the Pokemon. These things that I did made me wonder what should i be when i get older.

At the age of 8 I hatched my first pokemon egg, I'm so fond of that memory back then. It was a shock at first since I had no idea what I was doing but thanks to my Papa, the pokemon was perfectly hatched. I remember when the small Slowpoke laid its eyes on me and we became best friends since then. After a while hatching pokemon became a simple chore for me and I enjoyed every bit of it.

Unlike most families I grew up with just a Papa. Mama died 2 years after I was born, when a the Tauros in the fence got out and started a rampage throughout the place. Papa tried his best to stop them and it wasn’t enough, when I went outside the Tauros saw me and got a angry look on their face and charged straight at me. I was too scared to move or get out of the way, and suddenly I felt two small hands push me out of the way; I then became unconscious for a few hours. When I awoke we were at the hospital and Mama wasn’t doing too good. The doctor said that she is suffering from pain in heart due to the tauros stomping on her, and that she only has a few hours to live.

That day I stood up all night telling myself that it was all my fault that Mama was in this condition and that maybe if I didn’t go outside none of this would have happened. Suddenly my Mama's eyes opened and she began to tell me some words of advice. "Ichi I want you to know that its not your fault, It's my duty as a mother to protect her kin and that’s just what i did. So don’t blame yourself and always believe that you can tackle any obstacle, climb over the tallest mountain as long as you don’t doubt who you are. My son when you reach the age to start thinking about a career I want you to start your journey as a breeder and soon enough you will take over the family business.... Goodbye Ichi."

The next day I took my moms last words of advice and made that my dream that I will become the best breeder out there and when I'm old enough I'll take over the family business. After that, Papa began teaching me more and more things about breeding pokemon and how to fix the best food for each type. Soon enough I became almost as good as him and then Papa told me that he could not teach me anything else and that from now I must learn on my own as I start my journey to become a Pokemon Breeder.

Before my journey began, Papa asked me too choose one pokemon from the daycare center to take on my journey. As soon as I saw Zee i began to wonder if a Slowpoke would be the right choice. I told Papa that Zee might be my choice and he agreed hence we both have the same type of personality and since we have been best friends for a long time. After I grabbed all my items for my journey I told Papa that the next time he see's me I will have become a better Breeder.

Personality*:
To begin speaking about my personality, I think about the word optimism. Optimism means to always think about the brighter sides of things and to always know that this is the best possible world. Optimism describes me fully the only negative side to my Personality is that I can be extremely Lazy!

I've always shown signs of laziness and soon enough I made it a habit. Every now and then I take a little snooze or sometimes I just don’t feel like doing my job. My optimistic personality usually blocks off my laziness but occasionally it shows up. Finally I tend to forget things, my parents say that i have a short term memory but I know that its just a bad habit that will soon enough go away.

Starting Pokemon:
:slowpoke
Nickname*: Zee
Differences*: None
Starting Town: Millenium Town
Poketech Color: Orange
Other: Thanks Red for the advise for running it in Word first.
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Most of the errors were caught which is good. Just a small thing as it says your mother died when you were two but then it reads as if you set off the day after she died to become a breeder which would still make you two.

Also, you don't have to repost the profile when you post back XD Just post saying 'Okay, done!' or something along those lines when you edit the post above.
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