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| Axenel | Apr 12 2011, 12:06 AM Post #1 |
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Character Name: Axenel Kai Sendo....or Axel for short Age: 15 Gender: Male Type: Weapon Partnered? No Clothing and description: With golden like hair, green eyes, with a soft baby face. Axel is has an average body, not too built, not too flabby. Usually wears Grey pants, white t-shirt, and a green trench coat on top, with white shoes. As a weapon, he is a great cerimonial sword, silver colored blade, golden hilt with a knuckle guard with a 8 link chain on the opposite side of the guard, with a red ribbon grip. History: For Axel, his life was great with his parents for the first 5 years of his life. But then a witch found out that Axel was a weapon (By over hearing a conversation) she decided to take Axel. The witch killed both his parents, his dad before he died told Axel of his ability to see peoples souls, and his mom hidden him from the witch and was brutally mudered by the witch. For some reason the witch could not find Axel, thinking that she overdid herself and killed Axel too, she left. Axel roamed the streets after that, learning to be self sufficient. At 10 years old, he over heard a Meister and Weapon talking about Shibusen. Axel being the curious type he is, he tried to learn anything and everything about Shibusen he could. Once he got enough money (And learned enough english to be able to talk to others...), he went to Shibusen as a student. As for his motive for going to Shibusen, he wanted to become strong enough to kill the witch that killed his family, and to become a Death Sythe because he thought it would be fun. Personality: During his time on the streets he learned alot of things, to avoid confrontation he needed to be calm and collective, but he tries to think what to do so he has a bad habit of taking pauses to think. This also made him a good talker, easily presuading people, as he does to a librarian to get free books, which also makes him a bit controlling. Since he did whatever, whenever, he became laid back. Though he has lived most of his life alone so he generally keeps to himself about how he feels, which is why he avoids the topic of love. Abilities: Technique Name: Soul Seer Effects/Description: The ability to see people's souls, their soul types, and the characteristics of their soul. Can be used up to 150 meters then it ability fades. Drawback: Cannot see through Soul Protect Technique Name: Transformation Effects/Description: Transforms into an ornate Cerimonial Sword with a razor sharp edge. Drawback: Cannot cut through steel or anything harder, anything softer starts getting easier to cut. Technique Name: Partial Transformation Effects/Description: While solo, Axel can transform his arm to a razor sharp blade that can cut through just about anything. Drawback: Cannot cut through steel or anything harder, anything softer starts getting easier to cut. Combat Style: Solo: Arm changes to a sword, fights with a balanced offensive and defensive style. He can use his signature attack, Final Strike, which uses his Teleportation ability to pretty much slash the heck out of his oppenent. With a Meister: As a sword he usually gives advice to help his Meister in combat. Doesn't really talk alot in combat other than that...and the occasional taunt to the opponent. Miscellaneous Information: He always wanted a female meister. Strengths: ■Great talker ■Smart and Calm in even the most chaotic of situations ■Knows his limits Weaknesses: ■Keeps emotions to himself ■Does not like talking about love ■Hesitant at times RP Sample: http://s1.zetaboards.com/42_42_564/topic/3905734/1/#new I decided to take this challenge, seeing how Axel is not enrolled in the acadamy yet I sorta went ahead...yet still this will be my sample...yes, I know Axel is a weapon without a meister............... pupil Edited by Axenel, Apr 15 2011, 11:46 PM.
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| Imp of Chaos | Apr 12 2011, 01:52 AM Post #2 |
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well this is a great start ^^ it would be good to know more about your character though - for example did he learn much at the orphanage? How did he come to be there? did he consider it his family? How did he learn he was a weapon? How did he discover soul perception? These are the kinds of things we want to know about your history - this is the section where you really show us what your character is made of! Also please post a new reply in here when you are finished editing so I know when to check your character for updates :3 Edited by Imp of Chaos, Apr 12 2011, 06:00 AM.
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| Axenel | Apr 12 2011, 07:55 PM Post #3 |
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He was born a Weapon, he was told by his father right before he died, as for being able to see the souls of people, thats mearly a gift Edited by Axenel, Apr 12 2011, 09:04 PM.
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![]() Courage is the magic that turns dreams into reality. Axel Sendo: Weapon :: Axel's Song Adrian Marcus: Meister :: Adrian's Song :: Adrian's Voice(aka Axl's (MMxCM) voice) Awards and Badges
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| Axenel | Apr 12 2011, 09:40 PM Post #4 |
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I might as well add that he doesn't speak englisch all that well (cause I can't) because he is German (like me) So there is my excuse for poor grammar and what not |
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| Imp of Chaos | Apr 12 2011, 10:25 PM Post #5 |
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Well at 42 we're always hoping people will be willing to improve ^__^ from those who don't speak English very well to those who have studied English for years at university. Everyone can improve ^__^ Can you please write your edit in the profile itself? In your history, could you start the story at the start (this is important for posting in general) and try to think about what other people would need to know about Axenel?
These are some important questions that people will want to know about Axenel's history ^__^ |
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| Axenel | Apr 14 2011, 09:02 PM Post #6 |
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Alright, final edit to the History (I hope)...that should sum everything up... |
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| Imp of Chaos | Apr 15 2011, 12:24 AM Post #7 |
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That's great. You've really added a lot to the history. It has really improved a lot since your first version, and I can understand your character much better! Now let's look at personality :3 You mention he is smart, but it seems that he doesn't have much actual knowledge (being a street child) - maybe you could tell us how he got to be smart, or if you mean a different kind of smart like streetwise/intellect over knowledge/curious It would be great to know:
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| Imp of Chaos | Apr 15 2011, 11:46 PM Post #8 |
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Accepted. You've put a lot of effort into this character sheet, and have been a very good sport. I look forward to seeing you RP on 42~ |
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