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| Tweet Topic Started: Jul 3 2011, 04:58 AM (345 Views) | |
| Ron | Jul 3 2011, 04:58 AM Post #1 |
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Character Name: Sakit Heaton Age: 16 Gender: Male Type: Weapon Partnered? Not yet. Image: ![]() (A fairly good representation of what a hook-sword looks like.) Clothing and description: Sakit stands 5 feet 8 inches tall normally, not tall nor short. He has a muscular build that isn't overdone. As if a high school athlete but hardly a bodybuilder. He is rather lean, slim but muscular. He isn't super strong, but clearly a bit over your average teenager. Sakit has good posture, standing erect and with his back up instead of hunched over. He has a face of someone who is still young looking but starting to drift towards being an adult. Less “baby fat” type face. A little firmer and more adult looking. His eyes are hazel. That is they have two colors. Near the pupil his eyes are green but then abruptly turn brown midway between the pupil and the whites of his eyes.(The eye color I took from myself.) he has a bit of a strong chin, it doesn't curve back but rather juts out a bit, thought not abnormally so. He wears clothing most his age don't. He is well dressed, simple “khaki” style black pants and a simple black short sleeved shirt. He wears simple black leather shoes which are waterproof. Overall not quite “church clothes” but he looks “sharp” instead of “cool.” one might say. His clothing pretty much matches his personality well. In weapon form he takes the form of dual hook swords. The image above shows the shape he takes. He bears a black hand and similar black hand guards. These hand guards are sharp, and often used similarly to bronze knuckles, slashing at the opponent. His blades are jet black and sharp. The outer edges are used like a traditional sword however the hooks can be used to pull, say, someones leg out from under them. Or even use the hook to hook the other sword, and swing, one sword attached to the other, doubling your range. The end of the handle in sharp and can be used as a dagger of sorts.Overall as a weapon Sakit can be incredibly versatile, and in the hands of a good meister, very powerful. History: Sakit was born to a fairly well established family. They were not right but they were a bit above average middle class. Sakit grew up in an environment many could compare to being a “fundamental baptist preacher's son.” He was tough right and wrong at a very early age. As a toddler things expected of him were a bit more than most families. When he threw a tantrum they took care of it. When it came to his discipline his parents did not give in. No matter how big the tantrum he never won anything more than a time out. With his father working as a merchant of sorts in death city and his mother helping run the store, life was fairly good at that age. His family had a fair amount of money, but not really wealthy either. The store thrived and they had a decent amount of customers. They mostly sold a variety of daily household things. The biggest reason people tended to come back was not sure low prices and such, but that the attitude of his parents earned respect in the minds of many adults. And from the time Sakit was a toddler, his parents were already working to raise him similarly. When Sakit was three years old, his parents gave him a little sister. Of course as a toddler he both loved and hated the annoying crying thing. However his parents cut him off on most of the main issues most expect, jealousy at the head of them. And so Sakit never got as bad as many kids. By the time he was 4 he was mostly over it. He loved "helping" mommy and daddy. Though his helping was mostly him hard at work getting in the way as much as he could. But overall life was pretty good. He was overall much loved by his parents friends, already his parents had so far managed to mold him into who he is today. Already he was more behaved than most his age. He understood things many his age didn't. Life was good. This trend continued as he grew older. By the time he was six he was even getting old enough to do some actual help aside from picking up toys and the like. At this age he got his first real taste of chores. He had a few good tantrums and the like but overall he never got as bad as many other little kids. By 7 he was managing to do his chores without massive complaining. His life was really doing well. And at the age of 12 him and his parents became aware that he was a weapon. He had been sleeping and having a nightmare. By the mourning the bed was destroyed with him still asleep laying on it. A handle from his weapon form protruding from his back had torn his mattress up. Of course Sakit was terrified to find this happening. His mother was also a "weapon" and after a while of her instruction he managed to make himself normal again. Still it scared him. It was then that he learned about weapons and meisters. And when he found out about Shibusen he was anxious to join. However his parents talked it out of him. However he never really gave up. Finally at the age of 13 his parents began giving him some simple lessons. His mother had a friend who used to be her meister at shibusen and his father helped with training. Once his mother had tought him how to use his previously dormant weapon abilities, his parents took to some simple training. His father using him as a weapon and his mother's old friend using her. Of course things were bad off for his father at first. Sakit had really no idea how to control things like soul wavelengths and the like and so at first his father had to fight trying to use a heavy clunky pair of weapons. However with his mothers instructions he eventually managed to get things going on a fairly decent level. His father and him were beginning to learn how to work with each other best and with his parents help he managed to learn a great deal. His sister, turned out to be a weapon as well, so after his mother thought her a bit, his parents fought each other, wife against husband, brother against sister. It was sort of like some twisted family game night. No one ever got hurt though. Because he would have to be a weapon if he joined shibusen, his parents took a stricter stance with him. He was brought to trust much more in his morals, his parents were not allowing him int shibusen until they felt he was ready to accept such a responsibility, until he was ready to safely and rightly judge who to kill. At so, just after his 16th birthday, Sakit was enrolled in shibusen. And so Sakit will be starting out learning about his abilities and trying to make himself useful. Personality: Sakit is a rather kind, easy to get along with person. He is fairly sociable, and can behave himself. He makes a point to behave himself. When you get to know him he can be a rather selfless person. He has more compassion than many ever have. He doesn't get angry when he is insulted, and he is rather quick to forgive others. One thing that can't be said