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Sheleen; Succubus
Topic Started: Jul 21 2011, 05:09 PM (277 Views)
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Character Name: Sheleen

Age: several thousand years old presumably

Gender: Female

Type: Succubus

Partnered? no

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Clothing and description: Her face is extremely young and cute. Standing at a mere 5’4 her stature and beauty are enough to lull most enemies into a false state of security. Her skin is a dark shade of gray and she has a set of pin stripped pink and maroon horns and tail. Her eye are a deep yellow color, and she usually wears a knowing or enticing appearance on her face. She has a huge mass of pink hair which cascades down to the small of her back back and on either side of her in thick curls and waves. Her eyebrows consist of 2 pink high arches towards the mid of her forehead. She wears a necklace made of a silvery substance with a small crystal pendant. Being a succubus it is only natural that her bust is a ridiculous size E that is barely contained by the pink and black corset/ballet like dress she wears, covering her arms are 2 detached puffy light pink sleeves. Matching her horns is a pair of pin stripped stockings with the inner thighs open. On her feet she has strapped on 2 black ballet shoes.

History: Having live for so long the centuries seem to run together and one tends to forget their past. She remembers she once had a life outside of the book of Eibon, but it was so far ago that she cannot recall what it was. As long as she could be bothered to remember she had resided inside the book of Lust. It wasn’t bad, there was plenty to do and see, and she could travel through the other sections of the book to pass the time. She was exceptionally beautiful and intelligent for a succubus and was regarded as their princess (queen technically but she prefers the title of princess) Much of her time was spent fooling around with or consorting with various immortal beings that had resided in their as long or longer than she. She was very powerful when she first came but as the decades and centuries rolled on by she found her well of power diminishing.

Occasionally a human or other sentient being would enter her domain. She would have fun with them for awhile until their squirming was no longer amusing and then she’d suck out their soul. She found that she always felt stronger and better after sucking out a soul of a mortal. She began to wonder where they came from for it had been so long she had forgotten where it was she resided in relation to the mortals. After centuries of wallowing in frivolous sensation and sin she found her well of power growing low enough to become upsetting. Whenever a human would enter her realm rather than begin to play with them she tried to figure out where they came from and whether there was a way out. Most humans were simply too in shock to answer her curiosities and she was forced to consume their soul to get them to stop whining.

Then one day they got a mysterious new addition to the book. He was moved to the last chapter, it’s domain, apparently the kid of some powerful entity called shinigami whoever that was. Soon thereafter before she could try and find and wrest his soul from him a group of human children entered the book. They passed through her domain of lust first. But rather than confront them directly she sent another weaker succubus at them, which they surprisingly defeated. Thinking them to be interesting she monitored and followed them at a distance as a swarm of various types. They eventually managed to escape and from the hole they tore she saw them do battle with the wielder of the book. After the battle was done and the wield vanished she managed to fit just a few of her swam of butterflies through the hole before it closed back up. They reformed her some ways away, but in separating herself from the majority of her swarm she lost the bulk of her powers. Still she was free in a whole wide world full of delicious mortal souls. And the soul of the supposed god of death sounded quite tasty as well. Of course she had a long way to go, she had to recover her powers and consume a vast quantity of souls before she was ready to take on a death god. But she had all the time in the world.

Personality: Flirtatious and lusty, being a succubus she speaks with a tone that constantly seems to imply some sort of double entendre. However any flirting she does or mental hypnosis or manipulation has only one purpose in mind. She desires only the souls of men and women and to enslave their bodies to be her minions. She hates fighting and will hide behind her army of enslaved minions or if that fails running away. If she ever feels she his losing the advantage she will begin to lie to her opponents to sew doubt in their mind or make them hesitate. In order to gain the souls of stronger willed people who can resist her natural glamour she will lie and trick them into giving up their souls by promising to grant their wishes if they let her go, she then insists that the only way to seal the bargain is to kiss, which is the method by which she usually sucks the soul of her victims. She does not understand the human concept of friendship. She sees only victim and predator, master and servant, dominant and the submissive.

Abilities: Being a succubus she has powers that pertain to manipulating the hearts and minds of the weaker willed in order to steal their soul and enslave their body. Those with soul perception see her soul as a floating pink orb with a pin stripped set of horns on it and a mischievous lustful grin. They can automatically tell it is not a human or a witch soul if they’ve seen either. In addition those with advanced soul perception can see that inside of her are all the souls of those she consumed still in one piece. It takes several decades for a soul she’s consumed to be drained dry and disappear.

