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Adrian Marcus; The Musical Meister
Topic Started: Sep 9 2011, 03:17 AM (751 Views)
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Character Name: Adrian "Addy" Marcus

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Type: Meister

Partnered? Yes, Weapon: Chihaya

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Clothing and description: Adrian has black hair that usually is in a semi neat-semi messy style, blue eyes, and a baby face which makes him look younger than he is. Adrian only stands 5'10'' and weighs 128 pounds. Since he exercises alot, he has a small frame and semi built with a little muscle. Adrian became fast and agile due to his love for The Shoelace Express (aka running and walking).
Adrian usually wears his baggy blue sweatshirt with a black tanktop underneath, his black pants, and blue shoes. Sunny days he may just sport a blue t-shirt (if it isn't cold), a black hat, and sunglasses with his name engaved on the one arm. During missions he wears his blue and black fingerless gloves.

History:
Born into an all weapon family in Maine, Adrian became a bit of an outcast due to being a meister in an all weapon family, only his brother, Devillan Marcus, who was also an outcast (neither meister nor weapon but had an extensive weapon collection), talked to him for the most part. He taught Adrian how to fight, survive, make money, and live on his own. By age 10, he was ready for the real world. A year later Adrian lost his brother to a band of kishin eggs and 3 months later he was forced out of the house after a family run investigation showed him to be the reason why Devillan died.

Adrian relied on the skills he learned from his brother and his knowledge of music which during free time he praticed. He used his musical talent to make money and travel the states. For 3 years he traveled, seeing new things and meeting new people. Soon he came across a Weapon and Meister who talked about Shibusen, being a meister himself, he thought it might be a great way to make his family proud. Yet due to lack of money, he had to walk alot, taking him a year to reach Death City. Within a month he found a home, got a job, and enrolled into Shibusen. As of right now, Adrian is determined to kill the kishin eggs that killed his brother, the only other motive than to make his family proud.

Personality: Calm and cool, he always watches what he says and uses manners to avoid conflict. He tends to a bit shy, studdering and being nervous may ensue, and formal at first but he will quickly open up as long as you don't try to kill him. He tends to freak out when he does something wrong, and he doesn't like talking about love due to his history and not even knowing what love really is.

Abilities:

Technique Name: Power of Song
Effects/Description: Adrian uses his mp3(s) to channel feelings and combat styles when needed. His music shapes the way he fights and acts and how he fights and acts is based on the type of music.

Type of Music/Effect/ Example of Music

Combat Style: His combat style changes with the music he is listening too, just like his personality is changed.

Examples

Miscellaneous Information: He can play just about and string instrument.
He has 3 mp3s most of the time, two are always with him and one is at his house.
Favorite food is an Apple, hates seafood and coconuts.

Strengths:

  • Music for power
  • Knows his place
  • Determined
  • Very agile

Weaknesses:

  • Has a tendancy to break his mp3s
  • Can barely fight without music
  • No real combat training

Roleplay Sample:
http://s1.zetaboards.com/42_42_564/topic/4228131/1/
Edited by Axenel, Oct 2 2011, 02:46 AM.
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Axel Sendo: Weapon :: Axel's Song
Adrian Marcus: Meister :: Adrian's Song :: Adrian's Voice(aka Axl's (MMxCM) voice)
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Ready for modding...
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Evening Axel! Nice to see you working on your 2nd character. Let us get onto the juicy parts correct?

Description:

I would love to know more about him and the way he looks and holds himself in regards to others. How does his face appear to be? How does his hair shape itself? Is he physically fit, any muscles? Go more into depth about the way he is. We want to know exactly who he is from your own mouth rather than focus on using just a picture to draw the picture for you. =)

History:

I'd love to know more about his life. Why was he kicked out? How was he a misfit. It would be great to see you go into more depth on the back story and expand a bit on everything from how his family raised him to what he did when trying to make a living for himself. ^ -^

Personality:

A solid groundwork! But let's get more into Adrian's Psyche. He's shy? How shy is he? Does he freak out? does the talk of love make hime freak out? Just how does he act? A few examples would be great since everyone has their own definition of being shy and the way they act. Just How does Adrian hold himself in regards to others? =)

Abilities:

Please elaborate more on the power of song. I would prefer you give me all the versions he has rather than making them up on the spot. Does fast music make him faster. Are their any physical changes or is it all just in combat style? Please tell me more rather than leaving it a mystery. Tell me all that you know and have planned for this ability.

Strength and Weaknesses:

Change it up a bit so we know whathis comabt weaknesses and strengths are. Dislike of love and shy seem more appropriate for Miscellaneous and do not seem to be someting that would inhibit the meister while fighting.

Overall

A great start and I can't wait to read more about this character after the mods! I am quite excited to learn just who he really is. =)
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I think he's ready for Wave 2 of modding
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You have done a good job and I especially applaud how you broke down his music ability =). I only really have one Question about the music ability.

Is it only the song that gives him a power boost while the others only change the way he fights? If so, I find this acceptable as an ability. =)
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Yes, its a last resort song that gives him an intense power boost if he should fall in a very very bad situation.
I'm not gonna be over using this as that will give no meaning to it, just to let you know.

Other songs unlock his fighting styles and sometimes motivation to fight, but no power boost.
Edited by Axenel, Oct 2 2011, 03:40 PM.
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Very well =). It gives me great Excaliburous pride to ACCEPT this character. Have fun!
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