about him is that he is a go with the flow kinda person. Sakit has very strong morals and nothing will get him to shake him. If someone is being bullied he will intervene, regardless of what anyone thinks. He believes in right and wrong and really doesn't much care if people think him stupid for doing the right thing. If people start swearing and such he is apt to just walk away. Making if often fairly unpopular. He believes that it is best to treat each other with some level of respect. Another thing about Sakit is that he is fairly introspective. He likes to examine himself and his motives. One could thing of him as a psychologist who loves dissecting people mentally and emotional, his main subject being himself. Though Sakit is a kind person who enjoys his fun, when called for he can be quite serious. When in a fight, for example, he has no issues focusing himself. Sakit is also fairly intelligent. He is no genius, but he has a head and he knows how to use it. Because he does not fly off the handle he has the calmness to use his head in combat. However as a weapon should someone be using him, he obviously isn't in complete control and much of it is up to them. Morality is a big part of Sakit, and he doesn't blindly follow orders. A reason he joined Shibusen was because he feels overall it is a path to doing the most good he can. However he has a strong since of right and wrong. If lord Death were to give him an order that was going to do more harm than good in the long run he may not follow it. However the very fact that being in shibusen requires him to kill is something that took him quite a long time to get over. Killing is very difficult for him. And while he may kill those who are a danger to others as nearly all keishin eggs are, if someone showed true remorse, or fooled him into thinking they did, he would likely spare them. He strongly believes in forgiveness. As an intelligent and moral person Sakit has great thirst for learning. He studies any topics which may catch his interest. When it comes to classes and the like at shibusen, he would be one to get his homework and such done. By the same token things like tests were never things he really worried about. Abilities: Technique Name: Full Transformation Effects/Description: Sakit transforms himself into a dual pair of black hook-swords. These strange hand guards and hooks at the end of his blades make him very versatile in the hands of a meister. Technique Name: Partial Transformation: Hand Blades Effects/Description: Sakit is capable of transforming partially, transforming his hand(s) or possible a foot or two into a the blade and hook of his weapon form. he can only have two of these parts at a time however. Such as both hands. Combat Style: Sakit is overall an intelligent and calm person. He takes care to avoid any unnecessary damage to either him or anyone else. He does not rush in and attack, but prefers to take things a bit slower. While he has had no special training when it comes to fighting, he has been given simple "lessons" for lack of a better word by his parents. He is no combat expert, but he can't really be called completely inexperienced. Strengths:
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Roleplay Sample: Ren the Jellyfish Witch Edited by Ron, Jul 6 2011, 07:54 PM.
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| Imp of Chaos | Jul 4 2011, 03:24 AM Post #2 |
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Hey Ron! I enjoyed reading your character ^__^ and it's great to see you back again~ Hopefully Sakit will have an easier time finding RP partners ^__^;; In any case I shall get down to the modding - there isn't too much of it so bear with me~ History It would be great if you could add a little more in here, such as how he discovered his weapon form/s, how he was accepted into/travelled to Shibusen, and what he has done there (if anything) so far. Personality Seeing as discipline and morality is a large part of this character could you go into a little more detail on these points? For example does he kill whoever he is told to kill by Shinigami, or does he question the morality of this? Does his own morality ever come into conflict with his disciplined adherence to orders? Abilities Please choose just one partial transformation - you can always learn another in a training thread later ^__^ as a power-up to look forward to~ Combat Style Could you add any martial arts he knows here, and talk a little about how good a fighter he is (is he an expert, a beginner or somewhere in-between?) Misc You can get rid of this section if you have nothing to put here. Strengths/weaknesses Could you add a little more of a description to indicate how intelligence would help him in battle (ie. is he a strategist, or does he know enough about anatomy to attack vitals more easily etc) Could you add more about his 'old fashioned' morals in personality? Also it would be good if you talked about his intelligence/study habits there briefly :3 Overall This is the start of a great character. There are a few spelling and grammar errors here and there, so the profile could do with a bit of spit and polish, but the character himself is rather interesting and unique in terms of personality and history. Well done! I look forward to seeing what you do with Sakit~ |
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| Ron | Jul 4 2011, 05:00 AM Post #3 |
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Okay "spit and pollished" it up a bit. Made the edits. "Hopefully" Fixed. |
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| Shinigami | Jul 6 2011, 11:38 AM Post #4 |
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Yoiii Ron~ Imp's computer is a tad unreliable at the moment so she has asked me to step in to help you out ^^ History: Just a minor typo here – I assume he started Shibusen at 16, rather than 26 :3 Personality: Looks good You did a great job describing him.Abilities: Just to make sure, for his partial transformation he transforming partially into his weapon form, rather than adding part of his weapon form onto him? The latter ability seems to only be for DeathScythes, whilst normal Demon Weapons have to transform part of themselves into their weapon ![]() Strengths/Weaknesses: Could you perhaps include a non-personality weakness in here? You mention that he is relatively bad at fighting, for instance :3 |
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| Ron | Jul 6 2011, 07:55 PM Post #5 |
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Fixed. Because I had to alter his partial transformation it makes him much more clunky fighting solo. So I added that instead he isn't very skilled at fighting solo, ie without a meister. |
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| Shinigami | Jul 7 2011, 02:10 PM Post #6 |
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Looks good- approved! |
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You did a great job describing him.
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