Technique Name: Succubus Glamour
Effects/Description: Sheleen being a succubus has a passive glamour about her. It makes those of average or weak will perceive her as their ideal definition of beauty. Whatever they cherish or look for in a mate they will see in her. It makes them much more susceptible to her whims and allows her to get in close to suck out their souls. The glamour affects men and women equally, but only affects those of average or weak will (such as normal humans or NPC’s) as such it has no effect on people who have more practice and control over their mind, body, or soul (like PC’s or high ranking NPC’s). Anyone whose will is higher than normal will perceive her as she normally appears (the main description).

Technique Name: Soul Consumption
Effects/Description: Succubus have the ability to consume the souls of others in order to grow stronger. Though she can consume the souls of the deceased just fine she prefers to take the souls of the living. If she can get close enough to a person and manage to kiss them on the lips she can suck out their soul through their mouth and consume it. When she consumes a soul in this manner the body remains alive, sustained by its connection to her eternal life-force. The body becomes a mindless slave to her will and she can give it orders remotely as well as perceive anything the body perceives. Their faces are in a perpetual expression of bliss or happiness in this state and all they talk about is how great mistress sheleen is. The body retains all of the technical and mechanical skills they had before but are unable to resist obeying her commands. If for any reason she is defeated or chooses to let one of the souls she’s consumed go it will fly back to the body and they will come back to life good as new. Those with soul perception will see that these zombified individuals have no soul but have a tiny bit of her soul wavelength in them which is what she uses to sustain and control their bodies. At her current level she can control no more than 25 individuals per mission at a time turning a maximum of 5 per post with the very first post taking the potential of 7.

Technique Name: Swarm Form
Effects/Description: In order to escape a nasty situation she can transform herself into a bustling swarm of some kind. She prefers to transform into a swarm of butterflies, bats, or rats most of the time. When in her swarm form she cannot fight or use any of her other abilities and attacks that do area of affect damage are especially effective against her. Her souls wavelength becomes so weak it cannot be perceived by anyone other than those who have advanced soul perception due to it being split between the numerous swarm of creatures. If she is in her swarm form and she loses a number of the creatures in the swarm it will hurt her overall power making a deduction from her total consumed souls list.

Technique Name: Eternal Youth
Effects/Description: Sheleen is blessed with eternal youth. She does not age and is capable of healing much faster than a normal person, however due to being separated from the bulk of her powers this regenerative ability is inert. It’d take about 150 souls for her to gain the ability to regain light regenerative properties. When she consumes a soul her body heals and recovers a bit.

Combat Style: She prefers to stay out of direct combat. If confronted by anyone whom she cannot freely control or manipulate into letting her take their soul she will call upon her minions nearby to swarm them

Miscellaneous Information: - Her favorite colors are pink and black
-She hates the color white
-Though she enjoys the souls of young children more than adults she usually doesn’t usually partake of them since children are mostly worthless as minions
-She sometimes refers to people with the chan or kun suffix
Strengths:

  • extremely attractive and alluring
  • highly intelligent and manipulative
  • capable of doing hit and run attacks on towns or settlements easily.

Weaknesses:

  • -
  • she has little to no direct combat skills at the moment.
  • is all but helpless without any minions she can control or manipulate
  • cannot comprehend concept of friendship

Roleplay Sample: Freedom, this mortal air did not have the effervescent texture her home did but it was teeming with life. Her home was inhabited by being like herself, and forth many centuries it was drifting blissfully through decadence after decadence. However give enough time even that will grow tiresome and her depleting stores of souls and power was enough to warrant an immediate change of scenery. Coming to this world had cost her a great deal, only a little bit of herself could slip through the rest being left behind her home. The vultures could take the remains of her discarded power. It would be a long process to regain her strength the the sheer magnitude of souls ripe for the taking here was beyond belief. She smiled, her form was delicate as it stood now, however if she kept her nose down for awhile and silently gather her forces and strength before she turned the notice of the larger powers in this world she could eventually come out on top.\

