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Neo Cerberus; ready for modding
Topic Started: Jan 2 2012, 04:35 AM (394 Views)
Rick	Jan 2 2012, 04:35 AM Post #1
The Hell Hound of Shibusen Posts: 218 Group: Members Member #351 Joined: Apr 24, 2011	Character:Aria Sinner Mission to turn in: Jamaica Technique Name: Neo Cerberus Effects/Description: Floppy has the ability to transform his body into a beautiful Katana with a black sheath. The blade makes a low hum whenever Floppy matches wavelengths with it's meister or Aria. edit to Combat Style: Aria’s ability to use Floppy’s weapon form is based on some basic Kendo training she received. She has a very clean form and stable wavelength control with Floppy, so in his weapon form the stuffed creature is a potentially deadly weapon in her hands. Though even with that being the case she would still be hesitant to harm another living thing with him, and would usually only aim to deliver non-fatal wounds to disable and disarm. In neither of those were an option, and Aria was forced to end the existence of another, she'd still ensure that the death was quick and merciful to allow her opposition to fade in battle, honorably. Edited by Rick, Jun 13 2012, 02:46 AM.
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Imp of Chaos	Jan 2 2012, 07:33 AM Post #2
Administrator - Gleefully Cruel Posts: 2,109 Group: Admins Member #1 Joined: Jan 30, 2009	Hey Bane ^__^ good to see you cashing in some missions for Aria~ I just have a few things I'd like you to clean up in the wording of this, if that's ok! First of all this is what you are asking for from this training thread (as far as I can gather): Instant transition between forms Being able to fly in weapon form Being able to attack by herself while in full weapon form, with the power of a car (which could kill an average human or large animal) A soul-resonance level/ finisher attack with a partner Please choose just one of these things~ Although the technique sounds super cool, it sounds a little like you had one idea, and then kept adding onto it again and again until it got a little out of hand ^__^;; Perhaps I am mis-reading some of this? In any case please trim down the power a little and we can then work on making sure it is super clear :3 If you are feeling particularly industrious, feel free to change the hours between uses into a post count between uses or a uses per mission instead, and make sure you clearly state at what point this self-resonance runs out~ Either way I will remind you about these points again in my next mod post ^__^ Good luck~
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Shinigami	Jan 11 2012, 09:13 AM Post #3
Administrator Posts: 2,416 Group: Admins Member #2 Joined: Jan 30, 2009	Quote: Floppy Teichou has come across an ability that allows him to change his plushy body to take on the form of a pair of inline skates with a motor inside of the wheels. The motors run off of Floppy's soul wavelength and can currently bring it’s user to speeds of up to 40 miles per hour, that speed depends on the terrain that they are riding on though. Floppy and his partner have been calling this ability “Neo Cerberus”, “Neo” meaning new or revived, and “Cerberus” being the name Floppy held while he had his original Archangel body. Can we get an idea what sort of terrain can this go through, and what this cannot (eg: Can it go through sand? Up walls?) :3 Does it have spiky wheels like the picture, and if so, what type of damage can it do?
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Rick	Jan 17 2012, 03:20 AM Post #4
The Hell Hound of Shibusen Posts: 218 Group: Members Member #351 Joined: Apr 24, 2011	alright, edited Shini. The wheels are spiked just like in the picture for riding through different terrains. but moutain-ish and sandy-ish ones are harder to do. They also hurt if they grind on someones face lol.
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Shinigami	Jan 17 2012, 12:49 PM Post #5
Administrator Posts: 2,416 Group: Admins Member #2 Joined: Jan 30, 2009	Okay! It looks like you're going for something very similar to what was asked here, but faster and without the drawback of not being able to 'attack.' With this in mind... It is a nice idea, and it is cool that you are hoping to make Floppy more of a constant in battle. So let's get onto the changes! Please lower to speed to 20 MPH max (this is still significantly faster than running) OR, remove the blades so it is more of an "all terrain skates" rather than "stabby all terrain skates" Please add that the rider is not nimble / agile (so less flips and getting behind enemies) Could you specify whether or not everyone can use it, or only Aria? (eg: Could Rikey, Bane or Sonia use this?) If applicable, please update combat style. If the combat style isn't updated I'll assume these are for 'out of battle' rather than 'in battle'
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Rick	May 30 2012, 09:46 PM Post #6
The Hell Hound of Shibusen Posts: 218 Group: Members Member #351 Joined: Apr 24, 2011	me and GM talked about a few things in our long absence that had ended up with us deciding that this should be Floppy's weapon form. Sorry for all the BS I put you through to get it to this point >_< but yeah, here it is
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Shinigami	Jun 1 2012, 08:19 AM Post #7
Administrator Posts: 2,416 Group: Admins Member #2 Joined: Jan 30, 2009	I'd allow this, but I have a few questions first I guess my first is the matter of the sheaths. It's a little thing, but I noticed that yourself and ZX are quite fond of having Sonia 'dual wield' Aria using her sheath as a secondary weapon. Now that Sonia (presumably) will have access to 2 swords ... when Aria+Fluffy transform does that mean that will always appear sheathed? How proficient is Aria with a katana? Could you perhaps also write me a sentence or three about it to add to her combat style At the moment she seems like an evasive person who doesn't really fight. Quote: Though he will rarely ever try to fight for Aria, he is a teacher, and prefers to let his students handle their own. If they need advice or information then he will gladdly put in his two scence, but he refuses to be a crutch for a strong willed student. What has changed Fluffy's opinion on the matter?
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Rick	Jun 1 2012, 12:10 PM Post #8
The Hell Hound of Shibusen Posts: 218 Group: Members Member #351 Joined: Apr 24, 2011	question one all depends if you would allow them to materialize just the blade or both the sword and the sheath when the occasion calls for it. Aria is very skilled when she has a Katana on hand. Her weapon form being a Katana makes using one feel natural. Aria was also trained to use a Katana weapon while she was in the Yakuza organization, which can sometimes give her style a bit of a ruthless edge to it when she has to fight. His mind hasn't changed on the subject, he just doesn't see this as being a crutch. As long as his weapon form doesn't hinder Sonia or Aria's growth at Shibusen he Doesn't see a problem with it.
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Shinigami	Jun 2 2012, 12:30 AM Post #9
Administrator Posts: 2,416 Group: Admins Member #2 Joined: Jan 30, 2009	1) I would assume that someone always has to appear in their full weapon form (it is their body afterall! :P) So I suggest that Floppy/Aria always appear as sword+sheath. A training thread might be required for them to appear as a sword in Sonia hand + sheath in her belt (as it seems it would be something unique to Aria/Floppy). 2)Given her current fighting style is that of an evasive non-killer, could you tone down her skill with the katana? Could you also include in the original post some text you would like me to add to "Combat Style" section of her profile?
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Rick	Jun 2 2012, 02:17 AM Post #10
The Hell Hound of Shibusen Posts: 218 Group: Members Member #351 Joined: Apr 24, 2011	Actually Sonia is the non aggressive one out if the two of them. Aria may have a distaste for aggression, but that is only because she had to be more or less ruthless to survive until she got to shibusen. She can avoid killing people now-a-days because of her advanced combat skills. She has the ability to subdue and evade, but if it's for the good of her partner/team/mission she will be very aggressive with the use of her partial weapon form or floppy's weapon form to silence her target. I have a WIP written up for a new personality description, I can throw in a new combat style as well if thatvwould satisfy.
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