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Ruin's bio; Altar's bio
Topic Started: Aug 16 2011, 03:59 AM (931 Views)
RuinAltar

edits are done once more
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Shinigami
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Technique Name: wave of ruins
Effects/Description: Wave of ruins is a sphereical or dome shaped blast that is created in ether soul resonance or in need and the bond between the meister and weapon is strong. In soul resonance the sphere will form around the hands of the meister when wholeing his/her partner and grow outwords at a fast rate. As for the bond it takes time and a very strong bond of friendship to even make a moderate one. After the dome starts it will grow and when hit by it you slowly sink in almost as if you are being eated. It leave the body with small cuts to gashes and the bodies nerves slightly shocked. Thus slowing the enemy and providing the final strike. The Wave of Ruin comes in three stages and power levels. First is the begining for which starts at the hand of the meister. This Begining form is realitvly weak unless used in a fist fight for life. The second form is when the dome has reached all around the Meister and weapon like a shield. In this stage its very powerful and very hard to control when moving. As for the third is when the dome is quickly moving out to a about a quarter mile radious. This stage is slightly weaker than the second but movment is slim but there

:3 This sounds like a cool technique! Do you mind if we simplify it a little bit? :3 If it is okay with you could we...
  1. Make it just a technique between meister-weapon, rather than a Soul Resonance?
  2. Can it just have 1 version, rather than 3 versions? You can choose which version!
  3. Can you mention that the middle of the sphere is the meister? So if the meister moves than the sphere moves too ^_^



On another note, why is he weak to insanity? Could you explain this in the weaknesses? ^_^

Could you also add a weakness in his normal combat style? :3

If you want to add your image to your profile, just copy/paste the code below ^_^

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Edited by Shinigami, Aug 27 2011, 02:11 AM.
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RuinAltar

ok im done and ready for a check up
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Good job!

I noticed that you removed your Ruin Blast ability? That is okay ^_^

As a note; Your character can only use techniques and abilities that they have written in the profile.

The only thing I would like you do before I approve it would be to:
  • Put your profile into a Word Processor or something and do a spell check :)
  • Promise to put all of your Role Playing posts into a spell checker.

I know that this sounds kinda lame, but it was hard for me to understand what you meant at times. And it would be a shame for you to go to all of the effort of writing a post and no-one knowing what you said!
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RuinAltar

i promise. and im done
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VERY WELL. I excalibur am glad to welcome you to this thread and ACCEPT THIS CHARACTER. Your reward for getting through all this? I shall regale you with a tale of my younger years. I was so marvelously brilliant back then.

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