"I wonder what the soul of a death god tastes like~" She chuckled to herself as she sauntered through the woods where she had emerged. Looking out over the hills there was a town maybe a hours flight from here. extending her arms her body distorted and transformed into a flock of bats that fluttered away to get to her destination quicker. Reforming at the entrance of the town she walked through the deserted streets. No doubt most families and people were in bed at this hour, however if humans could be know for one thing it was their love of alcohol. The local bar was open and seemed to be teeming with life. Here the dejected, downtrodden, and the depressed would gather to drink their troubles away. the effect of alcohol were not unlike herself, though far more temporary and with a loss of cognitive function. With enough in their systems their inhibitions are let free and they revel in whatever comfort they can find. The aftereffect however, punishing the for releasing the burden of their sorrow, was most unfortunate. These downtrodden depressed people needed more than temporary refuge from their sorrow, they needed hope, salvation, to know the meaning of the word eternal bliss. She stepped inside and all fell silent, all eyes glued to her. It was like a radiant angel the definition of perfection had just walked inside that dark damp hole. It was not even about lust, rather beauty, she was not some bimbo or pretty boy to drool over, to them her features were like a piece of art painstakingly chiseled to meet their exact definition of perfect. Slack jawed at her beauty she saw in the corner her first soul to save. A man drinking alone, large sad eyes. She could tell his story just from seeing him. Middle aged and alone, he had been recently involved in a bitter divorce and had lost most everything he cared for in one fell swoop. With virtually nothing left to hang his hat on he had already accented to living a life of drunken stupor to push the pain of loneliness and sorrow away. She saunter on over to him and sat down next to him smiling.

"Wh-wha-" He began before she stopped him placing her index finger on his lips. She smiled softly, sweetly at him and placed a hand reassuringly on his shoulder. At once he felt his heart tremble, what a vision of perfection could want with him he had no idea. She spoke softly with a comforting and understanding grace that plucked at the strings of his wounded heart.

"It's alright, I'm here now. You've had a hard life haven't you? You're alone now and you think there's no hope left, you've let sorrow into you're life. But I'm here now and it's ok. I can give you the peace you want, the happiness you deserve, if only you'll let me." she whispered through sweet lips so close her could smell the hint of orange on her breath, his favorite. His eyes practically welling up with tear, his fears and doubts about himself began to melt away his senses becoming saturated with her beauty, love, and understanding.

"Yes please..." He begged ina pleading whisper. She smiled and lifted his downtrodden chin up with one finger. her other hand caressed the back of his head as she lifted him up until his trembling lips were before hers. She pulled him in close and squeeze the back of his head. In that one brief moment her felt an eternal wave of happiness wash over. She inhaled deeply feeling his soul being drawn up out of him. It slipped into her mouth and she gave a satisfying swallow licking her lips as they parted. His eyes were cloudy, his face in an expression of blissful joy. She had saved one soul from depression now, she had many more to go. She turned to the rest of the bar who were still watching her with rapt attention.

"Come all ye poor misguided souls, come to me and I shall take you onto the path of eternal happiness. Give into me and you shall know your every wish and desire fulfilled. I will take away your sadness, your sorry and leave nothing but a glowing warmth that will forever fend off your troubles and pain. You need only come with me." She declared in a comforting and reassuring voice. Slowly they shuffled forward each seeking to end their specific misery. One by one they fell to her charms. Having cleaned out the house she left with her new entourage. She had hardly noticed the crusty old man left behind. He was old, on in his years but well traveled. He'd seen a great many thing in his time but this, this was something else. The horns, the tail, gray skin. Those others drawn to her like she was some sort of prophet from god. he had to leave and rally the remaining sane of mind against her. He stood up and walked towards the door. Two of those whom she had embraced were standing there waiting for him. they each grabbed an arm easily overpowering the old man.

"Mistress Sheleen will take away your pain.""Mistress Sheleen will take away everything that troubles you."

The true horror of the situation dawned on him. She was no woman, some kind of demon, or kishin. He needed to escape, only he knew about her. However before he could scream for help strang hands clasped over his mouth. he made a muffled attempt at calling for help but to no avail. he was dragged off to where she was waiting for him. No one would resist her charms, she would give these people salvation, whether they wanted it or not.
Edited by geomease, Jul 22 2011, 03:03 PM.
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Yoii Geo~

I do not think this would be an appropriate character for 43 sorry, especially with you self professed trouble with knowing where the boundaries are. With this in mind I am afraid I will decline this character. If you feel this is unjust of me, you can contact another mod and the entire mod will discuss it. So far I have had 1 other mod confirm that they agree with me.
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I have sent a reply to both mods in hopes of at the very least being able to initiate an open discussion. I've also added a RP sample of her specific type play to alleviate fears that her roleplay will descend into perversion. That is the kind of role playing and seduction she does, not appealing to a sense of lust but rather the human desire for emotional attachment and fulfillment. if she had wanted to stick with lustful feelings she'd have stayed in the book of lust, she has no interest in embracing carnal lustful endeavors.

Had a nice discussion with shini, will be dropping this character idea, for now anyways. Sticking with 3 characters for now
Edited by geomease, Jul 23 2011, 03:32 AM.
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Geo has elected to remove this character.
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