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| Sega | Dec 11 2010, 03:20 AM Post #21 |
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*Jenna is unconscious* Shini edit: Vague replacement of deleted post so the below replies make some sort of sense. Edited by Shinigami, Dec 13 2010, 10:26 PM.
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| sillyleaf | Dec 11 2010, 04:46 AM Post #22 |
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Stein would note 27 new chains binding and obscuring from view Flite’s raging soul. It was clear it was raging as the chains moved and clinked and tightened to restrain Flite’s instinct to protect. Releasing the chains later was going to be a hassle. The plump and sunny girl seemed to have the advantage during the battle with her extra appendages and shock based attacks. She was slow in comparison to the dark skinned Bo. Flite was scaring a few girls close to her with the way her eyes became dead looking as she separated her mind from her soul with so many chains. The towering impromptu referee might look like a living shell of a human being. The girl’s scream and wild flailing tested Flite as did Bo’s resulting injuries. She stepped forward ready to at last call the fight to a close when Bo stood up, and walked or rather limped forward seemingly prepared to keep going. Continuing in his state though could mean permanent and debilitating injury so Flite still intended to end the match. Before she could call the match Bo made his last move and seemed to admit defeat. “This match is OVER. The winner is Jenna” She announced and then walked onto the field towards the two opponents. Flite had let the match go on because they were meisters. This was training for the tougher challenges to come she reasoned though it still had been a brutally logical decision that did not appease Flite's own warring and raging soul. Now Bo was injured and Jenna was unconscious. Duels were meant to be fought to the end. "Summon the nurse now came Flite's sharp command, that broached no argument of the spectators that had chosen to stay around. She was calm and collected as she bent over Jenna and carefully assess the damage to the girl. Edited by sillyleaf, Dec 11 2010, 04:54 AM.
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| zippy_zippy_no | Dec 11 2010, 08:24 AM Post #23 |
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Bo growled, not one to argue with the referee. In his opinion Jenna had lost. She'd gotten distracted in the middle of a fight and now was unconscious while Bo was still fighting fit... er fighting at least. Never-the-less the slight meister was in no position to argue. He promised himself that next time he was up against Jenna, she would not win by any margin of the imagination. The girls who had insisted upon the whole battle in the name of vengeance began to wander away, with the brutal reality of battle sapping their self-righteous anger, and the need for a shower taking precedence over gloating in a hollow victory. Far away Stein smirked to himself. He had to admit he was impressed with the control Flite had exerted upon her protective instincts. Usually students were not quite so good at keeping their more base emotions under wraps, but it seemed the wanna-be staff member was well on her way to being able to maintain a cool head in any situation. Stein had (of course) already sent someone to notify a member of Shibusen's infirmary to attend to the combatants. He only meant to torment Flite, after all, he wasn't interested in letting two meisters fall out of commission over a dispute. The eccentric grey haired teacher slowly walked back in the direction of his lab, thinking fondly of how high spirited all of the children were here at the academy. " summon the nurse now " demanded Flite. Bo froze up. He hated nurses and hospitals, and there was no way he'd be stepping foot (not even a broken foot) into one of them. He'd never even been to the Shibusen infirmary and he wasn't about to start. " hrn - actually I think I have to go now! Got places to go and cleaning to do... you know how it is. " The impish teen struggled to his feet. Briefly he examined his hands and gloves, and decided that he'd tend to them later, once he'd escaped. Seeing that someone official looking was walking with a fast but professional and unhurried gait, toward the battleground, Bo felt the time to leave had arrived. With Flite checking Jenna's vitals to make sure the fat meister hadn't suffered a heart attack or something similar, Bo started limping as casually as he could in the other direction. He wanted to get to Erasmus' apartment and DTWD, even though the thought of going across town and up all those stairs made him groan on the inside – it was still better than the alternative. Privately Bo wondered how long Jenna was going to be out for. He'd been angry, yes, but he'd not meant to completely floor her. The teen had to shrug, clearly Jenna had some kind of chip on her shoulder about something. He didn't know why she'd been so keen to fight, and so violent towards him, but somehow he didn't think he could put it down to wanting to give them both a good, realistic sparing session. Then again maybe that was how Shibusen duels went? Bo would have to ask Erasmus about it later. |
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| Sega | Dec 11 2010, 06:00 PM Post #24 |
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I don't suppose there is any chance of retconning this thread since I royally screwed up. If not, apologies to the other participants for me derailing it so much. I'd suggest removing all posts after and including my first one in this thread so you two can redo it on your own. And by suggest, I mean really appreciate. And 4th edit since I cannot leave this message alone, I really regret everything that I did here. So I'm sorry. Edited by Sega, Dec 12 2010, 07:04 AM.
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| Shinigami | Dec 12 2010, 09:18 AM Post #25 |
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Everyone on the board is here to learn and improve, so I'd suggest accepting you made a boo-boo (whatever that boo-boo might be) and making sure you do better next time? Imp and I haven't heard anything from Sillyleaf or Zippy saying they were horribly disgusted or the like from your posts, so there seems no need for deletion of posts or anything else.
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| Sega | Dec 12 2010, 05:52 PM Post #26 |
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But there was breaking character and disregarding a character weakness on my part, which is breaking a couple of rules. Surely that could be reason enough to void my posts? Even if Sillyleaf and Zippy didn't take issue, you should on the basis of violation of rules?
Edited by Sega, Dec 12 2010, 05:56 PM.
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| Shinigami | Dec 13 2010, 08:48 AM Post #27 |
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If I did that Sega I'd never stop deleting posts, and no character would ever be able to evolve~ Bo would only have a mild interest in cleaning (rather than a preternatural talent), Jenna would be thin, Ruben would take a post to do anything at all to Ber. You get the idea~ Minor rule-breaking for temporary story-telling generally gets a blind eye because at the end of the day it's the story and the telling Imp and I care about most. ![]() Besides, if I did delete the posts then there'd be no sense of everyone participating into one giant, messy, conglomerated story :3 And the reaction to your character's reactions and the on-going evolution of characters and relationships is half the fun in RP-land~~ Sorry I couldn't comply with you request, but I think it will be best for everyone (yourself included). You're a good RPer, so there's no need to delete posts anyway :3 Character/relationship development can lead to great, and interesting things! Edited by Shinigami, Dec 13 2010, 09:28 AM.
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Imp and I haven't heard anything from Sillyleaf or Zippy saying they were horribly disgusted or the like from your posts, so there seems no need for deletion of posts or anything else.

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