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| Kaeda Tseng | |
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| Topic Started: Mar 11 2009, 05:56 AM (87 Views) | |
| Kaeda | Mar 11 2009, 05:56 AM Post #1 |
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Character Template Name: Kaeda Tseng Age: 16 Gender: Male Profession*: Trainer Appearance: Kaeda stands at a height of 178 cm and weighs 66 kg. He is naturally tanned, has a crown of black hair and hazel brown eyes. The boy wears a simple white shirt with an abstract drawing of the legendary Pokémon, Suicune on the bottom right corner of the shirt. He particularly loves this shirt as the picture of the legendary Pokémon Suicune is one Pokémon that he has dreamt of owning for a very long time. He also wears a black hooded jacket on the outside and a pair of dark blue jeans. The jacket was given to him as a present by his parents when he turned 16. Although the jacket looked ragged, Kaeda treat the clothing as if it was a treasure. The jacket was made by his mother and she has poured her love and passion into this jacket. Thus Kaeda would never let her down by mistreating it. A set of headphones hang on his neck which is connected to his silver MP3. Music is a source of energy to Kaeda and thus he had it constantly supplied to him. While training with his Pokémon, he may connect speakers to his MP3 to motivate his Pokémon. History: Now for a quick history about the boy called Kaeda Tseng. The child was born in Kijutsu City and had lived there since birth. Kijutsu was home to crimes and pollution and it was practically a dump. Growing up in the city was tough, especially so when the residents here lived by the code: "Survival of the Fittest". Thus, there were many times that Kaeda had to fend from himself against the harsh treatment of others. A boy of his age should still be schooling, however his parents were unable to afford his school fees and thus he had to leave school. Many a time, Kaeda thought that he might have given up on his future if not for his Pokémon partner, Houndour. Houndour had come to Kaeda at a time of his greatest need. This happened when Kaeda was 10 years old, he had joined his group of friends in a factory on the outskirt of the city. The factory was rumoured to be haunted by ghost and being the dare-devils that they claimed to be, they ventured forth. Upon entering the factory, the group of boys realized that they had trespassed into the territory owned by the Weezings and Koffings. Angered by the trespassers, the poisonous Pokémon attacked the boys. Their smokescreen separated Kaeda from the others and when the smog cleared, Kaeda found himself surrounded by Koffings. The child fought his way through the crowd of Pokémon and he eventually escaped from them. However, Kaeda was critically hurt by the Koffings' slug bombs. He was bruised all over. He began to stagger back to the city but fatigue took over him and he fell. As he lay on his back, he stared towards the sky, anguished. Tears welled up in his eyes and thoughts of death haunted him. But then, a Houndour appeared before him. The Pokémon sniffed Kaeda's body and quickly dodged out of the way. The smell of the slug bomb was obviously too pungent for it. With a bark, it ran off. Kaeda knew that it was over for his only hope of survival had just taken off. The sun began to set into the horizon and the night took over the sky. A sense of hopelessness overwhelmed the kid as he cried miserably the silence of the night. But just then, a howl shot across the field and the same Houndour appeared again, bringing along several people. Kaeda was saved and it was all thanks to Houndour. From then on, he treated Houndour like a friend and she was named "Hail". Personality*: Kaeda is bubbly in nature and is always the centre of attention when he is around with his friend. However, he is guarded against strangers and will not trust anybody easily until he gets to know them better. He hates troublesome work and will always try his very best to avoid any task. However even though he seems lazy, he is still up to the job if a task is forced to him. Kaeda also have a belief that "If you need to do something, do it to your very best, or don't do it at all." Starting Pokemon: Houndour![]() ![]() ![]() Nickname*: Hail Differences*: - Starting Town: Kijutsu City Poketech Color: Black Other: Edited by Kaeda, Mar 11 2009, 06:38 AM.
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| Alexis | Mar 11 2009, 06:03 AM Post #2 |
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I'm afraid that your Character Appearance isn't quite long enough. You will need to extend this section to at least 2 paragraphs before we can accept you.
Edited by Alexis, Mar 11 2009, 06:03 AM.
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| Kaeda | Mar 11 2009, 06:18 AM Post #3 |
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Oh right. I edited it and I posted some questions in the "Others" section. Thanks! |
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| Alexis | Mar 11 2009, 06:21 AM Post #4 |
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Ok, I'll say that your description is fine now, and I'm sorry that I failed to mention this earlier, but you need to run your History through a Spell Check AND proof read it, because there are a few places where you need to fix up words that the spell check won't catch (Koffin should be Koffing, and the plural of Pokémon is Pokémon, not Pokémons). Once you've done all that, I'll put you through. As for your questions, Moderators will RP with you post-for-post during battles and any major plots, your Pokémon will start at level 5, and there is no limit to the number of moves your Pokémon can know. Edited by Alexis, Mar 11 2009, 06:24 AM.
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| Kaeda | Mar 11 2009, 06:39 AM Post #5 |
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Sorry for the grammatical and vocabulary mistakes! Thanks for answering my questions! I hope its better now. |
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| Alexis | Mar 11 2009, 06:43 AM Post #6 |
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Approved. I'll set this up for you now. |
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