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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 31 2012, 01:39 AM (319 Views) | |
| Sara54321 | Jan 31 2012, 01:39 AM Post #1 |
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Character Name:Knila Fensen (N-eye-lah), goes by simply Kni(N-eye) Age: 14 Gender: Female Type: Meister Partnered? No Image: ![]() Clothing and description: Knila has Dark Cyan eyes and rather pale skin. Her eyes hold a blank look, and it's sometimes hard to tell if she's listening to you or not. She wears an all black uniform with a yellow tie. She wears one white boot and one black boot because she lost the pair to both of them. She has light orange hair that she wears in two braids that go down to slightly below her elbows, letting part of her hair hang loose on the left side and wearing a black headband. Her bangs shadow her eyes. She is roughly 4'9" tall and considered small for her age. She's also flat chested to her dismay. History: Knila was raised only by her mother in Death City. Her father, a Meister, went missing one day when she was 2 and never came back. Despite this, she kept up rather well. Except for the time when she fell into a pit while walking. She was stuck in there for hours and wouldn't talk for days. She never said it, but it was pitch black in there. She had been admiring all those people that protected them. even the weapons. She knew her father was once one of these and attended the DWMA, and strived to achieve that goal in order to join and help protect people. Maybe then people won't go missing, like her father. So, since she was 5 and learned to read, she had read up on them. The different missions and histories about Meisters and Weapons. She was a shut in during this time and barely ever talked to anyone, thus gaining her quiet nature and gaining pale skin. Once in awhile she did go outside on her own and run around for exercise, sometimes practicing some of the things she read. She failed the majority of the time, but it did make her fit and flexible, especially whenever she accidentally did the splits or bent her back backwards. When she was 10, however, she accidentally dropped a book in a fireplace. She watched it intently burn and incinerate the pages and the paper. She was mesmerized and had to be pulled away by her mother to go to bed. Before then, she barely ever paid attention to fire; mostly just glancing and ignoring, her head stuck in books. Her dreams were filled with beautiful flames and soon she was obsessed with fire, so much she set part of the house on fire once...on accident of course. She went to a therapist for this and luckily had the majority of her problem fixed. She's still obsessed with fire, but she doesn't set things on fire willy nilly anymore. When she turned 13 she finally obtained what she wanted, to be a meister in the DMWA. As this was one of her dreams, she worked up till now to work her best, though not obtaining a weapon yet. After a few months of being in the DMWA she discovered she could see souls. At first it was faint and she could barely see the shapes, but after focusing and practicing she did get better When she first joined the academy she hoped to perhaps meet the right weapon as she attended, and none have caught her eye so far. She's still living with her mother, but she doesn't mind that. Personality: Knila is a quiet girl. She likes watching and listening, not talking. She does speak when spoken to, though. Her favorite pass time is...sleeping. When she's asleep she feels free. Unfortunately that means she's slightly irritated when/ if someone wakes her up from a peaceful sleep, signified with a growl. Not many things easily upset her, she isn't a drama queen, but she does go to her room and bawl once in awhile, if it's about a lost friend, a failed mission, or something of that, she just needs to get it out of her system once in awhile. She almost never cries in front of anyone, and hides when she's upset. When at Shibusen she'll talk with a refined manner and be polite. When she's having free time she's more childish and loose. This is when she smiles the most. She's scared of the darkness, also a reason she keeps her room always lit with fire. Whenever she's scared of something she'll usually curl up in a ball and hide her head, trying to think happy thoughts. Usually it takes a lot of coaxing to get her to calm down. Her favorite food is cheese. Any kind of cheese, cheddar, jack, Swiss. She'll eat it. She won't eat molded cheese, though, she doesn't like it that much. She enjoys reading and can often be found in the library reading a book, lost in her own world. She goes outside sometimes and reads outside for a more peaceful environment. She still loves fire and keeps a fireplace in her room. The fireplace is always lit and keeps a nice almost aromatic smell in her room. She tends to stare at it and day dream when she has nothing to do. It gives her a calm feeling. Knila can be couragous when she feels she must, and when standing up for her friends. Her goal is to have peace, and try to ensure safety to other people in order to prevent her own past from repeating. Abilities: Knila is quite flexible and fast due to her practicing when she was younger. She can outrun most of the people she knows(granted not that many). She is also very knowledgeable She and can think of answers fast. She's also good at blending in, she doesn't use any skills, she just finds good places to hide. Technique Name: Soul Perception Effects/Description: Knila is able to see people's souls and their shape. She has yet to be able to tell the personality but can easily estimate the power level of that person from the size of their soul. Combat Style: Knila's style is hide and go kill. She is usually able to blend in with scenery well while hiding and wait for her target to be left open. She tends to pounce on them from behind and snap their neck or deal a lethal blow to the head, or wherever a fatal point is with her legs, as her legs are her strongest weapon at the moment. She usually checks over the enemy before attacking to make sure of where this is to ensure killing the enemy before they can strike back. It works about 70% of the time. If she's forced to do combat up front she uses her flexibility to dodge and do small hits, usually with her feet, to weaken her enemy until she can land a killing blow. She does alright with ranged weapons but she hadn't trained in that area at all, and thus is quite new. She'll use it if she must though;she's not a good shot though and misses frequently. Overall she's pretty average. Miscellaneous Information: Knila has an obsession with fire and would be classified as a slight pyromaniac. She keeps a lighter hidden with her at all times. Strengths:
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Roleplay Sample: Knila walked through the forest quietly with her eyes closed. She heard the different sounds made by the environment and focused on it hard. She had a book with her, labeled "Sparrow's Call". It was a book about an old sparrow looking for a pupil to continue it's legacy.She was trying to find the best shaded place to read it. A book like this she liked to read close to nature in order to feel "in sync" with it. She opened her eyes as she held one booted foot in the air. She was staring at a large tree, wide but not too large, tall but not too tall, and perfectly shaded. Knila smiled and sat down, moving around a little to get comfortable. She was about to open up the book and start reading, until she heard a loud snap! She twisted her head keeping quiet to see if anyone was nearby. A dog nearby had laid down on a twig nearby, snapping it. She watched as the dog stood and yawned, smiling. The dog looked at her. "Go on," she whispered to the dog. The dog seemed to get the message and trotted off at a brisk pace. Knila leaned against the trunk of the tree smiling,"Now," she began," back to my book." She opened it and began to read, now lost in her own mind and the book. Edited by Sara54321, Jan 31 2012, 04:09 AM.
