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| The Savage | Feb 2 2008, 08:56 AM Post #1 |
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I killed I killed the helpless for satisfaction I raped a woman for joy I stole a car for greed I touched a child for pleasure I killed out of revenge I raped out of heartache I stole out of need I touched women out of distress I killed I raped I stole I touched I am America |
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| Lucie | Feb 8 2008, 08:59 AM Post #2 |
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Again your poems are very nicely written. I felt hatred coming from this one though. Just one point. All of these do not just happen in America. They happen everywhere. |
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