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Pheonix Reg
Topic Started: Mar 16 2009, 02:08 PM (90 Views)
Pheonix

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Name: Pheonix
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Profesion*: Pokemon Scientist

Appearance:
The only known features of 'Pheonix' is his height of 6 foot 3, and well-built frame. Despite this, he is easily recognizable through his shadowy appearance, concealing his face with a hooded top, and bandana around his face, leaving room for just his piercing blue eyes to be visible. The rest of his body is covered, essentialy with a pair of Black jeans to match the black top, along with a pair of leather black gloved and to fit the obvious color co-ordination, black sneakers.

History:
Known simply as 'Pheonix' his true identity is as obsolete as his appearance. From all that is to be found out about him, he never went to school. From his hometown, rumor has it that he was badly burnt in a fire he started. Even down to his name, everything remains a mystery, his parents claim he was born as "Lawrence Di Silvestre" but he refuses to acknowledge this, and is greeted simple as 'Pheonix'. His parents have revealed that the only reason behind his lack of information about his life, is the torture he recieved as a child, once kidnapped and held for ransom. Since then he has become a man of great stature, who speaks few words in a native Italian accent.

Since his childhood in Rome, Italy, he's moved out to a new reason, which is encompassed with Pokemon. Something about Pheonix, who was commonly called Pheonix De Silvestre, was that he took a liking to these animals. He saw the power they could have, and the need for little dialouge between them, but to still form a strong partnership based on trust and mind power. For that reason it seemed as if Pheonix had found his calling, to be a Scientist in the field of Pokemon, to work with and train Pokemon, as well as discover things. He decided to embark on an adventure, one that would be quiet in volume, but loud in events. A Pokemon Mystery was set to unfold.

Personality*:
The Personality of 'Pheonix' is more obtainable than his history or appearance, he's a man of very few words and only speaks when he needs to. Despite this, it is considerably easy to bond with him, through the beings of a emotional feeling. Whilst he may not speak many words to you, they'll be a feeling that he has your back. He's seen to be a relaxed person and even the most dangerous, probelmatic situations cause no change to his behaviour. People have often considered him to be an evil satanist, although this is not the case, and he simply takes the needed action whatever that may be. He also holds an interest in science, looking to create new and exciting items.

Starting Pokemon: Chimchar
Nickname*: Char
Differences*: None

Starting Town: Nogou
Poketech Color: Gold
Other: N/A
Edited by Pheonix, Mar 16 2009, 02:36 PM.
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The only thing I can say is that the History needs to be a little bit longer. Atleast 10 sentences. But apart from that it's good.
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Thanks joeyt, I added in another paragraph, hope thats up to scratch.
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Also, you may need a surname. But that being the last critisism yeah thats great
Edited by joeyt, Mar 16 2009, 03:46 PM.
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