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| Imp of Chaos | Jan 31 2012, 02:54 AM Post #2 |
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Hi there Sara! I'm Imp and I'll be giving your profile a look over before it gets accepted~! So far this is a good profile, and I can see you've really put some thought into your character ^__^ It would be great if you could give us some more details, though, so we can know more about Knila :3 Don't be daunted if it seems like I am asking a lot, it's only because I am so intrigued by your character and want to know more! ^__^ Description This is a great starting point, and already I can begin to picture your character in my minds eye! It would be great if you could go into a little more detail, however, as we have lots of artists on the site, and of course because this is an RP site! ^__^ so it's good to have a few key phrases for describing your character up your sleeve that you can re-use if necessary. Try to write this section in full sentences rather than dot points, as if you were giving a description to the police. Don't be afraid to add in a little about how their personality effects their appearance (ie. He is obviously untrustworthy, as many people can tell just by looking at his shifty eyes). I really liked that you added in a little about how she feels about her appearance (her dismay at being flat chested), it helps bring the character to life ^__^ History So far the history is interesting, and it has really piqued my interest! I would love to know more about how your character grew up :3 This is the part that is really important in your profile, because it is where you tie all of the other parts into a cohesive character. This is where you justify personality quirks, talk about how they learned special powers, what motivates them, and what goals they have for the future. A good history can set a good character profile apart from a great one, and helps you understand your character better :3 It's a good place to make your character unique too~ Make sure that your history covers all the basics like, how did they come to Shibusen (what sort of training or study did Knila have to do to qualify? I’d love to know), how did they find out about all their powers, What was their childhood like, and how did it influence Knila's personality (like is she a hard worker and a good student?) ^__^ Personality This is a great snapshot of the personality, but I was hoping you could flesh it out a little :3 You obviously have a good idea of what your character is like, but it just isn't as clearly defined here as it could be ^__^ Don't forget that not everyone expresses emotions in the same way (when I am angry I go quiet, but when someone else is angry they might rave, yell and break things). Make sure you tell us what makes your character angry, happy and sad, (what their triggers are) and what they do to express these emotions ^__^ I would also love to hear more about her obsession with fire. Does it provoke her into any actions? Is there anything that sets it off? Does she love the scent of wood-smoke? That sort of thing ^__^ Abilities Please remember that if an ability is not added in here then your character cannot do it. For example, a weapon with no weapon transformation in the ability section cannot turn into a weapon. I notice that you mention she can easily fade into the background as a part of her combat ability. That’s absolutely fine and needs no further qualification, but if it is a magical ability and she actually becomes invisible, semi-invisible, or camouflaged in some magical/soul wavelength way, it should be added as an ability ^__^ Your description for Soul Perception is great! I love that you have thought about what she can and can’t do with the ability, and have clearly described it for us here! Well done! Combat Style This is great, but I'd love it if you could elaborate a little. This is the place to put down any martial arts your character learned in their history, and to tell us how good or bad they are at fighting. Could they take down Jackie Chan, or would they have trouble fighting their way out of a paper bag =P we want to know~ You also mention that she is fast and flexible – I was wondering (considering her history of being a shut in) how she came to be like this? Was it a part of her training to get accepted into Shibusen? Strengths and Weaknesses These are great ^__^ It’s very rare to find a character with a good balance of strengths and weaknesses but I think Knila is doing well in this department! Nice job! You mention that when frightened she is difficult to calm down – it’d be fantastic if you could also add this in her personality :3 Overall This is a great character so far, and I really look forward to seeing how you develop her over time! I think with a little love and care it could be a really fantastic character :3 |
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| Imp of Chaos | Jan 31 2012, 04:15 AM Post #3 |
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Accepted~ Usually we accept and then see how you go, if the character turns out over powered we will talk to you about it and see if we can rebalance, but I am sure you won't have any issues ^__^ Well done~ |
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