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Soldier's eye; A quick poem
Topic Started: Feb 2 2008, 08:55 AM (187 Views)
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Version 1
Bursting through a soliders eye as he began to die
A cry escaped upon that crimson slate
If only, if only it weren't to late
There's no time
No time to repay the crime
A city crumbled throughout his mind
Yet nothing could he find
Only a soiled rag
covering his bag
As his body began to sag



Version 2
Bursting through a soliders eye
As he laid about to die
For there's not time
No time to repay the crime
Only a crumbling city sat upon his mind
Yet nothing could he find
Only a bloodstained rag
Protecting his bag
As his body began to sag


Version 3
Bursting through a soliders eye
As he laid about to die
Lacking the time
The time to repay the crime
Only a crumbling city sat upon his mind
Yet nothing could he find
Only a bloodstained rag
Protecting his bag
As his body began to sag
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