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Kyroru Hidagi (complet); character profile
Topic Started: Mar 1 2009, 10:24 PM (246 Views)
kyroru

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Name: Kyroru Hidagi
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Profession: Trainer

Appearance: Posted Image
History: kyroru was very smart in school when growing up so he was very board he saw all the trainers going in and out of the city and having fun with their pokemon. He decided one day that he would quit school and go on his own adventure and start his life of care freeness. When he turns 15 he when to go receive his first Pokémon and that was the start of his journey.
Personality*: kyroru is rather carefree and love to make new friends. He can get along with almost anyone. He likes to relax a lot and sleep.
Starting Pokemon: Posted ImageElectrikePosted ImagePosted Image
Nickname*: no
Differences*: none at the moment

Starting Town: Millenia Town
Poketech Color: Black
Other: you will usually find kyroru sleeping under a tree somewhere or reading his book
Edited by kyroru, Mar 4 2009, 11:44 PM.
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I am sorry but I cannot accept this profile because of these issues:

- History is too short
- Spelling and grammar problems
- Electrike has been taken

Your character's history must be 2 paragraphs with 4 sentences or more each. Expand on his history, his parents, siblings, how he received Electrike, etc. Also, you have some spelling and grammar issues such as board which should be bored, capitalizing the first letter of each sentence, some odd sentences that don't make sense. Running it through a spelling and grammar checker like on Word would be beneficial. Also, Electrike has been claimed by another member. Please edit your topic and post back here when you are finished. Thank you!
Edited by Roses are Red, Mar 7 2009, 05:12 PM.
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